IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 123

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary world, many couples like to have a grand destination weddings. Certainly, some people likes to flaunt their money and rich living standards. Personnally, I believe that it is a negative development and in the following paragraphs I shall explain my reasons for this belief.

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These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers,particularly in secondary schools. What are the reason for this, and how could the problem be solved?

In recent years, the numer of individuals who intended to become instructores, particularly secondary ones, have been diminished. This essay will argue how word load for tutors in secondary schools and difficulties in dealing with teenagers caused this problem, ultimately will suggest that schools should consider ease their situaion by hiring more teachers and several workshops should be held for new instructors in order to get along well with younsters.

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More and more people are eating healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

In this modern world, people are encouraging themselves to do more physical activities and eat healthy food instead of eating junk food because they do not want to make their bodies a couch potato. In this paragraphs I will discuss my view points related to this.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some people believe that the working week should be shorter. Their overview said that "happy employees = productive environment" which is an interesting point.

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Music play an important role in society, others think it is simply a form of entertainment for individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are two main different opinions regarding music. Some people think music has a significant impact on society while others believe it is just one of the entertainment activities for individuals. I will examine both views in this essay.

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Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum children, others think that for all school age children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion,

Academic subjects is an important part for student learn knowledge and logical thinking, but physical education also pay an essential role for teenerger build up a healthy lifetly for future. In my opinion, I disagree with the assert.

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Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What are the causes of this? What measures can be international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?

Over the last few decades, demand for food has increased year after year, what problems does this causes? what can be done to deal with this situation?

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Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Global sport events such as the Olympic games and the football World Cup generally are contributive factors in reduce international stresses and allow people to proud of their nations safely. In my opinion, these events allow people to eleviating the tensions caused by governments and give them an opportunity to exchange their cultures.

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It is suggested that curfew hours must be implemented among children. And they are only allowed to go out at night with the supervision of adult. Do you agree or disagree?

Someone suggested that the children should be supervision by adult when the go outside at night. In my opinint, I agree with this suggetion in order to ensure the safty of children.

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The gap between rich and poor countries is expanding. How can it be resolved?

it is argued that the disparity between rich and poor countries is expanding. Many poor countries in Asian and African region have to overcome with this issue. I believe that there are three main problems associated with these issues, and also three remedies we can adopt.

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Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents are better caregivers for their young children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that it will be the best for working parents to put their preschool children in childcare centres rather than give them to family mambers. While grandparents can take care their grandchildren with love, I believe that leaving the children with reliable caregivers are better idea as the it will be beneficial for their school lives.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others, however, say that this would have little affect on public health and other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

1) physical activity and better in longevity and muscles being active

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Plagiarism in academia has become a major issue in many countries today .what are the causes of this problem ? What are some possible solutions?

Recent years, plagiarism has become common problem between undergraduates in major countries .There are several reasons for such a situation and relevant solutions are also available for dealing with it which will be elucidated in the following paragraphs.

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The monthly price of exported rice from ThaiLand and VietNam from 2012 to 2015 (Million dollars per tons)

The line chart illustrates the monthly export price of rice from Vietnam and Thailand between 2012 and 2015.

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36. Some people say that in our modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, some people argue that it is useless to educate pupils about the skills of good writing. I disagree with the statement as there are many sectors which require written letters or signatures and it helps students to stay away from devices.

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Some parents believe that extra private lessons outside school hours, where students work alone with a teacher, can help them do better at school. Others disagree. What are the advantages and disadvantages of private tuition?

Extra private lessons exclude school hours it a contentious issue debate for some parents, where some parents think, if their children discuss with a teacher can assist them do better at school, However, other parents are disagree. This essay will examine both advantages and disadvantages of private course.

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Some people think that workers like nurses, doctors and teachers do not get enough payment while film actors and athletes get more money than the importance of their job. How far do you agree or disagree?

payment job for a certain professional is a contentious issue debate, where some people think that people do important job such as nurses, doctors, and teachers get a lower income comparing to film actors and athletes, I firmly agree with this statement. This essay will examine some points for reason of this.

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The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in school programs?

Expressive thoughts can be quite difficult as it can actually make people jittery and scpetical. However, strengning thinking through the art can actually empower anyone with enough confidence to reach at greater heights. Such that music and theatre, the art forms are not just significant in an artist's life but also to the audience, in past and at present too. I will discuss this in upcoming paragraphs alongside the significance of inclusion of art as a subject in schools.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foregin language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, there are many people who live in a country where you have to speak a foreign language while others think that it can lead to a negative effect on their life and this country. Although it has some disadvantages to live in a different country, I belive the benefits of a living in a country where you don't have your nationality have more merits.

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the working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate about the potential advantages and disadvantages of reducing the number of workdays in a week and extending the weekend for employees. I believe that reducing the working week is a positive and effective way to boost employee productivity and engagement.

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