IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 464

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both side of views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people have different views about whether the international news should be the part of the subjects in the secondary school or not. Although some believe that inserting the international news has an adverse impact, others, myself included, reckon that it is indeed bottom-line for the children’s education.

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Some people think that real life skills like cooking, housekeeping and gardening should be included in the curriculum as compulsory subjects? Do you agree or disagree? Explain your opinion, using specific reasons and details.

It is thought that real-life skills need attaching to school's curriculum as compulsory subjects. I pesonally agree with this opinion, because of tremendous benefits it can bring to students in particular and education system in general.

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Some scientists believe that studying 3-year-old children can predict their criminality. To what extent do you think a crime is a product of human nature or is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?

The fact about some scientific believe in criminality being studied in the 3 year children is so unbelievable.Although,I believe that crime could be studied from the product of human nature therefore It is possible to stop children from developing into criminals when they become adults with the few points I will mention in this essay.

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Some people believe that children should spend all of their time with their family. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

Something that can be discussed for ages is the necessity for the parents and family to be present full time throughout childhood. It is a fact that children need to be close to their families. However, is there something such as too close? Furthermore, if a kid spends all the time with the parents, can this affect this person's sociability in the future?

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

The table details the sources of funding for the police and the pie charts show the distribution of this budget. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the contributions of all sources increased, though local taxes displayed the greatest funding growth. In terms of spending, there was a marked increase in technology funding, buildings and transport was unchanged, and salaries declined though this category continued to represent the vast majority of the budget.

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Summarise the information of how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram shows the entire process of instant noodles manufacture. It is clear that there are eight stages in the production of instant noodles. The process begins with shipping the flour from storage silos to the mixer, and ends with labelling and sealing the instant noodles.

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Some people think that the best way to stay fit is joining a gym or health clubs. While others think That doing everyday activities such as walking or climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both aspects give Your Own opinion

After taking the strength quiz from “VIA Character Strengths Survey & Character Reports | VIA Institute”, making me knows the top 5 strengths of me and that is fairness, judgement, forgiveness, humility, and prudence. Such strengths make me enhance working leadership skills to me significantly while my 5 bottom strengths are leadership, gratitude, social intelligence, spirituality, and zest, considered as the key skills that any leader should possess. However, I believe that I can improve such skills by the following

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Children are now watching more television than they have ever done before. What are the possible risks and the benefits of this?

For the bottom 5 of my strengths are leadership, gratitude, social intelligence, spirituality and zest, which are the strengths that the leader should possess. Nevertheless, although those skills are my weaknesses, I believe that I am able to develop those skills by practicing myself from Maxwell’s idea (2016), which refers to the concept of “The 5 Levels of Leadership” and Author’s paper, which refers to “9 Ways to Develop Your Leadership Skills”. According to the Maxwell’s idea, the first level is “Position”-learning by self-discipline-, the second level is “Permission”-building trusts in colleagues until he is willing to work with-, the third level is “Production”- knowing how to motivate people to work until those work success-, the fourth level is “People Development” -developing people become more leaders-, and the fifth level is “Pinnacle” -Creating prestige and gaining acceptance from the results of actions from level 1-4-. According to Author’s paper, the first way to devel...

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Many people feel that urban environments are more unhealthy than they have ever been to. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What measures can be effective in tackling this problem?

The provided two pictures compare the layout of Stanford Park as it was in 2009 and 2014.

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Some people say that History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

Subjects list with the In many peoples idea , the history is in the most important subject in schools . On their mindichistory should be Science technology and discurt because of two really serious reason . Firstly , ſtudent leaming about great men of history is vital because they should study about their life , manners and solutions against problems . For example learning about George Washington's way of thinking would every usefull in every subject and subjects Problems that he or she wants to study . in Secondly , learning about the ancient history like wars in the past teach students to fare better in front of Problems in their future and do not repent old mistakes and it is very sensetive for students who would study in the political majors the un . university Havever . Put !! history besides important subjects debatable . Others belief about importance of subjects , in today's world , is history In is under subjects likelle Science and iſ technology . No one can not deny that ...

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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

At present, media became one of the major sources to spread the shows and news to the public, for instance, television, radio and newspaper. However, the concern that arises from people that violent shows ,for example, movies or series shows have increased recently. I agree that this will have an essential impact on public behaviours.

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In the future, nobody will by printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Advancement, day by day technology is processing. The universe of technology is massive and every day, scientists are finding out a new branch of this science. So, this issue is not far from waiting to happen. Now this essay wants to take a look at this approach.

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In the past, most people lived in small villages, where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only knew a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and the disadvantages of living in small community?

In the former times, the majority of people lived in some small communities where they were born so the relationship between they and their neighbour is very close-knit. Nevertheless, in the modern world, people tend to move and live in the big cities which is the most famous and modern town. Therfore, it leads to making a lot of differences.

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Young people do unpaid work such as teaching and buliding houses. What are the reasons. And discuss who get more benefits youth or society.

who does not want to live in a harmonious society? In poor nations unpaid work such as teaching people , building houses is done by persons who actually belong to wealthy countries. In order to feel satisfaction and improve the standard of living are the two causes that are held responsible; however community get more benefits - improvement in infrastructure and literacy rate.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Many children spend most of their daily time attached to their phone. This trend happened because of the lack of presence of parents which can lead to a negative development for kids.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agre or disagree?

Many persons think that , helping for free in favor of others could be just benefical for kids.They believes , this should be mandatory for youths.I totaly agree with this ideea, and I think it is beneficial not just for kids but for community too.

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Although it is generally illegal, physical punishment continues in many countries. Some argue that parents should have the right to punish their children in this way.

Penalising and hitting children for their mistakes had always been a very common practice by the parents of older generations years back.However,with time it has been acknowledged to be an illegal act and is strictly discouraged.Both physical and mental abuse has always been considered to be against the legal rules in majority of the foreign countries.It is quiet unfortunate that a huge number of parents still come up with arguements in order to establish their rights over punishing their children in their own way.In my opinion,guardians can penalise their kids to teach them,but can never physically hit or abuse them as I will explain.

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Many people prefer to studying in different subject in different country , whats your opinion?

I am a graduate student of MA in English Language and Literature at the Azad University of Kerman in Iran. I am interested in being accepted for a second master position in Marketing Management, specifically Digital Marketing, because I consider this program as an opportunity to improve my professional skills in a place with superior professors and highly knowledgeable lecturers. So, my motivation for studying for a second MA is because, as the world of business become globalized, the need for young talented with extensive specialized skillsets is increased so a second master will deepen my knowledge, increase my career and will allow me to provide a great opportunity to challenge myself through critical thinking as well as communication and leadership, these are perhaps being the most obvious reasons why so many contemplating of pursuing a second master degree in marketing areas, although these two master, both very different, they complement each other well. Moreover, my real drea...

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the best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a good step and infact beneficial in order to control the fatal road accidents, which are occurring on a daily basis, due to the reckless driving by many truck drivers, that is to retake the driving test every year. While this procedure is challenging on practical grounds but, I am in a strong favor of adopting this approach. This essay will discuss my point of view in detail.

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In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployement will cause to the individual and the society? Give reasons and make some suggestions.

In several countries, nowadays, most teenagers commit to end their study, then majority of the fresh graduate student are looking it so tough to find occupations. This problem would cause the lack of workforces to fulfil certain position in the societies. There are some reasons why these problems occured and two solutions which can be used to deal with these matters.

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