IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 583

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The internet has become profoundly efficient and popular that people choose it as a platform to learn. Some believe that it would eventually replace the need for books. Do you agree or disagree?

With the adavacement of technology and easy accessibilty of the internet , learning over the internet has become efficient. It has plethora of sources to offer an information on any topic. I agree that eventually the internet learning will replace books. Analysing the success of existing ebook market and efficient and vast source of learning through the internet will help bolster this.

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shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different ‎educational settings in the UK in 2010.‎

The given bar chart compares British people's emigration in Australia, Spain, ‎New Zealand, the USA, and France for four years.

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below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the ‎UK, divided into three categories, from 1995- 2002.‎

The bar chart demonstrates the duration of phone calls in the United Kingdom ‎divided into three different types, during eight years, commencing from 1995.

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There have been many inventions in the human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

History has undergone numerous changes, for the better and for the worse, just like the growth of a human being. Years ago, the birth of penicillin was considered the most important invention that rescued the life of millions of people world-wide. For the first time, there was no scene of many individuals dying in an epidemic, and children crying helplessly.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why it might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative trend?

In our modern ,lives we can live every there. One side prefers private and their own homes and flats, then another choice to rent. In this, essay I will describe why owning is better in some ways.

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Shopping is now one of the most popular leisure activity forms in many young ‎adults. What do you think is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative ‎development?‎

In many countries, especially in cities, shopping has become the best way for ‎teenagers to relax. It is an immediate and easy option for many people and does ‎not have to plan. I think this is a positive development, and in this essay, I will ‎support my stand with valid arguments.‎

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some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework play an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The problem of assigning homework to pupils is enjoying an upsurge of popularity in recent years. This situation has surely brought about both benefits and drawbacks, which are discussed in this essay.

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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree or disagree?

Fast food consumption has increased enormously in the last decade. In certain nations, numerous of people have been facing health problems because of their eating habits. Consequently, governments need to interfere by increasing taxes fee of junk foods. In this essay, I will outline my agreement towards higher fees for this category of food. Certainly, it will be helpful for society.

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One problem faced by almost every larger city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest? 17.07 19

The diagram illustrates information about the development at West Park Secondary School since it's been built in the year 1950.

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These days, children have easy access to home computers, tablet computers, and smartphones and many spend a large part of their free time using these devices. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, majority of children use electronic gadgets such as computers and smartphones. The technology today has become user friendly therefore, these devices can be easily used by children. However, excess usage of these results in adverse effects on them. This essay discusses the pros and cons of these followed by an opinion.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for this?

More and more students take a gap year before applying to university.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person.

The studies shows that teenagers prefer making new friends online to meeting them in person in recent days. Even I agree that it's a good and fast way to make new friends , I believe meeting up in person is also needed. I think there are several reasons behind this phonomenan.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

As we all know, life is deeply influenced by techniques. Computer, which was invented about 70 years ago, plays an important role on changing the world.

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In many countries students are engaged in some sort of paid work . Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibilities. What is your opinion?

Adolescents in several nations are involved in some type of employment. A section of society asserts that this is absolutely wrong, whereas others belive that it enhance their pratical skills. This essay will discuss both the ideologies in subsequent paragraphs with my opinion in the conclusion.

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Some people believe that smartphones are destroying social interaction today. To what extent you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, advanced technology becomes more threatening to human life from digital devices, like mobile. I agree with the statement because all the social aspects are intense.

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Some believe that people will purchase a product based on their needs and advertising is not needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Shopping has become an inextricable part of human’s lives in this day and age thanks to the modernization of the world. Even though many people believe that investing in the advertisement is a waste of capital, I totally disagree with this view.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can ben taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Technological advancement has created adverse effects in the bio-diversity of our country and has led to extinction of varied species of plants and animals. Most people think that we can be devoid of such difficult situations if humans become more responsible, however a group of people think it is impossible to curtail minds from being irresponsible. I contend with the fact that change in oneself can bring a change to the world. The following essay will discuss of how gravely plant and animal habitations are affected by us and what measures can be taken to protect them.

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In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Some people believe that owning a house instead of renting one is the most important goal of their life.

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Some people think that going to a fitness centre regularly is unnecessary. Instead, they believe that combining occasional exercise (such as going for walks) with a balanced diet is enough to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern society, most people in the world lack regular exercise to stay fit. As a consequence, it is not surprising that some experts regard going to the fitness centre regularly as the best way to maintain a healthy life. However, others consider that light exercise such as jogging, along with a balanced diet is the only way to stay healthy. Personally I support the former view. Firstly, regularly exercise, at the gym, helps to prevent diseases and enhances body shape. Fitness workouts make an individual look healthier, fitter and allow them to form the muscular shape. The fitness centre can also focus on an individual’s exercise routinely. In a gym, a person can practising on equipment that focuses workout on particular parts of the body. Professional trainers are also at the gym and can offer advice and assistance. Also, being with like- minded people can provide a good environment for exercise. That is not to say that doing regular light exercise cannot also be health...

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Một số người nói rằng cách tốt nhất để cải thiện sức khỏe cộng đồng là tăng số lượng các cơ sở thể thao. Tuy nhiên, những người khác nói rằng điều này sẽ ít ảnh hưởng đến sức khỏe cộng đồng và cần phải có các biện pháp khác. Thảo luận về cả hai quan điểm này và đưa ra ý kiến của bạn

Việc tăng số lượng các cơ sở liên quan đến thể thao có mang lại lợi ích cho sức khỏe cộng đồng hay không vẫn còn là vấn đề gây tranh cãi. Từ quan điểm của tôi, tôi sẽ tranh luận rằng có một số tác động bất lợi từ những điều này. Mặc dù một số người cho rằng việc tăng cường các cơ sở thể thao sẽ mang lại một số tác động có lợi cho sức khỏe của cư dân. Một mặt, có một lời giải thích hợp lý là tại sao sức khỏe cộng đồng có thể được nâng cao thông qua việc tăng số lượng các cơ sở thể thao. Đầu ...

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