IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 38

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In many countries there is a shortage of suitable people for essential jobs. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measure could be taken solve?

In our contemporary life, major concernhas been paid to shortage jobs .Taking into consideration the significance of shotage jobs , I totally advocate the point of view that many people are unemployment it be destroyed for the economy. Even though it has been proven that it has negative causes such as low salaries and lack of training . the better solve could be taken increase salaries and improve working environment .

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In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to tackle this problem?

Many people feel less safety is a common problem in many countries around the world. In this essay, I would like to explore some of the reasons for this modern phenomenon and offer some possible solutions to deal with it.

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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less

In recent years, the topic of more and more people are drinking sugar-based drinks such as soda, energy drinks, or sweetened juices. This trend can be harmful to people’s health. There are some reasons for this problem, and also some ways to solve it.

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In many countries there is a shortage of suitable people for essential jobs. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measure could be taken to solve?

In many nations there is not a vast reng of people who are interested in vitial career. To the best of my knowledge, these jobs are too hard and they have some burdensome responsibilities. If the government give them good salary they will be more excited for this kind of works.

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In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development

some countries make workers wage depending on how many hours they work, an example, a waiter gets 4 dollars an hour so that makes them work all day and night long because they need to make a lot of many to pay rents and taxes. also this prompoganda is more pressuring when it comes to immigrants since they need to pay more taxes than others. also some countries dont pay enough until the employee gets a raise, and so they need to work after hours sometimes to prove their loyality and hard work. the prositive side of this side is that the workers will get more knowledge and more experince out of their job. the negative side is that it might lead to divorce if the worker is married since that their job might build a distance between them and their partner, and also it might cause insomnia since they get less sleep. some companies give their workers a motive and that might give them a push to work more and they might sometimes have fun with it, but some companies dont give motives to the...

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kine of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this opinion.

There is no denying the fact that junk food is serious leading cause of the majority of health problems. Some argue that states must charge fees on the fast food restaurants. I do agree totally with this statement, due to the financial anf psychological affects and the health diseases that association with obesity.

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Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some individuals suggests that we should rebuild the old buildings and homes in cities with more urban buildings and others disagree. I think that we should change the old structrues into new ones. However, if the buildings were in the rural areas I believe that we should protect them and keep them as a historical building.

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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing.

I agree it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. The following content is why I agree with this viewpoint.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisagtion. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge orexperience.

In modern days, an increasing number of people are choosing to work for themselves, rather than to work for an organization. This trend is taking place due to the lack of payment and the freedom of individuals' business choices. However, the negative sides are that their earnings are not regular and fluctuate according to the month.

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In many countries, a small number of people have extremely high annual incomes. These people should be required to pay a much higher rate of income tax. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no doubt that citizens should contribute to their nation's welfare by paying the annuity fees, but some argue that the amount they pay is determined by the person's financial state, so high income leads to higher tax. While others do not agree, and see that it must be in the same percentage tax for all humans, in my opinion, i do not agree with this statement at all.

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Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discussion both views and give your opinion.

Old man and his girlfriend is the one that said that the one was the one who was in a relationship with the people that I don't want you in my car or to get a new one or a few years ago I have a few friends to go with you guys for the next two days and the last two weeks of my job I just want you.

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Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money – making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

there are many people how believ that if the cultural traditions used as a money maker it will be destroyed. other see its a very good way to save those traditions to not despair. in this essay I will enterduos the both opinions is i will geve my opinion .

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differences between countries are becoming less evident. Nowadays, people are watching the same film, fashion and tv channels. To what extend do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

In recent years, the diversity amonge nations has been decreased significantly, due to the globalnisation. A wide range of governments in defferent societies encourage it's sectors to imitate others countries. This resultes in increase the samelareties between communities in every part in the world. This essay will examine why copy from others is a good way to achieve success.

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The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

I believe that the main problem humans face is the rise in the world’s population due to the decrease in death rates and an increase in birth rates.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the country side is decreasing Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

there are many pepole in deferent countries moves to live in the cities. that because many things which let the people go to live in the citys . Such as better job opportunities and more standards of living . i will talk about the advantages and the disadvantages also i will geva me personal opinion .

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Some people think that children should not watch television as it has negative effects while some people believe that they should watch television as it helps them in their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Watching TV , some people support this idea strongly . Other society are against it totally . Both points of view will be discussed . I have my own point of view dealing with the topic .

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Due to rapid development of technology children these days are living in a world that is completely different to what it was few decades back what problems can this cause for society and family?

In today`s digital world, the technology has devloped significantly, so children living in a different world than a past decades. Childrens nowadays playing games and stying in home with screen and they do not know about physical games, this can create problems such as eyesight because they use screen too much. This new trend can affect scoiety negatively, as they cannot make good friends, or they may lose bonds with childhood friends.

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Some people believe that companies should be allowed to collect data about customers freely, while others believe this practice should be restricted. Discuss both sides of this issue.

Some details of people are suggested to be saved in the databases of online companies. To some extent, this could have negative consequences, but in general, this is for the better. This essay will explore some details of the advantages and disadvantages of this view.

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Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Recently, some people think that general transportation should be funded by the government. They should allocate a portion of their money for the free transport , so it can be free for the people . However, I personally agree with that opinion , since it should be one of the citizens' privileges, also it can help solve the environmental pollution issues.

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Some people think that it is a waste of time for school students to study nature. To What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The issue of studying nature in school has sparked considerable controversy in recent years . I strongly disagree with the viewpoint , as I believe that the nature its a part of our life that doesnot need to study or to teach , and this essay will elaborate on that .

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