IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 107

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and solution of this disturbing trend.

It is evident that an increasing proportion of overweight children in Western countries is around 20% in the last ten years. There are several reasons behind this trend, however some solutions are proposed to tackle this problem.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so sommon that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some individuals think that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to purchase products, while others believe that advertising is so commonplace that we are not paying attention to it. I personally believe that while advertisements have become widespread because of their repetiveness and availability, they are not unsuccessful because they can convince us to by products because they can successfully inform us about the necessity of the products.

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Some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all times.They don't wantbtheir children tobread any entertainment books because they think it is a waste of time.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?why?

Reading books has a crucial impact on the children minds especially in this very young age. Ofcourse there are many types of books that iclude every single thing in the world. Everything you can or can't imagine, it's there. including regional books, educational, entertainment, stories and cooking books. Despite some parents sees that only the chilit's benifical to their children reading serious educational books at all times, the children in their being admire to discover everything and read about everything.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation ?

Owning and renting homes in some countries can be a debate of importance between some people which rises the quesition, should you buy or rent property?

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The most effective way to solve the current traffic and pollution problems in cities is to encourage people to move from the suburbs or countryside into the city center. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Moving permanently towards the countryside can be increasingly impact on alleviating traffic congestion and problems related to pollution. Many people believe that, living in suburbs can totally elevate such problems whereas, I strongly trust that it cannot be a reliable solution for long term. Moreover, reducing population in cities may decrease issues raised due to traffic and pollution, but relying solely on it has more disadvantages than advantages.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Global warming is becoming one of the major reasons of drastic change in weather globally. Environment is getting worser day by day because of the use of plastic items in abundance in form of bags, bottles and packaging, which damages the eco-system. There are significant harms of plastic use and the steps taken to minimize its use by everyone under the strict regulation of government are discussed further in the essay.

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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary epoch, technology is progressing at an exponential rate in the department of education. Although some believe that online learning will substitute in-person classes very soon due to its numerous advantages, others think that it is impossible to replace on-campus learning. I am in favour of the latter opinion, yet I will be shedding light on the both view points.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

To begin with different parts of the society have additional opinion on such a things. As an example of this , some people think that parents have to teach toddlers to be a good people , some people prefer to rely on the school in this case.

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A noticeable lack of students opting for science subjects at universities is observed in various countries. What are the reasons and what are the effects on society?

In this contemporary world, students are now avoiding to enroll in science subjects at post gradutation studies throughout the world. The cost of these studies and requirement of knowledge to get admmision in these field are the two main reasons why youth are lacking their interest science academics Therefore it is effecting the economy and stability of some nation.

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In a number of countries, some people think it’s necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In many countries, people argue that the governments should expend lots of money to build new railway paths to make the travels faster between different cities, while others do not agree with this opinion, since they think this money should be spent on enhancing the current public transport. Fast transport might help us to reduce the amount of the time that we spend on the way, I believe that everyday transportation is more necessarily, because we use it to go to the school, work, or other places more than traveling.

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Some people think that people can use animals for the benefit of humans. Others believe that this practice is wrong. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Animals are an important part of our lives. Some members of the public believe that they have the right to attack the animals ,there is an ongoing debate regarding whether to use animals for their needs or whether think this practice is wrong. This essay will examine both perspictives while presenting my opinion which supports the idea of not using animals for unnecessary stuff.

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Parents should not pressure their children to choose particular profession. Young people should have the freedom to choose path they like. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There has been ongonig debate about whether youngsters have to pick their future jobs. Some argue that children have to choose freely their future, while others believe that they still immature to big decisions like that. While I agree that choosing a profession dapands solely on young preferance and which job will provide them with both happines, and productive life. I believe other factors such as, guidance, and consulation also play a significant role in helping them decide wisely without any type of pressure.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution.

These days a growing number of children are becoming obese, especially in western world. Which has sparked a debate among people that what are the possible causes and effects of this trend. Therefore, this essay will try to delve into reasons, possible outcomes and will offer a few solutions as well.

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One of the consequence of improved medical care is that people are living longer life and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There has been an ongoing debate abouth whether revolutinized health care served individuals which increase life expectancy. Some argue that it has a positive effect, becuase it will lead to exchange of experince between generations in differnet aspects of life, and obuviously help younger genration learn wisely from elderly, while others believe that, it put more strain on pension sector, for this reason new regulatoins has been legislated, to put down some heavy pressure on these department. While I agree that the advantges of live longer are outwighted the disadvantages. I believe other factors, such as an experince, and wise, also play a significant role for my agreement.

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People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past, what do you think that is the reason for this? What are tha consequences for the people and people around them?

Recently, if we compare to now to past, majority not sleep too much. I think it has some logical reasons. For example, work terms and stress. Also these are impacting something in our lifes. İnitally, less energy and health problems.

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Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion?

In recent years, climate change is a big interest in topic that people like debating. critics insist that traditional energy such as oill, gas and coal play a crucial role in economic growth. However, I personally completely disagree with this assertion since the alternative energy is the best way to solve problems.

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Some people think adults should learn practical skills by themselves, while others believe that learning from a teacher in a classroom is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The question of whether adults’ acquiring knowledge by themselves or by teachers has sparked widespread debate. On one hand, some argue that learning by teachers is better, asserting that makes them gain more proficiency in subjects. On the other hand, critics contend content that enlightening by yourself is more effective, highlighting development of investigation ability. This essay will delve into both perspectives and provide a reasoned analysis, cultivating my own approach.

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Many people think that increasing business and cultural contacts between countries is a positive development. However, others believe that these are leading to the loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The effect of the soaring trade and cultural relations between different countries has sparked widespread debate. On one hand, some believe that increasing the size of the business and cultural exchange positively contributes by accelerating the development of the country. On the other hand, critics contend that it causes cultural homogenization. This essay will delve into both perspectives and provide analysis cultivating my own approach.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that saving environment is crucial to maintain sustainability. While it is a commonly held belief that government and institutions are responsible on having a green planet, there is also an argument that opposes it.

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Some people believe that teenagers should focus on all school subjects while others think that they should concentrate on the subjects where they do the best or find the most interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no dennying the fact that education is the pillar of developed societies. While it is a commonly held belief that students must give a full attention to all school subjects, there is also an argument that opposes it. In this esssay I will discuss both views and express my own opinion.

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