IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 584

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do. Do you agree or disagree ?

It is widely believed that elder citizens extend work till their strength in the body for them. I strongly agree with this view of point, as I believe that aged people can work in a good manner after retirement also.

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The ease of international travel and the spread of various kinds of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

International travelling has become affordable for most people in developed countries and the spread of mass media even reached the whole world. This phenomenen leads to a better knowledge of the way of life of other nations. But do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some people believe public libraries are not important for people, others disagree about this statement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people have different opinions as to the importannce of libraries. Some supposed that they are no longer relevant. However, some others affirmed that they still have a role to play. This essay will consider both arguments and give my perspective on the issue.

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The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The line chart illustrates the users of the gym in 5 years interval from 1980 to 2010 displayed by gender.

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Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the present day, the preservation of wildlife animals is a primary concern in any society. While some people claim that is extremely necessary to protect all wild species, others believe that just some determined ones should be protected. I tend to agree with the former because each animal has a specific function on our planet.

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Computer games are becoming very popular among children of all ages and nationalities. Parents say they are concerned because these games have little educational value and many harmful effects. Do you agree or disagree?

In each and every country, computer-based games are drastically increasing more famous for all ages of adolescents. Parents are worried about these games due to that will affect their studies and it also results in dangerous effects. I will agree with this statement because it will show more impact on their academics and also show consequences in their health. Playing more desktop games will damage the school studies of children. Nowadays, more students aged between 13-19 are showing more interest in spending their time playing video games instead of doing their studies and thus makes them not enough prepared for the exams. For example, according to the Times of India report revealed that 87% of the school students are showing great interest in playing stations. According to this, playing games will spoil the education. On another side, playing these PC games also show disadvantages in children's healths. Continuous playing of video games has shown effect that majo...

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Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at school and at home. To what extent you agree or disagree?

It is true that some television programmes have been recognised as an effective method of learning, because the audio-visual information can attract students’ attention and engage their interest.

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do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?

There is a mindset that stars are overrated,so they receive high payments for their job. In my opinion, there are more crucial occupations that should earn larger salaries than famous people. In this essay, I will explain why.

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how bee produced honey and how it release to the environment

The given diagram illustrates how bees produced honey. The general overview here is that it is a linear process consisting of seven significant stages, the process begins with the honey bee building a hive, and then finishes when the honey is ready to collect and use.

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Despite the existence of legal institutions such as courts to resolve differences between people, some people still think that it is better to settle for cases out of courts. To what extent so you agree

Some people consider that solving legal issues out of any law institutions would be better than settling with judicatory. I strongly disagree with this statement. In my opinion, resolving any problem which is related law must go through the court. However it may take longer process, it can prevent unfair compensation from the victim with any threats, and also it provides legal needs that is the core of democracy. In some case, There is sudden accident occured, some people tend to manage i...

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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

in recent years we can see that most of communities are using ebooks instead of printed statement because of technology development. ,personally I totally agree that the advantages outweigh disadvantages

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woman going into higher education in five various countries between 1980 and 2015.

The given bar chart illustrates the information about the proportion of women going into higher education in five various countries between 1980 and 2015. The general overview here is that all five countries experienced an upward trend in their numbers of female school-leavers going into higher education over the period.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Schools play a crucial role in not only educating the children but also in their development . Many opine that home schooling is better over regular school attendance due to the individualised self-made study plans, while others argue that children must go to school as it is the forum that builds the well-rounded individual. I firmly believe that institutional education has irrefutable benefits than the counterpart.

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Every country has poor people and every country 5tghas different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for poverty? What can we do to help the poor? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

"Extreme poverty anywhere is a threat to human security everywhere" . Each nation has a lot of poor people , and every nation encounters this situation in different ways . Although there are several reasons provoking poverty , many actions can be taken to cope-up with this situation .

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It is generally agreed that the amount of rubbish created by humans today is a worldwide problem. What do you think are the main causes of this situation? What measures can be used to tackle the problem?

Today's society has evolved into a remarkable waste producing machine which is a global issue. This is primarily caused by ever-increasing consumption of goods which can be addressed through encouraging sustainable consumer behaviour.

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Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe that there are other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that personal happiness depends on economic success, although others think that there are many other factors. Certainly, the economic factor can improve the quality and OF living conditions of people, thereby making a person happy, but with the help of money it is not possible to buy happiness. I believe that economics success does not directly affect on person happiness.

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children.

Some people argue that reading books are more beneficial than watching television or video games. I completely agree with the idea that children should spend most of their time on reading books.

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The number of elderly people in the world is increasing. What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend?

Nowadays, the number of elderly people in the world is increasing. It is a problem to pay attention . There are several positives and negatives of this trend.

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the British people spent time on their habit between 1971 and 2001.

The given pie charts illustrate the information about the British people spent time on their habit between 1971 and 2001. Overall, in 1971 petrol was the most spending habit of the UK people, While the number of cars was highest after passing 30 years.

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The government should ban smoking in public places , even though this would restrict some other people's freedom . Do you agree or disagree.

Some people think that smoking in public places should ban. However. It would restrict people's choices to be free to smoke wherever they like. I totally agree with this, and in this essay I'am going to talk a few reason why it should be prohibited.

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