IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 588

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Graduates who cannot find work in their chosen field should be advised to do a second degree,rather than taking a job that does not interest them. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

These days,it can be difficult to get a good job when you leave university.Many more students are studying for degrees,so the job market is very competitive.Some people believe that it is better to take a second degree if you cannot secure suitable employment.But I tend to think it depends on your circumstances. The first consideration is finance.Universities charge high fees for their courses,and in some countries it can cost...

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Some people think the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a widespread belief that technology plays a vital role in the metabolism of current society. Therefore，there are increasing number of educationalists propose that the official ought to boost funds in the science education than other subjects. From my point of view, I agree this proposal to some extent, but I disagree that investing more than other subjects.

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More people have unhealthy diet and do not do enough exercise. What are the reasons for this?How can we encourage people to have a healthier?

In today’s modernized era, junk food and physical activities are on the concern list. It has been noticed that most of the individual prefer to eat unhealth food and in addition to this they do not do any exercise. There are several factors behind this harmful practice and certain step could be taken to improve this situation.

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Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people are of the view that only those species of animals that are endangered must be safeguarded while others have the opinion that we should preserve all animals irrespective of their status.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Eased on my knowledge, some people choose to accept the fate that they have to undergo the bad situation as they believe that good things might come out of it. Their solution is simply to just go with the flow because they think that they will learn something new along the journey. For example, a student received a grade B for his Physics examination. However, he only needs one more mark to get an A If a student requires to receive a mark percentage of 10% to get an A, this student got a lA% on his paper. As the teacher looked through the questions with the whole class, he notices that the teacher accidentally marked his correct answer to wrong. So, realistically, he should get an A. However, he chooses to leave his grade as a B because he believes that his current grade will be a motivation fo...

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Eased on my knowledge, some people choose to accept the fate that they have to undergo the bad situation as they believe that good things might come out of it. Their solution is simply to just go with the flow because they think that they will learn something new along the journey. For example, a student received a grade B for his Physics examination. However, he only needs one more mark to get an A If a student requires to receive a mark percentage of 10% to get an A, this student got a lA% on his paper. As the teacher looked through the questions with the whole class, he notices that the teacher accidentally marked his correct answer to wrong. So, realistically, he should get an A. However, he chooses to leave his grade as a B because he believes that his current grade will be a motivation fo...

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In many nations around the world, declining health and a lack of fitness are becoming very common among people. There are a number of causes of this, but certain measures could be taken to alleviate this problem.

The picture given illustrates the process of how ceramic pots are manufactured.

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City centres are very crowded with cars. They often cause a great deal of pollution. Cars should be banned from all centres. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

The line graph has the data about the number of foreigners to four main museums from different parts of the world between 1980 and 2015. These statistics have been done once every five years.

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Some countries are struggling with increases in crime rates. Some believe that having more police on the streets is best way to reduce and combat crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, Civilians believe that having more police on the streets will help to combat crime but its not true. Countries which have more population like India is suffering a lot with crime rates even though they have a good amount of police on the street, crime rate is unmanagable. I disagree with the belief that more police is not the best way to combat crime.

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big salary is more important than the job satisfaction

These days, it is becoming more and more common for nations to earn a lot of money. People think and believe that money is far more vital than the activity itself. I completely agree with this idea and in this essay I will support my ideas with examples

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In some countries, changes in the amount of rainfall have led to a serious shortage of water and governments are now under pressure to find solutions that address this problem. What are some of the problems that lack of water causes and what can be done to save water in the future?

Changing in the environment directly affecting rainfall might be due to global warming, which further leads to the shortage of water and the authorities are under a burden to solve this major problem. There are some countable issues, which are caused by deficiency of water. The measures to conserve water should become into force. Let's delve deeper into the following paragraphs.

