IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 63

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Advanced technology has brought many beneficial changes to the world. However, some old people today struggle with the use of technologies such as mobile phones and the Internet. How can the elderly benefit from using advanced technologies? How can the elderly be encouraged to use consumer electronics more often?

There is an ever-increasing use of technology such as smartphones, and the net which introduced some crucial changes globally. However, senior citizens find difficulties in using them. It is discussed that the old can make use of them to monitor their health and keep in touch with relationships whilst their awareness about technology is raised to encourage them to use smart electronic devices.

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Many feel that students today should learn Pratical skills at school such as car maintenance and managing a bank account. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, most of the kids need to have a knowledge to maintenance and take care their finances. This essay will show you that how important and needed for both of this skills in you life.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend.

In recent years, the idea of shortening the working day to provide employees with a longer weekend has gained significant attention. I believe reducing work-week enhances the ability of employees, boosting overall productivity and work-life balance, and a decrease in health risks associated with stress and pressure.

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In Britain, when someone gets old, they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the goverment has t pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the gorvernment or the family? Give the reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In the present days, they are more eldely people then before. As my skill and knowledge it need to depand on the situation to get grand from the gorvernment to subsities for the nurseing home. Firtsly, if they from really whealty family it should pay for their own or get half of the pay from goverment, it will depand of they fund. Secondly, for sure that it eligable for the eldely people that cannot even substant their normal life activities or food. It is depands on the situation that they need the most for the old people.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose higher taxes on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the contemporary society, whereas more people feel that fast food is a delicious meal. In recent years, obesity and diet-related diseases have become major public health concerns worldwide.

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The plans show proposed changes to a university art gallery. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Some people think a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children whoc are taught to cooperate rather than compete become useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

One of the widely discusses issues nowadays is that yound people have abilities competition. It is undeniable an essentail part of life, but there is no absolute agreement on a sense of competition. Others consider that cooperate is better than competiton. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the former.

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Some people think that illegal Internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is true that misic have been becoming a necessary part of society with time progressing, whereas some people look upon downloading songs in illegal way as a serious issue, others refer to it as something acceptable. As for my perspective, I am in favour of the former, and the reasons will be elaborated on thoroughly as follows.

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Today some people can work from home using modern technology. Some say this only benefits workers, but not employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that working from home with the aid of technology favours employees, whereas it doesn't provide any benefits to the employer. In my opinion both the employer and employee is benefiting through work from home and I completely disagree with statement.

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Homework has always been a point of contention for many people. Many believe that schools should do away with homework altogether, while others feel that students need it. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Homework is one important task in school, but some people think that it is difficult for students to do. This opinion contrast might confuse students. In this essay, I am going to discuss both side of people thinking.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that it is better to give longer custodial sentences to avoid more crimes, while others think that better ways can be found to solve this problem. This essay will discuss both perspectives and show that in my view of point making stronger social protection will reduce the number of crimes.

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Some peoplew believe that the best way to reduce crime is to apply stronger punishments. Other think that it would be harmful and there are much more efficient ways to do that. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, Criminal issues is growing up. that's why is that population is being massive. some punisments ae not enough pepole to step back. In my opinion, these two ways have right side because on the one way, some laws do not reduce crime because it is not disincentive, on the other way is that life is not in balance for living.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interestedin finding out about the history of the house or the building they live in. What are the reason for this? How can people research this?

History is the foundation of each building as a house or as a country , because , landing in a place needs emotional connection in related identical issues to care more about the plave of living , however , in technical matter it could be so irrelevant ,but , it well understood in approaching time residents need more values and purposes to tackle exsistential tentions in human life .

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Some people believe that professional like doctors and engineers , should be required to work in the country where they training .Other believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish . discuss both side and give your opinion .

Professional class of each country is an importatnt part of each country to contribute in building and shaping a community in well-direction .Training medical doctor or engineers has been burn a huge amount of time and resources to build them effective individuals ,so , iimagitration of professional class of each country must has done based on specific rules and protocols that their immagiration will bring adequate achievement for the origin country and don not abuse of the destination as well .

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IIt is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In todays society, Children are more keen to take there own decisions themselves however they struggle to distinct between right or wrong. some say punishing them will help them in learning what is right whereas others think the opposite.

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Many people believe that countries should produce food for the whole population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A lot of people see that countries should produce more food for the whole population and import less food as possible.

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These days,there are many kinds of fast food restaurants that may be found everywhere.Many people patronize fast food restaurants.However,others are becoming concerned of this eating habit and suggest that people should eat healthier foods.What problems maybarise from unhealthy eating habits?Discuss and give solutions.

A lot of unhealthy restaurants can be found everywhere many people like fast food while other disagree and need people to eat healthy food . This essay will discuss both views and get a solution.

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In some contries, more and more people are becoming interestd in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Now a days many individuals are willing to find knowladge about the history of the place where they spend thier time. people are egar to know more about the land where they live. This eassy discuss the reasons for doing this and how social media and internet is helping indiviuals to collecte these information.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The use of animals in experiments is a controversial topic. Some people believe that animal testing is wrong and should be banned, while others think that it is necessary for scientific progress. I disagree to the statement. Both wievs have reasons and it is important to consider both sides.

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

It is sometimes argued that whether pre-school experience or adolescent time plays a more pivotal role in students' future life. I firmly believe that both these experiences are irreplaceable.

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