IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 456

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Manu manufactured food and drinks products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are various types of food and drinks that are famous to the people of all ages that uses high level of sweets to enhance the taste. But we do not care much about how problematic this can be to our health for the long run. That is why I totally agree with the fact that to discourage people for consuming high sugary foods, we should impose high price on the sugary products.

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Many children have become habitual about excessively using mobile applications day and night. why do you think is so ? What parents can do to avoid this situation declining further.

Children are using their phones too much, I agree with it, and in this essay I'll tell what I think about it, and I'll try to give some advices.

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Many people say that we have developed into a 'throw away' culture, because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To what extent do you agree with this opinion and what measures can you recommend.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned that environmental protection. Howerver, how to preserve our environment is a controversial issue. In my view, all the parts including govenment, compony and individual could make a huge difference to change this situation.

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Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes,laws breakers should be given longer prison sentences,while others think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion

some people argue that longer prison sentences should be implemented for reducing crimes, while I agree that there is a multitude of ways to decrease crime rates and improve social security.

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Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

It is argued that whether children should be obliged to study a new language. While I agree that forcing children to learn a new language can negatively affect them, I also belive that studying a foreign bring students many benefits.

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School should not force students to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

It is sometimes debated that overseas language should not be a compulsory subject at schools. While I agree that studying new language is advantageous for students, I also believe that children should not be forced to learn.

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It has been said that reading for pleasure is better in developing imagination and language skills than watching TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technologies get better every day, which means that youngsters and adults spend more time watching TV or playing video games. Some people assert that the best way for humankind to develop imagination and language skills is by watching TV, whereas many other argues that book reading is better for developing these skills. Personally, I am in favor of the latter view.

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we live in the world in which we are constantly xposed to advertising. To what extend does advertising influence our choices as constumers and what effect does it have on our lifes? Discuss the issue and give your opinion

More and more people live in the rush and don’t have time to consider their consumers choices. Ubiquitous adds have influence to our subconscious and significantly affect our shoppings. This essay will discuss how advertising influence our consumer choices and will prove that they have an enormous effect.

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It is better for young people to get the advises from old people than young ones. Do you agree or disagree?

It is beneficial for youth to receive admonishments from elders instead of their counterparts. I sincerely agreed to these statement because aged person give adequate counsel in every area of our lives and I will support this view with arguements in the follwoing paragraphs.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measure and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Yes, global warming is really serious problems nowdays, we can feel the diference each year, and in this Essay I'll tell about what I think about global warming and give some advices. Firstly I'll recomend to people not to litter the world, because it's one of the main factors why it is global warming in the world. After it, I'll recomend not to cut woods because, trees make us cold weather and air to breath.

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In spite of the advance made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry, Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Wold is moving faster than earlier, in every sector since the technology reaches to farmers as well, in 21st century many equipment has been used by farmer still some area of the country people facing a serious issue of Hunger.

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Some people believe studying in a college or university is the best way to prepare for a successful career. Other people prefer to get a job as soon as they leave school and to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that studying in a college or university is the good option to prepare for a successful career. Other people believe to acquire a job as soon as they leave school and to advance their career through work experience. In my opinion, completing the graduation is most important for our academic career, whereas deciding to work is only beneficial in the field of business. On the one hand, a university education is important not only to build our career path but also to have a safe and secure life. Although learning a a person can get more knowledge about the field they are pursuing subsequently, they can grab a reputed job with a good income. Eventually, this makes a person economically stable in society so that they can lead happier life. For instance, in metropolitan cities like Bangalore more then 90% graduated from a good institution and got a well-paid job. On the other hand, a person can acquire more practical knowledge rather then getting theor...

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some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with, what are the advantges and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

Nowadays most of children get alot of stuff from their family to play with this essay will analyze the plus points and drawbacks of buy more than enough toys for children to make them happy.

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percentage of dial intake of sodium,saturated fat and added sugar consumed n meals and snacks(average person USA)

The pie charts depict the proportion of the daily intake of sodium, fat, and added sugar for the average American person in meals and snacks.

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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What are the causes and the solutions?

Traffic jam is one of the most frequent problems in urban areas nowadays. This is caused by several reasons including population growth and inappropriate public transport. This essay will discuss some reasons why this has occurred and examine the consequence of this worrying trend.

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Some people think that advertising targeting children should be banned. Others, however, think that they should not be banned. Discuss both views and give your opinion

there is no dobt that these days advertising more popular in media such as TV and social media.The questin is do you think sponser companies of advertising target mind and brhaver children or not ? in this essay going to discuss between issue and how to be slove it .

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Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

I am against deforestation. A lot of forests are being cut down these days. The number of forests is decreasing. and this is harming the natural ecosystem. Many animals remain homeless. which causes their species to disappear. soil is damaged in areas where forests have died. then the flood flows into the rivers and fills the rivers. then the rivers turn into lakes and flood the surrounding houses. The most important thing is that forests are being cut down and causing air pollution. air pollution is causing the perforation of the Azon layer. When this layer is pierced, the ultraviolet rays of the sun cause the temperature of the air to rise. Because of this, many large forests are drying up and burning. These rays cause various diseases in people. Deforestation causes oxygen depletion. without oxygen, all life would die out.

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More people think that hunting animals as a sport should not be illegalized while others disagree.

In my opinion, I partially disagree hunting animals as a sport should not be illegalized.

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A company is going to give some money either to support the art or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose

In my view , nowadays, attention to art is increasing day by day . Art is expanding and raising type of this art . Can also , many bosses of the companies and other leader in offer alternative plans and news but l did not offer . I assume , lf we would pay attention our environment and we always protect environment and be carefully . If someone going to give some money to me or other people . I am going to change environment and grow flowers and plants . I assume environment is need and important for us than art . Even so , art subjects need to us and some people interested it . We change duty and we always protect and save our environment because we are living now on the ground . Can also these day our president is giving to us new change . Even so we capable solve our environment. If l have much money . Firstly , l gone some for orphans then l finished my work and plans . We should destroy harmful companies for environment. Nowadays weather and environment are decreasing...

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Some people believe that studying online is more effective than studying on campus while others disagree. Discuss both views.

Since the outbreak of Covid-19 pandemic, Studying online has become more primary way to study both in schools and universities. The advance of technology allows us to connect and learn more than one method, which is non-inter-person active. Some people do believe that studying online gives them more effective results meanwhile others do not believe so. In this essay, we will discuss both sides of the matter.

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