IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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A certain point of inhabitance that some people hope to archive success in the educational side or professional path. Even though, there are some supporters for this segment. But , I firmly criticized from several reason and this essay will exploring with a summary.
The pie graph given illustrates the household energy use in Australia and the table illustrates how much electricity is used in accordance with the number of people in the family.
In the past, small counties were more populated than now, which had some benefits. At first, they knew more individuals and, had more communication with each other. So, they had more information about their problems and issues. Also, there are more emotional relationship. All of them, motivated people to support each other. Secondly, in small villages there were more organic and fresh fruits and vegetables that gave them more health. Furthermore, existing cheaper products and rent houses, also cleaner air caused them to cope with less financial and healthy problems. On the other hand, they had lived in spacious houses that most of them had nice yard, so, they could grow up some beautiful flowers and a variety of herbs, which both of them helped people to be more satisfied and healthy. In addition, most of villages have interesting nature such as mountain, lake, river and they are habitats of some amazing animals that gave their papulations numerous spectacular sceneries. Also, livi...
Câu 1: _________ is a tour that we have to spend a lot of money with high-quality services. A.Luxury tourB. Adventure tourC. Relaxation tourD. Fun tour Câu 2: What is a game played over a large area of ground using specially shaped sticks to hit a small hard ball (a golf ball) into a series of 9 or 18 holes, using as few strokes as possible? A.taking photosB. playing golfC. doing YogaD. swimming Câu 3: What is a pamphlet with information about something? A.translatorB. exhibitionC. attractionD. brochure Câu 4: Which one is NOT a tourist attraction? A.Information officeB. castleC. botanical gardenD. waterfall Câu 5: What ‘s that pagoda _______? – Long Khanh pagoda A.understoodB. knownC. calledD. said Câu 6: In a conversation : A : Hi, do you have any free ______ of the city? B: Sorry. We don’t have any left A. maps B. manualC. cartsD. cards Câu 7: Another word for “Sightseeing on foot” is ________ A.adventure tourB. walking tourC. holidaysD. reservation Câu 8: ...
One of Mr. Carter's most important jobs is that of public relations director. The purpose of this job is to establish a good attitude toward his country among the public (people) of the origin country. As part of this job, he supervises the writing and distribution of press releases (news stories) for the media. Media refers to all the ways of spreading information, such as newspapers, radio, television, and other means of communication. Media is a plural word, meaning it refers to all these means. Radio is a medium of communication; it is one of the media used for advertising. Public relations people place special news stories in the media to help build interest in the destination country. Advertisements in the media, paid for by the tourism department, also help establish interest.
Does the sightseeing tour leave from here? OTHER TOURIST: Yes, I think so. We're just waiting for the tour guide to arrive. 2) YOU: Isn't the tour ____________ to start at 4:30? a)madeb) supposedc) have OTHER TOURIST: Yes, it is. I guess the tour guide is running a little late... (5 MINUTES LATER) TOUR GUIDE: I'm sorry everyone, the 4:30 PM tour has been cancelled. We're having some mechanical problems with our bus. 3) YOU: So there won't be ____________ tours today? a)Anotherb) thec) any more TOUR GUIDE: I'm not sure right now. We'll have to wait and see... 4) YOU: How long ______________? a)do we have to waitb) to waitc) is the waiting TOUR GUIDE: I'm not sure. They're fixing the bus right now. If they don't fix it in 30 minutes, I'll give all of you your money back. 5) YOU: And how long does ______________ once it starts? a)the last tourb) the tour lastc) the time TOUR GUIDE: About one hour.
Brief introductions of Binh Dinh, Nha Trang and Phu Yen. Match the activity with the correct description. Binh Dinh province Binh Dinh is a province situated in the South Central Coast region in Vietnam. Like other beautiful provinces in this region, Binh Dinh is well-known for its natural beauty with beaches, isles, capes, etc. Top 3 atractions you must visit in Binh Dinh province. Ky Co is a beautiful beach which was located in the heart of the Binh Dinh province in Vietnam. The beach is very famous for its white sands and with a beautiful atmosphere. This beach is suitable for several water sports also. Quang Trung museum: This is a museum dedicated to the National hero Quang Trung. This is a historic landmark attracting both Vietnamese and foreign researchers and tourists which was inaugurated in 1978. t is one of the largest museums dedicated to famous Vietnamese personalities. It is also one of the busiest attracting researchers and tourists. Thị Nại Port is the second...
Knowing between right and wrong is the basic principle to be human.Nowadays,young generation don't bother about their actions. Adapting different solutions, Correction becomes the only solution to get the results.To examine this situation, In this essay i will support the agreement opinion. And try to elaborate this argument with different examples to support my belief.
It is the”travelling the world” that has become easier in recent years.personally speaking , I believe that although there are some drawbacks for this phenomenon , the benefits are more worthy to be highlighted .
Generally, I agree with this statement. Although prevention always comes first in all the aspects of health system, it may not get enough attention. Prevention and education are both important objects in this field which need more attention than the amount each receive now.
