IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 465

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

One of the highly controversial issues today is whether talents are learned or it is God gifted. In this essay, I am going to shed some light on both points of view and extend my partial support to the former view/ the statement that we can practice to master something.

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Each culture is unique To what extent do you agree in disagree?

In today's globalized world where all people to some extent resemble one another the thing which makes the difference is culture.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.

There are some benefits to establishing as much as great material in scientific study, commerce and the academic globe to some extent. while I would believe that crucial information in part of field should be secret of every company.

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" Today developed countries are increasing the number of tourist industries. Why it is happening? What are the benefits of this situation?"

As the temperature inside the car is too high, Baxter lost a lot of water through evaporation when he panted, it causes Baxter to become dehydrated. Baxter has an increase in heart rate because of dehydration. During dehydration, water leave the cell because the cell has a lower salt concentration than the concentration in the body. Red blood cell will have less space to carry oxygen to other cell, which makes Baxter lack of oxygen. In order to provide enough oxygen to it, its heart rate becomes faster so it pumps more blood. This can help Baxter to get more oxygen.

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Online shopping is now replacing shopping in the store. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Today, People's high demand for a convenient lifestyle has been surged in these days, and the internet shopping business is the best example that represent our future technology. However, this phenomenon is overly populated in all market areas, which triggered the huge argument about the online market's negative and positive effects to existed market places. In this essay, I am going to illustrate this statement my opinion.

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Many students find it difficult to concentrate at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

In a century of information, there is a big problem of focusing for pupils. Let's think why it's happening and what we can do to improve the situation.

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Behavior in school getting worse. Explain the cause of problem

In a decade the teenager’s behaviors are getting worse as compare to the previous decades. This challenges causes culture values declining and becoming hurdling in a good society development. In this essay, we will discuss the problems and possible solution that can overcome the problem.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others,however,believe that boys and girls benefit more attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

according to a few people, academies should be separated for boys and girls. Whereas others think that the co-educational system is much beneficial for them. In my opinion, it will be better to send boys and girls to the same institute.

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In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the Internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

In this modern world, the majority of people are started working from home with the advanced of technology instead of going to the workplace. While there are both advantages and disadvantages associated with this topic, the beneficial aspects take precedence over the detrimental.

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You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. - explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months - say how your work could be done while you are away - ask for his/her help in arranging it

I am writing to you in order to get your permission for a six-month leave from my current position. I am very eager to work in our main office in China for that period.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In several states, people might think becoming the owner of a building for living is the most significant thing than renting a flat or apartment. This essay agreed that people who choose to build a house aim to convert their wealth into a permanent building, which brings positive effect and offers the finest condition in the economic and social aspects. Conversely, people who are renting a flat acquire a burden of monthly or even yearly bills that they should pay.

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Some people prefer to work in the same type of job throughout their lifetime while others like to change the type of job they do. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

myself met a many individuals in this world, and me personally feel that it is very difficult to consider a person as your favourite person as, we as human beings keep on changing our opinion.However one specific person is my father, he is a farmer and as well as he is a hardworking man . according to me no one can work like my father. He is a very hardworking man and kind-hearted and brave person,Myself gain some significant experience of things from my dad about how to be fearless and g...

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In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualification. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world people believe in whether or not people don’t need any qualifications or degree but only need practical experience in the workforce. Now we will see in this writing on the facts of a young adult who has a degree but no real life experience or a person who has no degree but plenty of real life experience.

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The continued rise of world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Incessant increase of human beings is considered to be a burden for the globe. This may be due to improper family planning, illiteracy, enhancement in the medical sector, and so on. I do not concur completely with this statement as I opine that there are both merits and demerits of a rising population.

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Some people say that school children should study history as a main subject. Others think that others subject are more important for children in modern society. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

Several people claim that history should be the main subject for children in school, whilst other believe that in generation today, other suject are more important. From my point of view, history should be valued, however, there are some instances that children should learn other than history. This essay will explain both scenarios.

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map illustrates the information about two planning sites for a new school that will be established in Canterbury

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Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today's media highlights the major natural disaster issue, "Animal extinct". Some communities argue that countries and individuals should prevent this animal extinct symptom. However, many crowd don't believe that support endangered animals. because they claim dying animals are caused by not only artificial reasons but also natural reasons. In this essay, I am going to illustrate both sides.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.

Nowadays, people some countries are increasing interested and curious in the story of households or the building in the past, which wherethey live in today. This essay will explain some of my ideas reason. First of all, the houses or building nowadays are have several styles. There is inspire people to decorate their house, which means contribute people to curious where are those architecture styles from. Such as, Greek Roman style, which had almost full of white color on the building and l...

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The below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The line chart illustrates the number of inquiries sent to the Tourist Information Office in a particular city via three means of communication, between January and June in 2011.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling if for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Many people believe that a household waste product has insufficiently recycled and the only way to increase recycling was to make the authority legal action by providing a law. This essay agrees with that statement because people tend to obey if the law is provided and make the people aware of the importance of recycling.

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