IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 458

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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some children spend hours every day on smartpphones. why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The museums play the vital role in saving valuable artefacts and directly reflect the history of a certain country or a nation by exhibiting stuffs, that are belong to the past. However, some people find museums boring and not interesting place at all, therefore, they think that exhibitions ought to be more funny. While others convince that museum is only place for education. This essay argues with the second thought and will discuss both the views. Firstly, redeveloping the historical places to the entertainment facilities will affect to the number of interested in learning history. In other words, the subject called history and all things that are connected to this - makes people bored. However, the correct approach of teaching might change the old attitudes. For instance, if our goverment and teachers were review the method of educating history, it would positively affect the students treatment. Making the process of education more enjoyable is the good way to both spending leis...

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Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their students, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?

Năm nay, mẹ em bốn mươi tuổi. Thân hình mảnh mai, thon thả đã tôn thêm vẻ đẹp sang trọng của người mẹ hiền từ. Mái tóc đen óng mượt mà dài ngang lưng được mẹ thắt lên gọn gàng. Đôi mắt mẹ đen láy luôn nhìn em với ánh mắt trìu mến thương yêu. Khuôn mặt mẹ hình trái xoan với làn da trắng. Đôi môi thắm hồng nằm dưới chiếc mũi cao thanh tú càng nhìn càng thấy đẹp. Khi cười, nhìn mẹ tươi như đóa hoa hồng vừa nở ban mai. Đôi bàn tay mẹ rám nắng các ngón tay gầy gầy xương xương vì mẹ phải tảo tần để nuôi nấng, dìu dắt em từ thưở em vừa lọt lòng.

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Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A number of parents’ considerable concerns is having independent children. Some parents admire youth for give up home, when be transformed in to older, while others say they should remain at home with the family. However, the issue is not entirely straight forward, and argument can also be made against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view.

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Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, youth lifestyle and their residence are discussable issues. However, the issue is not entirely straight forward, and arguments can also be made against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate and give a conclusion view.

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The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that media should pay more attention to the views of some famous people, the other believed that social media should more care of the lives of ordinary people. There are conflicting views about this topic. This essay will discuss my opinion of the argument, followed by own perspection. In my point of view, I argue with the later.

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“some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids”. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often believed by a large section of society that childcare institutions provide best service for pupils of age 2 to 5 years. While,on the other hand,many individuals think that their own family members wil take care them better than any others. In my opinion,the grand parents or family members can take care of children in very good way. In upcoming paragraphs,the advantages of both will be discussed

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic: It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

There is an expression of someone's opinion that driverless cars should be widely used in society and individuals.

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Obesity was once considered a disease of adults; however, it is becoming increasingly common among children. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done to help children stay healthy?

It has been noticeable these days , that both adults and children suffer from obisety and the numbers are rapidlly increasing. The upcoming paragraphs will illustrate the reasons behind this phenomenon and suggest some effective solutions to tackle this problem.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Every individual who is employed is unable to exercise neither during weekdays nor their spare time, ,consequently they face health issues. Compared to the old days twenty-first century has become an advance and busy lifestyle, every person goes through a hectic day, and by the end of the , the day they become tired and lazy. Daily exercise is crucial for everyone, it can be for the workforce or children. No age limit to restrict yourself in doing activities to control a healthy lifestyle.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Every individual who are employed are unable to exercise neither during weekdays nor their spare time, consequently they face health issues. Compared to old days twenty first century has become a advance and busy lifestyle, every person goes through hectic day, and by the end of the day they become tired and lazy. Daily exercise is crucial for everyone, it can be for the workforce or children. No age limit to restrict yourself in doing activities to control a healthy lifestyle.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvatages?

The table illustrates the popularity of activities among people without permanent work in the UK, while all information is summarised according to their sex and time.

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Many children nowadays are spending more and more time inside rather than outside. Is this a positive or negative trend? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your knowledge or experience

Some sociality argues that children may spend their time on indoor activities instead of going out. Therefore, this essay would discuss and explain the impact why childhood should prefer outdoor exercise.

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live.

I hope this letter of mine finds you in good health.I am extremely happy to hear the good news that you are joining the University of Delhi where I studied one year ago.Since I have lived there, I believe I might help you with some advice about your accommodation there.

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Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both side of views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people have different views about whether the international news should be the part of the subjects in the secondary school or not. Although some believe that inserting the international news has an adverse impact, others, myself included, reckon that it is indeed bottom-line for the children’s education.

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Some people think that real life skills like cooking, housekeeping and gardening should be included in the curriculum as compulsory subjects? Do you agree or disagree? Explain your opinion, using specific reasons and details.

It is thought that real-life skills need attaching to school's curriculum as compulsory subjects. I pesonally agree with this opinion, because of tremendous benefits it can bring to students in particular and education system in general.

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Some scientists believe that studying 3-year-old children can predict their criminality. To what extent do you think a crime is a product of human nature or is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?

The fact about some scientific believe in criminality being studied in the 3 year children is so unbelievable.Although,I believe that crime could be studied from the product of human nature therefore It is possible to stop children from developing into criminals when they become adults with the few points I will mention in this essay.

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Some people believe that children should spend all of their time with their family. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

Something that can be discussed for ages is the necessity for the parents and family to be present full time throughout childhood. It is a fact that children need to be close to their families. However, is there something such as too close? Furthermore, if a kid spends all the time with the parents, can this affect this person's sociability in the future?

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

The table details the sources of funding for the police and the pie charts show the distribution of this budget. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the contributions of all sources increased, though local taxes displayed the greatest funding growth. In terms of spending, there was a marked increase in technology funding, buildings and transport was unchanged, and salaries declined though this category continued to represent the vast majority of the budget.

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Summarise the information of how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram shows the entire process of instant noodles manufacture. It is clear that there are eight stages in the production of instant noodles. The process begins with shipping the flour from storage silos to the mixer, and ends with labelling and sealing the instant noodles.

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Some people think that the best way to stay fit is joining a gym or health clubs. While others think That doing everyday activities such as walking or climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both aspects give Your Own opinion

After taking the strength quiz from “VIA Character Strengths Survey & Character Reports | VIA Institute”, making me knows the top 5 strengths of me and that is fairness, judgement, forgiveness, humility, and prudence. Such strengths make me enhance working leadership skills to me significantly while my 5 bottom strengths are leadership, gratitude, social intelligence, spirituality, and zest, considered as the key skills that any leader should possess. However, I believe that I can improve such skills by the following

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