IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 122

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that most crime is a result of circumstances, e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others, however, believe most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that there are many reasons why people are doing crimes. While it is a commonly held belief that the purpose of most crimes is poverty, circumstances, and other social problems, there is also an argument it is happen by individuals who are bad by nature. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Today's society provides people with various ways to lose weight, such as special diets or exercise regimes. Many people believe though that poor food and today's lifestyle should be addressed first. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Healthy life becomes one of main issues in a modern society, including how to maintanance the body balance through diets programme or doing exercise regularly. The crowd believe that people not only should be more aware about the food they want to eat regarding the body weight, but also put it as a priority of their daily routine. This essay will discuss the reason why it is important and how to apply in the human behavior based on my personal experience.

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Some scientists believe that in the future computers will be more intelligent than human beings. While some see this as a positive development others worry about the negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Computers as the icon for intelligence are advancing so rapidly that some anticipate that it will have intelectually exceeded human one day. This can be considered as a dangerous change, and also a gerat progress.

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Due to development and rapid expansion supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that the advancement of supermarkets in the business economy has impacted small local businesses, which will lead to illegal competition, there is also an argument apposes it. In my opinion, I consider that unfair competition will bring a lot of problems to society and the small local businesses will disappear in the future.

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Some school leavers choose to travel or work for a year before going to university. What might me the reason for this? What are the advantages or this practice?

In this essay I am going to explain why it is better to take a year after finishing high school to trvavel or work before going to university.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and age together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no denying the fact that some people think music is beneficial to getting human in various countries and ages close to each other. While it is commonly held belief that other arts may be much better for cummunication, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion i consider that music actually has many benefits in this topic.

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Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is a discussion about whether cities should allow graffiti or ban it completely. Some people think graffiti is a form of art that should be allowed in some areas, while others believe it is just vandalism. Personally, I believe cities should allow spaces for graffiti.

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In some countries,young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and strating university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. write atleast 250 words.

Work or travel for a period of one year between completing high school and joining university education is advised for young people in some nations. Taking a gap year to work or travel between high school and university is advantageous in that it promotes mental health and enables time for decision making.However, young people may lag behind and also leads to increased rates of drop out.

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Nowadays many countries household waste e.g. food packaging is increasing day by day. What are the causes for that? How can this problem be solved?

Recently, household waste items like food packaging is on a constant rise in many nations. This is due to an increasing number of people satisfying their hunger by consuming ready to eat food items. This problem can be successfully dealt with by reusing the food containers or boxes.

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Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollutioin. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although a group of people holds an opinion that the increasing number of vehicles is the primary cause of pollution, others believe that the factories are to be held responsible for it. However, I feel that the rise in number of both the cars and vehicles together is the causative factor for higher levels of pollution.

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school should focus on traditional subject. like math rather than practical skill like cooking. agee or disgree and give own opinion

The debate over whether schools should focus solely on academic subjects rather than include extracurricular lessons in their curriculum. While some say that academic subjects are essential for future careers, others believe practical skills are equally important for personal development. In my view, focusing on traditional subjects will benefit more in the long-term position.

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The Contribution of Various Economic Sectors to Xcountry Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017 and 2018

The table illustrates the percentage of contribution of three various economic sectors ( Agriculture, Industry, and Service

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In some counties, when someone gets old, they often go to live in a home with other older people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

It is a practice in some nations that, when any member of the family get old, they move to old-age homes where there are taken care of by the nurses. Moreover, it is the governing bodies who provide funds for such care. I, strongly belive that it is the family members who should spend pn their own for this care, because it is their moral responsibility to do so. Moreover, the government has numerous other national responsibilities where this money must be channelized. This essay will further elaborate on the above viewpoints.

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Advertisements of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So, the advertisements to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that children and their parents are significantly impacted by advertising of snacks and toys. Therefore, the advertisements to children should be banned. I completely agree about this view for several reasons One the one hand, advertisements of snacks have a crucial effect on children for several ways. when children and parents see many advertisements on TV,or on social media platform like facebook, Intasgram,..they will have a tendancy to try it one time for experience. Take a pop corn for example, advertisements on TV with interesting images and vivial contents make young people want to buy and try it even though they know it is not good for the health. If they consumed a considerable amount of harmful ingredients will cause many diseases such as diabetes, obesities and other health-related problems

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Some people believe that the government should spend money to create more art such as paintings and statues in cities to make them a better place to live to what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that governments allocate significant care to the art’s sector. While it is also held belief that they should spend money to create more art such as paintings and statues in cities to enhance the quality of living in them, there is also an argument that opposes it.

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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both the views and state your own opinion.

These days, having a lot of money and less leisure time is better than earning less money and having more free time. So, in this essay, I am going to discuss both sides and give my won opinion.

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Many peolpe say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others clain that it is bette to start work after school and gain experience in the worl of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

Most of the individual think that with the completion of higher education levels one, it is possible to grab a higher quality job while, few believes that working before going to college will help the students to grab work experience. However, I agree with the latter opinion because one can collect the experience of work and can also develop intellectual skills.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Staying in a different country where I have to communicate with foreign individuals using their language can occur some major social issues and might face practical issues at the same time. I strongly agree with this announcement. In this essay, I will talk about what kinds of situations we might face if we are outside of our country and working in different places.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

in many countries, people now have longer life expectancy compared to the past days. While some individuals think an elderly people creates more problems for the authorities, many believe there are advatages having an ageing population. However, I believe that the drawbacks outweigh the potential benefits.

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Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely, and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to lining in an independent house. Discuss both views and ggive your opinions.

It is widely believe by some population that residing in flats can be lonely and depressing, while others advocate the importance of living alone. While habiting alone can be scary at time and often feel dull, it also enable individual to have a quiet and quality time alone. In my opinion, it is more advantageos to live alone.

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