Generally, I agree with this statement. Although prevention always comes first in all the aspects of health system, it may not get enough attention. Prevention and education are both important objects in this field which need more attention than the amount each receive now. There is a known statement that said, “an apple a day, keeps doctor away”. In this simple yet profound sentence, we understand the importance and effectiveness of a healthy lifestyle and diet on human’s health. Nowadays governments around the world are paying deep attention on economical status, enhancing national funds, and gaining more respect in terms of power and wealth. Yet they almost forget about how treating chronic illnesses may harm the budget and how efficient it is to nurture health educators. For instance, nurses can play a major role in educating society and preventing diseases as an essential part of the health system. Indeed, one of the most important rules of a nurse is in patients’...
Generally, I agree with this statement. Although prevention always comes first in all the aspects of health system, it may not get enough attention. Prevention and education are both important objects in this field which need more attention than the amount each receive now. There is a known statement that said, “an apple a day, keeps doctor away”. In this simple yet profound sentence, we understand the importance and effectiveness of a healthy lifestyle and diet on human’s health. Nowadays governments around the world are paying deep attention on economical status, enhancing national funds, and gaining more respect in terms of power and wealth. Yet they almost forget about how treating chronic illnesses may harm the budget and how efficient it is to nurture health educators. For instance, nurses can play a major role in educating society and preventing diseases as an essential part of the health system. Indeed, one of the most important rules of a nurse is in patients’...
In recent days, female do not have necessity to get married because of many reasons. One of them is paycheck increase. Someone argues that In many nations, as women's income become increased, they depend on economic stability less than before. But, I think there are many reasons why they avoid or dodge the marriage. I am going to represent many factors which is associated with this issue. First of all, women's social status is improved ever than before. In the past, in case of my country, women should eat different table because of sexual discrimination in which is originated from traditional culture. But As nowadays, global culture dominate across the country, those culture was disappeared a couple of decades ago. Secondly, Self-egoism is widely spreaded around the globe. people do not focus on others ever than before. What matters to them is themselves, so they do not care about society properity and family matters. Needless to say, women also were affecte by this trend. So t...
It is a commonly held belief that people should watch films in a cinema because of get extremely pleasure, while considering technology period, other ones claim we have to track movies on phone on other smart equipments. I lean a little beat toward the second view, although these both have special features.
Ms Rory Collins Community Diabetes Nurse Community Centre 526 Sanditon City Sanditon 8 January 2022 RE: Ms Divina Hillsong, 55 years old Dear Ms Collins, I am writing to refer Ms Divina Hillsong, who has uncontrolled diabetes type 2. She requires health teaching and ongoing care. Ms Hillsong has had diabetes since 2011 and for which she was advised to revise her dietary lifestyle, reduce her weight and increased her exercise respectively. After 2 years, she still refused a dietician consultation as a result of her cascade of symptoms of untreated diabetes such as progression of her vision impairment and increase in weight. She commenced Glicazide 80mg twice a day. In September 2011, Ms Hillsong has Biliary Colic and underwent a Laparoscopic Cholecystectomy. In addition, her waterproof dressing on the operation is scheduled to be removed today. She was on analgesics for her post-operative pain. Currently, she can manage to walk short distances and has better glycemic contr...
In this day and age committing a crime must always be accompanied by an appropriate punishment. Group of people think that the optimal way is to prolong the time of confession. Others express the opinion that alternative methods are better. From my perspective, I consider that long years of imprisonment are more appropriate. On the one hand, it is considered that offenders should be severely punished by being put on long probation. It means that the recidivism rate will be reduced remarkably as a result of the countless beatings and tortures administered by other prisoners without cause, which will progressively form conditions that prevent the offender from committing crimes again via the development of both fear and obsession. For example, the murdere usually get lifetime prison sentence. Thus, this has helped to eliminate the number of occurrences of crime. On the other hand, government also need other better methods should be devised in which villains such as labour rehabilitati...
Across many countries and cultures there are various differences with regards how much reverence is conferred onto old age versus youthfullness. Overall, both young and old people are important to any system or country. However, old people have a lot of wisdom that they have gained through experience which is hard to replicate and thereby old age should be valued more.
It is clear that many species of animals are nearly extinction which has very negative consequences for the diversity of life on our planet. The purpose of this essay is examine the reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
In the contemporary era, due to the advancement in technology, a traveller can visit those places where approaching was very difficult in the past. It becomes very easy to explore the countryside and distant places. I will discuss both merits and demerits of visiting places in the course of the essay.
Over recent years, students labour somehow became a trend. Technology development pace in these days, leads to teenagers access to many inputs such as knowledge about different skills. According to this, many of them are willing to start learning something that can earn money from it. Some of them are trying to make their little online business. Another group of them participate in workshops or study online resources to achieve additional skill set. This is a satisfying reason for parents who are agreed with their children working. Because they feel good about hard and soft skills that their child learns during part-time work.
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