IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 427

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the advantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

In the last two decades, there has been an increase in tourism in many Countries around the world. This change, though positive has a few negative impacts on the citizens and the environment of the countries involved. This essay will explain that the boost in the economy of such countries and increased popularity is more beneficial than the increase in crime rate and pollution associated with tourism.

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Some people believe that by killing someone society is also making a crime, so, that why death penalty should be forbidden. Life in prison would be a better punishment. Do you agree or disagree?

It is undoutable that the incresing crime rate has a detrimental effect on the society. Some suggest that death penalty is the best solution for crimals while others believe that putting them into jails it is a better option.this essay completly agree with the statement.

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Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families, but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

These days, people prefer to bring their elderly relatives into care homes or nursing homes rather than taking care of them . However, it is necessary to consider both benefits and drawbacks related to this .

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Some people believe that one of the best ways to solve environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Raising the price of petrol for vehicles and other transportation is one of the best ways for some people who believe that can solve

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some say that this information may be relevant and useful. others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Job interviews are essential for a good relationship between an employer and employee as they allow one to know them better. Apart from our basic details and working experiences now most employers also ask us about our personal information like hobbies, interests and marital status. In this essay I will discuss and explain why this information is useful in most cases and why sometimes not so relevant.

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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace. Do the benefit of this mobility out weight the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadys many people is allowed to work in distance because of the equipments has developed. In my point of view, it is good sign for everyone to work from anywhere. In the first paragraph, I am totally agree to explain my opinions.

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In many countries schools have several problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Students behaviours and they attitude on schools with other conterpart and also teachers is essential matter which requiers specific attention from parents and in addition schools authorities. The foremost, we should determin what reason cause this kind of acting from pupils. regardless some minority of students who have spiritual problems and they Should See traphist so they can work on their action, I personally believe that the majority of children who cause difficulties in schools are coming from families who has not provide safe and reliable envirnment for their kids. children understanding is much more than parents imagine, they realize every things consequently if they feel can not share their thought with adult, so they starting being unpleasant in Socity. Undoubtedly, different family background, vary child breeding, introduse completely varies kids to Community which behave by their own moral rules, this is acceptable until they do not Show strengh and also distr...

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some people say that advertising is extremely sucssesful at persuading us to buy things. other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

I agree to this statement to some extend, living in a country where we can’t speak with our mother tongue can cause serious social problems and also practical problems. It can happens because what makes us feel alive is when we talk to other people. When we have to speak foreign language, it makes our brain should think numerous time to let the word out since we’re not speaking our mother tongue. So, we should translate the word first to the other language and I think it is very exhausting that also makes ourself drained. Speak with foreign language also means that we have to jokes with other languages, lucky if we catch the jokes but most of the times we wont get the point. In fact, the best way to relieve ourself is telling jokes and makes other people laugh.

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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?e?

Wild animals have been around longer than humans, and to some extent even humans were once just wild animals. Suddenly not protecting wild animals is a huge decision, which potentially comes with huge changes to the natural ecosystem so I will be analyzing both sides of the argument thoroughly.

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Should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the global warming issue has been spreaded over the world. Therefore, the international community should responsibility to take action for these problem. There are many reasons for the global warming has been spread over the world. I will give the reasons and solustion of this situation in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give more option.

The two figures illustrate how owning home machines has changed and how much did it take to finish the housework in one nation in the period between 1920 and 2019.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

First of all, in my ,opinion I do not think that only Subjects like science and technology are useful in future, for ,instance art was and will perform a key role in human life, if art will not exist after time there will be no other ways for people to express themselves and their unique feelings, or history, everything rooted in the past, studying history feels an obligation to see the result of the investigation in knowledge. Although there has been a big contrast between the fields like painting, literature and math, and physics they do not give a distinct advantage over each other.

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Nowadays social media addiction become trend discuss about causes and effects for this problem?

In recent years, with improvements in technology , communication ways have changed completely. people now are spending much more time on social media to keep themselves updated,

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Television has two roles: to inform and to entertain people. Explain which of these roles you see as more important. To what extent do you think that TV today performs each of these roles in an effective way? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.

Nowadays, thechnogies are risen drastically. In the past, there is no any option for geting attention towards information or any other entertaining things. But now we have so many options are available for such things. Like, social media application, OTT platform and so on. Even news channel has also have their own application where we can explore containt.

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Even through experts believe that walking is a great way to improve one's health, very few people walk nowadays. Why are not people walking? What can be done to encourage them to walk more?

There are many ways to ameliorate person's health and professional people presume that walking is a best way for this. But a small number of people walk. There are lots of reasons which people do not walk such as using automobile, online shopping and incorrect strategies for weigh loss. This essay describes reasons and some solutions to persuade people to walk more. Firstly, mechanical life causes people use automobile and public transportation for commuting and everybody prefer to use them instead of walking. On the other hand, with the development of technology, people inclined to buy online shopping and pay bills by mobile phone apps. For example, in the past , people had to go the bank for paying bills and withdraw money for this reason everyone often walk to the nearest bank. Moreover, people walked to buy everythings in old days but today everybody especially youth generation prefer to buy by online shopping and they do not walk. In addition, as far as I have se...

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern times people love to take risks so that they can become more skillful in Professional life. There are some benefits and drawbacks to taking risks in Personal and Professional life. From my perspective, there are more advantages than drawbacks as I will outline below.

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Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, when accommodation begins to be an emergent problem, which results from the population explosion in cities, people must have a solution to this problem for the future Some people say that the building has to be unshakeable for the safety of humans when disasters came. However, some do not share the same idea. They think that quick and cheap ones are more important when the economy and population raise fast, and accommodation must be comfortable for the citizens. Each viewpoint has its own pros and cons, and the following paragraphs will discuss both opinions.

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Some say thatr advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Advertisements have become main tool to announce about products. People have different views about whether advertising forces the customer to get a certain product or it has been an old tool that can attract our attention.

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classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary epoch, every discussion culminates into digitalisation. Whilst some proponents emphasise the significance of digital transformation in education, there are some opponents who believes that the teaching must be the responsibility of teachers. In my perspective, both views have its own merits and demerits. Generations of successful students were crafted in the yesteryears with classroom teaching. This method not only teach students academic curriculum but also enhances social skills. Moreover, teachers can share their experience for unpredicted scenerios and also ensure special attention for children who are slow to learn. In addition, teachers can customise their sessions in such a way that the kids in the group follows. For instance, tutors can arrange supplimentary classes for students who are lagging behind, and can evaluate them individually. Conversely, advent of internet coupled with supporting devices have enabled digital devices to penetrate into schoo...

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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as paper, glass, and cans. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

In wide range countries nowadays,people are not encouraged to recycle their leftover materials ,such as paper,glass and cans etc.In the following ,essay we will discuss what are the reasons for this and what could be done to solve this issue. To begin with the reasons for this dilemma,one main reason is the lack of awareness among the people themselves of the recycling concept.For example ,people in developing countries do not have the culture to separate paper ,glass and cans from each other , they just throw the whole garbage in the trash can ,which they could find a non-essential task to do or even waste their time .Another reason is due to the economic situation in other countries , the recycling process is expensive. For instance,in Africa they may not have a place or area to throw their waste,which by default causes diseases like cholera or malaria Furthermore,having the option to recycle will be a complicated demand. The solution for this problem might be sp...

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