IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 807

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is realistically true that, money can't buy you time, peaceful, pleasant, and loving life, but time can bring you all of the things. Every second is the most precious and prime thing to be considered in all and every aspect of an individual's activity. Nowadays, people are mostly under some illusion that according to the job-wise, which is a happier life; a comfortable living free from all of the stress and worries, or having a fame, luxurious car, wealth, huge house and a prosperous career.

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some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

A number of environmentalists and specialists are arguing on major environmental calamities. Some claim that extinction of animal species the major problem of this century, while others believe that there are more problems to be concerned of. I reckon that losing animals is considered a crisis that will lead us all to demise, however the world must pay heed to other environmental crises. Advocates of the first opinion believe that the unbalance in ecosystem resulting from death of a vast numbers of animals will have lamentable consequences. With the vanishing of a kind of species, the proportions of others will be changed. For instance, if a type of lions disappeared, its prey namely zebras will rise in number, resulting in overeating of grass. This will have drastic effects on the balance of nature, eventually affecting us negatively in different ways. On the other hand, some scientists think that there are more important problems like global warming. Global w...

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to the closing of all shops in town and cities. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, online chain becomes a most popular, entertainment and rapid method in every countries. In my opinion, I agreed because it has more opportunities to select items which do I need to buy in one place with lots of collection.

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Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays,all over the world people share the same fashions,advertisting,brands,eating habits and TV channels.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this?

People from all around the world become closer and closer as they share their countries own fashions, advertisement, brands, habits and TV shows. It could be said that by doing this people are forgetting their origins and cultures. However, this will make people from different cultures able to understand each other more which is more beneficial to everyone from different communities. By following trends different from their countries, these actions can make people neglect their own cultures. The reason is that people often prefer things that are more popular or modern, and they might even criticize their own traditions for being under-developed. For example, because newer generations don’t know their own cultures, schools and teachers have to teach them their own country’s history and emphasize how students should not forget about their origins, cultures and traditions. Following this reason, there will be those who judge and criticize their own country’s way ...

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The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree?

The environmental problems are so important issue today. From the past, many countries had conferences to discuss it, but it’s been hard to contract an agreement for every country because they need to protect their domestic industry. Therefore, some measures should be taken in micro level and also macro level. In my opinion, government and large organizations must take the leadership to these problems.

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In some area of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

Curfew is imposed in some areas of the US to maintain law-and-order and free movement of teenagers at night time is not allowed unless an adult is accompanying them. This essay will examine why younsters should not come out of their homes alone during curfew hours at night?

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An increasing number of people are using the internet to meet new people and socialize. Some people think this has brought people closer together. Do you agree or disagree?

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others agree that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs including food and research. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons and relevant examples.

The debate over animals should not be exploited by people and they should have the same rights as humans is all over the world.People are divided into two groups, the first party support that animals shouldn't be used to satisfy human needs and on the other hand others believe that animals should employed to achieve their needs.In my opinion, animals are very important source of food and valuable source for researchs.

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As well as making money, businesses also have a responsibilty towards society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While business help people to earn a handful of money other than any employment, it's responsibility towards the society is never coming down. I believe, more richer a person is, bigger the responsibility one has. And this essay shall discuss that in detail with relevant examples.

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Why individual differences is a necessity in this era

If individual differences did not exist, every human mannerism would have been built, designed and behaved in the same possible way. According to the study, every individual is has with different perceptions, mindset, sex, personality traits , with the passage of time, when an individual grows up with his / her traits, perceptions, and mindset, nourishes by his / her culture, society, and his / her social economic class. That is how an individual’s personality is being built and makes him/ her different from any other individual. For instance, a person who lives in an urban area will have a different cultural lens and way of perceiving things than a person who lives in rural areas. Moreover, from the phycoligical point of view, there are 4 kind of major differences among the individual that classifies their physical, mental, behavioral perspectives. The following are •Intelligence ( I.Q and E.Q) •Attitudes •Differences in achievement •Differences on account of sex Intelligen...

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Learning English at schools is often seen as more important than local languages. If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it more important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure survival of local languages and if so, how?

