IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 418

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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There is little difference in the shops now operating in various nations. Some people think this is positive development,while other believe it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In my opinion, shops in various countries have to be different from others because of some cultural features. Maybe we can’t see the difference between American and European shops, but I think we can see it in Arabic countries, for example. The thing is, nowadays the most popular shops in almost every country are from big corporations and most of them are from the USA. I think it is a reason why we can see similar shops in each country of the globe. Of course there are many local shops, but many business owners think that there is a standard of business and they are trying to make their own shops similar to the shops of big corporations. In my opinion, it is a sad story because in this world of big corporations we can lose the identity of each nation. I don’t want that because every country should have its own features and its own local shops that will make this nation special and provide it’s own development.

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Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, the most common issue is concentrating at school. Many students locate it complex to pay attention at school. In my part, I will discuss, what are the causes for this and what could be done to decide this issue.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and intrests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this infomation may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The present work deals with the effect of heat treatments including direct aging (DA), solutionzing (ST) and solutionizing + aging (T6) on mechanical and microstructural evolution of selective laser-melted AlSi10Mg alloy at room and elevated temperature simultaneously. The DA heat treatment badly damaged the plasticity and UTS of AlSi10Mg at room temperature because of the formation of nano Si precipitates despite the improvement of YS. Also, After ST and T6 heat treatment, various porosities were observed which was due to dissolving cellular structure which acted as efficient barriers for the coalescence and movement of small pores which primarily exist because of trapped gasses flaw defect during selective laser melting process. In respect of high temperature mechanical properties at maximum servicing temperature of AlSi10Mg alloy (~200°C), the as built and directly aged specimens have better performance than the solution treated and T6-aged ones. This was attributed to the presen...

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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government，while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that it is not good to put young people in important positions in government. The first is that young people tend to be more reformist and reckless than older people, and therefore more prone to making mistakes. Government, as a machinery, is too sensitive to be left for young people’s trials and errors. Secondly, as they lack the experience, the diplomatic insight and the intuitiveness of older politicians. and government is a matter of practical expertise , it differs on a case-to-case basis and requires the kind of intelligence that only comes from ages of experience in the field.

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send an email to your client changing the time and place of the meeting offer him an apology Explain why everything changed

Dear Mr. Smith, Our company is glad to have a high-tech partner like yours and we appreciate your confidence in our work. Unfortunally yesterday our Bogota Office Manger was a transit accident, and he’s under medical care in Colina Hospital, because that I need change the details about our meeting, please receive a sincerely apologize, but that things is out of our control. Because that I want to send you the new schedule and place: •Place: Colina Park – downtown Bogota 123 Street. •Time: 8:00 am – Local Time •Participants: Mr. Smith, Mr. Douglas, and Me. •Main Topic: Schlumberger Oil and Gas Project. I hope this changes don’t affect your actual operation in our country by other side I offer you a 20% OFF in the next project start in Mexico City in january 2023 Comunnity School. Above all we hope preserve our good work relation and beggin new projects son. Regards Eduardo Baez

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

It is unequivocally true that.....(essay topic) is a topic of heavy discussion in today's society. In this treatise, I will elaborate about .....(question 1) and also rationalize my conviction for....( question 2. If one question is opinion, clearly mention ur ioinion as to which side u r on)

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Some people think that there should be a law to ban young people under 18 to go out after the midnight, others think it should not be. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people are in favor of allowing their teen under 18 to go out post-midnight while others are not a big fan of this idea.

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Many people believe that education standards have declined in recent times. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.

Education as one of the most important aspect of a developed society, has been currently put in a discussion by a lot of people that whether there's a reduction in its standards level or not. This phenomenon can be declared by some causes and at the end probably be solved with a few suggested solutions.

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In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects of this on individuals and society? Suggest solutions to this problem.

Due to fragile economical issues that happend to the world in recent decades, we can see the results in the quality of people living. Some domestic problems or starting fighting with countries who are enemies are definitely wrong. I believed that is worth it to stop arguing with other governments and pay attention to their people and domestic.

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Television has had a significant influence on the cultural many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of your society?

Researches show that a lot of people in the world keen on social medias specially television. According to some other researches striking percent of people learn better with visual memory, so television is a remarkable media to learn from. Spending time for at least two hours in front of TV is much popular nowadays. So immense of quality of TV programs is absolutely important. I should mention that the television has affected the cultural development whether with positive influence or negative.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us more about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this modern and digital era, we are more associated technology and mostly mobile devices like phones , tablets and laptops . Using these devices brings lot of opportunities to advertise. These advertisements come with their positive and negative points, I will discuss my views on the good and bad effects of ads. Firstly , let us discuss that viewing lot of promotions about the products that really are not important . We are stuck in the web of materialised marketing. Due to appealing offers and attractive so-called ",benefits " people often buy lot of needless products . Buying these unnecessary goods increases financial burden on the personnel . Further to this , it is also a waste of money, time and resources that ultimately impacts our environment. For example , the mobile phone with a fan . It is marketed in the name of technology however it was completely impractical and useless. On the other side, some produ...

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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion

It is commonly discussed that traffic congestion is metropolis cities’ main issue. This essay supports the idea that is caused by that people tend to buy personal vehicles, and that’s why there are more cars on the streets than roads are designed for. It will be analyzed, that to resolve this problem governments should expand public transportation system.

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health and whether it is going to improve in future or not. agree or disagree

The diagram explains the participation of both men and women in fitness clubs between 1970 and 2000.

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family's spending thier salaries during a week what is your opinion

The chart illustrates the categories of each family's spending during a week in comparison between two years 1968 and 2018.

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Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays there are a lot of people who emigrates from their native country and there is a debate whether individuals culture is defined by their motherland or that has only a minor influence.

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In the past people used to live their entire life in one place. Nowadays they live in several different places during their life. What are the reasons for this change? Is it a positive or a negative trend?

People in one century ago who need move in distance may only by horses, but nowadays while technology getting envoluting, there are so many options people can use for travelling. In my own opnion, it is a positive that people can travel by convenient transport system.

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People change their career and place of residence several times during their life. Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the graduates always choose to work in big cities like Shanghai or Beijing. They have to rent an apartment and have to change the residence when they change their jobs. There is a fierce debate about whether it’s a good development or not for employees. In my perspective, the advantages of changing jobs and residences outweigh its disadvantages.

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In some countries workers have to retire when they reach a certain age such as 65 in other parts of the world they are encouraged to continue working for as long as the better alternative, are you agree or disagree?

In some countries workers have to retire when they reach a certain age such as 65 in other parts of the world they are encouraged to continue working for as long as the better alternative, are you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies.Others, however, think that music can have a negative influences on both.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today many people more than sure that music affects benefits to humans and the public.The advocates of this view argue that music brings high influence of humans physiology.Others, however, disagree believe that the music affected negatively on both.

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a discursive essay : fast food is to blame for rising levels of obesity.

Fast food is influenced by being fat. Yeah, I agree with this essay. This opinion said about fast feed is good for our bodies.

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