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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

Time has changed considerably and so is the lifestyle of people. Earlier parents in Indian culture loved their children but never spoiled them with riches. Children now think that they can get whatever they want whereas a decade ago this was not the case.

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Doctors, nurses and teacher make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sport celebrities. Do you agree or disagree?

. Well, I believe that the world economy is recovering. After the pandemic period, people come back to work and enjoyed their life. They spend money and time on their hobbies such as travelling and visiting their relatives. I have never been to Hawaii. I love to travel around the world, and Hawaii is one of my favourite destinations. I like the way Hawaii's people dance and feel appealed by its wonderful beach. I want to visit the Plong Nha cave. It is a domestic destination. I plan to visit most of popular domestic places before travelling to foreign places. To be honest, my country has a lot of beautiful beaches where you can enjoy your vacation. Near my living area, there are Vung Tou beach, Binh Theman beach, and Nha Trang beach. All of them are wonderful. Going Further to the north, there is BD beach which has even warm and fresh water but a lot of cheap and delicious seafood. I have no fraud this summer, I plan to visit Ha Noi city this Summer. It is my country's capital...

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Although there is a lot of software available today that can translate from one language to another, it is still necessary for people to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Learning a foreign language in my opinion it is very necessary nowdays.It is apart of knowledges and culturals of everyone.Both of them are good ways to understand with people but for myself I would choose better learning a foreign language than using translating transmit the software.I feel in this way for two reason which I will explain in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time.They believe this would benefit teenagers and the society.What is your opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from knowledge or experience

Adolescence are persuaded to spend their leisure time doing community services as this is thought to have positive effect on them and the community at large.I agree strongly with this statement as it will impact the teens life in a good way.

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The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone. Do you agree or disagree?

Obviously, there are no arguments that multinational companies and global trade benefit our live in many ways, such as more employment opportunities, products with higher quality and lower price, as well as multiculture. In my opinion, however, it is hard to say that international corporations and globalization benefit everyone in the world.

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Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions for this issue?

It is true that many students fall into financial crisis within a short time just after they finish the education of school. Obviously, schools and parents can take many steps to help their children tackle this issue in advance.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In this hi-tech society, many believe having the same thing is better than changing their lives by doing something unique. However, other mostly youngsters’ points of view are different, and they have faith to change their work and lifestyle by doing various tasks. I want to discuss both aspects in this essay.

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Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The age of getting married should be legally limited by at least 21 years. There is a statement that love does not have an age, and my opinion might contradict it but let me explain and provide the reasons.

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In the modern world there is a movement away from written exams to more practical assessments discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

In this contemporary era, exams are more beneficial to individuals education also in many countries exam form is paper based in spite of practical knowledge so therefore many benefits and drawbacks arrives also in these essay , I explain both in details.

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which one you think more influence on people from the followings; the knowledge gained from experience or the knowledge gained from books.

There is an adage 'Experience is the best teacher' , how people gain knowledge differs but i must say that experience is the best way to acquire knowledge.people tends to grab what the experience into their subconscious mind more than what the learn from book.

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Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university in order to travel or to work do you think advantags outweigh vote disadvantages

In the present world, where having a degree has become a sign of achivement, we see alot of students taking a year or two gaps between their school & university studies. It has a lot of advantages & some disadvantages too. Totally depends on someone priorities. As i feel disadvatnages outweigh advantages.

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Which one you think more influence on people from the followings – The knowledge gained from experience or the knowledge gained from books

Every individual has their various way of learning, some Persons can be perfect in learning through experience and, number of groups can acquire talent through books. Both have there benefits, I will say that knowledge acquire from book is more than the one from experience.

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Men and women are capable of doing all job equally well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Before the era of today, men believed that the only place a woman is meant to be is only in the kitchen and birthing of children.women then are not giving the opportunity to attend to college, their parents are of the belief that training girls in school is waste of resourses and time. But today , with the global advancement, things has turned to be better for the women in this 21st century in society. thanks to some few women like Frances Wright , and Margaret Fuller who advocated for the importance why women should be giving the opportunity to study and experience the four walls of the school.

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Some people say that all popular TV programmes should aim to educate viewers about improtant social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays , technology develops alot and it affect all the respective area such as television , cinema and many more. Also some individuals say that all television programmes should be have good story content which good for social issues, such as unequality , education and many more. Apartfrom this I completely agree with this statement so in upcoming paragraph I would discuss benefits of this change.

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Doctors, nurses and teacher make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sport celebrities. Do you agree or disagree?

Well, I love to read books and play sports. I read both fiction and non-fiction books. I play some sports such as soccer, badminton, and swimming. I read books daily. I love reading because I gain a lot of knowledge and information. Reading book also helps me to keep emotional balance in difficult situations. I bring a book written by a meditation master named Thich Nhat Hanh all time. I read books for at least 30 minutes daily, and play football once a week. My colleagues often reserve a football playground near my workplace. My colleagues and I go there and play together every Saturday evening. I have been reading books for over 15 years. Actually, I was in high school. During my high school period, I often read fiction books such as sword fighter and detective books. Most of them I borrowed from my friends. I used to play computer games, especially when I was in university. You know. I didn't live with my parent during this period, and I could not be against the appeal of co...

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion?

In our human society, we have a lot of countries, each of which has different cultural customs. However, music to which everyone can easily listen is one thing bringing people from different countries cultures, and ages together.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Railways are necessary for some public transportation such as high speed railway, train and subway. Besides, I strongly agree that government spendmoney on railways instead of roads. From my point of view there are two main reason. Firstly is about the global warming. Secondly is about residents security. Moreover, I will discuss some details in the following paragraph.

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People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?

Nowadyas, many people worry about do tthey safe or not when they are at home or when they go outside. From my point of view, the reason of this situation have two reason. On one hand, the news on TV program, news paper or anywhere always report the bad news of. On the other hand, the amount of own vehice increase. Moreover, some of soution can solve these problems it will discuss at the third paragraphs

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Some people believe the purpose of education is to make people useful to society. Others believe it is to prepare them to achieve their ambitions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this contemporary era, many individuals believe that education is most important for society's progress. However, others believe that purpose of education is fulfill their dreams and achieve success. In this essay, i would explain both points and give my personal opinion towards this in upcoming paragraphs.

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Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

There is no doubt that these days number of smoker is increasing in the world. The question is, why we should worry about this habit? In this essay I am going to write my own opinion and my own conclusion.

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