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It is usually debated that whether Homework is a vital part of school cariculum or not.I acknowledge that it has a wide range of benifits.However it has some drawbacks too.Dicuss both the views and write your openion

It is usually argued that homework is an important part of school and is vital in learning of a child while on the other hand some believe that work done by the students in their classroom is more than sufficient for their learning.Both points have equally valid arguments some of which are discussed below. In todays world the pressure on a school going child has grown exponentially.one of the major reason for it is the amount of task teachers expect their students to complete in their homes.Today an average student usually works on his home assignments 2-3 hours a day and that is on top of 6 to 7 hours of school time he has already spent of his day.Childhood is the time in a persons life where he should be left free so that he can explore his or hers interests,dreams,compassions,likes or dislikes etc. by burdening them with so much homework in their tender age we are restricting their personal growth to just academics and not giving them any space to grow in any other fiel...

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these view and give your opinion.

It is often said that attracting people to purchase the products by using advertisements is very successful. Others, however, think that they are take place everywhere untill nobody is interested in it. From my point of view, I believe that advertising goods is mostly reached the target as they promote artificial wants and people usually falls for charming pictures which use in it.

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Nowadays, more and more people from different cities are spending more time away from their families. What are the possible reasons and the effects on the people themselves and their families?

The modern world has made it easier for people to commute to different destinations while perusing their goals. Certainly, this movement cuts them out from their habitual lifestyle and what is more, it shortens the time spent with friends and relatives. There are numerous reasons that put a strain on people with their families as well as some detrimental outcomes.

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"Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

It is commonly said that today’s children are pressurized as were yesterday’s adults. That’s true in the sense that children are facing harder and harder academic, social and commercial challenges. It is happening simply because of the ever increasing demands of life, from the same perspectives, on humans in general. While it is important that children excel in their age to become successful as adults, they must be shielded from the mounting pressure by maintaining a balance between material and psychological growth. As the global village becomes more and more competitive everyday, it becomes important for us to prepare for the fight, so to speak, earlier and earlier. This is realized by all, which triggers societies to push their juveniles during their learning stage. The other thing that is contributing to this ever rising pressure on children is the lack institutional opportunities, especially in developing countries. Now, more than ever, children are having to race e...

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It is usually debated that whether Homework is a vital part of the school curriculum or not. Discuss both the views and share your opinion on the

It is usually argued that homework is an important part of school and is vital in learning of a child while on the other hand some believe that work done by the students in their classroom is more than sufficient for their learning.Both points have equally valid arguments some of which are discussed below. In todays world the pressure on a school going child has grown exponentially.one of the major reason for it is the amount of task teachers expect their students to complete in their homes.Today an average student usually works on his home assignments 2-3 hours a day and that is on top of 6 to 7 hours of school time he has already spent of his day.Childhood is the time in a persons life where he should be left free so that he can explore his or hers interests,dreams,compassions,likes or dislikes etc. by burdening them with so much homework in their tender age we are restricting their personal growth to just academics and not giving them any space to grow in any other fiel...

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

It is commonly believed that majority of people in some countries are interested in investigating the history and construction of the house to live in . I intend to discuss cases for this as well as the ways how people can research it. On the one hand , people tend to find out the history of the house due to several reasons. Firstly, by understanding the history of the house people will be able to reside in a durable houses , which means that most people try to earn high amount of money to ...

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Nowadays,young people admire sports stars though they often do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Today technology has become an inevitable part ofour life, although it has made us more susceptible to surveillances without our consent. Technology has been omnipresent nearly in all aspects of our modern life. In spite of making life easier, it has created brand-new problems, being spied on is one among many. In fact, technology has exposed our personal life, taking our privacies away. Some people believe that in order to have a peaceful live and stay away from criminal and terror threats...

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Nowadays, more and more people are emigrating from developing countries to developed countries. What the causes of this trend are and how it could be mitigated?

Immigration from less developed countries to developed countries is increasing more each day. Reason of this trend is, facilities of developed countries, life expectancy in developed countries and job opportunities. To mitigate this problem countries should hold each other's hand and start to aid and build up less developed areas.

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Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed rather than working in a company or organisation. why be the cause? what could be the disadvantage.

In current years, many individuals prefer to work for themselves rather than working under anybody or an organisation. This is major because of the availability of technology and people wanting time to themselves. However, there are downsides with self-employed.