IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 111

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some coutries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Having a house is becoming increasingly popular lately. Individuals who decide to buy a property have several reasons and in this essay I will explain in details why most of the people choose to buy a house than renting, as well as show you that despite several downsides associated with having a house, I believe that this is a positive development.

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Studies shows that many criminals do not receive enough education, for this reason, people believe that the best ways to reduce crime is to educate them so they can find a job after being released. Do you agree or disagree.

Number of crimes committed each year are dramatically increasing due to many factors. There is an opinion that education could eliminate the criminal rates and preserve people from crime commitment. Others believe that such measure will not give sufficiant results. Although there are convincing arguments on both sides, I strongly belive that education should be conducted in prisons.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Nowadays, several countries have many high-standard graduates who are unemployed. I will explain some causes and solutions to overcome these problems.

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Sources of electricity in four countries 2003-2008.

The pie chart illustrates a variety of sources of electricity which were used in four different countries during 2003 and 2008.

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In your view, what is the most important thing for governments to spend money on: education, health, transportation, or something else? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

When it comes to allocating public funds, governments face the challenging task of prioritizing areas that can foster long-term societal growth and well-being. Although, it's quite complicated to emphasize the sector for the most reasonable resource share, there should be priorities which are aimed on work processes optimization. I assume, education stands out as an anchor of a development as it leads to improving quality assurance of other sectors.

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In many countries, younger people are forgetting their old and traditional languages. Discuss this issue.

In numerous nations, younger generations are forgetting or destroying their mother tongue; while my personal attitude toward this is that they must keep their traditional language to communicate with their ancestors and should keep these languages alive. The idea provokes strong arguments, which will be explained here.

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern era, most of the people use social media in everyday for their communication between the surrounding people to get daily updates of the news. However, people keep touch with others, I disagree with advantages is not overweigh the disadvantages because there are some reasons such as spending social media will ruin people morality, health issues and also it will affect careers growth.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Dicuss the both viewsand give your opinion

Group of citizens believe that definitely announcing is the best way to encourage others for buy products. On the other hand, many citizens said that advertising is very ordinary and they do not matter to it. I agree with the first mindset.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. some people believe it is more important to protect the ciuntryside and not build new homes there.

There is no denying the fact that building a new house is a crucial matter that so people allocate a significant attention to their house's location. While it is a commonly held belief that the only space available for building them is in the countryside, there is also an argument that some people believe it is more crucial to protect the countryside and not build new houses there.

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Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, governments have taken on lots of responsibilities. Such as taking care of the environment. However, people have different views on this situation. Some of them think that the citizens should be responsible for the environment. Nevertheless, some people say that governments should take care of the environment. I firmly believe that it is necessary to the government should take responsibility for the environment.

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There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use death penalty as a deterrent, many believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Statistics show that the number of serious crimes commited each year has been increasing. This has caused people to look for solutions to this problem and some say that the death penalty is a good deterrent that will contribute to reducing those crimes. While others believe that alternative solutions should be explored first.

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These days,many people have their own computer and telephone.So it is quite easy for them to do their job at home.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home.

Nowadays, most people find that,working from home using their personal devices is the most convenient option.We are living in a technological era,where advancements continuously shape how we live, work and connect. In this essay,I will touch on both benefits and drawbacks of the situation.

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Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

The educational system should help students to improve other skills like as cookery,dressmaking and woodwork.While some opinions are like these:school should focus on academic successes and teaching vital skills like dressmakings ,sewing should be parent's responsiblty.Although l admit that educational system should focus ob academic succes,l am mostly of the opinion that schools focus on be academic success it vital skills.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefit and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Nowadays, visiting the challenging environment such as the Sahara descent or Antarctics has become increasingly popular among tourists seeking unique experience.

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Grandparents play a big role in bringing up children. Do you think it is useful for grandparents? Discuss reasons with your opinion and give relevent examples.

Grandparents are valuable assets to the family, providing support and companionship through all of life's challenges. One school of thought claims that grandparents play a crucial role in upbringing offspring. This essay will discuss how it is useful for grandparents, and this will be articulated in forthcoming paragraphs; my perspective will be mentioned in the conclusion.

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Fossil fuels are themain source of energy around the world. However, people are being encouraged to use alternative energy sources such as wind energy, solar energy and so on. Do you think this is a positive or negative development and why.

Fossil fuels are extremely essential energy sources, but people are encouraged to use other energy producing sources such as wind and solar energy. I think, it is pretty vital to be dependent on other sources of energy, because with time the resources of fossil fuels are decreasing due to their increasing consumption demands. In addition, the other sources of energy production are readily available and are much cheaper than petroleum and natural gas. I will explain my points further with relevant examples.

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in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? dos you think this is apositive or negative situation?

In some countries, people prefer to have a house than to rent a place. In this essay I will explain some of the main reasons and why this is a positive development.

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All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this ? What are the effect ?

Despite knowing about the effects of an unhealthy lifestyle and excessive food consumption, but people still do them every day, so that the number of overweight people is growing.

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Some people think that children should not watch telvision as it has negative effects while some people believe that they should watch television as it helps them in their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Television is considered a mode of information where you can watch anything whether it is a news channel or a music channel. Some people believe grown-ups should not watch telly as it is not sensible for their character while other say it is beneficial for their upcoming life. In this passage, I am going to discuss both viewpoints and explain my opinion in the following paragraph and come up with a logical conclusion.

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