IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 114

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world of technology and modernisation, the crime rate has started shooting up. The main reason for the high amount of crime rate is people are vulnerable and can easily fall into the trap. In the essay, I will discuss whether is it worth punishing teenagers in the same way with adults. In my opinion, young people can change their behaviour if someone will help them .

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In modern life, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food and in other products like clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Is it right to say that animals are no more essential for the production of eatables, fabric and medicines? In this contemporary era people shift their interest towards veganism and I am strongly agree with this perspective. The following paragraphs will elaborate my point of view with supporting evidence.

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the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town adn cities closing . do you agree or disagree ?

Some individuals are of the opinion that with the rapid increase in online shopping, all physical stores in suburban and urban areas would soon go extinct. I firmly disagree because not everyone can patronize e-commerce business, especially people who are not tech-savvy, and there is the risk of breach of privacy and online theft.

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You are embarking on a journey overseas with your family. Send an e-mail to the manager of the hotel you have chosen as accommodation and ask for the services and amenities, alongside stating your concerns about your stay.

I am Shaghayegh Shadman; I want to make a reservation for your smart suit which on located at the last floor; my family and will be accommodated there for 5 days from October 12th. I am writing this letter in order to ask about your facilities and mention my concerns about service.

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ome university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that Becherlar Degree students should have extra classes in other subjects, while others think that is apply essential to focus and prepare to pass their college exams. However, I believe that learning only one speciality would be not enough, students need to attend more general classes.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both sides of the argument and give your opinion.

Man-made activities impacted plants and animals in a terrible way around the globe. Some would say that this activity cannot be deterred, while others are of the opinion that humans can save these precious habitats by action. This essay agrees with the letter point and will discuss that, despite the intense competition for natural resources, as a global crisis, the UN can regulate how the natural resources can be utilized.

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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduces the ammount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, technology has been widely influenced our daily life interaction through email or any other online platform. Many people said that this innovation has a negative impact to our face-to-face interaction. In addition, this essay agrees with the notion because this will strongly affect human relationships and lead to various mental health problems.

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Some people think that competitive sports are important for a child education, others think that it has negative effects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sports could help children to experience a lot of stuff, and it opens a door for a lot of them to get into colleges, and sports could help you to be healthier and stronger with time, and that's just a few good things about sports, sports is a huge world filled with strong smart and great people so I think competitive sports are so important to the child.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for the government to make legal requirements. To what extent do you think laws are needed ti make people recycle more of their waste?

At present, few individuals argue that a sufficient amount of waste is not recycled and the government should bring up laws to this problem. Personally, I think the government cannot fully involve in this process as there are further methods and they will be outlined.

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some people believe that old people should live in unrsing homes. Others say they would be better off with their families. Consider the pros and cons and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there has been an increase in the number of older people living in nursing homes. However, in spite of this, it is often said that it is the family that should take care of its elder members. Although both of this patterns have pros and cons, I believe that elderly should live with their families.

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The use of mobile phones by students during school has become increasingly common. What are the advantages and disadvantages of allowing students to use mobile phones in schools?

Nowadays, due to a development of technology, there have been an increase of the number of children owing a mobile device. However, there is still a lack of content of whether allow them to use their phones during school or ban them. Both of this approaches have both pros and cons.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.

At present, few individuals argue that waste material released from homes, a sufficient amount of waste is not recycled, and the government should bring up laws to this problematic reason. Personally, I think the government cannot fully involve in this process and reasons will be outlined.

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

All of us had been in unpleasant situations, such as working under control of an aggressive boss or getting a dead-end job because we got bills to pay. People debate whether it is better to accept and get used to a bad situation or if we have to get up and put our effort to promotion of our lives' condition. I agree with the second idea for several reasons which will be discussed in this essay.

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In the 21st century, the average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some solutions that could be taken to reduce the effect of aging populations.

In the meantime, junk food and sodas and a lot of unhealthy stuff are most popular on the streets, so I think there must be a limit to this, for example, you can't have more than three fast food places in the neighbourhood, or try to sell more of healthy drinks, this will help people to be healthier and live longer, due to the healthy food they eat.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or a shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve search situation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is thought by some that it is okay to make do with a not so good circumstance, such as an unplesasant job or being cash trapped. Others However believe that it is advisable to try and keep searching. In my opinion, I believe that it is better to make do with the available job at hand, and keep trying to get a better one.

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

Despite having over 50 percent female workforce, most organizations in many developed countries have the senior positions filled with men. This essay completely disagrees with the arguement that such corporations should introduce a quota for women for these senior roles because hiring should be done on merit and such a decision will only reduce a company's overall competency.

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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

With the advancement of technology, the cultures and traditions of many countries tend to get left behind. In addition, bare minimum effort is shown to preserve said cultures. I personally disagree with this course of action.

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better for children than watching TV or playing computer games.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that in order to have a better reading quality, it is better for children to read a story from a book than from TV or computer games.I fully agree with this statement.36 It is clear that reading stories from TV or computer games is an interesting reading method for children because the stories are deduced in a variety of ways. Actors deduce the story by turning a story into a TV series or a movie. Children could also read the stories by playing the computer games, acting as a story character by playing the game and read the story by playing the game. These methods made the reading more interesting and children may more willing to read the story. However, the disadvantages outweighs the advantages. Although reading story from TV or computer games may be more interesting, it is hard for children to focus on the story because other TV programes and other computer games could disturb them.Besides, watching TV or playing computer games on the screen for a long time coul...

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In most countries, prison is an effective solution for the problem of crime. Some people think a more effective solution is to provide a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Nowadays, many solutions for the problem of crime had been proposed, all goal of solutions are seek a better way to deal with crime events. One of them is to provide a better education, and make convict reformed and return to society. This essay will discuss the reasons why I agree provide a better education.

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Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices would help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The problem of pollution caused by vehicles has become a rising concern for authorities. Whether funding to improve transport infrastructure and minimizing bus fares would be environmental friendly approach is the question of debate. This essay agrees with this statement as these suggestions seem quite efficient to ecnourage the more use of public shuttle service.

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