IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 40

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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IN MANT COUNTRIES, PEOPLE ARE NOW LIVING LONGER THAN EVER BEFORE. SOME PEOPLE SAY AN AGEING POPULATION CREATES PROBLEMS FOR GOVERNMENTS. OTHER PEOPLE THINK THERE ARE BENEFITS IF SOCIETY HAS MORE ELDERLY PEOPLE. TO WHAT EXTENT DO THE ADVANTAGES OF HAVING AN AGEING POPULATION OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES?

It is argued that many problems arise with the increase in old age population. Many people think that having old people around is a blessing as they teach the next generation moral values. I strongly agree with the later statement.

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Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to vaccinate their children? You should use your ideas, knowledge, and experience, and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Nowadays the question of vaccination plays a critical role in society. The low about vaccination was debated for a long time, and even now some families have doubts about it. In my opinion, it is a controversial question because it depends on many predictions and the type of illness (first of all, how many resources already exist). On the one hand, I can understand the worries of parents about vaccination, because even in science articles they can find information about side effects and consequences of the same kind of vaccine. For example in Ukraine, with a new law, the government is strongly recommending getting the vaccine from COVID for babies from 0 to 6 months, without previous resources. On the other hand, we as a humanity can prove that the vaccine has already saved a lot of lives, and it is important not only to the person but also for the development of group immunity.

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out of work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parent’s absence.

The children need someone to take care of them, therefore, anyone of the parents should stay at home instead of going to work. The question is, some people believe one of the parents should take care od the children and the other one goes to work. In my opinion, I believe they can not go to work together, one of them should take care of the children. In this essay. We are going to discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Nowadays, more and more people prefer choosing online courses to learn than attending regular classes. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, a considerable proportion of the population prefer studying online system rather than attending offline classes. This essay will discuss both the disadvantages and advantages of this trend.

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In some countries,owning a home rather than renting one is very importent for people. Why might this be case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

There is no denying the fact that importance of owning a home for many people and essential thing. While it is commonly held belf that many individuals like to owning a home rather than renting. There is also an argument opposes it. This essey will discus the postive and negtive ponits and i will express my opinion.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There are more and more parents like spending a lot of time with their children and teaching them by themselves at home instead of going to school. In my opinion, the benefits of this way outweigh the disadvantages and the child is able to get more help and harvest in their grownth.

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Home-schooling belongs in the past and it is unaccepted in modern society

Nowadays, technology is becoming popular day by day and children prefer to learn at their homes by using their devices. Some people believe that home-schooling have left in the history, while other argue it is not accepted in today's era. I strongly disagree with this, in the forthcoming paragraph will clear my point of view and will give my own opinion.

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Many people prefer to communicate through social media instead of face-to-face interaction. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In these days, people prefer communicating by internet rather than interacting face-to-face. This is good for people that is far from their friends and family and for shy people that have problems to socialize. However, there are cons for children and teens such as meet weird people and problems of isolation because children do not interact with others. In this essay I will try to cover whether the pros outweigh the disadvantages.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Jubilents are the backbone of the country and they can make a beautiful society, some people argued that usually people told their child that if they want to get something they have to work with full of their potenials, so i think this essay has more advantages then disadvantages, there are explainations in the upcoming paragraphs to support my views.

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Many people believe that the overconsumption of refined sugar is a major problem in the world and should be regulated the same as alcohol and tobacco. To what extend to do you agree or disagree? Give explanations and examples to support your opinion.

The consumption of artificial carbohydrate Such as sugar has been dramatically increased all around the world. It is often claimed that using excessive sugar by a great number of individuals is a significant issue and should be regulated like alcohol and tobacco. While a great variety of food recipes contain sugar, in my opinion, this overconsumption should be regulated.

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Now it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do advantages of credit card outweight the disadventages?

It is considered that getting a credit card is an easy thing to do. Although many individuals regard credit cards as an essential part of life, others believe that bank cards are dangerous. I completely concur that the drawbacks of dept cards overshadow thier upsides.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there are numerous advance technologies which have been created and developed in response to human needs in various dimentions such as communication, transportation, and space. However, Some people believe that the most significant goal of improving those science supposted to develop people's lives. In my opinion, I totally agree to this statement and I will examine the reasons in this essay.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermaket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

In recent years, people in many countries can purchase their foods which produce from other overseas at a high markets. Even though, it may seem to be an advantage for customers, in my perspective, I believe that this is a negative development and I will examine the reasons in this essay.

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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transformingthe lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent times,new technologies and ways of purchasing and selling are transforming lives of consumers.The writer strongly agrees to the notion and elaborate on reasons for that.

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Some people think a job not only provides income but also social life. Others think it is better to develop social life with people you do not work with. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are a controversial debate which criticizes having the wide social relationship with one’s colleagues. Advocates and opponents of this argument consider different aspects which in turn can be acceptable with contemplating unfavorable facets of each one.

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Subjects such as art, sport and music are being dropped from the school curriculum for subjects like information technology. Many children suffer as a result of these changes. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often maintained that schools should drop modules like art, sports, and music from the curriculum for an alternative subject like information technology . While some people hold opposing views as kids are struggling to adjust as a result of these changes, I am firmly convinced that the disadvantages of these changes outweigh the advantages. This essay will outline the main reasons for my stand while also considering possible drawbacks.

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Some people say that all students should study history as a major subject, while others feels that other subjects are important for children in today's society. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Several members of society argue that, history is a very significant subject for students and they ought to learn better. However, others believe that, all subjects are equally crucial and they provide a wide range of knowledge for young generations in the modern era.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this ? is this a postive or a negetive development ?

There is a new trend that people are more keen to have sessions with a personal trainer, rather than joining team-based activities or group sport classes. This shift observed more in some countries and gives debates about the advantages and disadvantages of such methodic. From my perspective, there are definitely some particular reasons for it, and this practice has pros and cons.

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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Enhance future life style Is this a negative or positive development?

In this comtemporary scenario, undoubtedly, there is a huge competition in each and every field. Therefore, In order to succeed, today parents are excessive strict to their children to reach the goal. In my opinion,advance technology and fierce competition is the main cause of it as well as it is negative trend for children.

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In the future all cars, buses, and truck will be driverless.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed that the technology will impact on the vehicles in the coming days. The cars will be driverless and no need to a person to drive that cars. In my opinion, I think this phenomenon has more advantages than disadvantages because of many reasons like save the lives and reduce the number of accidents.

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