IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 414

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people argue that capital punishment is good for the country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are less countries with capital punishment, only a few keep this tradition alive, like some states in USA. This is due to human righs are increasing aroun the world. However, what happens with criminals who released prision and when they are free come back to crime. Thereby, a lot of people think that for some criminals capital punishment is the best option to finish with that circle. I agree with this statement and this paper focuses on capital punishment.

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Young drivers are careless & overconfident, and too many are killed in accidents. To eliminate this problem, we could teach children the skills of safe driving while they are at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Global,there have been high numbers in road traffic accidents leading to increase in mortality rate especially among the young drivers. Some people have come with the solution that children should undergo driving lessons even in school. I totally disagree with this point because they are still young and need more time for their studies,also they are explorers and likely to explore what they are being taught without supervision. This essay will expanciate on the negative effects of having driving lessons at a young age.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this opinion.

Nowadays, it is a fact that some of the languages has gradually disappeared due to the level of its difficulty or the dropping in the number of its users. In this case, surely there are huge benefits to the world even though some people would argue that it is destroying the uniqueness of each country and its own ancient culture.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in tows and cities closing.

In today's generation, shopping has been always very important whether be it household or personal. Thus, the shops in towns and cities are at a great risk as there is a growth in online shopping. I strongly disagree to this because internet purchasing does not allow you to check the quality and size of the product and also the payment and refund policies is a big concern.

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Some people think it is better to have many short holidays during the year. Others believe it would be beneficial to have fewer, longer vacations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

9. KIA Fututra is a cross-coupe which perfectly composited with its aerodynamic body and includes elegance and sportiness. This concept has reached 4th level of autonomous driving system, which depicts the interior design, characterized by spaciousness and flexibility of transformation. The car is driven fully by electric power plant and, at the same time, the battery with a high capacity is located under the passenger compartment floor.

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Some people thing that all university student should study whatever like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Nowadays, some of people consider that student who enrolled university should have compulsory curriculum that including positive science and technology, however, another side think about adverse they defend young individual is adult enough. They can choose whatever they want to study. In this essay, I will argue with that both side how effect the young generation.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with number of older people. Do the advantage of this situsation outweigh the advantage?

In this time young people are most important weapon for a country. Numerous country population with relatively a little number of older people than large number of young adults. In this essay I will examine the advantage of large number of young people more than drawbacks.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with is opinion. What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviours to children?

The charts illustrate the projected changes in energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2040 as opposed to the percentage of energy capacity in 2015.

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ĐỀ 1: In many counties, more and more people are staying at home to look after their children when women work full time. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

Earlier generation women were married at an early stage like 18 and they were not going to school because they did not have enough money, and there was not proper family planning so it was very difficult for them to spend money on each and every child to send them school and give them a good education. But nowadays and in many countries, not only in India but every other country housewives work full time.

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The plan below show the layout of a university's sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Here, we can see there are two architectural plans that represent the present and after look of a university sport centre.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

In today's generation people started watching Netflix there are many documentaries which are made for people to watch so that they know what is happening in the world. There are many sources from where people can gather information.

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Some people think that parent should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss bought of this argument and give your opinion .

It is widely believed that parents are responsible for their children upbringing which includes also acquiring the ways and behaviours accepted in society. At the same time many are of the opinion that it is the pivotal role of schools to provide their students with the skills essential for their social life. I strongly believe that the more effort we make from both sides the better results we have on the way to building a prosperous and benevolent community.

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Some people say patriotism causes problems and is negative overall. Others feel that it is beneficial for society at large. What are the advantages and disadvantages of patriotism?

Some people believe that patriotism can lead to some problems, although other people think it has some advantages for society. This essay will examine advantages and disadvantages of being patriotic

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Some people believe that it is wrong for professional athletes to compete in the Olympics because their strong financial backing and training give them an unfair advantage over the other athletes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals think it is not fair that professional athletes to race in the Olympics, as their financial power and training create them an advantage over the other athletes. I completely agree with this opinion, because professional athletes have more experience than others and, as the Olympics held once every four years, some chance should be given to amateur athletes.

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some people believe that the extinction of animals is a natural process and human should not intervene. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays in young families both parents are choosing to go to work and trying to delegate housework to different services. With this tendency not working women might seem unmodern and also that they don’t think about themselves and not interested in self improvement. This lifestyle makes partners equally important and there is no discrimination in this family. Both partners are doing their own career and it brings a positive impact in the form of money. Children in these families usually have many clothes and a governess but there is a lack of parents’ attention. They are growing up without parents, going to school and making friends. They can see their parents only on evenings and weekends but parents are usually too tired for that and need resting. The second positive impact is an opportunity to travel or eat in cafes because they have free money for that.

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In the future students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers ot TV or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.

Currently, there are more and more schools using techonoloy at schools. If they studied at home could be an advantage due to the student has acces to the information at moment and ease learning. However, non-contact with the other classmates and teacher can produce the lack of social habilities at student and turn him into selfish people. This paper is about the choice of study at home insted at school.

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Nowadays many people prefer to seek medical advice on the Internet instead of seeing a qualified doctor. What are the reasons for it? is it a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays people prefer to find solutions to their medical issues on the Internet rather than referring to a doctor. One reason for that can be the environment of the Internet which provides all desired information readily for users. However, because medical issues are very complicated, it can cause misunderstandings when a nonspecialized person read them. One causing factor for people’s tendency to seek medical advice on the Internet can be the the fact that it is convenient. In the other words all information relating to a special medical the problems are accessible by a simple search on the Internet within a few minutes. For example, consider a person who is suffering from a sore throat. Instead of searching for a doctor, making an appointment and waiting until his or her turn; they can easily sit on their sofa, bring their cell phone and seek medical advice online. Therefore, this person prefers seeking for medical advice on the Internet rather than referring to a docto...

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We live in cities or towns which have museums displaying historical and cultural importance, but people do not visit them. What are the reasons?

Some individuals claim that we are living in a world that many young people are neglecting museums exhibiting historical and cultural importance. This phenomenon results from the lack of citizen’s excitement and the awareness of each person in maintaining the national cultural identity. After consideration, i assume that it can be mitigated by inserting more interactive activities and advancing superior facilities in museums.

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Universities should provide students with the skills they will require in order to succeed at their future jobs. To what extrnt do you agree or disagree with the above opinion? What are the some of the job skills employers look for new employees.

These days,universities students ought to providing knowledge and practical skills with their future career benefits. In my opinion, i agree that practical skills beneficial for students at their facture jobs and there are two other skills in employees that looks for employ.

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Some people think that people in senior positions alone should make decisions in a business, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A group of individuals opines that in business higher position workers are alone enough to take decisions. While others believe that employees should be included in the decision-making process too. I tend to incline towards the former notion.

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