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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

It has been a disturbing condition to the general public that there are more crimes recently than in the past. I identify a number of factors which contribute to this phenomenon, and we can propose several ways to improve the safety condition of the society.

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Some people prefer hobbies that require technology, while some people hobbies does not require technology. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

People have different ideas and tastes about their hobbies,some tend to the amusement that new devices or modernity created for them while others prefer activities that do not depend on technology. Both types of activities have their advantages and disadvantages, l believe that nowadays we need both types of activities.

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Since the 18th century technological advances have replaced people in the workplace. With today’s technology this process is happening at a greater rate. Technology is increasingly responsible for unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, the unemployment rate has been increased drastically when compare to the olden age because most of companies dependent on highly advanced machineries for work. Presently, only around 50% of duties were carried out by human beings. The below paragraphs provided with examples how technology impacted todays generation.

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Computers are being used more and more in education and so there will soon be no role for the teacher in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that IT is playing an ever-increasing role in schools and universities and one day teachers will be obsolete. It disagrees that technology will one day replace educators. This essay will discuss, firstly the limitations of technology in education and secondly, the essential role teachers play in maintaining discipline in the classroom, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

There is no doubt that these days poverty has not declined in the developing nations, although developed countries support them financially. However, many individuals argue that different kinds of economic help should be provided to the poor countries by the advantaged ones. Personally, I believe that rich countries could supply healthy-water for them and rebuild their residential areas instead.

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The internet has as many disadvantages as it does advantages. To what extent do you agree whit this statement?

In the cutting-edge era, society of people depends on technology for professional work, academics, and entertainment. The Internet has numerous drawbacks and some benefits. I largely agree with this notion due to some reasons which I discuss in upcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays a large amount of advertising aimed at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that advertisement which is considered detrimental to target minor audience should be stopped. I strongly disagree with this statement because it has positive impacts on children and will generate more bankruptcy if it is banned.

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Now people performed everyday task such as banking shopping and business transactions without meeting one another. What possible effects in individuals and society. what are socialized drawbacks on this concept against benefit. Give reason for answer.

Nowadays, people tend to perform everyday tasks like banking shopping and business transaction online with no need to do it individually. Technology plays a major role in affecting individuals and society as it has advantages and disadvantages. Not to mention that doing these tasks do not take a lot of time unlike the past. As a matter of fact, it also makes people lose the ability to interact with each other.

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Films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a film. Do you think this trend is positive or negative?

Although many years ago, movies were only made by big organizations, people could create films by themselves at the moment. While there are some drawbacks of a such trend nowadays, I think it has more beneficial sides that can facilitate the making-film industry in today’s world.

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It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of media. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.

Media is one of the trending concept ongoing all over the world, wide variety of information can be collect through different modes. Although, from every corner of country huge social data circulates at faster rate by means of Internet connection. Advantage and disadvantage of media has provided in upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The question of whether reading books is better for children than watching TV or playing computer games has been a topic of discussion for a long time. While some people argue that reading books is the best option, others believe that watching TV or playing computer games can be equally beneficial for children. However, in my opinion, reading books is more advantageous for children than watching TV or playing computer games. There are several reasons why I hold this belief.

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In many countries, children do not take care of their health as much as before and tend to become more and more overweight. What are the reasons and solutions to this?

Nowadays children all across the world do not care about their well-being enough and tend to become more overweight. This essay will examine the reasons and possible solutions to the problem.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Technological advancements have benefitted humans in many aspects of life and especially, and the evolution of the internet has completely reshaped electronic apparatus and made them more handy and intelligent. In many ways, Intelligent gadgets have opened up barrages of information and made it more convenient for everyone. Although Smart devices can bring enormous benefits, they may also bring some serious consequences depending upon their usage. Especially, when an easy and open connection is provided to the children.

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Nowadays, most people are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions

The phenomenon of people having more health problems compared with the past in these days has aroused wide concern among various circles. In view of the situation, both government and individuals have a duty to find ways to overcome these problems.

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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there are some people who believed that the world should be ruled by only one political authority rather than a country with its government. In my opinion, this is a matter of debate in light of different factors before any conclusion can be drawn.

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Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In this day and age, there is a debate related to job demands. Some people assert that job security is more crucial compared to job fulfillment, while others claim the opposite viewpoint. I do believe the latter view as jobs which provide individuals a sense of satisfaction might bring them a variety of benefits, however, those aforementioned opinions shall be discussed in this essay.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

Technological and innovation are very developed in recent year. And, AI is the new innovation of technologies that helps people an an easier and better life. For example, AI can control transportation by computers such as cars, buses, and trucks transportation will be driverless in the future. Also, I strongly believe that AI can change the type of job like a driver job because AI can do everything like a human. I think it is beneficial for humans in every nation around the world, and in this essay, I will write about this.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

Some individuals believe that university courses should be aligned with the requirement in the job market, whereas others believe those causes should only provide knowledge regardless of its usefulness in the workplace. I strongly believe that universities should function to provide graduates that have skills in current job market.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Knowingly or unknowingly everything on earth is really getting affected by human behaviour. Human actions not only have a negative impact on animals

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"Some people believe that excelling in school is a crucial apparatus for measuring intelligence. Do you think there is a correlation between grades and intelligence? How would you define intelligence?"

"Recently, many people assumed that being excellent at school is a vital part for measuring intelligence. But to my opinion, however, there is slightly a correlation between grades and intelligence. Being intelligent is shown in many various ways and not everyone can clearly see it.

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