IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 581

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In many developing countries, there is an increasing movement of workers from rural areas into the cities. why do you think this happens? What problems can this cause?

Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies .Do the advantages of private health care outweight the disadvantages.

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Research has shown that spending much less time in office can reduce the use of energy, Thus some companies close for same days a week. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

Scientists have found that electricity consumption can be reduced by spending less time in the office. Most companies work Monday to Friday to reduce the use of energy. In my opinion, it has more benefits than drawbacks. This essay will discuss in forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their time?

Play is an important part of Kid's life. Giving too much free time to children is not tolerated by some people. Depriving them from sports or enjoying free time will affect their development as a whole. In this essay, I will throw some light on the way kids should spend their time.

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken legally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning one language in the world?

Tourism is important factor to a country’s economy, which attracts people from all over the world. English has been considered/developed into the most important language in the world where a few sections of society opine that English is the only language to be spoken lawfully. In this essay, we will discuss about both advantages and drawbacks of having one language in the world. To begin with, considering English as the only means of communication to be used legitimately has proven to be beneficial to all countries in many ways. Moreover, it helps in communicating effectively and sharing information about businesses, resources and their ideas which lead to economy growth. For instance, China has lot of resources which attract many countries to exchange goods. It not only connects people but also maintain friendly relations with foreign countries and make peace with them. At this point, tourism is a social, cultural and economical phenomenon where country’s...

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken legally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning one language in the world?

Tourism is important factor for a country’s economy, which attracts people from all over the world. English has been considered/developed into the most important language in the world where a few sections of society opine that English is the only language to be spoken lawfully. In this essay, we will discuss about both advantages and drawbacks of having one language in the world. To begin with, considering English as the only means of communication to be used legitimately has proven to be beneficial to all countries in many ways. Moreover, it helps in communicating effectively and sharing information about businesses, resources and their ideas which lead to economy growth. For instance, China has lot of resources which attract many countries to exchange goods. It not only connects people but also maintain friendly relations with foreign countries and make peace with them. At this point, tourism is a social, cultural and economical phenomenon where country’...

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Some people think the governments should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles in order to solve environmental problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmental problems are becoming an issue and some people think that the cost of fuel should be increased by local governments in order to deal with this situation. I strongly disagree with the statement and in this essay I will discuss that there are better options to tackle environmental issues.

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Nowadays, heavy traffic congestion has become a challenging problem in many cities.In this esssay, i will discuss about the reason behind this problem and the possible solution for traffic congestion.

Nowadays, heavy traffic congestion has become a challenging problem in many cities.In this esssay, i will discuss about the reason behind this problem

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Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity. However, some people feel that his has both positive and negative effects. Why is shopping so popular? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and in society?

Nowadays, shopping has been increasingly popular as a time off activity. Although some people believe that has pros and cons. This essay will shed light on some positive and negative consequences of this activity.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, social media is increasing its pupularity with the general population. Although personal infornation being shared on the web can have negative effects.

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I have learned from John, the owner of Abc Bakery, you are looking for a experienced baker. I am truly interested in the vacancy. Therefore, I am writing to apply for the post of a baker in your company.

I have learned from John, the owner of Abc Bakery, you are looking for an experienced baker. I am truly interested in the vacancy. Therefore, I am writing to apply for the post of a baker in your company.

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below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish‎

The way in which greenhouse gases trap the solar energy in the earth’s atmosphere is portrayed in the given diagram.

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Today, newspapers and televisions are giving detailed descriptions on crimes. Some people believe such a practice will cause bad consequences and thus media should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that journalism has an indispensable role to play in many realms of contemporary society. Hence, some people harbour a belief that some media which spread excessive details of offences should be limited; otherwise, it may generate counterproductive influences. I am inclined to stand with the proponents. Initially, the front and centre in its favour is that constant demonstrating the technique and description of crimes would result in serious butterfly effect. Admittedly, there is a growing tendency that millennials nowadays either offend petty crimes frequently such as cyberbullying and fraud, or play bloody video games which known as GTA, instead of abiding by law or playing strategy games. Moreover, it seems that bombarding the criminal news to people all day would make the atmosphere of the society frustrating. According to the latest official statistics conducted by the Ministry of the Interior in Taiwan, over 70% of citizens expressed dissatisfaction on r...

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Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from others sources (such as the internet, television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that students can learn a lot nowadays from the internet and television and these have become an indispensable part of education but I firmly believe that teachers play a more significant role in the classroom. I believe that no amount of technology can ever undermine the importance of the teacher. In the following paragraphs, I intend to support my views with my arguments. To begin with, lecturer can stimulate interest and it is an undeniable fact that interested stimulated people tend to learn more. They can keep junior focused on study. A student studying by himself through the internet and TV may get bored and stop studying. assistant can provide a faster and simpler way to present knowledge to the undergraduate. They can come down to the level of a student and so are definitely better than computers. In addition, teachers are role models for students. They are scholars in action. They not only teach academic subjects, but also many social skills. F...

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Bad situations often occur in everyday life. No one could predict when this situation would occur. However, there are options for situations like this. It can be done by dealing with it or by fixing it.

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below show the school site in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in ‎‎2024.‎

The two maps show the town of Langley in the years 1910 and 1950 and the urban developments that took place. Overall, there were a number of notable changes to the buildings and amenities of this area.

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below show the school site in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in ‎‎2024.‎

The way in which a town was changed after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam between 1990 and 2010 is illustrated in the given maps.

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‘Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Newspapers should not publish personal details of politicians. I completely agree with this statement as this might cause dangerous threats not only to them but also to their entire family members. Also, knowing about their personal lives might damage politician careers.

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It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems?

Nowadays so many people are planning to visit a holiday spot mostly during national holidays. This will create many problems like accommodation, food etc. one of the vital solution for this problem is to plan our tour during non-season. In this essay we will discuss both problems and also solution for it.

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people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, parents are looking at their children needs, and they try to make sure they have a good future. However, they focus on their hobbies and how to make it even better, but some people wonder is it coming naturally or is it something that should be learned? In this essay, I will state how people think about this and their views and at the end, I will give my opinion about it.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days,learning other languages become more important in our life like English.There are many reasons for acheive this thing.in this essay i will discuss this thing and i will draw my personal opinion.

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