It is certainly true that english language has become more popular as comapred to the local languages in schools.In my opinoin,definately , english plays a imperative role to be a successful and mandatory for everyone to learn it, but not at the cost of local langauge. Many steps can be taken by indiviual and government to save it.

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Some people believe that it is better to have the same job throughout their life while others think that people should change their job after some period of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Many individuals often change their working place which has a number of reliable arguments. clearly, the reasons for this are job satisfaction, expected monthly salary, a field of interest, working environment and many more. certain community assert that it is more convenient to have a constant paid position for a whole life. However, others oppose this statement that employee should gradually switch working environment within a period of time. this essay will discuss why diversification in long-term is necessary for the overall growth of organisation and workman in the below following paragraph

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It is important that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays practice of egalitarian school is become a common place. Démocratisation of civilized world leads to creation of mixed society, which affects primary education system as well. Children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. It has wide-range positive and negative effect on their future.

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In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one’s own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In certain areas of the world, it becomes a trend to have a pedigree analysis of one’s own family because people want to be aware of their medical history due to growing disease rate nowadays. In my opinion, it is a positive approach as it would help them to identify suspected inherited syndromes.

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Learning depends not upon the personality or the methodology of teacher, but rather on student's attitude on his or her own learning. Do you agree with this statement?

Most people argue that gaining knowledge relies on the student's behavior and not on the pedagogue’s nature or the way of teaching. In my opinion, I think it depends equally on both the instructor and the pupil because if either one the two does not perform their duties properly then grasping knowledge gets affected.

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Nowadays children are consuming too many suger based drinks . What are the reasons and solutions of the problem

The sugar based drinks that are being consumed by children are too much these days. The prime reason for this is parents these days are very lineant and dont restrict thier children from having such liquids becasue not many of them are aware of the negative impact it can have on them.

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It is sometimes thought that people who travel outside of their own country are more tolerant and understanding of others. To what extent do you agree?

It is often argued that people who spent time out of their nation become more flexible in their approach and accept other's viewpoint. I completely agree to the aforesaid statement as travelling exposes them to difficult situations wherein they question their own beliefs and introduces them to new set of thinking. When people go outside they often find themselves in a vulnerable state, as how things or systems work, vary from country to country. They experince that things do not work out in a way as it works backhome. This enlightens them that there are different approaches to work on the situation and in turn they become more considerate to others believes. For example, Many students who go outside for study are preplexed by the way other students approach the difficult concepts in study and imbibe others approach to make it easier to understand the lessons. Moreover, as people travel they come across individuals of different nationalities who have a differe...

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Global warming is increasing day by day. What are the causes of global warming and what can be done to eradicate this global problem.

Globalization is the topic many are currently debating about. Simply putting, Globalization is the process of making a world a small village. It affects all individual around the world. It has both positive and negative aspects while considering the effects on the Earth and Human beings. Results of it has made some people worried about the future and while others are confident that we are on right path to the bright future of the Earth. Globalization itself is not a one single aspect that can be controlled by individuals or governments. It is the process of people and countries from around the world interacting and integrating with each other. It affects the different countries differently, which can depend on level of population, value of currency, development of the country and literacy of the country.

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3]. Describe an experience you had as a member of a team - What it was? - Who were the members of the team? - What role did you play in this team? - And explain how you achieved your goal?

- I am working as a site coordinator at Tepperman’s, basically a retail company and my department called the e-commerce department. - There are 4 people in our group my supervisor Mario, manager Isabel, director Kelly and myself. - I am burning the candle from both ends to develop my career in this field since I got hired. However, I got the chance to prove myself as an extraordinary person, few months ago. - We had opened our new store in Ancaster, Ontario, Aug 2019. To promote this store on our website we had been given a project called “Ancaster store”. - Our e-commerce team was very dedicated to this project as we were only 4 people who manages the user experience of the website. - My job in the project was about to create a website banner with promotions of the store and discounts given at a time of opening. - Isabel, the manager gave me a deadline of 1 month to create promotional prices for the furniture, electronics, and mattresses. - I also had to manage a contest cal...

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Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today , children become commercial target of many advertisers and many people believe that activity of advertisers should be banned because it harm children . Personally , I agree with this idea due to some reasons .

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