IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 395

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Shops should not be allowed to sell food and drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Exactly this theory that the scientist and psychoanalyst Immanuel Velikovsky touched upon in his 1950 bestseller "Worlds in Collision". According to the author, more than 3000 years ago, something huge hit Jupiter and formed a space object: this object roamed around this billiard table for a long time and at high speed caused many disasters and transformed into what we call Venus. Naturally, a large number of physicists and chemists immediately declined Velikovsky's theory, at least because it violated Newton's law.The other skepticism was more significant. It was said that the planets have a different composition, because of which Venus could not be part of Jupiter. However, no one has finally been able to refute this theory, as well as to prove it.

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Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention in school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

School goers have been constantly facing difficulties to focus on classes and pay attention towards their studies which has created a severe impact on the career of students. Mindless scrolling on social media platforms and less interactive classes are the leading causes of this problem. However, this essay will provide solutions to mitigate this problem.

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The gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

The statistics of money spending regarding weekly income among families in 1968 and 2018 are illustrated in the bar chart.

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Today, people in many countries have to spend more and more time away from their families. Why is this happening? What effects does this have on the people themselves and on their families?

A lot of people nowadays have to live far away from their families, due to the increasing job opportunities and mobilization in urban areas. It is a far better chance to land a high-income job and build an outstanding career from the most developed cities of the country rather than the countryside. As a result, many have made a choice to travel and work from infrastructural cities while trying to support their families from there. There is no denying that this has brought big social consequences which are getting worse by days. In particular it has brought a rise of workaholics, whose schedule is working overtime and trying to make as much money as possible. It is evident that workhorse culture is becoming drastically more popular in Asian countries, especially Japan where employees who show dedication and commitment to their company have a chance of promotion. Needless to say, the competition there is over the top that’s why having free time for your family is a privilege not every...

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Some people think that youngsters should get involved in unpaid work, while others oppose as it may affect their career. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include and relevant examples.

Should Youngsters be involved in unpaid work, and could it affect their career?

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some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In this sophisticated era, there have been many changes that cause confusion. Some people argue that living in this era makes them confused with their own choice. This essay will elaborate on the reasons for this issue and provide relevant examples.

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Many people are using credit cards or loans to run up huge personal debts that they may be unable to repay. It should therefore be made more difficult for individuals to borrow large amounts of money. What are your opinions on this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

It is true that many people suffer in financial problems due to unable to clear a huge amount of loans in recent year. Some people believe that bank should tighten the approval loan process of huge loan. Personally, I disagree with this views.

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Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that people need to change the social communication in today world. The global is modernized from fashion, daily habits to communication. Although people think communicate through online brings some bad effects on relationships of society, while I believe that we are also use modern communication technology.

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The best way to tackle the problem of obesity is to educate people about healthy eating. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Obesity nowadays is a major health issue, it affects the well-being of every society and consumes state financial resources. The solution to this problem seems to be multifactorial , as the very essence of the issue is multifaceted.

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Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced. Do you agree or disagree?

It is a fact that the discoveries which scientists have done in outer space are crucial for our future although it is a highly debatable topic since we need plenty of sources and money for doing it. Humans also worried about the problems that they face on Earth. In my opinion, astronauts must keep searching the universe and find a new home for the humanity.

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Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

According to researchers, there are many forms of incorporating education at school. The fusion of leisure, or sporting activities into academic learning could be one of those ideas. I strongly advocate to this thought of making any games or sports be educational. This essay will discuss how children can be benefited from this fusion using examples.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to the social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer including any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

We live in the era where the technology gives us the opportunity to see the person’s life and their social status. Person’s worth presently valued based on social status and material possession rather than the old-fashioned for instance honour, kindness, and other things. Despite the truth seems true, I am disagreeing with the statement because the out-dated value and good behaviour still matter and urgent to be seen.

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All children should be made to wear school uniform.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that, all schoolchildren ought to wear a special uniform. Personally, I am completely agree with this viewpoint since it every child should treated equally according to the sense of belonging and this essay will provide certain arguments to this statement.

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It is difficult for people living in cities today get enough physical exercise. Why is it the case ? What can be done to solve the problem ?

In 21 century for the young and old generations and for all people in the world difficult to concentrate on their health and it is hard to get enough physical exercise for the mind. There are some ways to solve this problem such as opening relaxation centres, and coming up with a recreation department at work.

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It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As the globalization grow rapidly in this era, Internet become prime pivotal media in many aspects of life. Some people stated that Internet could be the perfect place to communicate, but some also argue that it might not be a great place to gather accurate sources. The writer will discuss both of the stated views and also the perspective for the motion.

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The charts below show the production of different types of citrus fruit in Brazil, China and USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

The given data illustrate different types of citrus fruit production in three different countries. Overall, orange account for the majority of citrus fruit production in Brazil and the USA, whereas China focuses heavily on growing and selling Tangerines.

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the maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbiton

An industrial area in the town of Norbiton is illustrated regarding the current status and plans.

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To what extent do you agree with the following statement? Anything that is good for you can also be bad for you if you do it too much.

Generating habits that encourage us to feel happier about the good things we can do can help us be better, perform better, and reduce our emotions for the bad things we may have done.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other s think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own oipinion.

advertising were used since long time ago to promote both goods or services. it develop through time and now we can see so many different advertisments anywhere in various medias. i believe that advertising still give impact even though there are only small amount of people notice the commercials.

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Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.

It is often believed that the higher the degree of studies, the higher is the chance of succeeding. However, many people have been the proof that that is not always the case. In my opinion, that would have been true a few decades ago, but with the advance intechnology and the increasing amount of job positions that do not require higher education, the statement seems to be outdated.

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