IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 119

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Task 2: Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

FEW THINK THAT WOMEN SHOULD BE EQUALLY PROVIDING THEIR SERVICES TO THE NATION'S ARMY OR OTHER CRIME-REGULATING FORCES. I THINK THIS COULD BE VERY CHALLENGING AND HARD FOR MOST OF THE WOMEN IN CERTAIN CIRCUMSTANCES. I WILL BE DISCUSSING BOTH THE PUBLIC VIEWS AND MY EXACT SAY ON IT IN UPCOMING PARAGRAPHS.

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In the present day, social media plays an important role in young people’s lives. Many people believe that it enhances creativity and global awareness, while others argue it could negatively impact their behavior and attitudes

In the present day, social media plays an important role in young people’s lives. Many people believe that it enhances creativity and global awareness, while others argue it could negatively impact their behavior and attitudes. In the following paragraphs, both points of view will be discussed in detail before conclusion is reached.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

While some people think video games are harmless fun and can be a tool for education, some believe that video games can have negative effects on those who play them. I think they have equal positive and negative impacts on players.

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Some people believe that anyone can create art such as painting poetry music and so on. Others think that a person should have abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is acknowledged that artists express their perception of universe and emotions through spiritual products. Some people believe that these works of art are created with intrinsic skills which are not acquirable through education. On the other hand, opponents argue that art would be acquired through different ways. This essay will discuss both views and reveal my orientation towards these statements.

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advantages and disadvantages of being an Australian citizen

Nowadays, having Australian citizenship could give you a lot of privileges that many people are keen to have. According to the Department of Home Affairs (2024) since 1949 the number of individuals who have become Australian citizens and taken citizenship exceeded 6 million. Despite a few disadvantages of being an Australian citizen like the high cost of living, being a citizen offers you many advantages like travel benefits, protection and being eligible for many services that the country provides.

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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part-time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it's effect on a child.

These days,more and and more children are being encouraged by their parents in order to do a job in their holidays.In other words,some people believe that it is an excellent opportunity for their children to find a job in their spare time.Clearly,there are various advantages and disadvantages,when parents make this decision.In this essay,I will address some benefits and drawbacks of this idea and also I will explain it's impact on children.

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Many claim that the fast-food industry has a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experiences. You should write at least 250 words.

In today's contemporary era, food industry has been transformed completely and focuses more on selling prepared meals at restaurants using convenience and time-sensitivity as an excuse . I, strongly believe that this drastic change by fast food locations is adversely affecting our environment, eating habits and families . This essay will examine some key aspects of the former along with some real life examples to support the opinion.

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Some people think that reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, many parents and other people believe that reading books such as stories is more effective for young minors than being engaged with programs on TV or games.In my opinion, I completely agree that children must spend more time reading books.I will discuss my views in the following paragraphs,concluding with a suitable summary.

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Computers are widely used in education and teachers now play a less important role in the classroom than ever before. Do you agree or disagree?

Sometimes a group of people see the words on the passages in different colors, such as the numbers seen blue or some words seen green. According to neuroscientists, these people have a condition called synesthesia. This Greek word means together and come from perception’s people and allowing for a combination of different sensory perceptions. Neurologist Richard Cytowic learned about synesthesia from his neighbor who tasted shapes and a colleague who saw the sound of his hospital pager as red lightning bolts. He and other scientists believe synesthesia is not abnormal, and that we all may experience it at birth. People with synesthesia retain indistinct sensory boundaries throughout their lives.

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Many people believe that playing games and tv programs is beneficial but others say it doesnt improve the mental ability of children . What extend do you agree or disagree.

It is undoubtedly true that to improve children's mental ability is now a major concern. It is opined that playing games as well as tv serials is helpful while others feel that these have implications on children's mental ability. However, I agree with the former statement and will prove my stand with logical explanation in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweight the disadvantages?

Some people believe that, having elderly population is burden for government, other people believe that it is important to society. While it is true that ageing population might creates several problems, I believe that advantages of having elderly people outweight the disadvantages.

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Some people think that adults should learn practical skills by themselves, while others believe that learning from a teacher in a classroom is better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today's world, there is an ongoing debate about whether adults should absorb pratical skills on themselves or from a teacher. From my perspective, learning by themselves is the best choice for them for several compelling reasons.

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In the present day, remote work has become more popular according to technological advancement and global pandemics. Some suggest that this enhances employees productivity and ensures work-life balance, while others argue it could lead to loneliness and working over time

In the present day, remote work has become more popular according to technological advancement and global pandemics. Some suggest that this enhances employees productivity and ensures work-life balance, while others argue it could lead to loneliness and working over time. In the following paragraphs, both points of views will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is positive or negative situation?

It is a fact that home is the best place for individuals feel themselves in convenience. Doubtless, all people prefer to own home rather than renting it. In this essay we are going to elaborate advantages and disadvantages of owning or renting a home.

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Children are facing more pressure from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of such pressure? What measures can be taken to reduce it?

Youngth oftenly getting pressure from academic, social, and commercial perspectives. It is because of the weak system of our world and best solution for this can strengh this aspects.

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✅ Q: One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world population in last three decades has increased manifolds whereas the food production in the world has not increased at the same rate. There are many reasons for low food production, some argue it is due to uneven distribution of raw food in the word and some blame unfair trade policies of some countries. Due to any reason the challenge is a big problem today. In these circumstances, some people propose that genetically modified foods is the best possible solution. In my opinion it is the fastest, easiest and safest way to overcome this challenge.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.

Living longer than the expected average life span is increasing gradually than earlier. Few argue that it is beneficial to the younger generation in many ways, while the others argue the oppose it stating it might be burden or problematic to the government. This essay will discuss pros and cons of this ageing population and I believe this is more advantageous compare to cons.

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Some people believe that watching big events like sports and the Olympics on TV encourage adults to exercise regularly. While others disagree that there are other effective ways of getting them to exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is the subject of discussion that whether sports events, whose people watch largely from all parts of the globe, increase the practice of exercise on a regular basis or there are better options. In my opinion, the population will not do more sport just by watching events and other ways are needed.

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There is a debate among many individuals that museums and art galleries should present the nation’s art, as opposed to artworks from other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Have you ever entered a musuem and felt surprised about the emphasis on the quality of art rather than how these illustrations reflect your country's identity? A vast number of individuals feel that paintworks in art and historical facilities should be exclusive to the country responsible for developing this talent, while others argue that the inclusion of diversity is completely justified. I will discuss the advantages and potential downsides of both perspectives and provide reasoning to why I believe the importance of national individuality outweighs the potential benefits of cultural diversity.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or mall to do their shopping. Is this positive kr negative development?

In many parts of the world, many people are going to the mall for shopping. Meanwhile, it has a negative impact on local shops and it has changed the way people shopping. This essay believes shopping in the mall is more effective. For the following reasons. Is this the most effective ways?

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