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INCREASING THE PRICE OF PETROL IS THE BEST WAY TO SOLVE GROWING TRAFFIC AND POLLUTION POROBLEMS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? WHAT MEASURE DO YOU THINK MIGHT BE EFFECTIVE?

People are travelling more today than ever before. For which, increasing the price of petrol will not necessarily decrease traffic and pollution problems. This will be shown by looking at the fact that the size of the cities around world is not getting any bigger but the populace is and fuel based cars are becoming more efficient.
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people . Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In modern societies, young people usually face the reality of housing. Owing to the rising price of real estates, it is so difficult for youth to buy their own house. Therefore, most people at a young age choose to rent a room instead of buying a new one. However, some people still pursue to own a home by themselves.
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Government in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on food and beverages with high level of sugar some think that these taxes are a good idea while other disagree. Discuss both you and give your opinion?

There is doubt that obesity and diabetes have become most common disease in the world. Recently ، goverments began to impose laws to reduce this phenomenon. Many people belive that an excellent step by the goverment, other argue that this might not to be very helpful. This essay will explain both views and lend my support to the former one.
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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Several people argue that in modern society every person has different choices. Nowadays, choices are more accessible, than two hundred years ago. People have a lot of ways to become successful. The freedom now is simple thing for us. I completely agree with this statement. There are several reasons why the modern society has too many choices.
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Today more people are traveling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

The majority of people decided to travel in many eras. They believed that travelling is the way for ranout of their problems. So, there are many advantages and difference between travelling in the past and now.
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Advantages and disadvantages of traveling by airplane

Nowadays, airplanes have an important role in the movement of people. people can travel with them all over the world. Travelling with them has advantages and disadvantages. I write about both of them, in this essay.
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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. ​ To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The provided table chart depicts data about the admission of students to Manchester University in three divergent years, disaggregated by sex and place, where the students came from.
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Celebrities are famous for their weath and glamorous lifestyles rather than their achievements. This sets a bad example for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that idea?

It cannot be argued that most of the celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than their professional skills. It is also not a good shape for young people especially teenagers who are learning from their surroundings, societies where they are living around. But it does not represent to whole celebrity community and there are a lot of celebrities whose popularities are exclusively because of their own talent, ability and passion.
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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Many people believe that young people should have a year off for work or travel before start to study in universities. From my point of view, there are both advantages and disadvantages for this assertion. On the one hand, there are some advantages when young people have a year to enjoy their life and experience working environment. Firstly, it is a chance to relax after 12 years of study and adults may have time to think carefully about their careers and hobbies during travelling period. Furthermore, the overall experiment of travel to new places is eye-opening and breath-taking. Young people will understand about cultures and customs in other countries. Therefore, they may have colorful life and unforgettable memories during time of travel. Secondly, one year of working provide more experiment for young people and realize the different between theories and practices. Thus, students will be equipped well before starting university studies. On the other hand, young peo...
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New household appliances have resulted in more free time for women and has enabled them to both work and run a home with dependent children. What are the advantages for a family when the mother works? Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

In these day and age, cutting-edge inventions make women’s life easier by doing some household works, which they may have their own careers and spend more times with their children. This essay will explore the advantages of this where I believed that the merits outweigh its demerits, and the reasons will be provided in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, with the assistance of some household equipment, women can have a chance to find an occupation for additional salary, which may improve the economic status of their families. That is to say that a wide range of prices hike significantly all around the world, a dual income family may tackle this issue better. China News reported that in 2021, the egg’s price in Taiwan rose remarkably from $2 to $5 for ten eggs that dual income families were more affordable. Furthermore, working women can provide more financial security to their families. In other words, the unemployment rate is high all around the world, if one of ...
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Health experts believe that walking is a good exercise for health. However people are walking less nowadays. Why is this happening ? And give possible solutions

These days more people are walking less. But scientists rely that walking is a valuable for our health. This walking process is often discussed but rarely understood.
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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Compare and contrast both views and give your opinion.

It's illustrated by the flowchart, the results of uncontrolled clear forest tree cutting. Overall, deforestation has impacts on two main results, either reducing the amount of biodiversity or floods.
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In recent time economic growth has made some people richer in both developed and developing countries. While studies show that people in developing countries are happier now than before, people in developed countries are no happier than they were before.

If a person has money, it does not mean that he is happy. Despite that economic of both developed and developing countries is growing. People from developed countries don not feel happy like they used to, whereas people from developing countries feel happier than they were ever before. Now I am going to outline why this phenomena happened and tell about the lesson that can be learned from it.
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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

The neonates always know nothing when they were born. There is a long period for them to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age before they grow up. Many parents believe that punishment is necessary to help children learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. However, I didn't quite agree with such opinions as for young infants the punishment cannot work as they didn't know anything during that time.
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Both men and woman care more about their appearance today than they did in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Thanks to modern technology, the world has changed dynamically over the last 20 years. Some people are arguing, that both males and females became more aware of modern trends regarding their looks and trying to follow them more than ever. I totally agree with that statement and, in this essay, I will support my opinion with relevant examples.
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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, people have different opinions on advertisements stating that some ads lead us buying excessively unnecessary products; however, some provide effective information about new staffs that make our lives much easier. I agree with the second stand point and in this essay, I am going to discuss the reasons why I agree with it.
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Some people believe that the best way to improve the quality of healthcare in a country is to train and hire more doctors and nurses. Do you agree or disagree?

There are those who opine that the most effective way to increase the quality of a national healthcare is to educate and employ as many health workers as possible. In my opinion, the drawbacks outweigh the merits.
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Some people believe that the best way to improve the quality of healthcare in a country is to train and hire more doctors and nurses. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been investigated that to improve the quality of healthcare in a country is to train and hire more doctors and nurses. In somewhat I almost agree with that. As we both know that Viet Nam is a developing country and our healthcare system really needs to get more improvements. You can realized that many patients have to go to other country like Singapore, Japan... to get the treatment. And the medical education system in Vietnam is also different with the others that make our medical degree can't be approved in other country. In fact, when some doctors go abroad for training but they just are allowed to work in the labs, they don't have permission to exam patients directly. So the government should find some solutions to support medical staffs increasing their abilities in medicine. For example, we can hide some expats from US, Europe... who have a huge academy knowledge working here in short-term, we can learn each other or collaborate with them to hand-over some high medical ...
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It is more important for doctors to have good communication skills than to have deep knowledge in their discipline/field/specialization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Both doctors and their patients will get benefits when doctors use communication skills efectively. In my opinion, i think communication skills is not more important than deep knowledge of specialization .
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It is more effective if doctors do rounds (see patients in the hospital) in pairs, not individually. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Good communication skills are very important for a doctor in his/her medical practice but those skills can not replace deep knowledge in his/her specialization.
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