IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 419

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today's society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What's your opinion?

Immigrationn has a significant impact on the global and local economies. Each year more and more peoplefrom all over the world decide to leave their home country and move to another place. we will examine the reasons and consequences of this immigration. In my opinion the core reason for immigration since the dawn of time is the fundamental desire to live a better life and a safe future. The modernization of the global transport system has fueled this and enabled people from all over the world to migrate to new countries. In general, the main reason for peoplemigrating to another country is to run away from areas of conflict and wars to ensure a safe future for their families. For example following the Arab spring, uprising there has been a surge in migration from many countries like Syria, Tunisia, Egypt, Yemen, and more to Europe. More people especially women live under strict regimes that deny them basic rights to seek a better life women in Afghanistan under the Taliban would w...

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Nowadays government are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than in building New roads........................ Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

In modern times,the issue of governments are contribute local transit like buses and trains unlike build fresh pathway has become highly controversial.From my perspective, there are more advantage than drawbacks as i will outline below

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Todays more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative.

Nowadays people are getting technological devices and robots in order to do the tasks both at home and work day by day. Everything has its pros and cons. The following paragraphs discuss whether advantage or disadvantage and reach a conclusion.

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Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I totally agree that wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic needs, such as accommodation and meals. In this essay, I will discuss both views and try to draw some conclusions. Firstly wealthy countries should take social responsibility, because they have much bigger resources, money and opportunity compared to other poorer countries. As a result, refugees will live in better conditions and won’t illegally enter to some countries, breaking the border law. Also poor lands will lose additional responsibility. For instance, when Saudi Arabia started accepting refugees from Iran, Iranians and also poor countries that used to accept those people were very grateful to Saudi Arabia’s government. Another reason why I agree with acceptance of refugees by rich countries is that reputation of those countries will increase, which can be rather significant outlook of country. For example, nowadays many Russians are abandoning their motherland and going...

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Most of our information comes from the internet are incorrec, do you agree or disagree?

There is a saying confesses the validation of the majority of information we absorb from the internet is not approved. I personaly agree, internet is an open source of informations with limited supervision, which means it's not easy to recognise its accurecy, however to say exactly how much of its given knowledge is correct or not, is a matter of statistical approaches.

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In many countries it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays ligalization of alcohol promotion is approved in many lands in the world. Personally, I would argue that this has both positive and negative implications. In this essay, I will discuss both views and try to draw some conclusions. The reason why I disagree with the statement is that some little children and teenagers (9-18 years old) can get some idea or interest to use alcohol. According to general phycology study of kids, their brains don’t have ability to think critically and filter some information. For example, when my friend Dorj was a secondary school student, he watched advertisement of vodka on his TV. Afterwards, he decided to try it. As a result, he become addicted to this drink. Now Dorj always regret that he drank that vodka when he was a stupid little kid. However, legalization of advertising alcohol can support people’s businesses which are providing some workplaces and salaries. It is not secret that the TV, bloggers, influencers, websites and so o...

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of using CCTV cameras to fight crime?

Nowadays, many organisations or groups of people truly believe that CCTV cameras are quite efficient to fight crime while others think that it is more dangerous. In this essay, I will discuss both views and try to draw some conclusions. Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of utilizing CCTV technology. One of the primary positives of using CCTV cameras is that it can be used by police officers and security employees to stop crimes, such as fight, robbery, rape and so, at the right time, when it is not too late. It is because those devices can give the location of potential the crime. For instance, if security officers see some attempts or provocations of crime through their computer or smartphone, which is connected right to the CCTV cameras, they could prevent it by going to possible crime places. Thus, it is possible that someone won’t be a victim of crime thanks to the quick action of the police. One of the primary positives of using CCTV cameras to deter crimes it...

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Some people believe that the museums and historic sites should be open for free for children under 18. Do you agree or disagree.

Knowing about history has become crucial due to, its beneifits to we brings.One of the most important benefite is seeing the future by analysing the past. This method is abblicable in different aspects of history . For example, museums are showing us what we were in the past and the reflection of the history in the present. Having said that, I agree with encourging children to go musems as well as outdated areas. Due to the fact that they will learn about their forepearnts what they used to be.

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Some say job security is more important than job satisfaction. What is your opinion?

Job security is the most significant thing when we talk about employment in my opinion. There are plenty of facts that confirm and confront this. It is totally up to situation which every person with workplace has.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic

There is no doubt that there are a plethora of places around the globe that have extreme conditions Such as Sahara desert and Antarctica. In here I am going to mention some of possible pros and cons of visiting such these places by tourists.

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Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Thanks to topt-notch technological innovations, particularly the Internet, students can easily reach much information for their self-education at home. However, many people take this excuse to assume that schools are no longer essential. I partly agree with them.

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In some countries, workers have to retire when they reach a certain age, such as 65.in other parts of the word, they are encouraged to continue working for as long as they want .Discuss these two options and decide which is the better alternative.

A suitable age to retire has been a controversial issue in the contemporary societies. Although working until individuals want have a few advantages in a short time. In this essay, I intend to argue that retiring at a certain age, such as 65, offers great advantages in long run, and several primary justifications associated with this topic will be elaborated.

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Many people think that women should have given the same roles to male in military and police forces. Many people think that women are not suitable for this job. Discuss both views and give opinions.

People have different views about the role of women in military and police forces. While some people believe that women should have the same job and responsibility as men, others argue that women are not qualify for this kind of work. My essay will analyze these camps before giving my own opinion.

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Fewer young people choose to work in farming. What are the reasons? Should young people be encouraged to do farming work?

More and more youngsters are now refusing to have a career in Agriculture. In this paragraph, I will analyze the reasons for this phenomenon and answer the question of whether the young generation should be encouraged to participate in the work of a farmer.

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Modern technology is now very common in most work place. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

Nowadays the invasion of new technologies is not uncommon in any type of office and it has a great influence and brings changes to the conventional working style. In this essay, let us do deep dive into the negative shades of these new modes.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that advertising affects us significantly on what we want to buy. Others thine that marketing messages are so common that we now ignore them. Either way, it cannot be denied that advertisements still play a mayor role in our decisions.

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it is the responsibility of the governemant to take care of health of citizens or citizens should take care of their own health. Give your own opinion?

Mikhail Ustekhin Quality Assurance Director St Petersburg, St Petersburg City, Russia Experience Sitronics KT Quality Director February 2020 - Present (2 years 10 months) Санкт-Петербург, Россия -Creation of testing department in the company from scratch; -Project management outsourcing mobile development team; -Hiring and onboarding new employees; -1:1 meetings, motivation and development of staff; -Resource planning and task allocation; -Creation and controling mobile applications testing process; -Taking part in formation of common processes in development; -Organization of test environment and selection of tools; -Preparation of technical and project documentation; -Implementation of automation testing; -Collection of performance metrics, process optimization; -App release management; -Business trips to customers -Preparing test activities based on analytics from production field MightyCall Quality Assurance Tester February 2019 - December 2019 (11 months...

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Some people believe that children should not be given homework every day, while others believe that they must get homework every day in order to be successful at school. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is considered argued that teachers should not be given homework to children daily, However, others think that they must collect extra effort every day to succeed at school. In my opinion, It is important for students to learn to do a job every day and it is good for their future development I will discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Weather countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although it is pitiful of the people who lost their home ran out from tragidy environment where they were sufftered,I totally disagree to accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance.

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Many people believe that film is a less important art than other forms such as literature and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The diagram illustrates the underground railways of six different cities and other relevant details.

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