IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 123

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many young people now know more about international pop and movie stars than famous people in the history of their countries. What are the causes? Give solutions to increase the number of people to know about famous people in history. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no disputing the fact that most young people are more knowledgeble about international artist and film stars than widely known poeple of history in their nations. This is due large access to internet and social media platforms, and solutions should be channel into addressing these key variables.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There have been ongoing debates whether employers asking private details such as about martial status is helpful or not. Therefore, before arriving on a decision, both views will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.

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These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this outwiegh the disadvantages.

In these times, most people are starting to rely on the internet for communication and social interaction. More people are starting to share their experiences and feelings without the need to travel far when there is easy access in the comforts of their homes, but these mediums creat a physical distance and a real emotional disconnection.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweight the disadvantages?

There is no denying the fact that the population of people has increased recently. While it is held belief that some nations include a relatively huge figure of youngsters, compared to the elderly individuals.

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city environments become more and more unhealthy. Offer causes and solutions

Nowadays the urban environment has become much worse and it is becoming the main cause of the disease, especially in big cities. There are several factors (that) contribute to this problem.

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Advertisements of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So, the advertisements to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

With this huge improvement in technology, many access that can show everybody about everything happening in the world, and also people use this strategy, particularly for bussiness area to sell product let's say snacks and toys that give large effect for family both for parents as provider and kids as consumer. This essay will elucidate both viewpoints along with my viewpoint.

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In the past photographs were real on people and places. Nowadays with modern technologies, you cannot trust the pictures. Do you think is it a positive or negative development?

In pervious photography were authentic on individual as well towns.todays with modern technology development, you cannot believe the photos.Although some might consider it positive; however, I believe it to be extremely adverse. Not only because of blackmailing but also because of misunderstanding This essay will explore how these mega disadvantages have the potential to overshadow any merit.

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some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Others think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Advertising has been one of the most significant tools to promote products distribution among people by their attention's captivation. Someone believes, that this way of brands' marketing has become obsolete, while others believe that it still meets its purpose. I firmly believe that the latest opinion are more likely to be true than the former one.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the development of technology makes people's access to music easier than it was in the past. Therefore, many people believe music can be a good way to gather communities of different ages and cultures together. However, there are also some opponents to this view. In this essay, I will discuss both views and express my own opinion.

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Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Whether a gap year is worth for youngsters before seeking into higher education bears some consideration. The essay contends that the merits of having time to pursue passion and travelling outweigh the demerit of not having enough finance.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

A group of individuals think that kids should make their own decisions in regular issues like food, clothes and entertainment as a result, they will become a self-dependent person in their society. While, other group of people believe that parents should decide what suitable for their children.

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In some educational systems, children are required to study one or more foreign languages. In others, foreign language study is not a requirement. What are the potential benefits of foreign language study? Do you think foreign language study is an important part of education?

Since, learning is never going to make you down in any time in the future. It is as essential as, water is to our body. However, there is an arguments about whether the best idea is to make children learn a new language. Whereas some other opine that, there is no need to learn the other medium to communicate. From my standpoint, I agree with the former viewpoint because that everyone should learn other language so that they could communicate as well helps in relocation.

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The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

Since, every single person want to copy the next person style this days. It is believed that, usually people like to be dressed as the next person and have those items which the other is having.Therefore, it is an argued issue whether to copy others trend and have what products they are having or have your own fashion sense. I completely accord with this notion as it trending as well people likes to have more comfortable life.

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Recently, flooding in many big countries often happens worldwide and it frequently causes disaster to many people living in urban areas. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Flooding that recently occured in several contries, in particular on development countries like Indonesia, makes people in both rural and urban areas more suffering. However, flooding, like others natural disasters, is in odd moments hard to understand why it happens. This essay will ilustrate the triggers as well as the costs that involve in flooding.

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Nowadays more and more tasks at home and at work are being performed by robots. Why do you think it’s happening? Is it a negative or positive development?

In our modern life, the thing which called “robot” is not an unfamiliar state. Robots are now applying in many tasks of life such as at home or even at work. This essay will discuss the positive and negative sides, also present the opinion with development’s negative.

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Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. Why do you think is that? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?

These days, most individuals like to shop and they feel comfortable when they shop. So, in this essay, I am going to discuss this point and give an example.

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough in learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Education is the essential thing for our life and it helps in the growth of human civilization.Some people believe that initial level of education to universities level students are achieving more theorectical knowledge than practical experiences.However,others are opposing this fact.I totally agree with the statement that learners are spenting more time on learning lessons.In this essay,I will elaborate on my opinion with a suitable conclusion.

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Nowadays, many people commute by public transport in most big cities around the world. What are the reason for this? What can be done to improve public transport?

These dys, most people who live in metropolises across teh world travel to other places by public transit. This essay discusses the main cuase of this development and how we can develop this system.

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Some think dangerous extreme sports such as skydiving and rock climbing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many argue that high-risk sports, including skydiving and rock climbing should be prohibited. In my opinion, although this type of sports have risk factor of accidents, i believe it should not be banned because it would take the rights from people's freedom to choose sporting activities.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The maps illustrate some changes that were made to a public park from 1920 until now.

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