IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 108

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think international events such as the Olympic Games are important and can bring nations together. Others, however, think that they are a waste of money as the money could be spent elsewhere on more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A few people believe that international events such as the Olympic Games are essential and can bring nations together. On the other hand, some think that they are a waste of money and they could be spent on more important issues like country's protection and development. From my point of view, Olympic Games plays a significant role in uniting nations and people together. Moreover, it encourages sports and physical activity because, in modern days sedentary activities predispose most of the diseases and affect quality of living. At the same time, others beleive that funding on education, infrastructure development and pollution control can benefit the nation more than Olympic Games. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and give my opinion.

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Some people think that current environmental issues are global problems and should therefore be dealt with by the government while others believe that these problems can only be tackled by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A few people think that recent environmental problems such as global warming, pollution and deforestation are world problems and should be dealt with the government. on the other hand, some believe that these issues can only be managed by individuals. I think, to face global problems we need both government as well as individual support. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and give my opinion.

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in the future, nobody Will buy printed newspapers or books because they Will be able to read everything they want online without paying. TO what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

In contemporay world, the increasing number of people using online reading materials rather than read the printed products. Therefore, a group of people beleieve that in the future everyone will be able to read everything they want online without paying, instead of purchase printed materials such as newspapers or books. I totally agree, since the online reading trend is more usefull and the companies will choose produce more online materials due to high benefits.

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More and more people are moving from the countryside to the city. What are some problems this can cause? what sollutions can you suggest?

Increasing numbers of individuals are migrating from the village to the town. This can result some challenges. This essay will discuss one of them, this is pollution due to the growth of the population and governments can put some bans for solving this issue.

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More and more people are moving from the countryside to the city. What are some of the problems this can cause? What solutions can you suggest?

Increasing numbers of individuals are migrating from the village to the town. This can result some challenges. This essay will siscuss one of them, this is pollution due to the growth of population and governments can put some bans for solving of this issue.

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it is important to give children the opportunity to make decisions from an early age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a perspective that believes the importance of fostering independent children by offering the choice making situations for them from their childhood. However, I agree that making samll routinal decisions, improve self confidence and cognitive skills of children, I also think it is important to take a balanced way, otherwise helping them without inducing presure on them by conflicted situation.

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Some argue that having substantial wealth and limited leisure time is preferable to having less money but more free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It has been argued that possessing significant wealth, despite limited leisure hour, is more desirable than having fewer financial resources but extra free life. I totally disagree with the statement because, it will take a human to a hectic life schedule and some severe diseases like obesity and depression.

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Some believe that history has little to teach us about today while others think that the study of the past helps us to understand the present. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Recently, the issue of history education has become the subject of heated debate. Some people assert that school curricula have to contain history, while others argue otherwise. I wholeheartedly agree with the former stand. In the following essay, both views will be discussed before a conclusion is reached with my opinion.

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Some people think watching TV is bad for children in every way. Others think it is good for developing children as they grow up. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

TV is considered one of the best maens of entertainmant in the modren era as it offers numerous advantages.However like any technology it comes with ceatin drawbacks. No technology is entirely free from flaws or negative effects that may harm individual whether they are children adults.

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Some children spend hours everyday on their smart devices. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays children use their smart devices a lot during the day. The enjoyment from these products and its addictiveness could be some of the reason why it is used so much. I believe that it has drawbacks for the kids.

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Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on it? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Explain your choice by using specific reasons and details.

In my opinion, it is good for kids to start using personal computers from their early phase of life. However, it will become harmful if they spent long screentime on their laptops. In this essay, I will discuss both sides, the advantages and disadvantages, along with my reasonings.

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The government spends a lot of money on education. More money should be spent on free time activities. To what extent do agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In my opinion, I agree that governments should have more expenditure on education and also bigger budget on free time activities. I believe free access to education is citizen’s right and pastimes positively contribute to people’s mental health.

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In the past ,most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses . what are advantages and dis advantages of working for large businesses

The importance of working for someone which was always debatable has become more controversial with many people claiming it is beneficial while others reject this notion. This essay will delve into the pros and cons of working for a big company.

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones and tabletd there is no need to go to the cinema. Others says that to fully enjoy, go to cinema. Discuss both views and provide your opinion?

Technology has revolutionized nearly every aspect of human life. Numerous individuals are of the opinion that theatres are of no use because we can see latest movies on phones as well whereas some people hold the view that for nice experience it is better to go to cinemas. This essay will explain both the views along with my opinion.

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In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

Smoking in public has recently become an act of violation in several nations and a number of people think that it is a good idea to ban it. This essay agrees with this idea because it prevent us from deadly substances in cigarettes and improve air quality environmentally and socially in the community.

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinemas.Others say that to be fully enjoyed Films need need to be seen cinema.Discuss both views and give your opinion

One school of thought holds that individuals can watch movies on their phone or some digital devices, while others believe that of in movie theatre is the best choice. This essay attempts to shed light on both perspectives before concluding that I am in favor of the former notion.

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Since it is so easy to reach a large audience on the internet, people have to be exceptionally talented to become famous these days. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era, proponents from a part of the world cultivates the analogy of fostering immense talent in order to become popular and allure mass audience on the platform of the internet. Moreover, my firm conviction lies in the affirmation of this ideology and to back up my agreement; I believe, the reasons like prominence of the block culture along with absurdly high levels of the competition amongst the personalities trying to be famous these days is substantially raising on the internet.

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Some people say success in a person’s life as an adult is the result of the way he was brought up by his parents. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that parents play a crucial role in their children's success. While it is a commonly held belief that mother and father success lives influence in their child's life, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that parents affect kids lives.

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It is important for children to learn the difference beetween right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn thi distinction. To what extent dou you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

One of the most crucial parenting rules is to teach children the good and bad since their early childhood. It is argued that they should be punished in order to learn this. I agree that punishment should be used in accordance to child's age.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with thos statement?

In the next few years, a lot of people will not prefer to purchase published article or texts because of the Availability of information from social sources. I partially agree with this notion therefore, this shift may not be entirely beneficial for the public.

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