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Write about the following topic. Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

World has many number of recognized organizations and companies.They have many employees under their companies.Out of them many organizations serve to people any service or selling to them any services.We can describe organizations as govermant and private sectors.
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More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem? Problem and solution

It is clear that, over the years,there is an increasing number of animal species that are going extinct and others are getting endangered.This essay will discuss some of the reason why it is happening and propose some ways to mitigate the issues.
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Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The argument for equal-punishment policy is that proportionated punishment can guarantee crime prevention. Given the rational nature of human behavior which means they would weigh the benefits against risks, crime could be controlled by making punishment associated with a criminal behavior more painful than the pleasure or benefits that could be derived from a criminal behavior such as robbery. In view of this deterrent effect, the punishment should solely be based upon the crimes per se other than the milieu of criminals, therefore refuting the idea that age could be the mitigating factor.
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Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. in what ways had techonolgy affected the types of relationships people make? has this become a positive or negative development?

In recent times, technology has influenced a lot of aspects of our life, relationships being one of them. But as with every beneficial service, it comes with its costs. This essay will discuss the contribution of technology to our relationships and it's positive development.
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Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

As we advance further into the digital age, the importance of studying is undeniable if one wants a good future later in his life. While learning seems like a straightforward task, many pupils find it challenging to stay focus in class. Many factors can contribute to this problem, and this essay will address some of causes as well as suggest a few ideas that could alleviate the issue. One major reason for the inability to concentrate is arguably the involvement of technologies in the course of studying. Nowadays, fewer and fewer schools place heavy restrictions on using smartphones or laptops in class as some methods of teaching actually integrate modern technologies to make studying more engaging and interactive. While using such devices could aid students to a certain extent, they also are a huge source of distraction. For example, as we are more connected to the internet than ever before, the need to stay in the loop on social medias has skyrocketed, and a single notifi...
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Today more people are overweight than before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?

Nowadays, we can have almost everything we want in just about a click on our smartphones and it includes food. It is very quick and it is easier to place an order for food on an app like Skip the Dishers or Uber eats instead of home cooking your own meal. The problem is that fast food is not healthy and it is the main reason for the surge of overweight people than before. First, almost everybody is busy today, most of Adults are working all day long and there is no much time to cook their food. Years ago, the majority of families used to have only one Adult member working, most the man and, the other would stay home taking care of the kids and the home chores including cooking. Now, when both work it is hard to have a healthy life and ordering food or stopping by a drive-thru looks like the way to go. Another fact is that social media and TV commercials are always presenting us with a new fast food option that looks very appealing and, it helps us to take the wrong decision...
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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents' home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.

In today's society, I can see some value for young people who leave their parents' home after finishing their studies. Dosen't really matters if they will be renting or sharing a home with some aquantances but, the action of search for independence that realy counts in my oppinion. First, taking care of a house is not a easy dutty and requires some maturity that is very hard to develop when you have someone doing those chores for you, like your Father or Mother. For exemple, I have a friend that is on his 30th's and still deppendable of his parents. in addicion, the opportunity to live by yourself can help a youg person to grow and acquire more responsabilities and it is good to have it sooner than latter. On the other hand, when you leave with your parents you can save a huge chunck of money that can and should be used for a down payment of their first property. Stay with your parents is very common on latin countries. The majority of people keep living with their parents un...
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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A proportion of people think that the phone using by children should not allowed druing the school day while the others think the opposite. Considering to children' distraciton, the argument of banned the phones could be effective on their education, but on the other hand, the developted technology such as smart phones and Internet provides a wisley way to use phones as a helper for kids.
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Many young couples choose to have babies late. Do you think the advantages of this trend will outweigh the disadvantages?

The diagram illustrates the process of making frozen fish pies. Overall, there are four intensive stages in making the fish pie. It begins with the delivery of fresh fish and potatoes and ends with the packaging of the end product ready for human consumption.
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Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The world is becoming more and more modern but some people still think that children should not be forced to learn a foreign language. I entirely disagree with this view.
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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Disscus both sides veiws and give your opinion.

