IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 12

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In many countries, the crime rate amongst underaged people has been rising, Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem.

Nowadays, the increase in crime among underage individuals is a serious problem.However, we can witness several reasons for this tendency as well as alternative clues to solve this issue.

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Some people think that the increase in the number of obese people should be the responsibility of governments, while others think it should be the responsibility of individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

This essay will discuss whose responsibility is the growth of obese people. There are two mainstream ideas that will be discussed. Some might say it is the responsibility of the government while others believe the responsibility should fall on an individual. In the following paragraphs I will discuss arguments, present examples and will give my opinion.

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The key to solving environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient way of life for the sake of future generations. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In today's world there are many environmental problems such as air pollution, water toxicity, weather events and so on. Some people think that to solve these challenges and to offer better a life to future generations, present population of the world should sacrifice their comfortable life and do something necessary. This essay agrees with this opinion. In additon in this essay will be given an other alternative solution beside refusing conveinent.

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Some people think that the increase in the number of obese people should be the responsibility of the governments, while others think it should be the responsibility of individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays there are more and more people who are suffering from obesity. Some may say that this problem is individual while others might think that this is the government's responsibility. In this essay I am going to discuss both sides and give my point of view.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree ?

I don’t agree that higher income is better than activity contentment in the long term. If I don’t like my appointment and work only for the fee, I will feel depressed and will not become an expert. When people love their work, they feel more comfortable and relaxed. They make progress and improve in their field, In the long run, higher wage will be earned.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some students argue that to learn about other subject and main classes. In contrast,some students believe that it is vital to give all time and focus to education for a field of study.This essay will analyze and compare both perspectives.

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The internet has brought sea change in the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. what are the most serious problems linked to the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

Over the course of the last decades, the internet has dramatically transformed the way someone can share and gain information. Although this phenomenon offers numerous benefits, its drastic downsides, such as substantial rise in the amount of misleading information and mental issues, cannot be neglected. Therefore, some practical measures should be taken so as to reduce the side of heavy dependent on the internet effectively.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

It is argued whether experimenting on animals is negative and it should be banned, although some people think it is key to make scientific discoveries. Using animals for experiments has always been a controversial debate and researchers are trying to use alternative methods in Science in order to avoid the use of species from the animal kingdom.

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Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-year-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you think crime is determined by human nature?

The idea that the behavior of a three-year-old child can predict future criminal tendencies is a controversial topic that touches on the debate between nature and nurture. While some scientists argue that certain innate traits may predispose individuals to criminal behavior, I believe that crime is not solely determined by human nature but is instead shaped by a combination of genetic, environmental, and social factors.

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“some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids”. Discuss both views and give your opinion.owadays

It has become an important topic of discussion nowadays where a few parents believe childcare centres are good for the growth of kids whereas others think grandparents are the best option. Both viewpoints are correct as they have specific pros and cons, however I believe children should stay with their grandparents especially at early years of their age.

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University students often focus on one subject. However, some people think that universities should encourage students to learn a range of other subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, university admissions are more likely to focus on a particular subject. But, from others, opinion universities must encourage students to grab knowledge of various subjects along with that anyone particular subject. I have a balanced view of this statement. My viewpoint is justified in the ensuing paragraphs.

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In some countries students pay their own university and college fees, however in other countries government pays their fees. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

It is argued that in many countries if students want to study at university or college they should pay their fees , while in others countries government make it free for students . However , In my view, I believe that when the government pay their tuition has advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Many students now work whilst they are studying in college or university. This often results in them having less time to concentrate on their education as feeling under pressure. What are some of the causes of this? What solution could you suggest?

Learning while you earn has been a popular concept for many years particularly in Western countries. This work style generally leads to less study time which could burden the students with stress, anxiety and isolation.

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Schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through Internet, and they can study just as well at home. What extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that, study at school is not essential anymore because it can be replaced by home schooling and children can gather any information they want from the world wibe web.While i admit that study remotely at home through internet has some beneficial aspects, I would argue that, in school students can compete with their own peers and socilize with them,which we dont have these benefits in home schooling.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep.” What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's world, most individuals have problems with getting enough sleep. I think that it can stem from insufficient leisure activities and malnutrition issues. However, the problem can be solved by way of more healthy diets and decreased heavy workforce by governments and people as individually.

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Olympic games are very very important and respected in the past. However, some people say that technological improvements have reduced the importance of Olympic games in this 21st-century do you agree or disagree with this

The Olympics has always been a heated topic since the game was introduced, and it was highly acknowledged by the global community. Yet, recent advancements in technology have altered many people's perception on this vital event. Personally, I argue that it is still of great signficance despite changes in our society and here are the reasons why.

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Experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many experts argue that it is more beneficial to start learning language in primary school rather than waiting until secondary school. While there are some challenges to early language learning, the advantages generally outweigh the disadvantages. The following essay will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antactic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Nowadays, vast majority of tourists explore destinations with challenging environment, including the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. In my view, the main reason for this is curiosity, many people create theories or conspiracy theories based on such places, which eventually leads to popularity of these locations. The following paragraphs will discuss both merits and demerits and reach reasonable conclusion.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Urbanization rate is constantly increasing in majority of countries, leaving the rural population falls. While the city area might become highly packed, I firmly believe this will result in positive development of the country.

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in some contries, more and more people are becoming interestd in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Nowadays many individuals are willing to find knowledge about the history of the place where they spend their time. people are eager to know more about the land where they live. This essay discusses the reasons for doing this and how social media and the internet are helping individuals to collect this information.

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