IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 40

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. do the advantage of this situation outweight disadvantages

In contemporarily world, a new growing trend in some countries has led to the population of young people become more than older people. I believe that this phenomenon possesses both advantages and disadvantages. The positive side, however, brings more significant consequences for any society.

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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people’s lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Society has changed significantly in recent years , especially in fashion . People today follow global fashion trends. It makes big changes in people’s lives. This essay will explain do I think this is a positive or negative development and give reasons, including examples from my own knowledge or experience.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Book based on offence or similar TV program has recently gained momentum across the globe in many states. It started as an escape from boredom by infusing thrill with suspense while watching or reading. I believe it has both advantages and disadvantages on everyone especially children.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Strength is the important deciding factor for someone to excell in sports. But people have a divided opinions in terms of defining which strength that is the highest contributor in sports success. Some people think that physical strength is important because majority of sport need certain physical strength to be able to do the basic movements, let alone doing the advance movements that is necessary to perform well. But some other people think that mental strength is more important with the argument that mental strength like resillience and agility is a deciding factors for someone to keep showing up in sports practice, thus leading to excellence in the end.

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n the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, reading e-books has become a broad issue to the general public. Some people believe that they are capble to read anything they want online without paying. I firmly assert this perspective. From any angle, E-book has been a heated topic in the contemporary society.

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Nowadays, it is easier for young people to have a credit card compared to the past. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

IT IS TRUE THAT, THESE DAYS IS MORE CONVINENT FOR YOUNGSTARS TO HAVE A CREDITCARD RATHER THAN EALRIER DAYS . ALTOUGH THIS TREND HAS SOME DRAWBACKS. I WOULD AURGU THAT ITS BENEFITS ARE FAR MORE.

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A lot of charities and organisations have to publicize their activities by setting up a number of days to name the special day like National Children’s day and National non-smoking day. Why do they do so? What are the effects?

In this modern era, several clubs and companyies are share their acticities by setting up a day with special meaning so i think this is a positive development in the society and there are number of effects on folks that are going to elaborate in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

Even though the public knows that plastic products are harmful for our surroundings, many coudn't both to use an alternative.It's necessary to assert again what's the detriments of plastic items and what shoud be implemented to tackle this issue.

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Many people think that museums and art galleries should only show work from local artists rather than from other countries . Do you agree?

There is no doubt that art houses have been played a crucial role in preserving culture, history and nation identity. It is argued that museums should only exhibit local arts rather than international. While I acknowledge that showing lacal arts is vital to promote awareness about regional culture among the public, I believe access to foregin art work broads understanding about artistic skills and contributes to diversity. Therefore, I partially agree with this view.

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Several schools face the challenge of bullying among students such that if left unchecked, it can affect the performance of students, academically, phisically, mentally and socially as well. There are several reasons why this development has become rampant. This essay will explore why students engage in this undesirable behaviour and also provide ways to end it.

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Some people believe that advertisements aimed at children should be banned because they have negative effects. Others argue that advertising is necessary and provides useful information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, advertisements have rapidly increased, and they are not controlled. The effect of advertisements has a heavy impact on children. This essay will discuss the advertisement effect of children and clarify my opinion.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a long weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, longer weekend has become increasingly controversial. Some people think that work day should be decreased and extended weekend for employees. In my opinion, I agree with this idea for several reasons.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, more and more people participate in sports, and one of the most popular debates among audiences is which athlete possesses superior skills. While some individuals believe that physical clout is the key to success in competition, others argue that mental courage ultimately determines the outcome. This essay will examine both perspectives and explain why attitude plays a decisive role.

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Some people believe that advertisements have a negative impact on children and should be strictly controlled. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, advertisements have increased rapidly and are not controlled. The children are affected by advertisements in many ways. This essay will discuss the advertisement affecting of children and clarify my opinion.

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Many students today graduate high school and then go to study in another country Give the advantages and disadvantages of studying overseas

Nowadays , after many changes in the strategy of education , my students , after graduation from high school, tend to study in another country. There are a positive advantage and a negative disadvantage . Both of them are very important to be discussed . this assay will mention the both points of views .

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Some people prefer to live in the city,while others feel that there are more advantages to living in the countryside. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in the city comared with living in the countryside.

It is often argued that live in the city and living in the countryside become one of the most pressing issues in contemporary society. While some people claim that live in the city is much better, other insist that countryside lifestyle pros are outweight. In my view, although both perspectives have merit, I strongly believe that life in the city give more opportunities, as it provide more sustainable and rational solution.

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many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Issues related to ageing population are frequently discussed these days. Although some believe that elderly societies make more problems for governments, other are of the opinion that ageing people have advantages for the society more than drawbacks. Both views of these contrasting views will be analyzed and also my opinion is given in this essay. Personally, I would side with the second view that the growing number of ageing people does create more problems.

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The rapid rise of artificial intelligence (AI) in various industries is leading to job displacement and unemployment for many workers. What are the reasons for this trend? What solutions can be implemented by the government to address these issues?

As developed of Artificial intelligence in various industries which highly displacement of jobs which contributed to unemploument for many people. The main reason of this tendency are low cost, fasttern results. However, this issue can be implemented by the governement strickty Al....

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A university education is becoming more expensive every year and the money paid for a degree can keep university graduates in debt for years. Therefore, tuition fees should be abolished, and governments should pay for university education. To what extent do you agree with this viewpoint?

whether authorities should provide funds for tertiary education has become one of the most debatable topic. With the rise in inflation, tution fees of most universities have also increased, which most of the students can not afford. Therefore, many students do not conitnue their education further. In my perspective, authorities should pay for tertiary education to motivate those students who have potential to study further

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is happening? Do you think this will have a possitive or negative impact on society

In today's world, scientists are developing artificial intelligence and robots to replace human beings in the workplace. Because they believe that robots are more skilled than a real person. I totally think it will have a lot of negative impact on our society for many reasons. It will increase the level of unemployment among people . Also, a lot of jobs require a sense of concentration in human beings.

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