It's argued that the parent is responsible for guiding his children to become valuable members of the society, while others think it's the school's role. This essay will discuss the impact of both parties on the child's upbringing.
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Some people believe that the best way to increase the road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Many are of the opinion that raising the age at which people can get driving licenses is the best way to make roads safer. Although this will help prevent some accidents due to inexperience, I strongly feel that it is more important to focus on safer roads through improved urban planning. The main justification that proponents of raising the age at which people can drive will often cite the number of accidents attributed to inexperience. In the USA, most teenagers get their driving permit around age 16. There are a couple of factors that can lead to a 16 year-old to cause more accidents than someone in their 20s. The first is that they simply do no have as much road experience. They have only dealt with a limited number of experiences and are more likely to make poor decisions at pivotal moments. The other the reason is that many American teenagers begin drinking alcohol around this age even though the legal age is 21. Teenagers are notoriously irresponsible and they hav...
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COMMUNITIES AND HELPING EACH OTHER We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Well I am going to talk about communities and helping each other, I am going to give my opinion, also I am going to share my experiences with this situation and also I think, well also I want to give some advice. Well I am going to start, so yes I think that we can not help every one that needs help and is more difficult when we want to help everyone in the world, but I think is good to do good things for the other people atthough is not For to much people or ocations I think we must to be caritative, emphatical persons with our friends, family not always people that we meet so that have a lot persons that we need our help, I think not always are consider with others, we don’t know How the other people is passing your life, we don’t know his/ her feelings because each people are different is for that reason we need to be a good person not always giving money I think only it can be just sharing our advice o...
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Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does it cost ? What are some possible solutions?

There has been much discussion revolving about the issue that in today’s society more and more people need to compete with young people for the same jobs. In this essay, I will present what problems it causes and the solutions for this phenomenon.
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Some people argue that globalisation has been a great benefit to people around the world, while others believe that it is the cause of many of the problems we see today. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

In my opinion homeworking is very good, because many people are able to work from home, so they do not need to go somewhere far. Also you do not lost the way for the office or classroom, you do not need to find the person what you need, because he is over there, in an online conference and for some people who find it hard in communicate in live, online work will become a comfortable place.
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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise tha their products are new in some ways. Why is this?Do you think it is a positive and negative development?

Nowadayes many organizations and companies are doing advertisements frequently. And alwayes in their maketing for their products are shown that the products will be the first time in the market. It is new brand. This essay will discuss the bors and cons and explaining way in the advertisements stste like that.
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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

With all the recent breakthroughs in different spheres, such as transportation, new materials and telecommunication facilities, people can reach even far-flung territories. However, the drawbacks of such interventions might cross the possible benefits of these advances.
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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In this globalised era, tourism has emerged with all its scope throughout the world and this trend allows the exposure of various customs, traditions, lifestyles and behaviour. The people who are usually very conservatives support the argument that foreigners should follow the host countries culture. On the other hand, many others have a different view and they opine that the host country should welcome the foreign cultures. This essay will analyse both these views.To start with, young tourists mostly have no issues to follow the host countries culture as it will help them to blend with the society so easily. Moreover, it is the effective way to reduce racism, prejudices, and social barriers. The one who proclaims a "single world culture" can adopt the host countries customs and local behaviour, which maintain harmony among nations and will foster the healthy relationship between countries. There are some tourists who do not abide by the rules and customs the host country has. This ...
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Most people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family at the same time. What problems can this situation create? What are the possible solutions?

Nowadays, couples struggle to keep up with family issues and career development goals, at the same time. Taken out of control this hustle might result in huge fights, depression and stress for a person and separation. However, such kind of a menace can be tackled by spending more quality time together and by understanding the situation of the earning hand of the abode. This essay will discuss reasons for the mentioned problem and put forth solutions to deal with them effectively.
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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person.Why do you think this is the case?What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person?

In the modern 21st century era that we as the world are currently live in,the age group of youngsters who are more commonly known as ‘’teenagers’’ have been noticed due to the reason of a particular manner which they embody in their day to day lives.The teenagers in our social world nowadays have shown us that they are more keen on socialising via the social media rather than a face to face natural communication with each other.This phenomenon may be caused of the fact that they normalised this behaviour as children.
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