IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 390

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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It shows the different stages in the production of woolen goods.

The diagram illustrates the production of woollen goods in its process. It at least goes through 10 stages before wearing a jacket, a sweater and so on.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or valuable to be shared freely.

Sharing essential scientific results is a controversial issue which has its own pros and cons. It should be mentioned that the value of some data is respectful and some should be available conveniently, which both will be discussed here.

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Many people continue to use cars and motorcycles even though they know that they are bad for the environment. Why is this? What can be done to reduce the use of these vehicles?

Most people were aware that the ongoing use of cars and motorcycles gives bad impact to the environment. They are both major contributors to air pollution.

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Paying all workers the same salary in a company promotes harmony and respect amongst colleagues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Compensation requirement and expectation has always been a part of major debate in this con-current age. It is stated that to create equity and admiration systems among the employees whether becoming equal payment plays a pivotal role or it will be proved like destructive way. Partially, with concrete examples, I can explain that although a similar opportunity can create a huge probability of the well-being of the workforce of any institution, it can be revealed as a negative aspect.

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Many students find it is difficult to concentrate or pay attention in school, what are the reasons? what could be done to solve this solution?

It is true that many students feel hard to pay attention and concentrate in an educational environment. This essay will discuss reasons behind this phenomenon and adverse some effects associate with it. There are a number of factors for concentrating lessons on students. Chief among these is that students feel bored when studying monotonous subjects. Take literature as an example students in this class are easy to fall asleep by the traditional teaching techniques in which teachers mention huge of theory and the students will write these things in their notebooks. Another possible reason is that students are allowed to have smart phones with them at school, this makes the students hard to focus on the lesson. It means learners will check their notifications and surf the internet like a habit when they have their phones on the table. Various measures, nevertheless, can be adapted to tackle this situation. First possible approach is that it must replace the old teaching te...

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Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

Art is the most prominent part of community life and art education has various of fields such as music, theater, visual arts and dancing. Most people agree that art education should improve at schools. it will provide students many benefits. In this essay, I will discuss about reasons of agree.

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Major countries nowadays face traffic problem.Describe situation in your country and possible ways to overcome in.

The bar charts compare how much money people in E had to averagely spend on their accommodation as well as that in their capital city and other regions in 2 years, 1995 and 2013.

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Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people's lives and should receive more funding.' To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Media channels are investing in domestic as well as news from other countries. I would say that they should invest more on spreading awareness about the country. But, showing the situations of foreign countries are also very important.

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what are advantages and disadvantages of using social network

In recent years, with the development of technolgies the use of social sites scaled up rapidly across the world. Although these sites has so many usefulnesses, there are several drwabacks too. Here, both the pros and cons will be explained in the subsequent paragraphs.

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More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work . What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

In this con-current age, numerous people have a propensity of relocating from agro-economic rural areas to urban cities for greater career opportunities. This essay accords that the prime outcomes associated with the tendency are worker shortages in the countryside and a surplus of the workforce in the metropolitan areas which becomes a responsible trend to create several issues in both regions and firstly, a multitude of government initiatives and secondly, arranging myriad youth based training programs to create attention for the villages can be taken as the most viable solutions.

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Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in an area. Others believe that local councils should allow people to choose different designs for their houses. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Across many countries worldwide, long ago, there were many houses which were built in the same infrastructure and today some people still believe than the same style of houses should continue to be built. However, there are people who do not perceive it in the same way and they believe that people should have the permission from the local authorities to construct their houses as they wish. In the next paragraphs we will discuss about both views.

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With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more genetically modifies food. what are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

Hi everyone! Today, I am very glad to represent class 6A9 to introduce to you about our five-fruit tray.

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Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think it is negative for children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertising is one of the major concerns in modern society. Whether it can be designed mainly for kids is a contraversial issue. While advertisments can offer students some benefits, my view is that the cons overweight the pros.

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar graph illustrates sales of various types of electronic games around the world from the year 2000 to 2006. As it is presented, amongst the four games, handheld games constitute the highest sales with an increasing trend whereas other sales of games have inflated over the years.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Generally, there are two basic views about the most joyfull period of our lives. A group of people strongly advocate for presenting teenagehood as the happiest time, while the other belive that adulthood, despite all of the things they become responsible for, brings a greater range of authorities which will probably bring mental wellness and joy to ones life. I partly agree the first statement. In this essay I will be declaring both viewpoints and support my opinion by giving examples.

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Should International news be kept as a subject in secondary school. Discuss both sides.

Currently, International news will be what aids to update anything happening in the world. As a result, it should be added to a secondary school as children can be known and awarded what may be knowledge or danger to them.

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Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. Others, however, believe that people should be free to choose sports. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some sports are considered to be dangerous due to violence nature and high chances of injuries. While some argue that hazardous sports must be banned, I am in favor of those who believe in the freedom of choice between sports. Some sports involve violence and athletes get hurt. This has led some to bring up the idea of illegalization of such sports. They assert that if such sport games are not to be banned, not only vice behavior would be encouraged in society, but also competitors are likely to get hurt. This can be significantly true about some sports that are based on physical assaults such as boxing, wrestling, MMA, and so on. Audiences of these type of sports, especially young ones, are more likely to commit violent acts because of the influence of brutality of sport fights on them. Furthermore, athletes could get serious injuries during such sports. The culprit is rather clear since opponents of these type of sports are going to be hit by their rivals. Thus, these ...

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Success in formal "pen and paper" examinations is often seen to be a sign of intelligence. To what extent do you agree with the view that formal examinations measure intelligence? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

The validity of "pen and paper" examination was always a debatable issue and with the shift of emphasis towards practical knowledge, it has become a controversial topic. Masses consider that scoring good in written exams in itself depicts the intelligence level of an individual. I disagree with the above-mentioned notion because just cramming the theories is a sign of good retention power and not intelligence. Moreover, it will not help an individual to survive in the real world, not limited to the job market. These days most the institutes are conducting aptitude tests to determine a student's IQ Level. These tests focus only on theory and hardly include any practical scenarios or case studies. Similarly, in most educational institutes, be it a school or a B-School, the complete focus is on designing the curriculum with maximum weightage given to written exams. They hardly put effort to have hands-on projects which can help a student in understanding the practical viability of...

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is true that communicate with each other by email and message is convenient. And we are living in 21st century where social media is extremely popular, people use it everywhere. They spend their time using the phone and reduce amount of time seeing the other. I’m partly agree that it had a negative effect on the social life.

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some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligence robots. what is your opinions?

Hello dear, Long time, am happy to hear from you, because even me i have missed you too, Since you left i been lonely even to work around in the evening as we used to do, going to church, market and so on, it has not been easy for me, Hearing from you show me that our relationship is still intact. Based on your request, i have told you time without number that anywhere you find yourself try to adapt, i know it will not going to be easy with two of us but you have to same to me. I will suggest for you to join school club, it will keep you busy both soul and body, you know how student life is at list every Friday is club neither in the school environment or outside the school, apart from joining club, try to engage yourself also in school choir which i know you know how to sing very well, While singing i believe you will forget some of our movement and sleepover we used to do. So also to be participating in some school activities like playing valley ball, which you know that you have ...

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