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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Some people believe that owning a house instead of renting one is the most important goal of their life.

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Some people think that going to a fitness centre regularly is unnecessary. Instead, they believe that combining occasional exercise (such as going for walks) with a balanced diet is enough to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern society, most people in the world lack regular exercise to stay fit. As a consequence, it is not surprising that some experts regard going to the fitness centre regularly as the best way to maintain a healthy life. However, others consider that light exercise such as jogging, along with a balanced diet is the only way to stay healthy. Personally I support the former view. Firstly, regularly exercise, at the gym, helps to prevent diseases and enhances body shape. Fitness workouts make an individual look healthier, fitter and allow them to form the muscular shape. The fitness centre can also focus on an individual’s exercise routinely. In a gym, a person can practising on equipment that focuses workout on particular parts of the body. Professional trainers are also at the gym and can offer advice and assistance. Also, being with like- minded people can provide a good environment for exercise. That is not to say that doing regular light exercise cannot also be health...

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Một số người nói rằng cách tốt nhất để cải thiện sức khỏe cộng đồng là tăng số lượng các cơ sở thể thao. Tuy nhiên, những người khác nói rằng điều này sẽ ít ảnh hưởng đến sức khỏe cộng đồng và cần phải có các biện pháp khác. Thảo luận về cả hai quan điểm này và đưa ra ý kiến của bạn

Việc tăng số lượng các cơ sở liên quan đến thể thao có mang lại lợi ích cho sức khỏe cộng đồng hay không vẫn còn là vấn đề gây tranh cãi. Từ quan điểm của tôi, tôi sẽ tranh luận rằng có một số tác động bất lợi từ những điều này. Mặc dù một số người cho rằng việc tăng cường các cơ sở thể thao sẽ mang lại một số tác động có lợi cho sức khỏe của cư dân. Một mặt, có một lời giải thích hợp lý là tại sao sức khỏe cộng đồng có thể được nâng cao thông qua việc tăng số lượng các cơ sở thể thao. Đầu ...

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In many countries, people decide to have a child at a later age. Why is this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern era, most people plan to have a first child at a later age. This trend is common popular among the society. I believe that finacial status, happy life, fullfill the needs these are behind the reasons. I think this improvement have more disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion

It is often argued that the advancement in artificial intelligence would contribute positively to human life in the upcoming years. However, there is an increased concern about the human ability of adapting to the existence of and control of sophisticated robots and computers. In my opinion, I would agree with the former view because the advantages of this development outweigh its disadventages.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

In today's world, advertisements has become a significant tool for a marketing a product.While some argue that advertisment increases the awareness about the products that may improve our lives,others are of the opinion that advertisement induces people to buy unnecessary things.I strongly believe that the later is more correct ,as will be explained.

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Smoking is a habit that claims many lives and is a great drain on health services. One way to combat smoking would be to make it illegal. What are the pros and cons of such a government policy? What alternative strategies can you suggest to combat smoking?

There are a number of methods known to reduce the habit of smoking, whose effect has been detrimental, resulting in loss of lives and increased workoutput amongst medics.The government instituting laws to illegalize this act is one of such strategy. The pros and cons of such policy and alternative measures would be further expatiated on.

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All parent want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a child’s future. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion

Children are fututre of our country. It is cruicial nowadays to teach kids about skills whereas, opponenets argue that by having variety of subjects is better for youngsters future. In my opinion skills are most impotant thing where schools neads to concentrate.

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Many children have become habitual about excessively using mobile applications day and night. Why do you think this is so? What parents can do to avoid this situation decling further?

In today's world everyone, regardless of age and gender is engrossed in their own mobile phone world. All eyes are focussed on their phone screen using various applications according to their interests, this is due to availability of electronic gadgets in every home and abundance of all kinds of applications for social networking, games, reading and other variety of hobbies.

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It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important? Do you agree or disagree?

The growth of a nation is highly influenced by the richness of the wildlife resources. Hence, it is agreed by people that government has to take measures in order to constantly protect them. However a larger group of people feel government has to be mindful of bigger problems that are affecting lives and divert their focus in resolving those problems. I agree with both sides and I think equal attention has to be given to both the situations.

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Some people believe that technology has made man more social and others think that it has made him less social. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Nowday, technology play's an important role in our daily rotuine life. Advancement in network like internet and transportation helps human being to intract more. Every thing has a limitations such as technology if cross the limit it has bad effects alos. I will discuss good effect in first paragraph and in second paragraph i detail up bad effect. In last, I will give my opinion

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some people believe that the best way to deal with heavy traffic in city centres is for privately owned vehicles to be banned, others however think this is not a realistic solution

some experts agree that the right option in controlling traffic congestion in major cities is to disallow private cars while others assumed this opinion is unachievable. I disagree that private owned vehicle should be banned from city centre's hence traffic light should be set up in busy areas and road network mainly for private vehicle needs to be constructed.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions?

Children are the most prominent part of every country. The future of a nation significantly depends on the younger generation. In some places, the youth undertake labourer work from a young age whereas, in others this practice is disregarded. This essay discusses both the views followed by an opinion.

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Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol. Some people think that the best way to reduce crime rate is to ban alcohol. Do you think this is an effective measure against crime? What other solutions can you suggest?

Crime rates has been increasing exorbidantly these days, especially in rural areas. Most people say the raise is greatly because of human's addiction to alcohol and that it should be banned. Though, in one way banning alcohol helps in reducing crime rates I think there are other factors contributing to the seemingly increase the same.

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New technologies provided machines which replaced workers to do certain physical jobs and tasks. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is very much true that, advanced technologies are growing like anything in all ways. Therefore, a fair amount of people believes automation can replace manpower at the workplace and I would like to express my viewpoints on the pros and cons of new technologies in the different industries.

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Some people say that punishment is the best way to teach children to behave well, while others disagree and point out that rewarding and praising them is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although a number of individuals believed youngsters should be penalized for their wrong behaviour, others are of contrary opinion.In my opinion, I agree with the view that they should be disciplined for bad attitudes as this will help to instil good attitude into them and also make them change speedily

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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

Reading news on the internet is becoming more popular in this era. Although many people nowadays read news from the internet some believe that still, newspapers will remain the prominent news source . I completely disagree and I believe that the internet is the most important source of news. To embark on, I believe that Internet keeps updating the news In 24 hours, that's why its more important source than newspapers and people like to stick with updated news which is not possible in the newspaper. When someone reads the magazine he or she only gets the news about yesterday while on the internet news can be updated in real-time and that's why important news first broadcast or publish on the internet rather than in a tabloid. For instance, recently, I always check the Internet for important news regarding covid-19 virus because research on covid virus keep updated and tabloid takes time to publish. In short, Internet has the ability to update any news in real-time, that's why I ...

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Behaviour in schools is getting worse. Explain the causes and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solutions. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

Children's across the world are behaving strangely nowadays. Day by day students conduct in educationcal institutions are worsening. The reasons behind these areextensive exposure to violent video games and no proper parental guidance, which subsequently lead to bad behavior and disruption in the class; however, these issues could be overcome by strict measures.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, in many countries, there are lots of people, who are highly qualified but they do not have a job.

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Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that to tackle the problem of illness and diseases produced by environmental pollution and housing problems ministry should focus on. I firmly agree with this statement

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