IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 469

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

Advertising is one of the most used method of introduce products to us customers and persuades us to purchase their prodect, but many sugest that these method are no-longer effective, since people nowadays neglect most of the advert. If advertising is truely unreliable, why does company still use them?

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In some countries, boys and girls are educated in different school rather than in the same school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

There is no iota of doubt about the fact that education plays an important role in our life. In some regions of the world student of the opposite gender not study together. In this essay, I will outline what I consider to be the potential advantages of a non-coed education system, that I feel are likely to occur, as well as some of the negative outcomes.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent times advertisment has been increased rapidly and it has great influence on buyers.As the technology has been growing swiftly the advertisment industry has also been on its top. Now a days almost everything depends on technology and by dint of advertisment people can get beter knowledge about a particular product that they wanted to buy and they can deferentiate between product's features and its cost.Eventhough by the help of advertisment people can chose wisely and select their required products before even buying that produsct. It helps them to save their money from spending it on wrong product which they realy dont required.

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Some people spend their time in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community or even better climate. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Where we live has a significant impact on our quality of life. However, we can see that, many people choose to live close to where they were born.

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Many people say that universities should only offer places to young students with highest marks, while others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some school of thought holds that universities are seen as a place suitable only for the young students with the highest grades, others argue that higher education should be made available to people of all ages even though they don't perform well. This essay will examine the rational behind both perspective and assert my strong agree with the former viewpoint.

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Some think that people should not change their jobs while others think they should because it brings advantages for themselves, company and society. Discuss and give opinion

We are facing more and more complicated society which lead many people to change their jobs so often. Some people argue that young people are easily tired of their work which leads them to find new vocations, but others insist that people who have several jobs could have more flexibility. In this essay, both views will be discussed.

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Many small, local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. How does this affect local communities? How could this situation be improved?

Yearly, a lot of small and local businesses will close in different neighbourhoods because they can not compete against international and big companies. In this essay, you will see two types of problems which this behaviour causes to the small shops and some solutions for them.

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The best way to understand others culture is to work for a multinational organization. To what extent you agree or disagree?

in this contemporary epoch whilst proponents hold the view that joining a multicultural organization plays a pivotal role to be familiar with other traditions, others discern another stance. However, I am convinced that other ways will be more effective.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the numbers of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Health is Wealth and everyone should take care of this on own. In this essay we will debate that if we have more sports facilities then public health will improve or other measures required to make it effective. In my ,opinion how the increasing the number of sports facilities help alone if extra measures are not taken?

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IN SOME COUNTRIES OWING THE HOME RATHER THEN RENTING ONE IS IMPORTANT ? WHY MIGHT THIS BE THE CASE? DO YOU THINK IT IS A POSITIVE SIDE OR NEGATIVE SITUATION?

In several countries, owing a residential property is much more important than leasing one for citizens. In this essay, I will explain why this could be caused and it could be the negative circumstance.

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The length of the working week does not reflect modern lifestyle needs, it should be substantially reduced to give people more leisure time with their families, how far do you agree with this statement,

In most countries,the general working hours of an individual is forty to forty five hours a week. Sometimes people voluntarily works overtime so that they get a surplus of money for their family's needs. Unfortunately, these long working hours do not allow enough leisure time for someone to spend with his family. I strongly believe that the government should set new rules of work and find more sustainable ways to allow an individual to spend time with his family.

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Many people say that we now live in 'consumer societies' where money and possessions are given too much importance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the midst of this technology driven-global world,most folks think that,as we all are living in the 21st century. people are more intended about social status and finance. I completely agree with the notion. This essay will elucidate the viewpoint in the coming paragraph and illustrate the examples from my personal experience.

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STUDENTS SHOULD BE TAUGHT ACADEMIC KNOWLEDGE SO THAT THEY CAN PASS EXAMS, AND SKILLS SUCH AS COOKING OR DRESSING SHOULD NOT BE TAUGHT. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE/DISAGREE?

This table illustrates the underground railway systems in six major cities arranged chronologically from older to later. London is the oldest opened in 1863 meanwhile Los Angles is the latest opened in 2001. Similarly, London has the longest network of routes i.e. 394 km and Kyoto has the shortest network of 11 km. From the table, Tokyo serves the most passengers per year per 1 km of route meanwhile Washington DC serve the least passengers per year per 1 km of the route. It is observed that the greater the age of the railway system longer will be the network of routes and passengers per year. Although there is an exception to this notion as the Los Angeles system is newer than the Kyoto system but later has a shorter network of routes than others hence Los Angeles serves more passengers per year. The second exception is for systems in Paris and Tokyo, where passengers per year are much high although were built later than the London system.

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People believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that those who contribute to society like scientists, teacher are the most successful. Discuss both and give your opinion?

It is believed that people who posses economic prosperity is exposed to be successful. Others considered that success belongs to people contributing to society as experts or teachers. This essay will clarify for both sides of this view.

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Libraries are obsolete these days. so universities should follow digital media. What is your opinion? Discuss advantages and disadvantages?

It is undeniable that in this contemporary era, going to a library has become an old-fashioned practice and that there are faster, and more convinient ways of grasping an information like the internet and social media. However, I strongly opine that modern technology would never make a replacement of books and libraries. In this essay, I will be mentioning some evidance that supports this point of view as well as the merits and demerits of this phenomenon.

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In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

In most of the countries, people have an interest in western cultures. Because of globalization, people tend to try new styles of clothing instead of their own orthodox ones. This essay discusses why I strongly consider this as a negative development.

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Some children spend hours everyday on smartphones. Why is this the case. Do you think this has a negative or positive development?

Some kids devote hours of their everyday on smartphones. This essay will look at the reasons and the pros and cons. However this essay will support the idea and give relevant examples as to why this good development for the child to spend more times on their phones.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Advertising has become a part of our life, we have advertising all around us used to promote or to brand a particular product or service for a better life. Every idea is found through an advertsiment, it is further developed from consumers feedback and a new products is invented with the hope it makes human life easier and safer.

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In the past, people lived in one place for a long time, but now they can live in many different places, what are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?

Long ago, people lived in a single place for quite a long time but nowadays with globalisation and transport facilities, people move easily across different towns and countries. We will further discuss on the advantages of moving to different places and its inconveniences.

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An increasing number of 18-year-olds are moving out of their parents' homes so they can live on their own after finishing high school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

An increasing number of 18-year-olds are moving out to live on their own after finishing high school. In this essay, I will point out the advantages and disavantages of this trend.

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