IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 124

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries, many parents teach their kids that everything can be achieved if they work try enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some countries, many parents teach their kids that everything can be achieved if they work try enough. In this essay, both of the positive and negative consequences will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Nowadays, The phenomenon of highly qualified graduated struggling with finding decent occupation is the problem which many nations are dealing with it. It has several reasons but with some solutions we can tackle this problem.

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Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be death of grammar and spelling. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There's no denying the fact that many people use text messaging to communicate with one another. While many might think that this might cause a death for grammar and spelling, many appos it. In my opinion, I agree that communication over text messages and excessive usage of short and basic words will reduce a person's grammar skills.

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Some schools are very strict about their school uniform an apoearance of their pupils, while other schools have very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children having school uniform?

Wearing uniform dress is an obligation in some schools. While there are some drawbacks associated with using similar dress, I believe the main benefits are more substantial.

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Countries with a longer average working day are more likely to be economically successful, but may suffer from negative social consequences as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these views?

Implementation long working hours might have a positive impact to economic development in certain countries; however, it has negative consequences of social life in society as well. In my opinion, I disagree with the former statement because it has no correlation but I agree with the latter due to some reasons.

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Some people believe theet student at university should be accessed with formal exam however other think continuous assessment like course and project work are more beneficial. What are the positive of both type of assessment. Do you think positive of formal assessment outweigh the another one.

While some people think that formal exam should be a respresentation for student's performance, others believe continuous assignment are more impactful. This essay will discuss the advantages of accessing both methods and state my opinion.

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More and more parents are deciding to educate their children at home rather than sending them to schools. What are the causes of this phenomenon? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Parents are increasingly deciding to home-tutor their children rather than educating them in schools. This is because of the harrassments their children face due to bullying and more news regarding mass-shootings in universities. I believe, such a decision is a negative development because schools provide necessary environment for learning adult skills.

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The gender gap in employment and leadership roles is a contentious issue. Discuss the reasons for this gap and potential solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, a number of workplaces are changing to accept more diversities, however, the gender difference would affect to employment and promotion in some places and it has been a chronical problem. This essay will explain the causes of the situation and suggest the solutions.

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In the future, all cars,buses and trucks will be driver less.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern era, while artificial intelligent is taking over the world and technology is more advanced than ever before, the trend of being driver less is more popular. This essay will discuss both perspectives in support of this latter.

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The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as poor people become poorer and rich people become richer. What problems could this situations cause? what are the solutions to address those problems?

Distance between poor people and rich people is growing which either they become poorer or wealthier. In my perspective, this leads to problems such as increased dissatisfaction and crime in society, as well as abnormal behavior that is caused by illiteracy. Therefore the government can establish a balance to some extent by regulating taxation and providing free educational opportunities

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There are movements all over the world to prohibit smoking from buildings such as restaurants, bars, clubs, offices and other indoor spaces. People argue secondhand smoke is dangerous and that such laws protect public health.

One of the health threats to people around the world comes from the poisonous smoke of cigarettes. Around the world, this awareness can be seen from many movements aiming to prohibit smoking in public premises in order to protect those who are considered second-hand smokers. Personally, these measures are proper and appropriate when it comes to protecting the individual's rights and health. The extent is to be elaborated in the following.

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There are movements all over the world to prohibit smoking from buildings such as restaurants, bars, clubs, offices and other indoor spaces. People argue secondhand smoke is dangerous and that such laws protect public health. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

One of health threats of people around the world comes from poisonous smoke of cigarrettes. Around the world, this awareness can be seen from many movements aiming to prohibit smoking in public premises in order to protect those who are considered second hand smokers. Personally, this measures is proper and appropriate when it comes to protect the individual's right and health. The extent is to be elaborated in the following.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

Most children will need a refreshment to help them grow faster. As a result, some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. Therefore, I will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of the occurence as set out below.

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In the future, all cars,buses and trucks will be driver less.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The devolpment and innoviation in technologies trend to replace all manual and automatic cars,buses, and trucks to autonomous vehicles in the future. In my opinion I strongly encourage the nation for the reason that will decrease the numbers of accident and more convenient .

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Some people believe that schools should choose their student according to their abilities. While other people think students with different abilities should learn together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One of the most controversial topics today relates to how to enhance student's abilities. While some people claim that they should be gathered by their abilities, others argue that those who have different talents should be taught together. In this essay, I elaborate on both opinions and the reasons why I tend to support the former perspective.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Students are prompted to learn art and music in middle school. I agree to this statement because it can bring many merits. The benefit of taking those classes are students able to develop their creativity, find their passion, and let them reduce their stress.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subject. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

School plays a crucial role on the teenagers skill advancement. While some people argue that students should focus on all lessons, others think that teenagers should study more into the subjects that they are capable and interest at. This essay will discuss both views and give my personal standpoint in detail.

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Countries with a long average working time are more economically successfull than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extend you agree or disagree?

It is argued that countries with a longer average working time are more economically successful than countries with shorter working times. This essay wholeheartedly disagrees with this assertion due to the justifications and illustrations given below.

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Some children spend a long time each day on their smartphone. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Some juveniles spend a long time each day on their mobile phones. This is because video streaming apps are so engaging, but this can have negative consequences because they can disract from family life. Minors love using mobiles devices because streaming services have many entertaining videos. This means they have endless opprtunities to enjoy themselves, and they can spend their entire day consuming new shows without thinking. For example, many videos on Netflix are aimed at children, some of which design their title and thumbnails to entire children to clich on one more video. As a result, they spend their free time in front of a screen instead of being outside doing physical activities, such as bike riding or playing sports. Despite them being highly enjoyable for the child, this essay believes they should be views negatively because of the impact it has on time with parents and siblings. Being around one's nuclear family teaches children many important things, such as values, m...

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The movement of people from agricultural areas to big cities has caused many problems at both places. What are the reasons of this problem and how can it be solved?

One of the significant issues today relates to the immigration of farmers from countrysides to more populated areas, which has brought negtive impacts on both places. In this essay, I elaborate the causes of this trend and how this should be dealt with.

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