IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 585

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many people argu that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Other think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your Opinion.

Nowadays, a powerful hierarchy exists in many education institutes. This situation is more common, especially, in undeveloped countries such as Turkey, Sierra Leone and Cambodia. One of the most distincitive implemetation which this education mindset brings is that the teachers know everything well. In other words, the students are forced to believe in teachers without asking any questions. When it is observed the developed countries such as Finland, Sweden and others, it is clear that the students are free in analysing information given by teachers. From my perspective, the reasonable method is that not only the education system provides theorical or practical information to the students, but also the students have a particular inspection capacity.

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Some people believe that teacher should be strict in order to best motivate students while others say that friendly teachers are more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

In every society teachers are considered to be a guiding light for their students in order to bring the best out of them. Achieving the goal for building better adults some believe it is better to have a softer approach towards the students, while others argue a sterner stance by the teachers is more useful to shape students as better humans.

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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. discuss both view and state your opinion?

People prefer to have both of having money and free time. However, it just a dream for everyone. Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having free time. There are pros and cons to the topic. Thus, in this paragraph I would like to states my opinion on both view.

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Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

It is sometimes argued that there are more residents want to live independently alone or with their friends instead of living with family, it can lead to some problems in social. While there might be some benefits to support that idea, I maintain that we should not support that idea. On the one hand, there are clear arguments that can freedomly live separately from their parents nowadays. One of the main reasons can be that the younger generations think that they are old enough to have an independent life which will make them can freedomly do whatever they want and may help them to overcome barriers of family's protection. For example, when living alone, they will know how to take care of themselves and living with friends also help them to learn other skills they have never known that before. Therefore, they could be more responsible with all things they do as well as the communities. On the other hand, I agree with the viewpoint that they should not live away their family for many...

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More and more people are choosing to eat healthy food and exercise regularly? Why? What can we do to encourage this?

It is generally believed that eating healthy foodstuff and physical activities are gaining more concern among the public. The essay will present the possible causes of this issue as well as the appropriate remedies to support it.

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Many people disagree with a school policy which forces children to learn new language what extent do you agree or disagree?

Schools nowadays tend to basically lecturer its students a second language. Numerous people do not agree with this policy, as they believe it is a forcing approach. This essay, hence, will argue why learning a new language in institutions is extremely important for the pupils of this century.

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Some people argue that working in a large company is important, others however give preference to work in a small company.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Certain people say that working in a large company is crucial. Others, however, give preference to working in a small company.

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Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animal all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it. Others think there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

We must accept that human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animals all over the world. However, some people think that it is too late to do something about it, while, the others think there is still time to take effective action. This topic sheds light on the people's understanding on the human's impact on the nature and how rapidily we are depleting the non-renewable resources of this planet, which will have greater effect on our future generation. I will discuss below my opinion on both the sides of this topic:

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Some people think that public transport should be free, especially in big cities. Do you think free public transportation will have more advantages or disadvantages?

Nowadays public transport became one of the most popular transportation in the world. However, some people think that fare for transport has to be accessible in urban areas.This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of free society transport and provide a logical conclusion.

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As most people spend a major part of their life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

Job satisfaction is an integral part of personal freedom since several individuals spend their particular time of whole life at work. Hence, almost All employers expect to satisfy with their job in my opinion good communication with colleagues and salary growth lead to job satisfaction.

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Nowadays on-line shopping has become more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent decades, by developing online shopping patterns, folk have been shopping online more and more. Also, the population tends to purchase goods without going outside. In this essay, both sides whether the improvement of online shopping are advantages or disadvantages.

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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time? To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The language barrier is a normal obstacle when we learn a new language. Although nowadays, we use computers to get what foreign words meant immediately, I strongly disagree to abandon learning a foreign language because the translater has 2 main flaws which are perfection in context and its availability.

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The scientist believe that computer will become intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The computer will be more knowledgeable compared to the human brain according to the researchers. A number of individuals see it as a welcoming event while the rest are of opinion that it is adverse development.However, Artificial intelligence saves time and effort in managing and at times achieving the unbelievable tasks, though it poses threat to humanity if become uncontrolled. Going to shed light on both sides of the issue and think it is critical for our existence that we remain, masters of a gadget.

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Societies that don’t respect and honour their women can never make progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Women play a remarkable role in society. In my point of view, advocating feminism can improve a civilization.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. What might be the cases? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

the chart above explaining about the export earnings between 2015 and 2016 and the percentage of each category compared with every year. Overall we can see that from 2015 to 2016 there had been a gradual increase.

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Some people think that young people are suitable for learning foreign languages. Some people think adults are more suitable. Discuss both and give your opinion.

A number of people are of opinion that young minds are the best suit for aspiring foreign language while the others are thinking adults will make it a good choice. The younger generation has a growing and flexible brain to acquire new skills. On the other hand, grown-up citizens have the maturity and experience in gaining knowledge.Will elaborate further on the topic in the forthcoming paragraphs, but I think it should be an individualized decision considering the strengths and weaknesses of the candidate.

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‘The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

In our modern era some individuals reckon that the course books will never be replaced by the internet web in schools. I completely disagree with this statement and I think that the internet will replace traditional books in near future.

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Due to the influence of worldwide media such as television and computers, the gap between cultures is decreasing. The introduction of this global culture is a great benefit to the world. To what extent do you agree with this viewpoint?

The student is considered as a powerful factor contributing to our potential future. Therefore, what school should teach them is being controversial. Some argue that History must be seen as the most important subject, while some believe that Science and Technology are the two subjects that should be focused on. Personally, I would say that these subjects are equally important in the school curriculum.

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“Subjects such as drama and music are just as important as maths and languages.” Do you agree?

Some people assume learning topics in art including drama genre or playing a music or knowing how to be written a song must consider in academy schedule besides of maths and languages have been becoming an unseperated part of timetable for young learners,in contrast with this statement,It has been emphasized on maths and languages are sciences which must be investd by the educational institution for setting the study plan. Any way,I agree with previous thesis and demonstrate the importance both by expressing many evidences in my experiences throughout my life .I am going to clarify my opinion in following argument.

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Nowadays there is an increase in people with an unhealthy diet and not doing enough physical exercises. What do you think might be the reason? What can be done to encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle?

In this present world, there has been growing the number of people with harmul eating habits and the numbers of hours that they are active in physical aspect,However, It has been known many factors involving in this process,such as choosing poor nutritional foods for each meal ,in also ,the sedentary job has been increasing in this period of time.

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