IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 417

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In many countries throughout the world, young people are pushed into careers that they have no aptitude for, or do not want to do, and there are two main reasons for this situation. The first reason is lack of tertiary study options. In some countries, such as China, there are limited places available for tertiary study, and those who do not manage to earn a place at the institution of their choice often find themselves studying a subject which does not interest them, or which is a poor match for their skills and aptitudes. The other main reason, which is closely aligned to the former point, is parental aspirations. Many parents push their children into a limited set of career options because these choices represent social success, security and money in later life. In many cases, the skills and needs of the children are ignored, as their parents encourage them to earn places in prestigious, if inappropriate, institutions and to study subjects that are acceptable to their f...

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Some people think adults should give children freedom to make mistakes. Others think adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Few folks think that children have to mistakes and the parents give freedom to youngsters to make mistakes. Whereas opponent says that adults prevent the pupils from making mistakes.following essay shall express both the views along with my opinion.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.

There are many points of view that professionals such as engineers, doctors, or architects must work in their studying or training country or not ,or they should have the freedom to work in foreign countries they wish. In my opinion, those professionals should not have free to work in anywhere they wish; they should work in their trying country. There are many reasons why professionals should work in their country where they were studying or training. First, professionals have to study the regulations that depend on their careers; for example, architects and engineers should learn how to build a building within the legal of the construction which is dependent on every country. Moreover, people can give a permit for doctors to kill them in some countries,but some can not. In addition, lawyers can only work in their training country because legal is depending on the country where they learned. Finally, there is some regulation giving permits to their country ...

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

We all live lives that are mostly about balancing our personal lives.When it comes to personal life, it depends on how we treat our family and friends. being able to take care of our mental health and our physical health is just as important as eating, sleeping or drinking water, both are very important.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

In the modern times, punishment to children to tech them appropriate and wrong has become highly controversial. Some people believe that Punishment is necessary to help them learn what is right and wrong, whereas othere believe that it helps to led to improve their behaviour and others. I strongly agree with this statement, in this cassy i will give some arguments in favoure to support my opinion. In general, there are several reasons People believe that Penaalize is help to improve kicds behaviour. Firstly, in the early age they don't understand what in aright and wrong. For example, my five years old. nephew through out his toys and gadget . This its because he didnot know the merit and demerit of his behavoiur . An a result, i denied to give him to his toys and gadget. So that, he understood what he done and that was his wong. Soft punishment in need for teach them wring and right . Secondly, If your child broke glass then mother gave him soft punishment.for ...

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the modern times, punishment to children to tech them right and wrong has become highly controversial. Some people believe that Punishment is necessary to help them learn what is right and wrong, whereas othere believe that it helps to led to improve their behaviour and others. I strongly agree with this statement, in this cassy i will give some arguments in favoure to support my opinion. In general, there are several reasons People believe that Penaalize is help to improve kicds behaviour. Firstly, in the early age they don't understand what in aright and wrong. For example, my five years old. nephew through out his toys and gadget . This its because he didnot know the merit and demerit of his behavoiur . An a result, i denied to give him to his toys and gadget. So that, he understood what he done and that was his wong. Soft punishment in need for teach them wring and right . Secondly, If your child broke glass then mother gave him soft punishment.for exampl...

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Some people suggest that international news should study as a subject in secondary school. However, others say that it will be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

International decissions updates and events that occur daily are likely to be get affected by other countries. While some adults suggest that, studying international news as a school subject, others argue that it might waste school time that can be allocated to study some other important subject. Even though am convinced that international news is quite the subject that supports school kids to get awareness about the real world around them, I am also discussing both views in this essay to make a discussion about the topic.

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Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle. Other believe that government should take care of it. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Health is the most important part of our life. Who would not say that the presence of a healthy lifestyle is important for the person as a whole. On this topic, people have different points of view, including many who believe that a healthy lifestyle is everyone's own responsibility. Others think that the government needs to take care of it.

