IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 41

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that what children watch influences their behavior. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behavior most. Discuss both views and qive your opinion.

Children are the bank seat of paper how they will influence they will show in their behavior.Most of individuals believe that amount of time spend of television influences their behavior, but I believe what they watch shows their behavior.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in seprate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

These days, an important factor for children is school and incresing the level of learning, so people have 2 various view. one group think that is better children study in institutes that are same gneder; in contrast, another group believe students have to sudy in schools which have both boys and girl. I subsecrib the second idea it the best one because children in mixed school can improve better than other school.

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Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be the consequences for these children when they grow up?

It is argued that the ideal method of nurturing children is for parents to be obliged to have a allowing their kids whatever they want to to. This essay will proposal regard of the consequences when they grow up. I strongly concerned that the several factors if they have to choose thing in the future.

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Nowadays, it is possible for both scientists and tourists to go to explore natural environments that are far away from the place where they live, such as the South Pole. This essay will discuss the benefits and the drawbacks of this development.

It is contended that inline with technology development, the human's curiosity brings an impressive thought, such as the researchers and travelers intention to discover natural environments, such as the South Pole. This essay will elaborate on the arguments concerning advantages and disadvantages of this idea for either the scientists and the tourists.

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Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past. Some people argue that this is because competition for jobs is greater than it used to. Others say that people only continue their education because the opportunity exist for them to do so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People today unlike the people from yesterday, this is a controversial matter I will try to elaborate on my point of view according to both opinions,

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Many wild animals have become endangered. Why has this happened? What can governments do to stop this from continuing to happen?

The past few decades have witnessed a dramatic decline in a large number of wild animal species . This essay will look at some primary causes and propose a number of possible solutions that the government can take to tackle the problem.

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Many wild animals have become endangered. Why has this happened? What can governments do to stop this from continuing to happen

In past few decades , the diversity of nature world disappear gradually by a dramatic decline a large number of wild animals species . Some wildlife is increasingly scarce and they are in danger of extinction . This essay will look at some primary causes and propose a number of possible solutions that the government can take to tackle the problem.

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more respon sibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree?

It is often agrued that a wealthy nation's higher authority should aid in improving the health, education and trade of the underprivileged. This essay will agree with this statement because such support can elevate the level of litracy and improve the health of the citizens.

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Some people believe that educating children altogether will benefit them. Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special courses. Discuss those two views.

Some would argue that intelligaents students and med-level students should share the same classroom. While, others think high-level students should be in specialised school and learn advance subjects. However, the following essay will discuss both arguments with some relevant examples.

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Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positve development or a negative development. Give reasons for your answer and include any example from your own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals are of the opinion that electrical devices such as smartphones should be banned at school. From my standpoint, i gravitate those who believe blocking phones in schools is a negative tendency due to various underlying grounds. This essay will expound upon this by providing compelling reasons and practical examples.

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The charge below, give information about levels of education by age range in Glasgow in 2010 summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart illustrates the percentage of academic qualification in six different groups of age in Glasgow in 2010

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue can be solved?

There is no denying the fact that animals and plants are the most significant resources for living. While it is a commonly held belief that the figure of plants and animals is decreasing. In my opinion, I consider that the reasons of the issue is two things ,which is global climate ,and hunting.

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Some people think it is better for one single legal system throughout the world. Other say countries should have their own law.

Individuals have different views about whether separate formal rule should be used worldwide or every country ought to have their law. While having a single rule to control the world can make people equal with rights, I believe that the ability to rule their own is more important.

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In recent years, more and more people tend to live individually. What are the causes of this trend? Does this have a positive or negative effect on society?

there are many reasons maked people to preferre to live individually recent years.

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the first place, we all recognize that private school is the only way to keep your children educated, unless you send them to government school then you will down them to the dump without any hope of rescue. Although some private schools are good enough, they still can't provide facilities to cope with their high charge, every year families afford dozens of monies to pay private school expenses, therefore paying for books, uniforms, and other supplies witch is distracted and overloaded patents, however the private schools don’t produce a high quality of education rather than there are no activities include the school charge , so you have to pay another sum for participate . some people say that Families should assist the education system especially those who applied their children to private schools, I think that opinion is totally unfair, especially what parents paid is not at all equivalent to what they got.

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Some people believe that money makes life easier and more comfortable. Others think that a large amount of wealth brings more trouble. Do the advantages of having a lot of money outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people trust that money makes life quite easier and more convenient. However, people think that a big amount of wealth could bring more challenges in a way

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The most important aim of science ought to be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Scientific developments are occurring at a great rate but some of them do not seem to be of help people. In fact, sometimes scientific innovations are regretted by those who invented them. This essay will argue that science should never harm people but scientists should aim o further their understanding as much as to improve people’s lives.

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Kabhi full this like the change in the society and their own life and wants things to stay same why should change be regarded as positive

Change is an inevitable part of everybody's life, which not everyone embraces with open arms. Human beings are bound by cultures, traditions, and routines that they don't easily want to break. This mindset often leads individuals to dislike change and promote stereotypes. I will discuss below why change should be regarded as positive.People often dislike change and continue with the same routines due to hardships faced in the past. This is especially true for older generations who are connected to society physically, mentally, and emotionally. As a result, any new ideas or changes are often rejected.Additionally, change always fosters the growth of individuals, which is the basic building block of society. The desire for change has brought about many inventions and discoveries. It is clear from the history of the aviation industry, which began with bicycles and has progressed to buses, trucks, helicopters, and modern Boeing airplanes.It is clear that not everyone embraces change wit...

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Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many rich countries should take care of refugees and give them food and place to live. Personally, I tend to think that this idea is bad, because accept more refugees will attrack other people to leave the country which they do not like.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that we can research native surroundings every where and every time, for example the South Pole. It is undeniable that wild has become an essential part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement as some people find beneficial, while others consider everything associated with this statement negatively. Surely, there are both pros and cons to research dangerous places, but I believe advantages outweigh disadvantages.

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