IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 117

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that entertainment such as film star pop musicians or sports star are paid to much money Do you agree or disagree? Which other type of jobs should be highly paid.?

It is often argued by some that entertainment such as movie celebrities,singers or sports famous personality are highly paid.Although some might disagree with the notion; however, I completely agree. Not only because of their huge fans base. but also because of their fame. This essay will enunciate how these factors justify my opinion.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Some people believed that the rising price of gasoline will supress traffic and pollution issue. My contention is, the rising price of gasoline does not effectively address the problem at hand since the daily mobility was part of basic needs for civilians, so the car demand and self-riding/driving culture would remain persist. Instead of alleviating traffict and pollution issue, lift up the gas price might cause inflation for daily commodity. The middle-class, the segment that economically parts of automobile market, will remain relied on their personal vehichle.

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Robot and AI are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

Computer technologies are growing so fast that now they are going to be used to do the human jobs in work. In my opinion this trend has a deep social reason behind it, and have different impact depending having on short-sight or long -sight prespective on it.

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Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

I do not agree that should should focus on academic success and passing examinations.

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Some people believe that a county becomes more interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures. Do you agree or disagree ?

I agree that a country becomes more interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures. There are several reasons why this is beneficial.

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many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Dose this situation have more advantages or more disadvantage.

In today’s society, involving in ever-shifting life issues whether because of ambition or expenses, have left little time for individuals to entertain themselves with what they are interested in. From my prospective devoting most of wealthy moment of life on careers could come across many problems despite some extensive accomplishment that might happen to some people.

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People in many countries are spending less time with their family. Reasons and effect of this. Huy Tran

In the contemporary era, the relationship between family members in some countries is becoming increasingly distant. In this paragraph, I will present the reasons and consequences of spending less time with family in some nation.

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Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this contemporary era,shopping has become an indispensable part of everyones life.Big shopping centres are popular in numerous areas.However,it is replacing some local shops.I beleive that there are myraid benefits in large shopping complex instead of enough small stores.In this essay I will elaborate on my views for favouring the positive impact on commerical centres and thus,lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some cities have few controls over design and construction on housing and office building. People think that they are free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages

A downright variance of view has been observed among the masses regarding building their accommodation.A sizeable segment of the contemporary era,contends public should unbound by state rules and regulations while contesting their homes,meanwhile,opponents,adhere to the notion that the government should control the public while constructing their residents.The overcoming paragraphs overlooks both perspectives and I will give my opinion in conclusion.

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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that for the beneficial of society and individual, everyone should get married before there 30 but other oppose. I somehow disagree with the notion, and I think that we should leave this decision on their personal choice. In the upcoming paragraph I will discuss both arguments.

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in some cultures,children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some countries, hard-working is considered to be very important in terms of reaching your dreams. some may say it even shows the value of people's achievements. But is it good thing to keep pushing children in this way or the negative points are more? In this essay, i will disccus both views and try to get a conclusion.

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Some people think that all university should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology

Numerous subjects can be learnt in universities so that the students can choose particular subjects depending on their preferences, while others think that science and technology fields will guarantee their futures more. In my opinion, I believe allowing students to opt for their studies can make them more succesful in positive ways rather than impose themselves to subjects that they are not interested in.

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‏Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the punishment. Why are this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

‏The rise of crimes have become a Contentious issue in recent years, with growing concerns a bout the impact on committing more problems after the punishment. Many believe that some mental health issues and the revenge are the major causes of this problem. This essay will deler the reason behind this risk and propose effective measure to mitgate these risks.

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Some people think that children should start school at the age of six or seven while others think that children should start school as young as possible. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the ancient times,when there are only government school were availble they take chindren from six to onwards not younger than this.As the world evolved,everthing changed with passage of time,now competition between schools attarcts many parents to start schoolingof their kids as early as possible.Many individuals have different point of view and concerns.In this essay i will discuss both these views and give my opinion in conclusion.

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In many cities and urban areas around the world, crime is increasing. What is the cause of this? How can governments help to prevent the crimes?

It is evident that there are an increasing numbers of crime in many cities and urban areas. There are several reasons for this matter, however, the governments can give some solutions to prevent the crimes.

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For centuries, important part of education have remained such as reading, writing, maths.With the advent if computers,some people think that computer skill be made as a Fourth skill to be added to the list . To what extend do you agree?

For a long time , reading, writing and maths are the most important educational skills to learn among other subjects. Additionally, some people believe that computer skill should be add to the list as fourth skill. This essay extremely agree with adding computer skills, because our wold today fully debends on computers, moreover, the person who do not learn about computer will be seen as an un iliterate person.

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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

In this era,traffic issues and housing has become an major problems in numerous cities.Few peope believe that, it is vital to transfer some industries,companies and workers to rural areas for tackle this consequences.I totally agree with the statement and I will elaborate on my opinion in detail.

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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience

There is no denying the fact that there are several subjects the student plans to study, including math and physics. While it is a commonly held belief that the majority of students don’t have interests related to science, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that it depends on the personality.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well practical programs. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that learning a new language is significantly important. While it is a commonly held belief that if you do not spend your time learning new languages you are wasting your time, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that we must let our kids learn foreign language.

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In some countries, the average body weight is increasing, health and fitness levels are decreasing, what are the causes for this problem and what measeure can be taken to prevent this ?

In some nations, the specific bodies weights are rose upping.in constrat health and fitness levels are reducing.This essay will explore how junk food and no physical activity can be considered as the leading causes of this concern, and how through diet plan and energetic exercise, this problem can be curtailed

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