IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 584

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion

It is often argued that the advancement in artificial intelligence would contribute positively to human life in the upcoming years. However, there is an increased concern about the human ability of adapting to the existence of and control of sophisticated robots and computers. In my opinion, I would agree with the former view because the advantages of this development outweigh its disadventages.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

In today's world, advertisements has become a significant tool for a marketing a product.While some argue that advertisment increases the awareness about the products that may improve our lives,others are of the opinion that advertisement induces people to buy unnecessary things.I strongly believe that the later is more correct ,as will be explained.

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Smoking is a habit that claims many lives and is a great drain on health services. One way to combat smoking would be to make it illegal. What are the pros and cons of such a government policy? What alternative strategies can you suggest to combat smoking?

There are a number of methods known to reduce the habit of smoking, whose effect has been detrimental, resulting in loss of lives and increased workoutput amongst medics.The government instituting laws to illegalize this act is one of such strategy. The pros and cons of such policy and alternative measures would be further expatiated on.

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All parent want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a child’s future. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion

Children are fututre of our country. It is cruicial nowadays to teach kids about skills whereas, opponenets argue that by having variety of subjects is better for youngsters future. In my opinion skills are most impotant thing where schools neads to concentrate.

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Many children have become habitual about excessively using mobile applications day and night. Why do you think this is so? What parents can do to avoid this situation decling further?

In today's world everyone, regardless of age and gender is engrossed in their own mobile phone world. All eyes are focussed on their phone screen using various applications according to their interests, this is due to availability of electronic gadgets in every home and abundance of all kinds of applications for social networking, games, reading and other variety of hobbies.

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It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important? Do you agree or disagree?

The growth of a nation is highly influenced by the richness of the wildlife resources. Hence, it is agreed by people that government has to take measures in order to constantly protect them. However a larger group of people feel government has to be mindful of bigger problems that are affecting lives and divert their focus in resolving those problems. I agree with both sides and I think equal attention has to be given to both the situations.

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Some people believe that technology has made man more social and others think that it has made him less social. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Nowday, technology play's an important role in our daily rotuine life. Advancement in network like internet and transportation helps human being to intract more. Every thing has a limitations such as technology if cross the limit it has bad effects alos. I will discuss good effect in first paragraph and in second paragraph i detail up bad effect. In last, I will give my opinion

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some people believe that the best way to deal with heavy traffic in city centres is for privately owned vehicles to be banned, others however think this is not a realistic solution

some experts agree that the right option in controlling traffic congestion in major cities is to disallow private cars while others assumed this opinion is unachievable. I disagree that private owned vehicle should be banned from city centre's hence traffic light should be set up in busy areas and road network mainly for private vehicle needs to be constructed.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions?

Children are the most prominent part of every country. The future of a nation significantly depends on the younger generation. In some places, the youth undertake labourer work from a young age whereas, in others this practice is disregarded. This essay discusses both the views followed by an opinion.

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Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol. Some people think that the best way to reduce crime rate is to ban alcohol. Do you think this is an effective measure against crime? What other solutions can you suggest?

Crime rates has been increasing exorbidantly these days, especially in rural areas. Most people say the raise is greatly because of human's addiction to alcohol and that it should be banned. Though, in one way banning alcohol helps in reducing crime rates I think there are other factors contributing to the seemingly increase the same.

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New technologies provided machines which replaced workers to do certain physical jobs and tasks. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is very much true that, advanced technologies are growing like anything in all ways. Therefore, a fair amount of people believes automation can replace manpower at the workplace and I would like to express my viewpoints on the pros and cons of new technologies in the different industries.

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Some people say that punishment is the best way to teach children to behave well, while others disagree and point out that rewarding and praising them is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although a number of individuals believed youngsters should be penalized for their wrong behaviour, others are of contrary opinion.In my opinion, I agree with the view that they should be disciplined for bad attitudes as this will help to instil good attitude into them and also make them change speedily

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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

Reading news on the internet is becoming more popular in this era. Although many people nowadays read news from the internet some believe that still, newspapers will remain the prominent news source . I completely disagree and I believe that the internet is the most important source of news. To embark on, I believe that Internet keeps updating the news In 24 hours, that's why its more important source than newspapers and people like to stick with updated news which is not possible in the newspaper. When someone reads the magazine he or she only gets the news about yesterday while on the internet news can be updated in real-time and that's why important news first broadcast or publish on the internet rather than in a tabloid. For instance, recently, I always check the Internet for important news regarding covid-19 virus because research on covid virus keep updated and tabloid takes time to publish. In short, Internet has the ability to update any news in real-time, that's why I ...

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Behaviour in schools is getting worse. Explain the causes and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solutions. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

Children's across the world are behaving strangely nowadays. Day by day students conduct in educationcal institutions are worsening. The reasons behind these areextensive exposure to violent video games and no proper parental guidance, which subsequently lead to bad behavior and disruption in the class; however, these issues could be overcome by strict measures.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, in many countries, there are lots of people, who are highly qualified but they do not have a job.

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Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that to tackle the problem of illness and diseases produced by environmental pollution and housing problems ministry should focus on. I firmly agree with this statement

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Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?

Stress has been considered an integral part of our daily routines for many decades and even some people hold that we should evaluate stress as a powerful tool which stimulates us to start new tasks and complete them rapidly. However, the possible adverse effects of stress on the human body both physiologically and psychologically ought not to be disregarded. Although it’s inevitable to escape from this feeling, people might find new solutions in order to balance and control stress, such as meditation and creating comfort zones in their life.

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We can see more disasters and violence show on TV What are its cause and what effects will they exert on the individual and the society

it is certainly true that, nowadays more disasters and violence is showing on the screen in the form of reality shows and even in entertainment events as well.

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The computers are widely used in education and some people think that teachers do not play an important role in the classroom. To what extent do you agree

In this modern technological world, everything is dependent upon computers. these are now the basic part of an individuals life. Even in education, computers play the most important role. I agree that due to this technology advancement the teachers' roles in the classroom is decreasing.

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The fact that enormous sums are paid for pieces of art is not acceptable at a time when many people around the world live in poverty. Discuss this statement and give your opinion

It looks very awkward to invest in art when some one in your neighborhood is dying with hunger. But unfortunately, people squander their funds on buying the useless pieces of art rather than helping needy people. I believe that the allocation of funds must be prioritized to alleviate poverty instead of promoting the art and culture.

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