IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 589

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Technology has changed our lives.as a result people can know whole world news through the internet and online.therefore people will prefer to use the internet rather than printed things such as newspapers, books.I strongly agree with this, this essay will be helpful my statement

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Crime movies and stories (crime fiction books) are undoubtedly (indubitably) becoming a very common phenomenon that can be observed in different places around the world. Regardless of age or the hometown, you will observe a variety of people are sharing the same interest and got attracted to read crime fiction books and attending crime related movies. In this essay I will explain some possible reasons stands behind the widespread of this habit along with my opinion about (robbery and murdering) criminal act related media.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others,however,believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In my opinion, I think I agree that parents should be the one teaching their children on how to be a good members of society. In this essay, I will try to further elaborate both side of these views, and give my reason as to why I agree on the first view.

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You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.

With respect to the letter that was delivered to me regarding the misinformation of an amount overdrawn from my account.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

There are many persons who can't control on their wishes due to greed and slowly slowly they are trapped in a net of unwanted wishes and they start to buying products unusually and by doing this on regular basis it leads to debt on people. So, in this essay we discuss about the behaviour of people as well as what are the precautions they need to take to prevent from debt problem.

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Mordern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

Advance technology has made it easy for people to download music and books from the internet for free .I believe that this is constructive development .

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In some countries celebrities complain about the way media publicise their private live. Some people say that they should accept it as part of their fame.Do you agree or disagree?

In some part of the world,the personal life of famous people is showed in public by media where some individuals believe that they ought to accept it as a part of life.I entirely disagree with this.

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These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are reasons for this and how could the problem be solved?

Teaching is a noble profession, but these days youths are not considering their career option as a teacher especially for junior high school or for primary school levels.

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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

The quantity of success is always measured by richness and other multitudes of material things. But in my opinion, accomplishment is not just about making money, furthermore, it is more about living life with a sense of fulfilment on a deeper level.

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''In recent decades, playing computer games has become a popular activity for children of all ages. Many people claim that this hobby offers few benefits beyond entertainment or relaxation and may, in fact, be harmful to a child’s development. Do you agree with this statement? ''

In the modern world nowadays, computer games has greatly become popular all over the world, especially for the young people. While many people don't think this sort of entertainment could bring any beneficials to the young generations and some thinks that violent games could be harmful to a child's development. But overall i don't agree with this statement.

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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Whether children should start their formal education at a very early age ignites a heated debate. Some people claim that they should begin at 7 years old at least while others adhere to that children have access to education at early age is more intelligent. My essay is going to discuss both sides of this issue and give my personal views.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Online orders have become quite popular these days. There is no age limit, people of all ages got used to it. The main reason for this to become popular is advertising. Some people argue that advertisements are quite heplful to learn about new things and be updated where as others argue that the advertisements are manipulative, they make people purchase unnecessary things. Personally, I agree with the first point and I support it by elaborating in the next paragraphs.

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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

There were times where children used to say, "I want to become a doctor or engineer". There were also times where fathers used to be business men, doctors or farmers and mothers mostly used to be either home makers or teachers. But these are the times where a father is a business man, doctor, investor and what not! Also a mother is a home maker, business woman, tailor etc. With changing technology has come changing generations, to be more precise updated generations. My points below would explain in detail why a single career is boring and having several careers is interesting.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

In this cutting edge era,Increase in the quantity of rubbish is one of the most significant issues that society is suffering from.The reason is also Society itself.This might be happening because of several reasons that are mainly created by people and industries.

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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

It seems to be an increasing number of the youth who committed in the crime in most country all around world. There are two main causes and a couple of solutions that could be effective reducing crime. Possibly the main cause is unemployment of the young people especially developing countries today world. For instance, in my country, it tends to be related to most crime committed people who have less income than middle-class. Another well-known cause is that education level of those people especially who has just graduated their university or college. In some developing and poor countries more than half cases of the any crime occurrence is that result from who have not acquired quality education. Turning to possible solutions, most private and NGO (Non-Government Organizations) should support to job opportunities for young people who are hunting a job actively and other unemployed person whose may be less experience and skills. Of course, if people had job, they would enjoy...

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with all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes. To what extent do you agree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant example or experience you have to support your answer.

The diagram illustrates the production methods by using the sugar cane.

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Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character trait to what extent do you agree

I don’t agree with the statement. In my point of ,view our personality is not determined by our genes but by our environment. My opinion is that you can adjustment to a certain point. Our personalities are a mix of learned behaviour and what you observe as a child. Therefore I think that you can learn how to advance your character in certain situations.

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The pictures show the changes of a park from 1980 to the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The images provided illustrate the renovations the park has undergone between 1980 and today.

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some say that because many people are living much longer , the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably . to what extent do you agree or disagree ?

According to W.H.O, Vietnam is one of the countries with the fastest ageing pace and the level of citizens above 60 is projected to be 61% of the population in 2050. This may lead to a rapid increase in demand for geriatric care services and facilities. Correspondingly, the development and implementation of digital health services could be very beneficial as it helps reduce treatment cost, avoid preventable diseases and improve quality of life of both patients and caregivers. Moreover, the global eHealth market is a prominent industry that is forecasted to grow rapidly in the coming years. Since 2018, the Vietnamese Health Minister has implemented a new policy that promotes electronic health record and the integration of technology into medical institutions in Vietnam. Consequently, there will be a growing demand for qualified health informatics professionals in the future

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ome people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is often held that friends are allowed to have opinions in our decisions in life. While some agree that they should alaways support your decision and agree with you, others believe a true friend must always object, as and when necessary.This essay will attempt to discuss both opinions, and argue in favour of the latter.

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