IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 455

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss these both view and give your own opinion.

Oflate, these has been a debate among people about what subjects should the university students opt? Some believe they should choose fields they find interesting and others think they should be taught science and technology. Both statements have their own benefits and this essay will discuss them.

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Many parents complain about violence promoted to their children through video games, TV programs and other media. Why is it happening? What can be the solution for it?

Nowadays, there are plenty of video games, tv shows and other media containing plenty of violent stuff which may have detrimental effects on children. Since we live in a world with full of technology, it undoubtedly has some negative effects on people including reinforce the violent behavior of children, detriment the relationship of children with others and normalize the violence. However, those negative effects are not unpreventable with some methods.

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Write about the following topic: Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Host in international counteriesbis good and it is beneficial for international people's. To envite people in other region call them and host them give to them good ways in education and knowledge for all of different levels

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Art and music classes should not be mandotory at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a common belief that subjects such as art and music do not have to be compulsory. Art and music seem relatively less critical compared to subjects that require a lot of concentration, such as maths. However, I firmly believe that students get various positive influences by doing these subjects.

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Crimes appear to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. What the possible causes of this trend, and what solutions would be effective reducing crimes.

Worldwide, a number of criminal acts are principally jumping up among the youth. Although there are various factors to perpetrate a crime, I believe there are two main causes associated with the increasing crimes, and also two practical actions we can take. Perhaps one major reason is a consequence of domestic violence or child abuse. Not only can psychological and physical injuries bring lifelong damage, but also motivate them having a criminal motive when they were a very young age. For example, it frequently appears that children who live with violence become violent people as they grow up. Another point to consider is a negative peer pressure which plays a pivotal role in young people. Let us expand on this point a little. Young people are more likely to engage in risky situation or violent behaviors when they act as a group. In many cases, people who would not be aggressive or violent on their own often feel empowered when in a group. As a result, they undoubtedly vi...

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

At the present time, computer usage has been expanded dramatically among different age groups. In my opinion, in younger ages, daily computer usage have detrimental effects on one's physical and mental growth, while significantly reduce their ability to learn crucial soft skills. Although learning modern technologies could be advantageous for youth's future, its drawbacks at early ages outweigh its merits.

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Write about the following topic: Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

THE IMPORTANCE OF HEALTH SERVICE WAS ALWAYS DEBATABLW HAS NOW BECOME MORE CONTROVERSIAL WITH MANY PEOPLE CLAIMING THAT IT IS BENEFICIAL WHILE OTHERS REJECT THIS NOTION. THE SUBSTANTIAL INFLUENCE OF THIS TREND HAS SPARKED THE CONTROVERSY OVER THE POTENTIAL IMPACT IN RECENT YEARS .IN MY OPINION ,THE FORMER PROPOSITION APPEARS TO BE MORE RATIONAL. THIS ESSAY WILL FURTHER ELABORATE BOTH POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE EFFECTS AND THUS WILL LEAD TO A LOGICAL CONCLUSION.

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Inventors are not as important to society as doctors.

Society is being highly affected in positive ways by both inventors and doctors Doctors are more important than inventors. I do not agree with that statement. I believe many people find they can be more beneficial with inventors. In this technological era, everything is modernated. Every professional field is up to date and it is getting more competitive with new creation. First of all, communication of today is easier than that of before Since phones and text messages were invented, people...

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

All celebrations of different festivals are unique depending on their cultural backgrounds and geographical locations. Some celebrations, however, share some surprising similarities. In this case, the Chinese celebration of New Year and the Western celebration of Christmas. Some may think that these two celebrations have nothing in common because of their different cultural background. On the contrary, these two celebrations share many similarities.

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Success is often measured in terms of how much money somebody has earned. Do you think wealth is a good measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successful or not?

