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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give opinions

Some in the society are of an opinion that the best way is to accept bad situations like frustrating jobs and lack of money, while others think it's always better to try and improve these grounds. This essay hopes to discuss both these views and arrives at a viable conclusion.

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some people say that advertising is extremely successfull at persuading us to buy things. other peoplr think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it discuss both views and give your opinion

There is a controversal argument about whether the advertising convinces the society to buy things or excessive advertising has no effect on consumer buying. This essay will discuss the both views and arrive at a viable conclusion.

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some people say that advertising is extremely successfull at persuading us to buy things. other peoplr think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it discuss both views and give your opinion

There is a controversial argument about whether advertising convinces society to buy things or excessive advertising has no effect on consumer buying. This essay will discuss both views and arrive at a viable conclusion.

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Some people think governments should spend less money on arts and invest more in education. How far do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Although there are some who believe governments ought to save money by spending less on arts, others believe education is more important and the money has to be invested in this. In my opinion, both fields are important for people and they could benefit.

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Most agree that we should be training children to recycle waste to preserve the Earth’s natural resources. However, some believe that it is parents who should teach their children to recycle waste while others feels schools are more responsible. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Waste is one of the contributions to global warming because it can release greenhouse gases from landfills. Thus educating children about waste management is important to protect the Earth’s natural resources. Regarding this, some argue that parents should educate their children while others believe that school does. To my view, I believe that both parents and schools have the same responsibility to teach children about recycling waste. I will explain both sides to prove my argument.

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Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are many ways in which people can live together. One of them is cohabitation, and it is gaining more consideration among young people as it allows them to know each other deeply before they decide if they want to stay together in the long run.

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oday more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

In recent years, the number of travelling around the world has been increasing. The main reason why people are going to travel more is the fact that the price of transportation is cheap and advantages of travelling is that it can help in creativity enhancement and letting people try new things.

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It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions?

The bar chart demonstrates the production and the consumption of electricity in the top ten countries that are asserted to be the following : China, the US, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea.

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Technological development leads to lots of environmental issues. Some people think a simple lifestyle can preserve the environment while others argue that technology itself can solve it. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

The impressive development of technology has the potential to lead to numerous issues which are related to the environment. Therefore, many come to the conclusion that an uncomplicated lifestyle can protect the environment, while other people believe that the technology can automatically overcome the problems. In my opinion, I believe that technology can make mankind better in the long-term.

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The main reason that people work hard is to make money. To what extent you agree or disagree

There are many causes that make individuals work hard in their lives . Some believe that the main cause of it is to earn money. I refuse the idea that earning money is the primary cause why people work hard.

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Today’s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, students learn many different subjects based on curriculum, like mathematics for calculation, social studies to understand the culture, history, and other aspects of the community, and science to develop their scientific temperament. As we know, the needs get change. So the requirement for new subjects including financial topics is in demand. There will always be pros and cons for any changes which we can argue.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

It is true that when the technology is developed, many advanced developments have been made in agriculture to produce crops, fruits, and vegetables. Despite the fact that people made farming more producible, people in the world have still problems with food shortages. In this essay, I will describe the reasons why this phenomenon has happened and recommend the solutions that can overcome this.

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When someone achieves greatness thanks to an innovation or other breakthrough, it is usually agreed that the individual has a high level of intelligence. Do you think that inborn thinking skills play the main role in the successful life of people? What role does ‘nurtured’ intelligence play in achievements of a successful person?

When someone achieves greatness as a result of an innovation or other breakthrough, it is often assumed that the person is intelligent. This essay will discuss the role of innate thinking skills and nurture in people's successful lives.

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Many people believe that nature plays a more significant impact on human adult intelligence, while others claim that an individual can train himself to become high-intelligent. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals feel that nature has a greater influence on mature human intellect, while others believe that a person may teach himself to be very brilliant. I think that human nature has a more significant effect on the intelligence of an adult.

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Every one of us should become vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a long-debated issue whether a person should include meat in his or her nutrition or live on a plant-based diet. Moreover, the bigger dilemma to resolve is, which regime has more health benefits?

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views.

One of the many factors to reach a successful career is studying at university or college. So, some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career. Others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. This essay will discuss both views.

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Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many of them believe that youths must imbibe into practising the rituals of the civilization, however, there are numerous other folks who think that it is an individual choice whether to follow the traditions or not. In my opinion, following what a person has faith in is most important and shall elucidate in the below paragraphs.

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Communication between family members has decreased in recent times. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Communication among near and dear ones has decreased significantly in the modern world. I agree with the statement ,however some believe otherwise. In my further, writing I will elucidate my opinion with examples.

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Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that if the economic contribution is consistent with the length of labour timesheet among different countries. In my opinion that the conclusion is superficial without sufficient analysis from different perspectives. In this essay, I will give my own perspective that the length of the average working hours is not a positive relation to the success in the economy.

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Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that if the economic contribution is consistent with the length of labour hour among different countries. In my opinion that the conclusion is superficial without sufficient analysis from different perspectives. In this essay I will give my own perspective that the length of average working hour is not a positive relationship with the success in economy.

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