IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 67

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The two floor plans show the renovation of AAA Accountancy's main office. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given floor plans illustrate how AAA Accountancy’s primary office changed after the renovation.

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some people belive that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. otheres, however, argue that the circumstances of an indivudual crime and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when diciding on the bunishment. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The topic of whether each type of crime should be punished equally or individual circumstances should be considered is definitely a controversial one. This essay may examine both views, and I personally believe that punishment should be brought out under discreet consideration.

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Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people support spending money on the motorways and street tracks. I disagree this problem because it is an unusual condition for me. I prefer local roads will smoothly.

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/ She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email, describe where you lived when you were a student at the university. Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation. Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation.

I hope you are doing well. I am delighted to know that you are going to pursue your higher education in the university where I have studied. I am writing this letter to provide some information about finding a place for your accommodation.

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Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In contemporary humans are becoming times which new helpfulnees technology for own. In family, parents when older want more help from children for their health, communicate and lifefulness. therefore more parents wants to know as this situation children must be stay with own or no?

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

Over the last few years, the number of people who prefer to speak English has increased significantly. Although there are several advantages to speaking English, it can be some disadvantages as well. In this essay, I will try to discuss both positive and negative sides.

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Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved

Statistics showed that there will be a significant rise in population of cities over the next decades. It is expected that the city will face problems such as, traffic congestion which will result in long time needed to reach to desired destination and transportion delays. This essay will look us through the problems that are caused due to overpopulation and the proper solution that can be implemented.

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Many people in cities today live in high-rise apartment blocks. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of living? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Over the last few years, the number of people who prefer yo some people in towns live in high rise apartment buildings has increased significantly. Although there are several advantages of that some individuals in towns life. However, it can have some disadvantages as well. In this essay, I will try to discuss both positive and negative sides of this and draw a conclusion.

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In many countries today, crime TV shows are becoming more popular/ Why do you think they are popular? What is ypur opinion of these shows?

In many nations, popularity of the crime shows becoming tremendous.This is because of the preference of the population majority enjoy detective genres.However, I do believe that these programs exceed the number of crimes in society.

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Shopping habits depend more on your age group than anything else. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this essay, we are going to discuss about the relation between shopping habits of people based on their age groups. How they are associated? Is there any dependency between both?

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Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

There has been sparked debate about offended people and how they keep committing further crimes even after getting the penalty. In this essay, I'm going to elaborate on the reasons for such acts as well as explain the solutions.

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Many people believe that watching a live performance is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One school of thought instead of watching the event on television, watching a live performance is more enjoyable. The writer of this essay strongly agrees with this notion as not only atmosphere and immersion but also supporting artists and athletes.

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Governments and big companies should work together to reverse environmental damage, rather than making individuals responsible for that. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In nowdayes, the goverement most realated work with Buisness company as one person with seam way it is more panifit to work and thinking and a get the cuses between them. In this part I going to my opinon and sopport one.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals aroud the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe that actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and present an opinion.

In the contemporary era, environment pollution is a serious problem caused by human being. It is widely believed that this phenomenon occurs constantly and never changes while, there is another opinion insting that it can be changed with appropriate behaviours of the governments and individuals. This essay will discuss both perspectives and present an opinion.

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Students should payfull cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

It is argued that the learners ought to spend their money on studying in the futher education because it just profits for themselves not entirely the society. From this writer perspective, i totally disagree with this statement.

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Students should pay full costfor their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the educational cilvilization, there are some assets for universal students who purchase a certain cost on studying fields with the positive impact on individuals than public. From my perspective, I totally concede with that perception and these following paragraph will discuss more about it.

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Many people today buy ready-made food rather than spending time cooking. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern day, many individuals prefer buying convenience food to cooking by themselves. Althought there are some arguments about the advantages and disadvantages about buying prepared food, at the end of the day, the benefits of this development outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.

In conclusion, despite the fact that both approaches have some legitimacy, it appears that to contribute to worldwide improvement, our human society must advance its information and produce modern inquiry enterprises. Hence, we must reliably inquire about vegetation and fauna.

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Many cities have installed cameras in public places in order to reduce crime. However, some people think that those cameras restrict our privacy. Do you think the advantages of this system outweigh the disadvantages?

Without any doubt, public cameras are becoming ubiquitous as well as playing a vital role to deter crimes of any kind. Certain individuals hold the idea that they permeate their private lives. However, from my perspective, this small technology ought to be everywhere in order to their benefits.

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Write a 250-word essay for the topic: Some people think that advertisements aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that advertisements can influence the children in many ways. Although some

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