IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In today’s present era, Education becomes very costly in every corner of the world. So, many university students are doing part-time jobs with their studies. We shall discuss the merits and demerits of doing the job during the study in the following paragraphs.
Many people believe that zoos are not good for animals so they need to find a better way to do it or return animals to the wild. Most people think of zoos as places of entertainment and just to see animals but they do not think about why they keep animals in capacity or whether they are in good or bad condition. But in my opinion,animals are not given enough attention in zoos they just charge money to enter zoos they do not use them for animals for example we often go to the zoos with our family and I like one elephant there very much I always brought him a lot of fruits.When we went a few days ago I was very sad because there was not here which I love. The owners of the zoo said that they could not find enough food for the elephant and did not take good care of it. It fell ill so it was sent to Tashkent zoo after this incident I was condensed that the animals were not well taken care of .
No, I don't think so. And in this ,essay I'll tell why I think so, and express my point of view about it.
In today’s modern era the developments in agroculture has increased, but a plenty of population over the world suffering from the lack of food. The main reason for that, is a number of people rise annualy, however new approches would be proved against to starve. This essay will answer to questions and will suggest some approches.
There are two predictions about money. Some people consider that money is the most vital factor for the hapiness, while others have opposite statement. In this essay, I will explain why I somewhat agree with the former opinion.
It is considered by some that the majority of students should choose their studies by their interests, while others claim that it is better to study only the relevant subjects of the future, for example science and technologies. While I agree with the first statement, there is another point of view which also will be discussed in this essay.
Experts has been debating on this matter for a long time, some believe that it's better for children to begin learning a foreign language at the primary school rather than secondary school, In this essay I'm going to discuss whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or not.
Some individuals opine that only authorities are responsible to control the air pollution caused by traffic cojection. To some extent, I agree rules and regulations against pollution creating vehicles however, I also believe that people can keep their environment clean by proper driving. In upcoming paragraph I will discuss its agree or disagree
I totally agree that computer games are very popular among people of all ages and nations and I do agree on its harmful effect, but educationl value whether is it little or not is questionable.
The environment is the fundamental source of all possible existence on planet Earth. However, over the recent years, the environment has been exploited excessively because of which the environmental conditions are becoming worse day by day. Pollution of air, water and land, mining, industrialisation, modern urbanisation, deforestation, release of chemical effluents and landfills are some of the major factors that cause the gradual deterioration of the environment.
Nowadays, many young people are committing a crime in most countries in the world. There are some certain issues that young people commit an offense, but also some effective solutions reducing crime. Perhaps the most common factor that influence or drive young people to break the law can be unemployment. For example, in my country, Mongolia, young adults entering the workforce without having completed their university’s degree due to early marriage. This makes finding a job difficult. This may lead them to be offenders. The recency effect can be related to the number of internet users is increasing. A number of teenagers and young people, want to earn money in easy way, are getting involved in cybercrime. The elderly or the very young – two groups likely to become victims of computer crime. Turning to effective solutions, the government can implement short-term and fee- flexible apprenticeship programs for young families. If people made enough money to live, they would ...
Nowadays, it is believed that conventional method of reading will be substituted by the modern technology. The posibility of reading anywhere, obtaining easily the information and preserving the environment are three motives why this essay disagrees with this statement.
Food is a topic that generally involves a lot of sides that can be made in different ways, like fish that can be fried, steamed, or eaten when it's raw. As might be expected, people have invented smoked fish. is a method of curing fish through smoking. To begin, to cure a fish, you must first find a fish, which can be quickly found in the ocean, but the technical limitations of a small boat make it impossible to preserve fish with high impact; additionally, we transport all of the fish we catch to the port, where they will be kept in good condition at a low temperature. The second step is cleaning it with fresh water, cutting open the head, and storing it in salt water. The third method is to cure it with smoke. after all steps of liquid brine or dry salt mixture), cold smoking, cooling, packaging (air, vacuum, or modified), and storage. Smoking, one of the oldest preservation methods, combines the effects of salting, drying, heating, and smoking. Lastly, distribute it to fish shop...
Smoke fish is one of the most favourite food in Europe but do you know how to make it ? How to make it from the fresh fish into the most delicious food? In this essay will let you know the exact process to make it.
In general, all individuals could face stressful situations which may eventually not leads to desirable end. For these reasons some individuals give different responds towards undesired jobs, either they choose to accept it, or they prefer to improve their statues. This essay will argue the reasons for each one, while clarifying how important is to take corrective steps to these situation.
Nowadays, one of the widely discussed issues is traffic jams in almost all metropolitan cities . The significant reason is that the road are too narrow for a number of transportation in the large urban areas and a viable solution is that the drivers should pay taxes to drive a private cars.
It is widely known that crime done by young people is increasing most parts of the world. The origin of this situation stem from 3 factors, while several solutions can solve the problem. Major factor can be a poverty that teenagers are not able to afford what they want to. So this will lead them to think how to earn money easily in short period time. This phenomenon result in major crimes which includes theft and burglary and cause harm to someone innocent. Another cause is bad behavior that has already possessed them. Youngster’s first society is their family which means their parents are the role models for their children and responsible for their actions. It is obvious that childhood surrounding has a huge impact on whether they will be a good citizen or not. A third factor is overuse of social media and fear of miss out which is the hardest problem that facing the society. Adolescent tends to copy each other and do things they underestimate the consequence. Turning to ...
Some people argue that international media often generates negative effects towards cultural diversity. In this essay, I will explain why I somehow agree with this statement.
In the current fast-paced world, young people mainly involved in crime such as violence, gangsternism, bullying and homicide. The essay will discuss the factors for this phenomenon and some solution for a family members and a social platforms. To begin with, the major factor here is all young people are now allowed to access the internet at early age. For instance, A 2018 study by Cambridge university found that 93% of youth age 14-22 use social media, most daily. As a result, wasting time on platforms like crime movie sites and violent video games can be affect to criminal behavior. Another cause is increasing number of children who do not receive enough attention from family, which can be lead to depression, anxiety and self control. Turning into possible solution, parents should monitor to reduce side effect of media violence on children by setting limits of time to kids watch some beneficial programmes. If we implented this remedy, it would be greatly prevention from ...
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