IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 427

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Government should focus their spending on public service rather than on arts such as music and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Government should focus their spending on public service rather than on arts such as music and painting. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement, and the following examples will be provided an example in order to support my point of view.

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Some people believe that teenager should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time . This can be benefit teenagers and the community as well . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is highly debatable that younger people should be mandatorily involved in non-paying community service during their holiday or convenient time. I totally agree with the given statement above which I will explain with the example. By participating in community service, It makes the younger generation more responsible for the reason that they're going to learn differently things such as cleaning up the streets or joining up in charity events which involved feeding children in orphanages. For instance in Canada Parent's always encouraging their children to participate in various type of events especially if it's promoting conserving of Nature. Moreover, it also promotes a better relationship with their fellow teenager as they build camaraderie through the community service they participated with. In addition to ,that it also increases their confidence to do certain tasks which they can carry on even on their own home. For instance in ,Japan they're actually exp...

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others, however, disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Dear Sir/Madam, I received an Email a few days back from our Human Resource Team related to sharing of personal information of all employees. I want to share my views about the Pros and Cons of it. Firstly, Following factors such as Hobbies, Food Interests, Preferred locations, Single or married, Salary details etc. Secondly, having personal information such as hobbies, preferred destinations to visit, food interests etc of employees, facilitates the Management to organize an event either in the office premises or in any resorts for refreshments and to conduct any Sports events or open-air concerts with all employees. Having information about Blood Group will be helpful in any emergency condition to react and get it done as fast as possible. When it comes to disadvantages, the Personal Information of an individual is not required to know to everyone as some may misuse it in otherways. Having those kind of information among the team is enough. Related to Salary of an employee, ...

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The below shows the price of bananas in 4 different countries from 1996 to 2004.

Given is a line graph comparing the cost of bananas in 4 various regions of the world ( namely Japan, France, Germany and the USA) over a period of 8 years.

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In many countries, prison is the most common solution for crimes. However, many think that better education is the most effective way to prevent people from committing further crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, prison is the common solution to the problem of crime in many countries, since crime is one of the most problems that these governments face. However, whether or not to provide people with better education to prevent criminals is a controversial issue. In my opinion, I deeply agree with this idea, good education is the best way to resolve this problem.

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The charts show information about the usage of water in six different parts of the world for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.

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In many countries crime rates among teenagers are higher than among other age groups. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to solve it ?

Nowadays, in many countries crime rates between adolescents are higher than among other age groups. In my essay i will describe, what are the reasons of this issue and what can be done to decide it. At the present time there is an ongoing debate about why youngsters commit a crime more likely than older individuals. In my view this problem crop up because of bad family, as parents can educate their children and teenagers well. They show them the right way and they teach them to do good to people. For instance, if parents raised well, then teenagers would not commit a crime. Moreover because of unemployment, bad friends and poverty, youngsters doing a crime and different steal. In my opinion adolescents must brought up well and to study well, have a broad-minded, make friends with good people in order to in the future they have a affordable destination, they were not unemployed and poor. Besides nowadays, many youngsters play different harmful games with friends and thus adolescent...

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Some feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and business, while others think they are negative. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is thought that, advertisements have various benefits which positively influences on person and on business too, however others think that advertisements have more negative effects rather than positive. Advertisements, in my opinion, as a tool which helps to appeal people attention to new products however not all products have positive intentions. In forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss and give reasons for my opinion.

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Some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary. Others think that the job itself is the most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Include specific details and examples to support your choice

Some workers indicate that salary is one of the most significant things in their job. Other workers argue that the job's characteristic is more important compared to the salary. According to me , a job's feature is supposed to become the first critter when humans choose their job. Two basic factors push me to think like these. Firstly, workers spend at least half of their day in the office.It is part of their social life.

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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, increasing rates of educational institutions that offer students electrical devices to use in school, instead of traditional papers . This essay suggest that saving time, effort, and materials are the biggest advantages, but the health problems are the primary disadvantage.

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Some people say that now Is the best time In history to be living. What Is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

From the beginning of mankind, the best time for living always came under discussion. People debated that which time is best for living. This essay will discuss how the present time is best for living, and which part in history was best to be live in.

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Some people think that school and government should take responsibility to transport children to school. While some people think that parents should get children to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Modern life is going fast and people have no much time to satisfy with food and no time to wait it. If you has a job, you especially has no time to eat, cause in many kind of jobs you have only one break hour per day. That’s why people came up with a rational solution that called fast food. But not all people resort to fast food only because they has no time. So fast food chains have proliferated and there were some problems with this. Let’s speak about few of them.

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some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state.Do you agree or Disagree?

I disagree with the statement that individuals should not pay taxes to the state. The government runs the country from the taxes it collects. Taxes are collected only from those who earn above a certain minimumlimit. lt is our moral duty to pay taxes. Tax money collected by government is used to fund basic amenities, provide various services to citizens and for government administration and projects, running of jails and defense system, and many otheroperations. lt is not wrong to say that "taxes run a country." Thus, it is very important for a government tomake people pay taxes. Let us analyze why people do not want to pay taxes. The main reason is their dissatisfaction with government in serving them. They blame government for things like lack of infrastructure, poverty and unemployment, but they are not completely wrong as tax revenue is misused in some or the other way inevery country. ln developed countries, however, because of higher satisfaction from government'sfunctio...

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Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tox to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

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in many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first month after the birth of their baby. Does advantage outweigh disadvantages?

The pressure of job is one of the most important problems that many women face. Especially the women who birth their babies. Therefore, in many countries. The government allow them leave their jobs during the first month after the birth of their babies to take maternity. In my opinion, it’s bring lots of benefits for them although has some disadvantages.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the country side and not build new homes: what is your opinion about this

It is undeniable that new dwellings are required,but there is no place to build them. some peoples argue that is the only way to make it happen is by using country side Plots, while others advocate that it is necessary to preserve these lands to protect nature. I agree with latter the statement because countrysideside is the place where expect maintain ecosystem and these lands are the main source for food and agriculture activities. countrysideside is the place where all kinds of creatures are living,just because of these landscape, if it is also occupied by residents many species become extinct, pollution levels also a surge within no time this scenario will be vulnerable not only to living species but also to a human beings. for instance in the UK area of countrysideside allowed to resident where there are some indigenous animals that got eradicated due to pollution and lack of pure oxygen.Thus These activity can leads to hefty damage to both environment and humans. It ...

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Unemployment is a growing problem all over the world. What are the causes of this? What could be done to help tackle this issue? To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

having a source of income is no doubt a necessity, but through this last decade the lack of available jobs is a problem that keeps on accumulating and i deeply agree with this statement and it might be due to economical issues the world is going through.

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Some people think that teaching methodology in the modern classroom should be based on experiential learning while others believe that traditional approach is still the best. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?

In a few ,people opinion Teaching methodology should be based on the Traditional approach whereas others feel that the experimental method is suitable for a new generation .With the change in ,technology teaching should be based on the conventional or experimental methods is point of debate. My opinion is of adopting experimental-based learning which is focused on innovative methods is the call of the hour.

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The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is obvious that women's role has changed in society over the last few decays. However, the community is still not able to achieve gender equality. In my opinion, I believe that men are considered superior to women.

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Essay topic: In many countries, crimes rates amongst younger people has been rising. Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem.

In the recent modern world, the number of crimes committed by the younger generation is increasing. I believe some fundamental structures of society and the latest environments are impacting the surge of the number. Here in this essay, I would like to analyze a few possible reasons and actions to be taken.

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