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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

These days, certain individuals believe that the brutality on TV and computer games causes bad consequences in society. Another denies that elements have any significant influence on people's behavior. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both pointss of view and then give my own opinion on why I am inclined to support the former. On one side of the argument, there are people who argue the brutality of TV and computer games considerably outweighs them. The main reason for believing this is that computer games can make citizens addicted. In other words, if people use it too much will become dependent on it so they will distance themselves from the outside world and immerse themselves in the virtual world. A compelling example is a student who addictive to computer games and will neglect to study, which causes a decrease in learning results. Another reason is that TV can convey a flotilla of bad news that affect on person's mental health. For some uncensored channel...

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulty getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause ? What can be done about lack of sleep?

In recent times, insomnia has become the major complaint among adults and it has lead to alot of issues. This essay will be discussing the problems that result from insufficient sleep as well as the possible solution.

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Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

In many parts of the world, there is a notable phenomenon that young people tend to migrate from countryside to the urban areas to study or work. There are several reasons for this trend and the influences are also multiple.

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Some people consider price as most impertant things to think about when buying products ( such as cell phone) or service (e.g.medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree.

It is believed by some people that before deciding to purchase products or services, they should consider carefully whether it is worth it or not. I strongly agree with this statement. I will discuss why people need to consider before buying.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In these recent times, products we eat every day contain glucose in extremely high levels, which later on effect our mental and physical health. Disease such as Bulimia or Obesity are now highly common, and in my opinion, making these carbonhidrate-based foods hard to achieve is a must.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always good.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

With time, change needs to happen for the betterment of their lives. Many of the individuals chooses to live like they are living now to avoid change. However, others believe that it is neccesary to change. In my opinion pupils should change to discover new things about thmselves.

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Some people think that the government should strictly control the supply of fresh water, as it is a limited resource, while others it should not be regulated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Fresh water is becoming a scarce resource across the world due to the increase in population and urbanisation. It is frequently argued that the supply for fresh water should be curbed by implementing policies and strategies by governments . However, certain people believe that it should not be controlled. This essay will discuss both these points of view and provides my opinion. First off, governments should implement strategies to control the supply of fresh water like increasing the tax, price or limit supplying of water. This would help countries to reduce wastages and people with unlimited water supply might undertstand the importance of water due to this control. For example, almost 40% of the fresh water are used for livestock farming and large corporations. Therefore, general public tend to have less water for their day-to-day lives. Further, when governments start to control the water, it may create a monopoly situation all over the world. Certain political parties ma...

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the recent years, the overpopulation in the whole world has raised an issue of using such unconventional food as insects. Even though this solution could potentially lead to solving famine in some under-developing countries, eating insects may also harm human health. In addition, insect farming to feed large masses of population might damage our environment. In my opinion, the disadvantages of using insects as food by far outweigh advantages. The reasons supporting this opinion will be discussed below.

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Some cities create new housing for their growing populations by constructing a small number of high-rise buildings. Other cities create more of low-rise buildings. Which solution is better, in your opinion?

Some towns construct new dwellings for their rising population by building a few number of skyscrapers on the other hand some cities create numerous low-rise buildings. In my view, the former solution will suit the cities, and the reasons for my opinion shall be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Its advatages or disadvantages: The government bans alcohol consumption?

Nowadays, people try to escape from dramatic reality they are facing,by consuming alcohol, in their daily life.wether the government should ban the consumption or not, it is a controversial topic.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this topic, which focusing financial resources on either constructing more transportation ways or utilizing to make existing roads for public better, in my opinion, accomplishing the second option is clearly more crucial. It may be true that building new ways of transportation is useful for a country and it's citizens. It might be good for the economy; because these railway lines are faster and shorter, so much time would be saved. Unfortunately, in my experience, constructing this type of roads in developing countries is pretty expensive and it is not beneficial for the country. This also effects the fees for public transport and most people don't prefer these faster trains because of the high prices. Apart from this, improving daily transportation roads and vehicles would be definitely better. Repairing old busses and trains may be a positive effect in both citizens' mental health and environment. Also, cleaning up roads and renewing the road structure may be better ...

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema other says to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema.

Few people say that watching a movie in our cell phones is better experience than going to a theater while others believe to experience a film completely one has to go to a theater. In my opinion, I agree with the second statement. In this essay I'm going to explain both the views. Convenience is one of the key benefits of seeing a movie in a cell phone while coming to cinema hall atmosphere plays a huge role in involving and enjoying the cinema.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

The majority of individuals who are working full-time are not able to follow a fitness regimes. Hence they're viability for health related problems in in work related stress and laziness are the main reasons which can attribute to this problem.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway line for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balance diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In this post-pandemic era, most of the people more aware to their health and want to live healthy. Therefore, there are many debates in choosing the best method to keep the body in good condition. Some people said that exercise is more important, while the others think diet will affect more to people healthiness. Personally, I prefer to increase my physical activity by doing sports rather than being stressful about diet. However, this essay will discuss both perspectives and elaborate each of them.

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Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree?

Sport activities, which involves one or more players with an aspect of competition, happens to have a huge place in our schools' program. Some people may think that these kind of sports are not necessary, but in my opinion, we can't just exclude them from the school curriculum.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

There is a contentious debate where Some individuals Perceive that today the major obstacle to the natural environment is the loss of specific species of animals and plants, whereas others belive that there are more vital environmental problems.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

There is a contentious debate where Some individuals Perceive that today the major obstacle of natural environment is the loss of specific species of animals and plants, wherea others belive that there are more vital environmental problems.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.

In new era, music in integral part of human life. People listen music whatever they do or wherever they stay for getting enthusiasm as well as rejuvenate. Some people believe that music has magnetic components for knowing diversity, culture and get together despite of ages. Personally, I support this proposition outweigh the disagree.

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Many people believe that schools should teach to become good citizens and workers rather than independent individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is the most vital tools and most important thing in our country,school are training the citizen to become better and better in the country and than becoming independent individual in our society.

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