IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 918

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

I always considered myself a winner. I am not the one who contents unfavorable situations such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. So, you will be noticeable on which side I am. Yes, let me give the facts to you in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the tourism industry has become essential for countries to earn money. Some people believe that it can have a significant impact on countries legacy. But others, including me, assume that it can be more beneficial for the country.

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Today, many young people spend too much of their free time at shopping malls. This can be considered negative for young people and society generally. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

A part of the community contends about the negative influence of malls on society, especially in youngters' lives, as they are spending too much of their spare time there. The paragraphs below will outline a complete disagreement toward this trend explaining that these centres make it easy to make new friends, increase the cycle of interpersonal relationships, and encourage people to work and study.

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Today, many young people spend too much of their free time at shopping malls. This can be considered negative for young people and society generally. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

A part of the community contends about the negative influence of malls to society, especially in youngters' lives, as they are spending too much of their spare time in there. The paragraphs below will outline a partial disagreement toward this trend explaining that these centers makes it easy for family and friends to meet and increase the cycle of interpersonal relationships, but, on the other hand, do not provide productive activities.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, various communication platforms are being used by people worldwide, while its dangers of publicizing an individual’s details are concerned. In my point of view on this issue, I strongly believe that although some people are worried about social media’s misuse, it still has more benefits than negative effects.

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Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Environment defines as natural surroundings of human which comprises air, water, soil, plants and other essential natural resources. It has been dilapidated drastically by the activities of human such as industrialization and so on, but this alarming situation can be curtailed with proper initiatives from both people and government. Therefore, as per requirement of statement, I am going to shed my knowledge over both the views.

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People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects.

In this contemporary era, advertisement, whether it is goods or services, is growing by leaps and bounds. The public could see this everywhere, which highly affects the way to live. From my perspective, The merits of this situation surpass the demerits and my inclination is discussed in the further essay.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that sweetened food should be made more costly in order to discourage sugar consumption and to ensure a healthier lifestyle. I completely disagree with this opinion, as it is my firm belief that reduced sugar intake is based on health awareness, rather than on economic incentives.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that sweetened food should be made more costly in order to discourage sugar consumption and to ensure healthier lifestyle. I completely disagree with this opinion, as it is my firm belief that reduced sugar intake is based on health awareness, rather than on economic incentives.

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Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's modern world, technology has made great progress, in numerous translation tools; however, several individuals still believe that studying a new language still appears to be of great importance. From my perspective, I absolutely agree with this viewpoint.

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The governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often argued that qualified governments put more effort to assisting the poorer countries. I completely agree with this statement and I think that governments which are rich should allocate the budget to help other ones. This essay will put some reasons to expand my point of view.

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Some people say that what children watch influences their behaviours. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behaviours the most. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The making development of children is one of the important things that parents and teachers should concernabout . It along with a behaviour of a child are a key to predict in the near future . Therefore , some proponent points out that something that attracts a kid can potentially contact to their mind and what they are thinking about . Whereas others argue that television is the most influential device for people , especially for kids . Both of opinions will be cleared in this case.

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It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As the technology advancement is there in the stream of civil engineering, most of the people fascinates towards the modern building instead of renovating old buildings. In my standpoint, I agree with the statement. The forthcoming paragraphs elucidate relevant reasons with supporting example to support my opinion.

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Some people think that excessive use of smartphones badly affects teenagers' literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

The consequences of the utilization of the handset is highly controversial during this contemporary era especially now that technology is trending.Some individuals be of the opinion that overutilization of phones incorrectly is detrimental to young ones literacy skills.I completely agree that they can be a dangerous distraction and affect communication.

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Some people think that excessive use of smartphones badly affects teenagers' literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

The consequences of utilization of the handset is highly controversial during this contemporary era especially now the technology is trending.Some individual be of the opinion that over utilization of phones incorrectly is detrimental to young ones literacy skills.I completely agree that they can be a dangerous distraction and affect communication.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has had negative effects on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The use of online communication has become incredibly popular among teenagers these days. Some individuals tend to believe that the upward trend in use of modern technology has had negative implications on young people’s reading and writing skills. In my point of view using computers and phones too much may sigificantly influence literacy skills of young genearations. This will be shown by illustrating how slang has influenced the young generations and typing as the major problem in today's world.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult to live such as Sahara desert or Antarctica. Do advantages outweight the disadvantage of live there .

As the world become smaller and smaller because of the advanced technology and transportation system, people have been visiting over any place around the world and even Sahara dessert and Antarcitca where extreme weather conditions and hostile enviroments make them so hard to live in but tourists around the world who like challengings are coming more and more year after year. I personally think pros and cons of this phenomenon are generally equal and describe them in this essay.

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in many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. discuss this view and give your own opinion.

It is believed that the youngsters may be discouraged from taking part in any sport major as a result of the widespread coverage of it. Although some individuals agree with this idea I believe that it has more positive effects on the young people like finding their desired kind of sport and being motivated to have an active lifestyle.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some nations, people have a tendency to own a home instead of renting one because they think that owning a house is very vital for individuals. In this essay, I will discuss some reasons and why I believe that this is a positive situation.

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Discuss the advantages and the disdavantages of study abroad

Studying overseas is a dream for many adolescents. When they decide whether to complete their study in a foreign country or not, they consider many factors such as study fee, living cost, and personal development. This essay will further elaborate on the merits and demerits of this issue in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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