IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 40

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The char below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015

The bar chart illustrates the annual salary of families in the US in 2007, 2011, and 2015.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

Many governments around the world provide free medical services to their citizens. While certain individuals argue that people should pay for medical fees, others, including me believe that health care services should be covered by the government.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

There are many advantages and disadvantages to being away from family while you are studying in many sides we will discuss the reasons and the advantages and disadvantages

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The government should ban smoking in all public places, even though this would restrict some other people's freedoms. Do you agree or disagree? Give your reason.

In recent times, banning smoking in all public places has been an important issue . Thus, some people agree with government which prevent smoking in all public places , but others disagree with that statement because this would restrict people's freedoms. This essay will discuss both views and I will draw my personal conclusion.

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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. what is the reason for parents doing this? is this a positive or negative development for the children?

Nowadays, many parents put a lot of pressure on their children to be successful person in their lives. These iedas originated from parents opinion about having better gob in the future and having identity in the society. this strategy can have a negative effect on their children.

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In some countries, girls and boys are educated in different schools rather than in the same school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

There are still some countries which educate children separately according to their genders. I would discuss an advantage as comfortable learning environment, meanwhile, the disadvantage is lack of confidence in having affairs with opposite gender.

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Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal? You should write at least 250 words.

In today’s society, as the number of developing countries increase. More countries are pushing their economy by producing more materials and goods for international trading. In some people’s eyes, generating goods are the goal every countries strive to do. While the goal does bring some controversy, the upside do outweigh the downside for a developing and developed countries.

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Some schools teach school children to study international news. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s digital era, the responsibility of school is to gain new information from around the world to the learners is the considerable opinion that can be argued a lot. This essay’s author believed the benefit of gaining student knowledge outweighed the drawback.

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Some people say that advertising encourages people to buy things they do not need.Others say that advertisements are important sources of information about new products.Discuss both views and give your opinion. Yến Linh

In modern-day society, some people believe that promoting give incentive for people to buy unnecessary products while some others people that newly released goods can be advertised because the advertisements are essential for consumers.I strongly agree with the former and both of views will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

There is no denying the fact that the change can be for better or worse. While it is a commonly held belief that some individuals think that different is always a good thing,there is also an argument that people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding the variation. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion. On one hand, routine can lead to skill specialization and mastery over time.In other words, focusing on time management leads to honing the skill. In addition, there one those who prefer the comfort of familiarity and balance.For example, these people find peace and control over their lives.The may resist big adjustments in there life out of fear of the unknown. On the other hand, the different can lead to personal growth, new experiences, and adaptability.lt is also possible to say that the changes can create great and golden opportunities in people's lives. Moreover, embracing change is often necessary in a fasts ...

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some people believe that in a city the best way to travel is by car while other people argue that bicycles are a better way of travelling in a city. discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, travelling has been increasing at an alarming rate. On the one hand people argue automobiles can be considered as the preferred method of transportation in urban cities while on the other hand they think bicycles are more preferrable. In my opinion I firmly believe automobile serves better due to it's safety and convience.

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Some people think that way to reduce crimes is long term prisons while others think that there are other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Crime reduction is essential for the peace and stability of a society. It has been argued that the best approach to decreasing crimes is long term prisions, while a large group of people disagree. This essay will unfolds both sides of the argument and offers my insights into the debate.

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“What are the advantages of getting news online? What are the drawbacks

There is no doubt that these days online news is one of the most important ways of finding out about the world. But what are the benefits of this situation and what are the drawbacks?

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Some people believe that for children learning about the local history is more important than knowing the World history. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some individuals are of the opinion that young generations should learn national history, since it is more significant than the world history. From this writer's perspective, this statement is firmly disagreeable. This essay will expound upon this by giving feasible reasons and practical examples.

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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

More oftenly, it has been said that individuals should get into nupital knot early in life like in their early or late 20's. I strongly support this school of thought and would present valid points for the same in the following paragraphas.

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It is important for children to learn the diffrence between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what wxtent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children

Recently, the topic about the necessity of punishment for young children has been extra popular. There are a lot of discussions about the relevancy of teaching kids the difference between right and wrong at an early age. While there are many different ways to teach and punish a child, this essay will support the idea of rather teaching than applying cruelty.

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Some people think that the internet has brought people together while others think that people have become more isolated now.” Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

admittedly, the internet plays a significant role in our daily life from our work to our social relations. While some people contend that such a blessing has removed the distance between people, I firmly believe the opposite holds true.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only place available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What it your opinion about this?

In the contemporary world , with repiad growth of citizen there are an increasing of new houses in cities some while almost cities have a large speces in the countryside and some people believe that if they build a new area residents in not effective of rural environment in contrast other people they strongly disagree with this idea . In these eassy i will say my opinion about the topic .

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Culture around the world has become more similar to the other countries then it was before. State reasons, example and conclude if it is a positive or negative trend?

Cultures around the world have evolved and each country has their own uniqueness. Unfortunately, cultures between countries have now become similar to each other. Hence, in this essay, I will discuss why this may give false information and for some reasons that are set out below.

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These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 wor

These days, people are inquire about traveling, some people say traveling easier than what was in the past, developing of the travel for tourism has a lot of pros and cons. Personally, I believe that traveling for any reason has many different advantages, at the same time there are plenty of negatives, in this essay I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of traveling on Holiday.

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