IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 41

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

The advantage of knowing what is the right thing and the bad thing at early age is good for your kids. Because the will know what is the best and not the best to what to do to everyone. Why kids have to teach from early age between the right and the wrong. Because they would be easier to make decision that its right or wrong in the future time. When they what is right and wrong they would help other what is the different between right and wrong. About punishment i still agree but don't make the punishment to harsh for them because they are still a kids and still need much to learn about what is right and wrong. But every family have there owned way to punish there kids. Example when there kids do something wrong or say a bad word there punishment would be the cannot play there phone for 1 day, they cannot play with there friend for 1 days, and didn't get there favorite treats or food for a 1 day. But theres also the parent wouldn't punish them but they teach there kids what is right...

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Many people believe that technology has brought us togethere

With technological development, many people have started to discuss whether technology brought people together or not. Although, technology brings people together because Tech helps to communicate with many people from different countries. I believe that Tech drives people apart because Tech pulls people into isolation without their now.

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Some people believe that a person's intelligence is inherited from the parents, while others believe that their environment is the main factor. Discuss both views. Which factor do you think is mostly responsible for intelligence.

Knowledge and intelligence are the crucial factor of every person. Some people say that individual's knowledge comes from their parent's genes while others think that the surroundings play an important role to being an intellectual persons. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I think environment is the most accountable for cleverness.

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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent year, the topic of whether living in big cities will effect for people’s health. Many people believe that living in big cities is bad for people’s health. This essay disagree with this statement.

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a view that kids and adults spend their leisure time with the way via brand new gadgets. While children can improve their skills of usage their phones, I believe the drawbacks are far greater than benefits.

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Throughout history, people have dreamed to live in a perfect society while they haven't agreed how what the ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? What can people do to achieve an ideal society?

First of all undeniably people have dreamed of living in a perfect society while they have not agreed how what the ideal society would be like . What do you believe is the most important element of a good society in the modern world one of the most challenging issues in the field overall , it can clearly seen that there are a lot of ideas about that

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and news events. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

A lot of people all over the world spend a several hours daily through out social media for connection with others and keep abreast of events. I assume that implementation of this technology has both advantages and disadvantages, and to say honest it's one of the paramount questions of modern psychology.

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Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Point to the latest research crimes which are harsh is increasing between teenagers who are under 18. A number of psychologists think that is the parents fault or even techers because of the behavor they have with them. I strongly disagree with this statement and that is for the sence of parents have with their childreen and the contract which techears sign when they being a teacher.

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Some countries have become much richer than others. Richer countries should now help poorer countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some argue that wealthier countries should support poor ones. I strongely agree with this idea. I will explain reasons.

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City centres are very crowded with cars. They often cause a great deal of pollution. Cars should be banned from all centres. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Nowadays, problem about the air polution in big city tend to more increase than the past, the one reason cause by public transportation. While other believe that problem frequently since a cars. However in my prespective the problem about bad polution is cause not only from the car. I will discuss this view in the following essay.

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Write about the following topic. The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that the music plays a very important role in a life to decrease the stress . I completely agree with the statement that it plays a vital role in human life by motivating an employees at workplace and music act like a therapy for most people.

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Fewer and fewer young people are choosing to become teachers. Why do young people not want to be teachers? How could this be changed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

The profession of teaching has slowly lost its popularity among young people. It can be argued that teaching was no longer a promising career one could have among other reasons. This essay will elaborate further on this issue.

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In many non-English speaking countries, more and more parents are choosing to enrol their children in English medium schools. Why do you think this is happening? What are the advantages for children who study in English medium schools?

Nowadays, there are a lot of parents in several countries all over the world, who are trying to get their children the perfect education in English language. In this essay, I'll try to explain why this happened and what are the advantages of such a choice. Our world is developing quickly, a lot of new technologies are appearing ongoing, and Earth has become smaller even than before decade.

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Some people believe that celebrating personal events is a waste of money. Others feel that these celebrations play an important role in the lives of individuals and in society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

it is relay a common belief in some people that if they celebrate personal events like birthdays, new jobs or gender reveal, it is a kind of waste the money.

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Some people say that to benefit the development of a child, the mother and father should take parenting classes. To what extent you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argue that to advantages the growth of a offspring, the influence of parents is crucial. I completely agree with this statement.

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Some people believe that Writing9 contains full of trash and garbage essays. Write an essay to advocate this idea

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Countries with a long average working day are likely to be more economically successful than other countries, but many suffer from some negative social consequences as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Presently, the issue of labor utilization and working time has garnered a significant attention among economists and businessmen. Some people believe that countries with longer time is used for working are expected to be more succeed in economic than others but they also face potential negative social consequences. From my perspective, I do not fully agree with this viewpoint.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that children have to make their own decisions every day while others believe in a different way. I believe that children need to became more independent and make their own choices.

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Fossil fuel, such as coal, oil and natural gas, is extensively used in many countries which cause harms to the environment. The use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, however, is being encouraged in many countries. Is this a positive or negative development?

Really, children are not born with instructions to maintenance. So, it maybe seems logically to participate on some parenting class for purpose to understand what does it means to be a parent. For my opinion, it may be right for young parents before childbirth, and only some instructions about the first days of life. But in my experience, the basic habits, knowledge, aims we can convey to our children without any special classes. Moreover, I can say that I disagree with the statement in the topic for several reasons.

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In many countries are investing in new technology to deal with public. Why is this happening? Do you think it is an appropriate use of government money?

There is a common view that gap finance betweem wealthy people and poor ones should reduce because of happier world. I do disagree because of the lack of motivation and becominf lazy.

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