IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 586

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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One problem faced by almost every larger city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest? 17.07 19

The diagram illustrates information about the development at West Park Secondary School since it's been built in the year 1950.

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These days, children have easy access to home computers, tablet computers, and smartphones and many spend a large part of their free time using these devices. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, majority of children use electronic gadgets such as computers and smartphones. The technology today has become user friendly therefore, these devices can be easily used by children. However, excess usage of these results in adverse effects on them. This essay discusses the pros and cons of these followed by an opinion.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for this?

More and more students take a gap year before applying to university.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person.

The studies shows that teenagers prefer making new friends online to meeting them in person in recent days. Even I agree that it's a good and fast way to make new friends , I believe meeting up in person is also needed. I think there are several reasons behind this phonomenan.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

As we all know, life is deeply influenced by techniques. Computer, which was invented about 70 years ago, plays an important role on changing the world.

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In many countries students are engaged in some sort of paid work . Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibilities. What is your opinion?

Adolescents in several nations are involved in some type of employment. A section of society asserts that this is absolutely wrong, whereas others belive that it enhance their pratical skills. This essay will discuss both the ideologies in subsequent paragraphs with my opinion in the conclusion.

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Some people believe that smartphones are destroying social interaction today. To what extent you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, advanced technology becomes more threatening to human life from digital devices, like mobile. I agree with the statement because all the social aspects are intense.

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Some believe that people will purchase a product based on their needs and advertising is not needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Shopping has become an inextricable part of human’s lives in this day and age thanks to the modernization of the world. Even though many people believe that investing in the advertisement is a waste of capital, I totally disagree with this view.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can ben taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Technological advancement has created adverse effects in the bio-diversity of our country and has led to extinction of varied species of plants and animals. Most people think that we can be devoid of such difficult situations if humans become more responsible, however a group of people think it is impossible to curtail minds from being irresponsible. I contend with the fact that change in oneself can bring a change to the world. The following essay will discuss of how gravely plant and animal habitations are affected by us and what measures can be taken to protect them.

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In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Some people believe that owning a house instead of renting one is the most important goal of their life.

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Some people think that going to a fitness centre regularly is unnecessary. Instead, they believe that combining occasional exercise (such as going for walks) with a balanced diet is enough to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern society, most people in the world lack regular exercise to stay fit. As a consequence, it is not surprising that some experts regard going to the fitness centre regularly as the best way to maintain a healthy life. However, others consider that light exercise such as jogging, along with a balanced diet is the only way to stay healthy. Personally I support the former view. Firstly, regularly exercise, at the gym, helps to prevent diseases and enhances body shape. Fitness workouts make an individual look healthier, fitter and allow them to form the muscular shape. The fitness centre can also focus on an individual’s exercise routinely. In a gym, a person can practising on equipment that focuses workout on particular parts of the body. Professional trainers are also at the gym and can offer advice and assistance. Also, being with like- minded people can provide a good environment for exercise. That is not to say that doing regular light exercise cannot also be health...

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Một số người nói rằng cách tốt nhất để cải thiện sức khỏe cộng đồng là tăng số lượng các cơ sở thể thao. Tuy nhiên, những người khác nói rằng điều này sẽ ít ảnh hưởng đến sức khỏe cộng đồng và cần phải có các biện pháp khác. Thảo luận về cả hai quan điểm này và đưa ra ý kiến của bạn

Việc tăng số lượng các cơ sở liên quan đến thể thao có mang lại lợi ích cho sức khỏe cộng đồng hay không vẫn còn là vấn đề gây tranh cãi. Từ quan điểm của tôi, tôi sẽ tranh luận rằng có một số tác động bất lợi từ những điều này. Mặc dù một số người cho rằng việc tăng cường các cơ sở thể thao sẽ mang lại một số tác động có lợi cho sức khỏe của cư dân. Một mặt, có một lời giải thích hợp lý là tại sao sức khỏe cộng đồng có thể được nâng cao thông qua việc tăng số lượng các cơ sở thể thao. Đầu ...

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In many countries, people decide to have a child at a later age. Why is this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern era, most people plan to have a first child at a later age. This trend is common popular among the society. I believe that finacial status, happy life, fullfill the needs these are behind the reasons. I think this improvement have more disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion

It is often argued that the advancement in artificial intelligence would contribute positively to human life in the upcoming years. However, there is an increased concern about the human ability of adapting to the existence of and control of sophisticated robots and computers. In my opinion, I would agree with the former view because the advantages of this development outweigh its disadventages.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

In today's world, advertisements has become a significant tool for a marketing a product.While some argue that advertisment increases the awareness about the products that may improve our lives,others are of the opinion that advertisement induces people to buy unnecessary things.I strongly believe that the later is more correct ,as will be explained.

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Smoking is a habit that claims many lives and is a great drain on health services. One way to combat smoking would be to make it illegal. What are the pros and cons of such a government policy? What alternative strategies can you suggest to combat smoking?

There are a number of methods known to reduce the habit of smoking, whose effect has been detrimental, resulting in loss of lives and increased workoutput amongst medics.The government instituting laws to illegalize this act is one of such strategy. The pros and cons of such policy and alternative measures would be further expatiated on.

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All parent want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a child’s future. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion

Children are fututre of our country. It is cruicial nowadays to teach kids about skills whereas, opponenets argue that by having variety of subjects is better for youngsters future. In my opinion skills are most impotant thing where schools neads to concentrate.

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Many children have become habitual about excessively using mobile applications day and night. Why do you think this is so? What parents can do to avoid this situation decling further?

In today's world everyone, regardless of age and gender is engrossed in their own mobile phone world. All eyes are focussed on their phone screen using various applications according to their interests, this is due to availability of electronic gadgets in every home and abundance of all kinds of applications for social networking, games, reading and other variety of hobbies.

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It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important? Do you agree or disagree?

The growth of a nation is highly influenced by the richness of the wildlife resources. Hence, it is agreed by people that government has to take measures in order to constantly protect them. However a larger group of people feel government has to be mindful of bigger problems that are affecting lives and divert their focus in resolving those problems. I agree with both sides and I think equal attention has to be given to both the situations.

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Some people believe that technology has made man more social and others think that it has made him less social. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Nowday, technology play's an important role in our daily rotuine life. Advancement in network like internet and transportation helps human being to intract more. Every thing has a limitations such as technology if cross the limit it has bad effects alos. I will discuss good effect in first paragraph and in second paragraph i detail up bad effect. In last, I will give my opinion

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