IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 458

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you disagree or agree?

Globalization has changed the globe over the years, for many these changes have helped different countries conduct businesses in one accord therefore, people that are against this development may hinder moving forward. This essay will agree to this opinion to an extent but their could be some negative aspects as a result.

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Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people‘s lives in negative ways. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

To some extend i disagree with the fact that news media nowadays have influenced people's lives in a negative way.The purpose of news media is to update us on what is happening around the world, yes in some instance they might not be true facts but mostly we will know what is happening. Also listening to media news help people to be alert and know what to do and how react to certain circumstances.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that free social activities should be a mandatory part of high school programs. While students who take part in these activities may face some unexpected issues, I agree that educators should design required community services for their high school students without any payments. On the one hand, the most considerable trouble affects students when participating in public activities is the shortage of time. Particularly, they may be less focused on their core lessons in class, even lack leisure time because of spending too much time for community services. Besides, there are obligatory services which do not suit to everyone. For example, working for a charity at mountainous places or suburban areas requires students to have to go far away or teaching sports to younger children at outdoor stadium demands a good health. All of these types of work do not fit to the weak girls or unhealthy students. On the other hand, attending unpaid public services will bri...

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Some people say that advertising encourage us to buy things we really do not need. Some others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which view point do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

To begin with the positive sides of advertising , I would say that it's useful thing to whom do not knows what to purchase . Especially , for special days like a wedding, birthday or an aniversary . And we can easily know and aquire information about modern products . It would help us to make right choices , and to make reccomendationts .

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this generation bullying is a big problem in many schools. and it increases with time and it becomes a big problem nowadays. and we think about how to control it before its overcome.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is positive or negative situation?

In the majority of the countries, People thinks having their own home is far better than the rented one for various reasons. In my opinion, we can consider this a positive vibe for the country.

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Global warning is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what Measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

It is true that the most worrying threat is related to global warming that the planet is facing today. What are the reasons for global warming and what factors can government and citizens use to tackle the problem? This essay will outline some possible reasons for this,as well as suggesting some solutions. First of all,one of the most important factors is the emissions of greenhouse gases.Like,carbon dioxide and methane.They produce from different resources.For example,two important and serious resources are the burning of fossil fuels and gasoline from transportation,so they distribute to the air and become polluted. Another factor is deforestation.If we cut down the trees, the most habitat will damage,so the main resource for storing carbon dioxide and other toxic emissions such as trees destroy. All carbon dioxide also spread to the air.therefore air pollution affects the ozone layer,so it would cause global warming. The government and individuals are responsible for the...

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Research has shown that spending much less time in office can reduce the use of energy (for example, electricity, gas). Thus, some companies close for some days a week. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In this present-day world,it has to be said that electricity utilization has to be reduced for irreversible resources preservation:electricity,water, and gas.Being cut down office days can save money on electricity,water and gas;however, it has a drawback of reduction in economic value.This trend has more merits than demerits and this essay will enunciate positives in detail with appropriate instances.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Keeping your surroundings clean is vital to health and make your life becoming easy leading to the place of positivism on the whole environment. I total agree with this statement that is crucial to clean and puts some things in the correct place in their houses and offices.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people throughout the world dream of living a rich life, and in order to make that a reality, they transfer, they transfer occupations to get the needed revenue. Even though they are paid well, they never been happy in their jobs. In my opinion, job satisfaction is much more important than a good salary.

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some people believe that experience children have before go to school will have the greatest effect other argue that experience gained when they are teenager have a bigger influence discuss both views

Many individuals think that if children take experience prior to going to school it would be more beneficial while others believe that experience has a bigger impact at the age of 18. In my opinion, knowledge at a younger age is profitable rather than childish age because in teenage people are mature and know about their good and bad things.

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These days, many university courses are offered through the internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom teaching or lectures, while others claim that there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, large numbers of universities provide pupils with online tertiary education. It is often discussed as a controversial issue whether it is beneficial or there are more drawbacks to distance learning. Herein, I will discuss both views meticulously and also discuss why I think there are more disadvantages than advantages.

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The rate of crime has increased.Do you agee or disagree?

The chart illustrates three categories of crime(burglary, car theft and rubbery) in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012.

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Some people believe that individuals are becoming more and more dependent on each other, where as others believe that people are becoming more independent from each other. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

There is no doubt that people used to live in a community for mutual help. But is it important to be always with someone from whom you need help? While some people think that it is not, I agree with the latter argument.

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In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night uncles they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

It is imposed in U.S. that teenagers are outingbis prohibited parents believe that children cannot go out side without their guardian special at night time . Going out side for teenager is prohibited s pecialy for some ares where people are living faraway from their homes they are not allowed for the children .there are many reasons s pecialy for those people which are not living inside of their town's in this essay we will discussed that

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate the information about how Grange Park changed from 1920 to nowadays.

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As children become adults, their social behaviour changes in some ways. What are the main differences between young children’s social behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?

Ageing is a process that will give you an opportunity to change your views and opinions . when a small child becomes an adult , he or she would be more mature in ideas and a more responsible person than earlier and this writer believes that this is a positive development because there will be less risky behaviours and less burden for the family when a youngster become an adult.

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Some people say that advertising encourage us to buy things we really do not need. Some others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which view point do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

To begin with the positive sides of advertising , I would say that it is useful thing to whom do not knows what to purchase . Especially , for special days , like a wedding, birthday or an aniversary . And we can easily know and aquire information about modern products . It would help us to make right choices , and to make reccomendationts .

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Many People believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools. others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Wishing to be good at cooking is getting more common, as more people are realizing the importance of following a healthy diet, that benefits their health. With that being said, it is frequently discussed that schools should define and teach cooking as a subject at schools. While many people are against this idea, I believe this can be beneficial for children.

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Question: More and more people are migrating to cities in search for a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can government make urban life better for everyone?

The migration of individuals to developed locations such as cities in pursuit of favourable living condition is drastically overwhelming, however there is a likelihood that considerable proportion of people are deprived and denied of meaningful expectancy. Thus, this essay will discuss the gruelling prospect and also render remedies government could adopt to ameliorate it.

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