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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. what are the reasons and solutions for this issue?

Recently, plenty of young children lack knowledge about financial management. I think that problem is caused by the schools and the parents not teach them and I believe that the parents need to put more attention on teaching them how to manage money.

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Some people think that promoting a healthy life style is better than treating who are already ill. to what extent do you agree to this thought?

Without a denying, a widely heated debate as to whether advocating a healthy lifestyle or treating people who are already ill has received great attention from the public, whereas some people are holding an opposite opinion toward promoting a healthy lifestyle, as for my perspective, I am in favor of the former statement and an array of reasons will be thoroughly elaborated on as follows.

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Most of the people in society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programs. Why do you think people have more interest to watch them? What is the impact on society due to this?

Crime documentaries and shows are often enjoyed by most individuals these days. In my own opinion,people are increasingly interested in watching these programs simply because they are informative,so,most of them gain the necessary knowledge and information when seeing this sort of movie.

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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays, which is totally different from the past, it is more and more often for people to work from home because of modern devices. However, I suspect that this has more negative impacts than positive.

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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

These days, more and more people do their job at home with the development of technology. In my opinion, I would argue that working at home has more negative impacts than positive.

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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Due to the development of science and technology, it is common for people to work from home. In my opinion, the negative impact of working from home is greater than the positive impact.

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Some people believe that an effective way to reduce industrial pollution is to tax the companies which cause these types of pollution. others think that there are other ways.

Due to industrialization, earth suffer from excessive pollution. Some people argue that implying high tax in companies an efficient means of reducing industrial pollution. However others believe that there are other effective ways. This essay will outline why they support each side and suggest my opinion on the matter.

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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In contemporary times, prison is the place not only for punishment, but also for rehabilitation. In numerous circumstances, criminals can turn over a new leaf after imprisonment and become model citizens or impressive counsellors. From the following illustrations, I agree that they make good examples and are good persuaders for teenagers who are about to fall into the traps of crime offenders.

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In many countries, people are woking increasingly longer hours. What are reasons for this? Is it a positive or a negative effect.

It is true that work has an indispensable role to play in the context of anthropological history. However, more and more people have been working overtime nowadays. From my perspective, the phenomenon has already brought some negative impact. In this essay, I will explain my viewpoints and reasons in detail in the ensuing paragraphs.

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road accidents fatality rate is increasing disscuss this and mention the cause of them and how to defeat them.

Nowadays, Road accidents are one of the greatest problems that we have. It can be caused either by vehicles hitting each other or hitting a person crossing a street, as a consequence; large-scale disabilities and damages can happen. It all started maybe 70 years ago when public transportation had been invented to facilitate moving from one place to another, and also to make it more convenient, however; the prevalence of deaths because of road accidents is increasing over time.

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Some people believe art class such as painting and drawing should be made compulsory at high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals may assert that it is mandatory for high school students to have an art subject at school. In this essay, I will discuss positive aspects of the art class and will explain my support with an example.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The shortage of accommodation led to soaring housing prices, which has increased people’s financial pressures. Some people reckon that the government should be responsible for this issue. I partially agree with this opinion, but I also think people can choose to live in a place without a housing shortages.

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In many countries, people are woking increasingly longer hours. What are reasons for this? Is it a positive or a negative effect.

In many countries, people are working increasingly longer hours. What are reasons for this? Is it a positive or a negative effect.

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in many countries, increasing numbers of people are becoming interested in learning about the history of the house or building where they live. What are the reasons behind this? How can individuals research this?

Nowadays, there is an increasing trend for getting more familiar with the history of where people live in. Due to the valuable data, such as architectural aspects and the method of construction, that are given by its past, habitants can overcome on their safety concerns. This can be done by the internet which is the most popular way of researching.

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Some educationalists argue that non-exam, art-based subjects, such as music, drama, art, and craft, should be compulsory in the secondary-school curriculum. They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, with a faster pace of studying, non- assessments lessons such as art-based subjects seem to lose their crucial role, especially in the secondary education system. However, several educationalists believe that students can boost their educational achievement to a higher level by attending these classes. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the opinion due to some specific circumstances.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Keeping a balance among the subjects being taught in a school curriculum is difficult to say the least. While some people are promoting the idea that history is critical for student to learn, others consider science and technology far more important. I am convinced that although knowing history brings some advantages to students, focusing on sceince and technology is far more vital for pupils to survive in modern world.

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As computers translates quickly and accurately, learning of foreign language is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since computing devices translate fast and exact, it seems there is not any need for educating ourselves for learning a new dialect and this is a wastage pass-the-time. Nevertheless, I totally disagree with this aforementioned statement and this essay will explain some of the reasons.

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In many countries, people are woking increasingly longer hours. What are reasons for this? Is it a positive or a negative effect.

Due to the competitive era of society and to gain a financially stable life, people in many nations are imparting their duties more than the prescribed office hours. However, this trend can adversely impact on working individuals as they may have the lower level of bonding and understanding with their family and extra working can cause them many health issues.

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In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negatives effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

In our modern world, more and more individuals decide live alone. In this essay, I will explore the reasons for this and discuss whether it is positive or negative. Firstly, I will write about the causes and circumstances associated with this theme and secondly, I will discuss the cons about this.

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Some people think that climate change could have a negative effect on business. Other people think that climate change could create more business opportunities. Discuss both views give your own opinion.

Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different people. Therefore, this has become a debatable issue where few people think that business could have been affected negatively by the atmosphere change. Whereas, many individuals believe that climate fluctuation brings more opportunities in the working area. This essay will not only shed light on both the perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in the below paragraphs.

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