There are some various perspectives in regards to success, and that includes successful in profession, health, and relationships. However, in general, people seems to believe that the basis of success is on the financial aspects of the individual. Today, I will argue on whether this mindset is a good identification of success, as well as adding some other far significant forms of this. Wealth is one way to identify a person's success, however in looking at people's winning in life should not only about the money aspect, but individuality as well. If rich people don't have compassion to others, especially to those population with low economic status then they are arrogant with no contribution to humanity's moral success. A wealthy person is a successful person when he achieved the basis of goodness in life, and become an inspiration to others. My stand in measuring successfulness is to know ones capability to be humane, regardless of acquiring matters that are needed to ...

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Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of education from primary school to tertiary education should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion.

Education is a vital tool for survival in this life. It is impotant that it should be made accessible to everyone despite of their social class. Because without education there is a possibility that you can miss a vast number of opportunities. So it important that it should be made free at all levels. In my personal opinion education is also, not limited to academic but to different types of learning, depending with the cultural and religious beliefs. In this essay I present the positive effects of making learning free and accessible to everyone despite their background.

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Do you think businesses should hire employees who will spend their entire lives working for the company? Explain why do you agree or disagree. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Some people think that the companies need to hire loyal employee. In this essay, I would like to agree on the statement with strong reasons and evidence even though there might be some unfairness for the employee.

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Watching too much television reduces people’s capacity to think for themselves. To what extent do you agree with this point of view?

Nowadays, Television is the main source of entertainment. And people watch TV for server programs. I agree with this statement that watching television is increase so many positive ideas as well as created some drawbacks that affect people's life. my essay will examine this point in my upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that public health is a responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Subject: Complain of bus unavailability

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Write about the following topic: Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Medical services, without cost, are very hard to be distributed to every citizen which is very costly. I strongly disagree with those free services provided by the Government, as its complete wastage of the country's economy in an irrelevant way.

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Write about the following topic: Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I agree that every country should have a free health service. Free health services should include basic treatments. As we know developing countries doesn't have adequate hospitals, where people from different parts of the country have to rely on the city and have to travel a long way for that. If every country has at least basic free health services for each village or ward, where they can get facilities like consult doctors or latest health service workers to know about their health conditions only it will really be helpful.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over past thirty years that may cities in the world are now on big traffic jam.

Car ownership number has surged over the past thirty years. In this essay, we’ll discuss how a large number of cars can cause a major traffic jam in cities and how government should encourage people to reduce using their cars.

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from the primary schools to universities, too much time is spend on learning facts and not enough on learning practiacal skills. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a widely debate on what subjects students should learn at school, but there is one thing we cannot deny is that in all ranges of education, from the primary schools to universities, too much time is spend on learning facts and not enough on learning practiacal skills.

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Many students have trouble being able to focus on school studies, with their attention span increasingly deteriorating. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

There are an increasing number of pupils who are not able to be concentrated on their scholarly syllabus. It is believed nowadays that the main issue is procrastination which follows deteriorating self-education discipline due to several causes such as the surging number of varieties enjoyments and assistance of up-to-date technologies. Also, this essay will consider overcoming the loss of concentration by making prioritization and involving them in the process of learning.

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Scientific developments even farming always bring major benefits. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays ,scientific researches influenced on all fields even farming.It has been suggested that the manufactured crops could inflict harm on nature. In my opinion, cultivating in academic way under control can boost the agriculture. It is my view that searching on plant major has a numerous positive effect on eatable plants in order to this programs will help to produce some fruit and vegtable on a large scale include peach, whatermelon,orange and so on, therefore, the taste of products can be infuencedtoo. they become more tasty, aromatic and watery. there is another significant point,scientists beiliveutilizing of chemical fertilizers will be reduced by the recent developments. From environmental and medical perspectives, pesticides are a threat to humans and animals, in order to, natural pesticides such as a renge of insects are replaced by dangerous poisons in addition from a economic viewpoint, the countries with modern agriculture benefit from several recruitment opportunit...

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