IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 67

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively.

Financial education must be taught in schools as one of the important subjects, so that the students may manage their currency more effectively. I agree with this statement because it is one of the more important subjects and it helps the students to prepare for adulthood and mature life.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The early education of children is a crucial aspect for parents. Some people use punishment to teach their children about behavior. In my view, I agree that punishment can assist children in understanding what is appropriate or inappropriate.

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Some people think that the most important function of music is to help people reduce stress.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

it is true that computers have become an essential tool for teachers and students in all areas of education. However, while computers are extremely useful, i do not agree with the idea that thye could soon replace teachers completely.

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Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people want to work at a large company rather than a small company. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement, and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of view.

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These days, many people prefer online shopping to conventional shopping. Do the advantages of online shopping outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's digital age, more and more people favour shopping online to traditional shopping. Some are choosing to shop online instead of traditional shopping. This author believes that the benefits of convenience and wide selection outweigh the drawbacks of shipping delays.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert and atlantic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

These days places like Sahara desert and Atlantic where conditions are harsh are becoming tourist attraction. Although visiting such places is dangerous and risky due to harsh environmental conditions but there is a strong need to explore these areas because people are living there and we should explore multi-cultural environment.

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Some feel government should invest in preserving minority language; while, others feel this is not good use of resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The line graph illustrates the levels of international trading of Australia to 4 countries Japan, the US, China and India over the period from 1990 to 2012.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Today, a majority of people have difficulties to get adequate sleep. This action might have bad consequences. In continue this essay intends to express the side effects of unappropiate sleep among some possible solutions that, can be helpful for the overcoming this problems.

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It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Due to the rapid growth of technology, the world has come a long way thus the lifestyle of people has changed a lot in the past few years . It is irrefutable that travelling plays a significant role in our lives . Travelling plays a part and parcel role in our lives. Travelling not only help the nation's economy but also help to connect with the beauty of nature , connect with the people , connect with the culture and traditions and many more . One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people who believe travelling has a great influence on human society as they help to explore as well as travelling helps the mind development . There is a range of conflicting arguments related to the assertion but somewhere i vehemently agreed with the statement . In the succeeding monograph , I intend to delve into the matter as well as proffer examples to justify my notion .

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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made

The diagram illustrates the production process of Ketchup.

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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trends? DO the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to the developments of convenient cuisines , individuals have contributed its getting popularity by consuming them in their daily life as supporter to keep up with the sharply increasing modern nutrition’ styles.It has wrong due to the fact that it provide users to save their resources such as time management and financial. In this essay I will discuss advantages sides of the situation.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education in the present has a diversity and people can choose to learn some groups of parents want to fix of minds of children to study. Everyone has a thinking about that in the school has academic subjects only. while it can make a good way for children. In this essay, I strongly disagree and I extend the reason in the below paragraph.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledgement or experience.

In this era where advertising is ubiquitous, some people believe that advertising can be very successful in persuading people in shopping, but others believe that advertising is too universal that we don’t need to take notes of it. Form my perspective, there is some truth to both views.

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the most important aim of the science should be to improve peoples lives.to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Most of the people say that the crucial objective of science is to enhance public's lives. I totally agree with this statement as the science helps to improve the quality of life as well as the survival of the humans.

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People face a lot of difficulty in giving a speech or presentation in public. If the children are being taught in schools, about how to give speech in public, would it be better. How important is it to learn how to speak in public? Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give relevant examples

The importance of speech or presentation in public which was always usefull and has now become a essential part for peolpe who are seeking career development. In this essay will further elaborate how important and how to speak in public, the suggetions will lead to the logical conclusion.

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These days we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television and this is having a negative impact on children's beahaviour.do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are huge number of violence can see on television and these kind of news are giving a bad influence to children and to the whole society as well. I strongly believe that to build up valuable society, yong genaratins should be inspired from good examples and better behaviour.

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Many people believe that schools should teach students good behavior as well as other subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Human believe while schools educate student well behavior an other side thought how can develop in society really most of the men thought school be a place that children learned how can behavior that they was a perfect everywhere and I agree with issue .schools are the important for our child because the teach to them and bring up them ,we can make their future and make country future by them.

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The percentage of overweight children has increased rapidly in the recent years in several countries. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

Over the few years, the number of the overweight children has increased dramatically. The main reason is that the children are having too much unheathly food. Some families prefer to buy take away food instead of cooking proper food for the kids. It is convenient for them to buy the fast food like pizza, hamburgers, french fries with soft drinks or bubble tea. Those food and drinks are very high in carbonhydrates, fat and sugar. Also, Children loves having different kinds of snacks whenever they want. Sweets, chococlate, photo chips and ice-cream are very popular for the children. The more snacks they have, the more fat they gain. Some tranditional parents may think that the children should eat more and without control, so the children can grow faster .

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Internet users as percentage of population between 1999 and 2009 in 3 countries

The line graph compares the proportions of people who use the internet in 3 countries including the USA, Canada and Mexico over the 10-year period from 1999 to 2009.

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In the countries goverments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of goverment money?

Nowadays, numerous goverments around the world have been allocating significant resources rowards enhancing internet access for their citizens. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this trend and evaluate whelther such investments represrnt the most appropriate use of government funds.

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