IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 12

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Multicultural societies where people of different ethnic groups live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, because of globalization, many countries exist multicultural xxx, which allow different ethnic groups to live together. I strongly agree that benefits outweigh drawbacks.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Many students have the opportunity to study abroad instead of studying in their own countries, and that helps them to gain more knowledge about other nations. The downside of studying abroad is that students can not afford the money to study in another country.

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The plans below show the ground floor of a library in 2001 and how it was redeveloped in 2009.

The floor plans illustrate the comparison of the ground floor library in 2001 and its redecoration in 2009. Overall, although the digital facilities and librarian’s desk remained unchanged, the library underwent significant changes by 2009, particularly with the addition of new book genres and facilities.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

There is growing debate on whether extension of the lifespan is beneficail to the society. While some people believe that it may positively affect our society, I argue the disadvantages far outweigh the advantages as a whole.

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some people think that there are now too many cars on the roads ,and that they are spolling our towns and cities. do you agree or disagree?

Influenced by economic growth nowadays, more and more people tend to have a sufficient budget to buy cars, leading to the dramatic increase of them on the road. Some people regard this phenomenon as a bad thing that spoils residences and I could not agree more.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done attract more local people to visit these places?

Many museums and historical sites around the world experience a notable decline where the number of visitors is tourists rather than local residents. This trend highlights an important issue in cultural tourism that requires careful examination and practical solutions.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that is responsability of parents to teach their children how to be good members of society, while others think that is responsabilty of school to teach them. In my opinion, parents and school have the same importance and in this essay I am going to explain why.

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The world production output from Asia, Europe, and the rest of the world in different years.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of the world’s production contribution from Asia, Europe, and the other part of the world over the period from 1840 to 2000. Overall, it is clear that there is a decline in trends except for the output from the rest of the world.

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Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private healthcare outweigh the disadvantages?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the importance of our health. It is undeniable that health has become an essential part of our lives. Surely, we all know that our health is a main part of life; therefore, there are only advantages to improving it.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than a secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some analytics argue that it favourable for younger students to start learning a second language in primary school rather than high school. This essay will discuss the advantages and the drawbacks of this topic within the frameworks of productivity and efficiency .

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisation. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that the work is paramount for humans, and living without working is difficult. Some people think that it is better to still in the same company. However, others prefer to chang their work. In my opinion, I agree with changing the job if I want to improve my working skills.

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Many students graduate high school and want to continue studying outside Give advantages and disadvantages for studying abroad

e world has changed in many ways, especially in education. Students today who graduate from high school are faced with choices . Some decide to stay home , and others decide to study abroad. This essay will examine both advantages and disadvantages of this action.

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Some people think thats it's a good idea to socialise with work colleages during evenings and weekend. Other people, think it's important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Discussion on a topic related to having a balance between social life and private life is an edge topic which originates from the mindset that comes from a cooperative way to being successful and happy , or to combat the social life and have own privacy to separate lines and borders , even in the workplace vs personal life .

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today, students can benefits from widers information through internet. some people think that tradition schooling disappear soon. Do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, the usage of internet has increased over the past decades. Some individuals think that students can access a variety of information from the internet, and traditional schooling will disappear soon. I disagree with this notion. I think school provides social values, encourages them, and proper understanding as well.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

There is a growing trend of people migrating from rural areas to urban centers. While some believe this may have some negative impacts, I argue that the benefits of urbanization outweigh its drawbacks.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than a secondary school. Do the advantage of this outweigh the dis advantage?

Some argue that children should start learning a new language in elementary school instead of second school. I firmly support the proposal, since the achievements of it would enhance individual skills in personal and professional lives.

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Natural resources such as oil, forests, and freshwater are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does this cause? How can we solve these problems?

Natural resources have been overhauled and are being squandered more than ever now. The growing population and a maladroit use of resources by them have exacerbated the status of natural resources today. In the paragraphs to come, this essay shall annotate the problem caused by such scurrying usage of natural resources and the plausible remedial measures that could be taken to assuage such problems.

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In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the Internet and live without any in-person interaction with others. Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today’s fast-paced world, it is not required to physically present to achieve tasks such as shopping, performing the job, or interacting with others. In fact, from my perspective I believe this trend would lead to negatives rather than positives if it is analysed deeply as outlined below.

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Some people think that mental strength is more important for success in sport. Some people believe that physical health is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

the question of whether physical well-being or the mental side of it is more significant has sparkled heaten debate. Both of these notions are valid to an extent which I will discuss among this essay.

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Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, but others think the people should have freedom to choose sports activities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The topic of banning dangerous sports has become increasingly prominent. Some people believe that dangerous sports should be prohibited, while the other think that people has the choice themselves. Personally, I agree the latter.

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