IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 38

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In general, people are living longer now. Which of the following do you think accounts for this phenomenon? •Technological improvements •Changes to education systems •Improvements to our diets Use specific details and examples in your answer. You may choose more than one cause.

These days, people's life expectancy is longer than in previous eras due to the development of the selection of food intake along with a quality of education. This essay will discuss it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different oraganisation. Discuss and give your opinion

Many people choose to work for the same company all of their working life. On the other hand, some prefer to change organisation during their professional time. In my opinion, changing workplace seems to be a better option compared to staying in one place only.

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Some people say the feeling of competition should be encouraged in children while others say they should be taught to become cooperative. What is your opinion?

When the children still study at the school, they face the dilemma of whether to do a competition to develop their knowledge or should to teach more to become convetitive. I would arguee that is better to more teach by they teacher.

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It is not necessary for people to travel to other places and learn about their culture. We can learn as much as from books, film and television. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In this present world community more choices to stay at home than go outside for travel. I totally agree with the statement and will be stating some points to support my agreement. Further, This essay will be discussing travelling can spend money and learn to save money.

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The number of people working online from home has grown in some countries. What advantages and disadvantages can come of this trend?

The idea of working remotely has gain popularity in some countries in recent times. While this may shape the future of modern workforce, this consist of both negative, and positive outcomes which will be discussed at this essay.

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the best way to make roads safer is to make vehicle drivers pass exam each year. to what cextent do ypu agree or disagree?

In all monopolies, harbor will be more secure if vehicle users pass the driving tests each year. Although it will be supportable, it is more effective if there are special areas for vehicle drivers.

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More and more people relying on private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problem overreliances on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution

A large number of individuals prefer to have their own motor vehicles to get around the city. However, it is clear that it is a big issue such as carbon dioxide emission into the air . The most viable solution is increasing tax on cars by the government.

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Young people learn more about good behaviour from books or films/movies than they learn from real-life experiences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Youngsters experience well-behaved characteristics more from books and movies than actual experiences. I partially agree with thisstatement. Althoughyoung peoplemight learn from people who are well-experienced, it might be easy to learn through examples and descriptions in books or movies.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than sʼever before. Some people think the are benifits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the adventages of having an ageing population outweigh the adventages.?

In many countries, individuals experiencing longer lifes, than at any time in history. Although there are Several advantages of people belive older generation it can have Some disadvantages as well. I would argue that positive sides of this can outweigh the negatives.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people pf different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

There are many things that can be helpful to make people in different cultures and different languages closer. And for sure, music is one of these things. The power of music is that it can easily open your mind to something new. I did not have any information about Russia until I started to hear their music.After that, I began to know the culture there. Only by music. And, in my opinion, this is really interesting. But to be more honest, sometimes the same power in music makes me stay away from a culture, so be sure to hear the best sounds of music when you hear them. Something else can be helpful to bring people closer. Is it the books or novels that may have the same impact as music, especially the type of books or novels that have descriptions of culture or people? I may understand why there are differences after reading. Or even be closer to them more and more, and that will bring love around the world.I read a quote before I said, I hate this person; I need to know him more. It...

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Nowadays more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development?

In the recent year more and more individuals prefer to meet virtually instead of in person meetings. In my opinion I think that this trend comes with negative repercussions.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people pf different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

There is no doubt that these days music plays an essential role in a lot of countries around the world, the question is do I agree or disagree, In this essay. I'm gonna discuss this point of view and give my opinion.

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The unlimited use of car caused many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use car? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

There is no doubt that these days the average temperatures have risen compared to recent years, this because of climate change, the main reason that increases the chance of global warming is the burning of fossil fuels, burning fossil fuels releases carbon dioxide to the air which makes heat.

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Some people think that the money used to preserve historic buildings and artefacts should came from goverment funds, while others believe that private organisations and individuals should pay for this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many historical buildings and artefacts has taken many years to discover and are originated from ancient civilization and colonization which tells the story of a country. Therefore, many argue that the government are responsible to preserve those buildings whereas others oppose this notion and says that private organisations and individuals should pay for this.

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Some people believe that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

A number of people believe that minors need to start learning outlander language at elementary school rather than high school. This essay will shed some light on why the benefits of learning a different language in primary school outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that other media are better sources of news. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Majority of people agree that newspaper is the most accurate source of news, while some part of societies opine that there are many news offered by other medias. In this essay, I will describe both views. Where newspaper is best for its credibility, other media is popular for its ease of access and affordability.

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Should smoking be completely banned everywhere, with no one allowed to smoke anywhere?

It is sometimes argued that smoking should be completely banned everywhere. No one can smoke in anywhere because smoking causes bad effects to the public or themselves. In my opinion, I completely argee that would be a good idea. Smoking is bad for everyone.

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How does the design of buildings, where people work and live, affect them either positively or negatively?

A serious amount of worldwide attention has been drawn to the topic of design of buildings. Because of the existence of evidence in favor of as well as against the approval of work and live, the issue of design of buildings has been a point of critical concern. Consequently, this essay is going to be about work and live, and I will implore the advantages and disadvantages of design of buildings with the assistance of likely causes, effects, and solutions in order to reach a resolution on work and live with the help of reasons and examples.

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Some people think that children should aim to do their best at whatever they are doing. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people argue that offspring should try hard in all of the fields which they have participated while others disapprove of this opinion.Each side has its own merits,and i support the former view.

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In many countries people are now living longer than over before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benifits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Other the last few years, increase the number of individuals who living longer than ago at the country as decrease the birth rate among all population. Although there are several advantages of older inhabitants, it can have some disadvantage as well. I believe that positive sides of this can outweigh the negatices.

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