IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 414

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Advantages and disadvantages of learning a foreign language at primary school

The illustrations demonstrate the life cycle of salmon which is a species of large fish. Overall, their life initiates from an egg in slow-moving water in a river to mature one which lay eggs.

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People think that living in multi-storey buildings is rather than their own home. What do you think is right?

Humans which live in the world, want doing their comfortable. In the family, job, home and other things. Especially is the home. Now modern tense is even being built homes. Although, in foreign lands, we can see multi-storey residential buildings because one of the most convenient sides a multi-storey houses is the heat the house, heating houses is not a problem, because they are not enough large as well as not wide. In the meantime, I have to say that there are also children's playgrounds for the children these homeowners. I think many humans are want to live this is houses.

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The demand for food is increasing worldwide.Why has it happened?What measures could the international community take to improve the situation?

The insistence for food around the world has gained day by day.There are many reasons for it.One of the main reasons is population growth.Although the international community can not do much to improve the situation,they bear the brunt of it.In this essay,we will explore together how the world nation can easily and effectively improve this position.

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Online shopping is significantly increasing what effects does this have people, what are the benefits and what are job opportunities.

There are different opinions about is recent years, online shopping is growing day by day. It is suitable every way for people, it makes people's live easier. This essay, it will be considered in the following paragraph.

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Nowadays, people always throw old things away and buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead to?

These days, many people tend to be less concerned about recycling or reforming the items to reuse, since buying new ones is easier than repairing them. From my perspective, this occurrence is caused by the shortened progress of manufacturing and purchasing, so items could be easily replaced by the new items. This problem cannot be ignored because it has huge impacts on increasing wastes and decreasing the quality of products.

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Some people think that computers are more important for study while other think that teachers can taught everything to students .discuss both sides and give your opinion.

For nowadays computers are one of the impotrant tools in education purposes such as books and science articles. For instance, the whole information that people need in any areas, the computer could provide in second and this is progress of humanity. Also, there are so many option in order to write a short text or a big report and computer correct all mistakes, however, it is a great right to consume the information but pupils in that case cannot get a feedback without a teacher. In this essay, I would to discuss two points of view.

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Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that after high school life, it is better to have experiences in traveling or working than to study immediately for a higher degree. The advantage is the experiences they are stuffed with can strengthen the choice of specialization in university, while on the other hand, losing interest to go to university can be the disadvantages.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In order to earn a good job, some people think getting a university degree is a necessity while others think it is better to own experience and soft skills. However, both sides provide benefits on their own for instance completing university can give the students the specialized major related to the job and experience and soft skills can prepare for the working dynamics that people can not get from university.

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The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality.

Women’s role in society has indeed improved significantly for these past five decades, turning from the expert of household management to occupying the key positions in professional roles, yet the gender equality has not been attained and still needs attention. Despite the leading roles, women still have to face the social pressure to prioritize family over her career while men doesn’t experience that. Inside the working environment, the chance of women’s voice of being heard is less than the men’s.

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in some countries young people are ancouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the disadvantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Nowadays, learning a special skill and becoming a specialist in it have been completely urgent as a result, adolescents should decide about their goals and future career as soon as possible and not squander their lives since the job market has become fully competitive. While others suppose that they should be given more days to think about it. However, I believe the earlier decision can be more beneficial.

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In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face-to-face meeting. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, there is a lot of changes in our life. The communication methods have different changes. Virtual conversation becomes more in the work environment compared with one-to-one meetings. This essay will discuss the pros that outweigh the cons.

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• Advantages and disadvantages of getting married at an early age.

Topic one Getting married at on early ago

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

There is no doubts these days that the online shopping became more popular than ever. the question is what is the impcat of online shopping on our lifes ? in the essay I am going to disscuse the postive sides and negative sides of the online shopping.

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The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary days a lot of cities experiencing dramatic growth. And that’s why authorities struggled with lack of residential land where builders can construct fresh accommodation. It is agreed that only government can eliminate this issue. This essay outline actions that can be taken in order to fix it up.

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In these days and age, schools have become the maximum crucial institutions that provide the young generation with a proper education that will allow them to develop. However, there is an increasing number of reported bullying cases that happened inside in school system. In my opinion, it depends on the upbringing of parents and the influence of social networks. Nevertheless, this situation can be bettered when if you apply strict measures to them quickly

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The below shows the fishing industry in an European country according to four indicators.

Givan is a table chart comparing two different fishing industries namely Industrial ships (big scale) and Fishing boats(small scale) in terms of four various marks in a special European country.

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Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The plans illustrate Garange park in 1920 when it was first established and in recent days.

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Everyone should stay in school until they reach the age of 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The provided diagram illustrates the process of plastic bottles being recycled. Overall, there are nine stages in the process, starting with throwing this particular type of litter to a corresponding trash bin as a part of the waste sorting, essential for environmental protection, to a step of producing end products from recycled material.

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Some students nowadays prefer to study online through online courses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning online?

In recent years, most of the tasks were changed because of the Internet. Teachers started teaching students through online classes. Some people believe that going to the school is more effective way of studying. As far as I am concerned, I think studying on campus is better.

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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. Tg what extent do you agree or disagree?

Those days all people visit other countries for vacation. Some people think that this travel will have a bad effect on the countries. I think a trip to any country for any person is very beneficial for people . I will elaborate on my point in the following paragraphs.

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