IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 67

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that all the lawbreakers should be taken into the prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives. (for example, doing some work or learning some skills in the community). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

NOWADAYS, SOME believe that all lawbreakers should go straight to prison ,while others thinks that they should be punished in other ways. This essay will discuss both sides off tha matter and what are the pest decision.

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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, despite the developments made in agriculture, many individuals worldwide have started to become hungry, due to such factors contributing to the formation of this issue. Especially unequal distribution of goods, low-income people could not have no chance to afford. Thus, in order to cope with this problem, governments should take a step and regulate new legislation to minimize this worldwide concern.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.b

There is no denying the fact that TV or radio advertising is crucial while it is a commonly held belief that makes us buy things there is also an argument that is something we watch every day in our lives.

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Some people argue that competitive sports are good for bringing together people from different cultures. Others argue that these sports can cause problems and increase conflicts between nations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, fans like ineternational and modern sports. People believe that sports can bring different cultures together, while some people argues that it is making conflicts between nations. In my opinion, sports can build friendship between two countries.

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Nowadays, the crime rate is increasing, especially among teenagers. What are the reasons behind it? How can we resolve this trend? What punishment method should be used, in your opinion?

In today`s era, crime rate is increasing significantly among youngers. Teenagers are doing crime because of influnce of crime movies and lack of their parents attention on them. To sove this problem, police has to stop them doing certain activities, and they can put them behind the bars for teach them lesson.

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Some people think that it’s a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it’s important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

No one can deny that some people believe that mingle with Co-work. While others prefer to think that is important to do these. It is important to admit that both views have their own benefits. In this essay I will discuss the possible reasons that support each view, and what benefits they bring to the society

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Some countries have free health services. However, some people feel that those who live unhealthy lifestyles should not receive free healthcare. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

A few of countries have health services for free. On the other hand, people belive that the people who do not have healthy life style should not receive free healthcare. In this essay, I will discuss the view and I will write my perspective at the end.

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Some people believe that to protect local people, tourism should be banned in some areas, while others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people consider that tourism can endangered local traditions and cultures, so tourist trips to those areas should be stopped and tourism should be restricted in certain regions. However, others argue that this step will have no consequences. This essay will discuss both views before presenting my own opinion.

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Some countries are building new roads and facilities to make remote culture heritage sites such as archaeological ruins in the Jungle accessible to a great number of tourist. Is this a positive or negative development?. give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge.

An increasing number of countries are choosing to increase tourism by constructing role and other facilities that increase access to famous cultural heritage sites. In my opinion, this is a negative development because it can damage the environment and site either by accident or on purpose.

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well, here i want to write my oppinion about these challenges that will face with my country.

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In many countries, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this? How should they be punished?

Children and teenagers around the world are commiting more and more crimes in the modern day and ages. This essay will evaluate the reason why this problem existed and give some ways to punish these children.

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree?

With the ongoing advancements of globalism, it has been controversy that who is taking care of the development of poor nations, because of the power and equity has became out of balance between poor and rich countries. In this essay, I would argued that it is responsibility of rich country to help growth countries.

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Nowadays, many people choose to work remotely from home instead of commuting to the office every day. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working from home?

Nowadays, a lot of people prefer to work from home, I think online working has both saides of advantages and disadvantahes this essay will explain both sides.

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Green Fitness Some people believe that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams succeed in sports. Others think that success in sports depends on mental attitudes.Discuss bith the views and give your opinions

_who wants____ to get fit - and help the environment? Most of us know we 2__ must help ___ the environment more.

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Some people think it is more important to provide parks and sports facilities than to provide shopping centers in these new town for people to spend their free time. To what extent doo you agree or disagree?

At present, people have had divergent opinion related to utilize a free time where some opine that parks including sport contres should be included in the new development; however, others believe that shopping complex have to be added. While spending a leisure time towards going into new shops could enhance general knowledge of new brands, I would argue that having a tour on playround and garden will be a way more potent.

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Some people say that it is beneficial for young people to visit different countries of the world, others oppose. Do you agree or disagree? Provide reasons and support them with your own examples.

There is no denying the fact that travelling is important for various ages. While it is a commonly held belief that a lot of benefits boys and girls gain from going to many countries, there is also an argument opposing it . In my opinion, I consider that exploring the world is crucial for them.

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The world of work is changing rapidly and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change, and suggest ways of preparing people for the world of work in the future. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The world of work never stop moving since it began, that what some people called "life habit". Therefore, various changes happened depending on this rapid pace, such as fired, retired, promoted or even sufferd of unemployment. In this essay, I will discuss the possible main causes for the rapid change and give proper suggestions to those who preparing for joining and participationg in the work world.

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the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The map depicts the southwest airport now and how it will change after its renovation in next year. Overall, new facilities and options will be added including an ATM, a bag drop, a car hire, a shop and a sky train. The gates will increase and departures and arrivals will remain in their original locations.

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People doing dangerous sports activities like scuba diving and bungie jumping, they should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people. Do you agree or disagree?

Some People Think that rescue workers shouldn't risk their lives to the people who's doing dnagerous sport like bungie jumping and scuba diving and they should hold the countability for their actions. I fully agree ,Because these people are doing it while knowing there's a possibility that they might hurt themselfs while doing , Moreover they know they are putting others lives at danger and there's a chance that the rescuer might get hurt or even die at the worst case scenario.

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In many countries, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so there is logic that men and women should share the household tasks equally. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

The importance of women today are often as educated and skilled as men. This means they can contribute equally to both work and home, which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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