IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 394

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people argue that public transportation should be made completely free of charge. Are there more advantages over disadvantages of this decision?

Public transportation should be free of charge in few people opinion. The public transport is the simple and easy way for public to commute. This essay will discuss the advantages over disadvantages of public transport available to public at no cost.

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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. But the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative form of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

İt is noticeable that he first car appeared on British roads in 1888. But the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads , therefore it is considered by some people that alternative form of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. İt is completely agree with the opinion . Many troubles such as accident or wait traffic on british roads can be eliminated if alternative form of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.

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Some people think we do not need museums any more in the modern world. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,in this modern era, people have been completely attached to the technology they get any kind of knowledge. The public thinks that visit in museum waste money and time. I disagree with this phenomenon and show my views in further paragraphs.

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Some People Think That The Problem With Education In Poor Countries Is The Teaching Methodology Used

In the present era, the governments are more focusing on education as a result of awarness in the people. However, some third world countries cannot contribute their best in schooling. I believe that developing countries are still facing some economical and financial issues to encourage studies. I have mentioned several problems further in this essay.

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Some people think that children should not watch telvision as it has negative effects while some people believe that they should watch television as it helps them in their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is no doubt that these days watching television is becoming increasingly popular and prominent particularly for kids. It is often considered that the time children spend in watch television effects their attitude less than what they watch. I completely agree with this opinion and think that the material of what kids watch on television is much more important than the time they watch television. In this essay i am going to look into both of views and draw own my conclusion.

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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in.

Nowadays it is easier to find the data about history of any buildings or places ,than it was before, because now people have the internet and required facilities. Growing number of the people are interested in finding a past information about the house or building where they live. This essay will highlight principal causes why this happens, and possible ways of how the researches could be done.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries,but it does not solve poverty. Therfore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The issue of whether the rich governments should provide support by materialism to developing cities has remained to be controversial. Divergent as people's view on this issue in question maybe, I totally agree that giving techincal support to developing cities instead of money is more efficiently either protecting the relationship between or practical progress for them.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factor contributes to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

Satisfaction is a crucial part of a person's happiness due to the fact that most adults work the majority of their lives. Factors such as, finance and fulfillment, are some contributors to a satisfying work. Some might think that workers expectations are realistic, however, I believe nowadays workers expect too much from their jobs.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

Underdeveloped countries should be assisted by rich countries with humanitarian support when natural phenomenon occur. This essay strongly agrees with this statement. Developing countries not only have limited resources but also natural disasters are man-made.

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Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right or wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Teacher and educator have a difficult task to do as they are supposed to teach kids values and furthermore academic topics. This essay will discuss these two points of views and besides it will provide my personal opinion.

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Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years. Why do you think this has happened? Is it a positive or negative development?

Over the past decades the number of stores on the street have seen a meaningful decrease. This reduction has been steep in the past two years due to epidemic of Covid-19 and obligation to observe certain sanitary criteria for shopping centers.

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Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

Their is no deny that nowadays youngsters find difficulty to pay attention in their schools due to several reasons . Their are myraid reasons and many ways too slove this problem also .

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Many Offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishments. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle these problems.

İt is noticeable that many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishments. İn my opinion , punishments which needs can't be given properly by governments , and thus crime commit rates increase gradually . Many offenders who still continue to commit srime will be saved from this problem if governments will provided seminars about crimes to offenders or governments will prepare jails properly to offenders.

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Central and local governments make a frantic attempt to promote festivals to create a lot of revenue. Some people think this money should be invested in social programmes for the poor. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.

These days, the level of vices has increased substantially . In this essay, I will discuss some of the causes of this problem and also suggest some solutions on how to tackle it. Firstly , one of the main causes of crime is unemployment. When people are unemployed , they tend to engage in unlawful acts in order to earn a living. To illustrate, a person who has no job , will most likely be involved in stealing and armed robbery for survival. To solve this problem , the government should embark on a massive job creation. People who are engaged meaningfully are less likely to commit offence . To demonstrate, recent survey by the Delta State Bureau of Statistics found that 80% of respondents admitted to have committed an offence at least once when they jobless than when they were not. Notwithstanding, if the rate of crimes is still rising despite the availability of jobs , then unemployment is not a cause of this problem. Secondly , another ...

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Topic 6: Economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country, while some people think there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Within these factors, do you think anyone is more important than the others?

İt is considered by some people that economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country, while some people think there are other factors. İn my opinion , there are a few ways such as the education level of a country or the environmental situation of a country to measure the success of one country . On the one hand , according to me , it can be certainly said within these factors , nobody is more important than the others .

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Some people believe that unpaid community activity service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children.) To what extent do you agree or degree?

Community service, such as working for charity, improving neighborhood, teaching sports to younger children, among others., have always been a great way to teach younger people how important is the society. In the same way, consequently, this esential task is promoted in many developed places, such as United States, Japan, South Corea, among many others. In the following text we are going to assess whether making compulsory unpaid community service for high school people is positive or, otherwise, negative for the society.

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It is often considered that changes are more beneficial to people than traying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of changes overweight the disadvantages?

İt is considered by some people that changes are more beneficial to people than traying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. There are both the advantages and the disadvantages of change . İt can be certainly said changes provide the development of the governments and the development of the company but on the other hand , they can eliminate our ethnic roots or they can devestate our environment.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think advantage of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages?

The diagram explains the process of smoked fish from capturing fish from the ocean body to the local fish shop. Firstly, fish is captured through fishing nets and these are rowed through boats towards nearby ports. Then, to ensure freshness, fish are transferred to the freezer from ports. Whenever fishes are ready to cut open, they are first rinsed with fresh water and then sent to the butchering area to cut open and remove any inedible organs. Then, the fish are cured in the salt water bath and yellow colouring is added to give the fish flavour and colour. Then, fishes are sent to the smoking chamber where they are smoked to give them a smoky flavour and also prevent them from it getting spoiled. These fishes are then packed in the containers and again frozen at 0 degrees Centigrade and sent towards cold storage for better preservation before going through the distribution process. These packets are then taken from cold storage to trucks and then through these trucks are then sent ...

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Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today's modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school

Art and Music are expression and illustration of human's imagination interpreted in terms of drawings, singing,drama, theatre, etc...They play a fundamental part of human's life though technology have superseded them. I strongly believe that children should spend more time learning Art and music at school rather being exposed to technology.

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Write about the following topic: In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Consumption of cigeratte is injurious to health.Nowadays,due to over work-load and increased stess level,surge of smoke intake level has been observed in both male and female population.Significant and hard rules prepared by regulatories are required to be practiced religiously in order to reduce the crowd from smoking.I strongly agree to the statement that one who wants to have a cancer stick can evacuate the place and can have it outside.

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