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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

With the advancements of technology, schools from many places have to face many challenges and most difficult one would be changing manners of the students. There are many reasons behind this but the family problems affecting the children's behaviour is the common one. This can be overcome by not giving pressure to them but explaining the consequences of the bad behaviours.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. summrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two plans captured the differences that will be made in an airport which is in the southwest of a country and the developments will occur next year.

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In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A lot number of countries governed that citizens must spend their own money for their personal healthcare. Many people argue that medical needs should be considered as a free public service provided by the government. I completely agree that the necessity of health matters is part of human rights and every government should establish a policy that regulate a free healthcare service in many forms such as national insurance and creating a mass development in regional hospital.

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Some people ague that children should be forced to wear a school uniform. To what extent do you agree?

Some rules in school like wearing the same clothes are debatable. Many people consider that this rule is a kind of military expression as it has similar concerns. Although people may worried about it, I would suggest that students should have the same dress due to safety reasons and also economic benefits.

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Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people think it is necessary, but others are of the opinion that it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days, some people believe that bosses of large companies earn more money than ordinary employees, which is essential. However, others consider it an injustice.

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Some people think directors in big companies should get paid a lot, while others think that directors' high salaries are not fair. In this essay will be discussed both these sides and opinion

Directors must get much amount of salary to make crucial decisions that directly impact the success of the company. For example, many managers work long hours, deal with complicated stuff, and face though challenges. So, high salaries are needed to attract talented directors and motivate them to do their best.

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Food travels thousands of miles from farmers to consumers. Some people think that it would be better for our environment and economy if people consumed locally produced foods. To what extent do the advantages of this would outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, progresses in transportation have diminished the impacts of physical barriers, which opens the accessibility to broader resources. This change also impacted on food travels. While foods are being transport in long distances, some argue that this change is lack of environmental and economical considerations. In my point of view, I agree with the negative impacts on our surroundings, but I also believe that it posses certain advantages.

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: Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However,other people think that zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often considered by some menageries are inhuman and should be banned by governments while there are people who disagree with this and think zoos are helpful to protect endangered species. While some support their opinion with reasonable arguments like numerous animals suffer in cramped cages and are not looked after correctly , others consider the animal collection a safe place for breeding and important to increase public knowledge and affection for environment and I rely on their arguments. This essay will discuss two side views.

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In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?

The world of professional sports includes a constant pressure to improve performance that affects many athletes. Many professionals using banned supplements to obtain better results. To solve this issue it is necessary to establish measures such as shift in culture to ackonegle mental health and more restrictive laws on illegal substances.

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Conducting sports events such as Olympics or World cup encourage people to live healthy. While some people indicate that there are various other methods to remain healthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The one method encouraging individuals to live healthy is helding sports parties such as Olympics or World cup, however, some argue that there are other ways to stay healthy. I personally claim that the power of sports events outweighs that of other ways to leads people to play sports and have good health.

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Recent human advancements resulted many changes in business and commerce worldwide. Nowadays, multinationals have been increasing its presence globally including countries in development as potential markets. This progress has advantages for the progress of communities as benefit countries' economy and create new jobs, but there are also some disavantages because it can not only negatively impact small business but also creates economical dependence on big companies.

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In some countries, the number of people who visits art gallery is declining. What are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem?

In number of nations, museums are losing its importance. The main causes of this are the expensive tickets and a lack of preventive actions, and some suggest to overcome these issues are for institutions to reduce its prices and for governments to extend the financial aid.

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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

An increasing number of married couples around the world choosing to remain childless. The main benefits of not having a child for couples are that they can focus on their careers and have more time for themselves. The main drawbacks are that they could not fit into their peers’ group and have no one to look after them when they get old.

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Ensuring that regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lesson as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

Schools should give more importance for academics and not spend their time on teaching sports activities, and it is the responsibility of their parents to ensure that their children are regularly involved in physical activities. In this essay, I totally agree with this statement.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some university students opt to mainly focus on studying for a qualification, while others prefer to discover various subjects apart from their main subjects. Personally, I tend to learn about different subjects besides major subjects.

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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff?

In contemporary workplaces, the issue of whether companies should mandate uniforms for their employees is a subject of debate. While some argue that uniforms enhance corporate identity and cohesion among staff, others advocate for individual choice in attire, citing comfort and personal expression as key factors. This essay will discuss the advantages and drawbacks of implementing uniforms in the workplace.

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the top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Everyone needs money to live life and making money is not quite easy these days. Some people do business only aiming to earn money for themselves while other people think to help people through their work. And I think people should be responsible for what they are doing because without customer's satisfaction, they won't be able to expend their work and people will come to them only for one time.

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Since most information about culture and history can be found online, museums and art galleries are no longer needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether the cultural and historical exhibits have been replaced by the internet or not is an essential issue of public concern and debate. Although poeple might find a number of art-related articls by surfing the net, I will argue why I would profoundly disagree with this statement.

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Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The significance of education has been highlighted over the past decade. From this aspect, some opine that expenses for education should mainly be spent on better computers, while others hold the view it would be spent on teachers. This essay will discuss both views and then my opinion will be suggested.

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Advertising can influence the way people think, so it has negative effects. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that there are bad impacts on the way mankind thinks that caused by advertisement. It is believed that they will make a bad decision. This essay strongly disagrees with that statement. I believe that people will get more inspiration after reading or watching advertising, and they can collect as much information as possible from it.

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