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People are becoming famous with the help of TV programmes and the internet. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Nowadays, the most popular is with the assist of TV programmes and the internet. People are becoming famous because of this. In these times, people are getting popular with the aid of different TV programmes, the internet and on instagram, especially, many teenagers and young people start earing with instagram. At this time instagram is the most popular for people and youngsters and thus humans, particularly young persons started blogging and blogging. In my view this is good benefit, because with the aid of the internet humans evolve. Besides, persons with the assist of the internet and instagram learn different useful things, at the same time viewers will also learn useful things. Moreover, there disadvantages to the internet. For instance, these days, for adolescents the internet became very significant, such as, instagram, telegram and tik tok. Nevertheless, all things have their flaws. For example, nowadays, most people get bogged down in the internet and that is why it impact...

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The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Music is believed to be one of the most effective stress busters by people all around the world, and there is good reasoning for that. Music is said to be able to touch and connect with the soul of a person and heavily influence their moods, feelings, and emotions.

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Some people believe that showing big sporting events like the Olympics and the World Cup encourages adults to exercise. Others think there are better ways to make people to exercise. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give relevant examples,

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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the problems of playing computer games and what can you suggest to minimize the bad effects?

It has been universally acknowledged that owing to the easy availability of computers, plenty of youngesters play games at unlimited scale. A number of the problemes have been emerging from this phenomenon such as blur eye-sight and obestity.Awareness of parents and teachers can help to fix this curtail. The government should keep an eye to restrict the overuse of computers for games. Although, plenty of problems are there yet some sensible solutions are also available to curb the issue. This essay will shed light on possible problems caused by this trend and also some solutions to get rid of this menace.

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In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters?

In number of countries, increasingly students are giving up schools which cannot attain well-pay jobs and for this reason; there are some problems about this issue. I think that it can causes negative effects for young people and the society such as psychological diseases and skill workers immigration. This essay will explain this issue. Youth unemployment is one of the most important problems in the world. Firstly, when students graduate from university, they try to achieve a good job according to their knowledge and habits. If they cannot find job, they may involve to psychological illnesses such as depression and low self-confidence which causes they use drugs; naturally, drugs have bad effects on person's treatment and health. I believe that when society may involve lots of junkies, they may make serious problems in society likes stealing which causes unsafe for people. In addition, when youngsters cannot work they decide to immigration to other countries because t...

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Students today get information online, so libraries are not necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The line chart depicts the amount of three kinds of spreads: margarine, butter and low-fat & reduced spreads over 26-year periods between 1981 and 2007. It is clear from the given graph that butter and margarine consumption decreased throughout the period, while the quantity consumed of butter and low-fat & reduced had increased.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Healthy life style is a leading life in the best away, there are very important thing that help, for example exercising without exaggerating or walking for a 30 minutes every day, the food and diet is importat, with exercise is a balance. Is not about eating only vegetables and fruit, a nutricionist who has a knowledge in this can be helpful, avoiding the consumption of foods that content excess sugar suah sa is soft drink, and also fat like fast food, sleeping 8 hours a day is very important.

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Countries are becoming more and more similliar because are able to by the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The pie charts illustrated the percentages of a variety of ways of finding out the news by Canadians and Australians.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

At present a large number of population want to be self-employed without working under others. According to the growing population of the world, it is very important to be a self dependent person, though it also has a risk of bank-rupted.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together ia a beneficial way.

There is no doubt that social media sources are having more influence on people's lives nowadays. There are different points of view on this topic. Some users suppose that Facebook or Twitter are causing troubles for younger generation making them unable to create social connections. However others state that social networks help people to unite.

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Medical professionals such as doctors or nurses from poorer countries often migrate to richer countries to work. What problems arise from this situation? What measures can be taken to deal with it?

There is a tendency, nowadays, that professionals from poorer countries tend to imigrate to richer countries to work. Thus, it leads to problems either in left and moved countries. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss these problems and propose possible solutions regarding to the issue.

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topic: What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

Over the last decades, examining the children has become much more common among schools. Many people believe that examining children has more pluses.Whereas, some others state that it has more minuses. In this essay, I will provide both advantages and disadvantages of examining children with some valid points and clear examples.

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