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young people who commit crimes should be treated the same as adults by the authorities. to what extend do you agree or dis agree?

1. The weakening of Timurids was closely related to “social sickness” period. This means that the members are overdependent with the Timur. After the death of Timur, the state lost its previous power and weakened. After the weaking of Timurids, Shirvanshahs state gained its independence. Moreover, in the initial period of 15th century, there was a battle between Timurids and Karagoyunlu. After this battle, Timurids departed from Azerbaijan and eventually, Karagoyunlu state established in Azerbaijan in 1410.
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History of Philippines is more well known. You agree or disagree?

The two pie charts compare 5 different areas in terms of the proportions of world forest and timber in each region.
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Philippine has the highest population. Do you agree of disagree?

The two pie charts compare the percentages of British students at one university in England who were able to speak different languages in addition to English (no other language, French only, German only, Spanish only, another language, and two other languages) in the years 2000 and 2010.
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The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The information, which is provided by the media , is a relevant topic in our modern society. One group of people believe that social media should provide more reports, which contain good news. Another part of people suppose that the reports ought to be different, not only positive.
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In many countries today, crimes novels and TV crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

This line chart details the transformations that occurred in 3 types of crimes in New Port city over 9 years. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that Burglary crimes were the most common at the beginning of the time surveyed, while Robbery crimes are by far the lowest theft figures of all time.
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In the developed world avarage life expectancy is increasing in modern life. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging-population. What problem will this causefor individuals and society.

Modern nations have advanced due to enhanced technologies and because of this, life expectancy has amplified and people are experiencing their longer life. However, due to sudden change in life cycle of human beings, it has drastically affected countries' population. Therefore, Government should implement such actions to tackle population in order to manage everything smoothly. Otherwise, those days won't be long when citizens’ will not have places to live.
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reading e-books is more beneficial than traditional books. To what extent do you agrre or disagree

the table provides a comparison of the percentages of four different recreational activities that urban and rural adults participated in between 1990 and 2010.
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In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future.

in several countries, people still struggled with medication bills. as people know healthcare is expensive ,however, people can maintain their health by preventing diseases. nevertheless, government health funding is limited. thus, those civilises have the responsibilities to pay for their healthcare if they can afford it.
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some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. others however say that this would have little effect on public health and other that measures are required

In this fast-paced world, a group of masses assume that improvements in sports amenities could ameliorate public health, the opponents, however, say that other measures are pivotal for public health rather than sports facilities as having less impact. I believe that there are certain parameters for the former statements such as obesity and stress. Some other measures are also effective to maintain health as per the latter notion like increasing the price of junk foods, refurbishments of medical technology, and curbing the environmental pollutions that lead to health issues.
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Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no one-size-fits-all answer to this question, as the effectiveness of online courses can vary depending on the subject, the instructor, and the individual student. However, it is generally accepted that online courses can be just as good as in-person courses if they are well-designed and well-taught.
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Modern technology have made people less social over the years. To what extent do you agree or disagree

She uses non-locomotor skill to take the toys and to drink water. She stands up and sits on the floor.
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Today, more and more students are choosing to move to other countries to have higher education. Do you think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?

Grace is sitting in the living room and playing with the toys. She uses pincer grasp to pick up a mermaid toy with her right hand and pets a mermaid’s hair with her left hand. She says, “This is mom and her name is Arial” by grabbing this toy with her right hand again. She uses non-locomotor skill by twisting her waist to pick up an astronaut toy using palmer grasp with her left hand. She holds a mermaid toy with her right hand and an astronaut toy with her left hand by saying “Mom and Dad”. She uses palmer grasp to put down these two toys on the floor. Then she uses pincer grasp to pick up a small girl toy with her left hand and says, “My sister” and “She is 5 and I am also 5 too”. She tells a girl toy “Look! there is a Christmas tree in our house”. She picks up the purple dress in the toy box with her left thumb and index finger by saying, “It’s small”. She puts down this purple dress into the toy box and picks up the small glasses with the left thumb and index finger as well as...
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Today More and More tourists are visiting places where conditions are diffcult ,such as sahara desert or the antarctic. what are the benefits and disadvantges for tourists who visit such places?

Around the world, As well as in my country huge peoples are visiting the places even though having the diffcicult weather conditions.i think people who are visiting in such un even weather circumstances have to take major precautions to avoid any problems.
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Due to the influence of worldwide media such as television and computers, the gap between cultures is narrowing. The introduction of this 'global culture' is of great benefit to the world. To what extent do you agree with this viewpoint?

Nowadays, because of the improvement of technology, we can easily communicate and interact with people in different countries. It is argued that due to this situation, the gap between cultures is getting smaller and smaller, and people around the world will also benefit from this circumstance. In my opinion, I think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
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some claim hat men are naturally more ompetitive than women. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Hello, my name is Unal. Today I and my groupmates are going to talk about our achievements in terms of the project called “Rescued Lives” and the procedures which took until this period.
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Smoking should be banned in public places because it not only harms the smokers, but also those who are nearby. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion there is much smokers nowadays, and in this essay I'll tell about what I think about it.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

A group of people opine that it is appropriate way to cop any challenging circumstance like not satisfy to work and the personal deficiency, but while some others view that it is good decision to try and progress, that circumstance. I completely agree the latter proposition and will discuss along with the pricsie examples and backup my view.
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Some people think that hosting international sports events may be beneficial for a country. Discuss both views

There are many kinds of sports worldwide which people love to follow. While some people believe that conducting a sport tournament internationally has more negatives, others feel that it can be more beneficial for the country. There are arguments on both sides, however, which we will discuss here.
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‘Tourism is always a force for good which enables people of different countries to understand each other.’ To what extent do you agree with this idea?

Many individuals thinks that tourism it is the best way to make a good connection between countries and population of different countries will have a good relationship with each other. Does it true or not ?
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The number of cars has increased significantly in major cities. What ‎problems does this cause, and what are some solutions to these problems?

With the development of the economy and technology , it seems to be an increasingly widespread concern about more and more vehicles appearing in urban. I think this phenomenon brings crowd traffic and environmental pollution issues that influent the public's daily life to a certain extent.
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