IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 40

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Write an essay on the following topic. 4 two different future forms 5 two more linking expressions In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days people go to mall for shopping but in the future, it may shopping mall target is going to be for hobby and leisure and be very similar to downtown. Although some people believe that this is not going to be happen more and more in the future. Buy from my point of view it is going to be happen in the future.

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Employment should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

No doubt, we need holidays in our lives, we are not aware of why, or we cannot define reasons, but we just respond to our bodies' needs.

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some people argue that spending a lot on celebrations, such as weddings or birthdays, is a waste of money. Others think it is important for people and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

celebrations make lots of valuable memories for future despite of that it can cost high prices which hard for effort due to some people discuss about spending excessively is just a waste of money.however , other society think it is necessary for the society.I believe that sort of tho seevents memorable circumstances.

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Some people argue that spending a lot on celebrations, such as weddings it or birthdays, is a waste of money. Others think it is important for people and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

celebrations are make lots of valuable memories for the people despite of that it can cost high prices which hard for efforting due to some people discuss about spending excessively is just waste of money.however,rest of the people think it is necessary for the society.I believe that sort of this celebrations memorable circumstances.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

At present,the pressure on youth rapidly increasing to successful in academic life. Because, some people argue that elective subjects like physical education and cookery, should not be included in the school syllabus so children are able to focus on academic subjects.This essay agrees with this statement because pupils have sufficient time to work on academic subjects and their motivation for studies will be increased.

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In a public-funded healthcare system, people who are willing to pay for the best and fast treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this era of rising prices for treatment, a significant number of individuals content of paying more in private sector to get quick review and receive treatment rather than public sector. It is curcial to consider wealth people will able to afford but middle class people will not be afford. In my perspective, i ordently appose this assertion and i will elucidate my position in ensuring paragraphs culminating in a well founded conclusion.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

According to some people going to university or college after school is the best way to have a successful career. However, others opine that getting a job is the better option. In this eassy, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Some people think exposure to modern technology at an earlier age is good for children, while others claim that it is harmful to their development. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is often argued that few individuals believe that exposure to the latest inventions is beneficial for children at an early age while others consider that it is unhealthy for their maturation.As far as I m concerned, I strongly agree with the notion that modern technology is detrimental to the growth of children .

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In a public-funded healthcare system, people who are willing to pay for the best and fast treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

public finded health care system its amajot health care system that divided in all people who is used to reach the service during thier needed specially when they are sick or seek hepl for other service that mean the people how seek for this kind of service in need for hepl so in my opinion the public health service should be affordable and equiel foe all special that group of pople in need ,

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Many governments spend too much money on weapons and military equipment. It would be better for the government to use the money spent on the military to improve its citizens' quality of life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

everyone knows how important it is to have strong military weapons these days, the need for military equipment is as much as food is needed, but balance would be

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Social media has become a very effective method of communication. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on the individual and society. Do the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

social media has crucial effect to communicate for people, but at the same time, some people worry about its influence for the person and society. In my opinion, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages about this issue. Although there are some good impact, using social media to communicate is risky for some individuals, especially children.

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Details of politicians’ private lives should not be printed in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many say that the personal lives of politicians should not be released in media. This essay strongly disagrees with this statement, because making private details public would reveal the truth or maybe even crimes made by political leaders that we are not aware about. Revealing their secrets will also intimidate other politicians to not to commit crimes because of the fear of being exposed to the public.

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Some people believe that no one should be allowed to continue working after the age of 65. However, others say there shouldn’t be a limitation on age, and anyone should be allowed to work regardless of their age. Discuss both views, give your opinion and include relevant examples.

In these days we have a old peole age of 65 and going up but this is our point for to day becuse i

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Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?

In this modern time, vast amount of countries are focusing their tourist industry. if they have several fields mainly focus that industry. Day by day abroad individuals are being given priority by each country government. This essay crystal clearly depicts why each countries targeting their Tourism while I am going to discuss from my perspective and give relavent examples.

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Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people argue that what a person achieve in his life is mainly because of his luck. I completely disagree with this statement because what a person achieves in his life is only because of his hardwork and perseverance, not luck. This essay will provide the reasons for this believe and give examples.

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Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this for ordinary people?

Nowadays small businesses are vanishing and being changed by large multinational companies. In this tendency, the impact on people has good sides but also bad sides for them. In this essay I bring some facts which these facts show us advantages and disadvantages of this tendency.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try to hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.Giving this message to them can produce several effects on each child.

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In the last decade, there has been a great increase in global air travel. What do you think are the reasons for this and do you think it is a good thing?

Recently, the willingness of people to use airplanes has been increased. Although transporting with planes has advantages such as fast speed and accesibilty, however, I believe this leads to severe environmental damages, including air pollution and global warming.

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Most high level positions in companies are filled by men eventhough the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50%female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain % of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that most high level postions in companies are held by men. This is despite the fact that workforce in most developed countries are 50 % female. There is a growing centiment among public that certain percentage of these high level management positions should be reserved for women. This essay will consider both sides of the argument to ultimately reach an effective conclusion.

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Some people believe that university students should be free to choose any courses they want to study, while others argue that they should only be allowed to study courses that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There are views pertinent the courses options that university student should choose, one said they are better only learn the courses that arguably beneficial for their endeavor, such as technology and science, while other encourage them to freely choose the courses they want to study. I believe both of these options are good depending on the situation and background of the student.

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