IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 41

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some argue that teachers should focus on academics more than motivating students.

There is a view that educators should concentrate on the curriculum more than on inspiring the learners.

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Because some children do not seem to have natural ability to learn other languages, schools should not force them to learn foreign languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Other languages, has taken a mammoth dimension to be the backbone of children, Upon research this issue is a highly debatable one with contrasting views in the essay, both sides will be examined before giving my final opinion.

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Some people think that older and more experienced employees are useful for a company. Others feel that modern younger employees are better for an organisation. do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that older and more educated employees are way more valuable for an organization but others think that modern younger employees are better for a company. In this essay, i'll explain both sides with this statement and also give my own opinion.

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Destination of UK graduate and postgraduate students (excluding full-time work) in 2008”

The bar charts illustrate the destinations of UK graduates and postgraduates in 2008 who did not enter full-time work after leaving college.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career , while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after graduating from high school . Dicuss both views and give your opinion .

The society has taken a mammoth dimension to be the backbone pf studying . Upon research , this issue is a highly debatable one with contrasting views . In this essay , both sides will be examined before giving my final opinion .

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BWith the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Technology, have taken a mammoth dimension to be the backbone of students. Upon research this issue is a highly debatable with contrasting views in the essay, both sides will be examined before giving my final opinion.

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Some people prefer to live in a big city. Others think it is better to live in a small town. Discuss both views.

The society have taken a mammoth dimension to be the backbone of the city . Upon research , this issue is a highly debatable one with contrasting views . In this essay , both sides will be examined before giving my final opinion .

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Some experts claim that most of the outstanding innovations and breakthroughs have been made by people with a high level of so-called ‘innate intelligence’. What are the advantages and disadvantages of relying on this theory in order to succeed in life for an ordinary people?

Some people have to pay tax and they have no inaph money to pay. lot of people pay taxes to help the development of their country, but also, some think they have other responsibilities rather than paying taxes.I think paying tax is more important more but also some pure people can't pay and we can't force them.

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some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all time and they think it is a waste of time to read any entertainments books. what is your opinion about this?

There is no deying the fact that parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all time. While is commonly held belife that they believe any entertainments books waste of time by reading ,there is also an argument that opposes it.

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Most people pay taxes to contribute to the development of their country, however, some think they have other responsibilities rather than paying taxes. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Some population have to pay tax and they have no income to pay. A lot of society pay taxes to help the development of their country, but also, some think they have other responsibilities rather than paying taxes.I think paying tax is more important more but also some pure people can't pay and we can't force them.

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some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music always has been popular among people from past until now and they have been enjoying listen to music. Some people believe that music motivate people be together from various culture and ages. I strongly agree with this idea, and I will present reasons in this essay.

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Children are facing more problem nowadays from academy, social and commercial perspective. What are the causes of these pressures and what am I should be taken to reduce this pressure?

As time grows, academy also plays vital role for education purpose, in case of children academy provides much prussure to children where, they face issues like in social and commercial perspectie. In addition in this essay we will have a look on these problems finally, a conclusion is deduceed

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In the past, people used to get information from books. These days more and more people get it from the internet. Give reasons for your opinion and include any relevant examples.

What is the better way to get information ? has taken a mammoth dimension to be the backbone of information Upon research , this issue is a highly debatable one with contrasting views . In this essay both sides will be examined before giving my final opinion.

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Children all over the world should learn to speak a single, universal language fluently in addition to their native language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In some cities public parks and open space are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruits and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays the trend of converting open and citizen served areas are being compromised for planting fruits and vegetables to be served for, nearby residents. Behind this act it causes drawbacks compared to benefits which are articulated in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people want to earn a lot of money. because, they have felt to live a happiness life. However, some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences between the richest and the poorest members. It is often argued that minimizing the gap between the rich and the poor is key to creating a happier society. I mostly agree with the idea, though other factors also contribute to overall happiness. Otherwise, from a board perspective, both views have valid arguments, and this essay will explore both perspectives before expressing in my opinion.

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Some people say that the best way to improve road safety is increasing the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbikie.

Some individuals consider that the most secure option to enhance road safety is developing restricted mature age for running a car or motorbike. I entirely agree with this view. Because of the life of people is highly substantial.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the recent past, many people think that specialists must work on their training country, but some convince that it should be able to work in any prefered country. In my opinion, i think professionals should not be limited to work in only their training country. If they can work anywhere they want, It will be better for some several reasons.

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People are living longer. As a result, some people think that older people cause many problems to the government. Others argue that they have greater contribution to the society. To what extent do the advantages of having on ageing population outweight the disadvantage.

Nowadays, people live longer than before. Certain people think that old individuals cause problems for the government. Others says that old humans still help society. In my opinion, this is the bitter truth which they cause several issues for the government.

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IT IS IMPORTANT FOR PEOPLE TO TAKE RISKS, IN BOTH THEIR PROFESSIONAL LIVES AND PERSONAL LIVES. DO THE ADVANTAGE Of TAKING RISKS OUTWEIGH WHE DISADVANTAGES?

Taking possibility is often viewed as a catalyst for growth, but it also carries potential drawbacks. While danger can lead to significant rewards in both professional and personal spheres, their benefits generally outweigh the disadvantages when approached thoughtfully.One major advantage of risk-taking is the opportunity for substantial progress. In professional life, individuals who embrace risks, such as starting a business or pursuing innovative projects, often achieve breakthroughs that lead to career advancement or financial success. For instance, entrepreneurs like Elon Musk took significant exposure to establish companies like Tesla, reaping rewards that reshaped industries. Similarly, in personal life, risks such as relocating to a new country or pursuing a new relationship can foster personal growth, resilience, and broader perspectives. These experiences often lead to self-discovery and fulfillment that outweigh initial uncertainties.However, peril are not without downsi...

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