IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 12

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that old buildings and houses should be replaced in cities with more modern building while others argue that old buildings should be protected. I would argue that we should destroy the old skyscrapers and houses to build more modern many-stationey buildings.

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In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation ?

It is extremely crucial for people to own an house rather than rent one in some countries. There are a variety of reasons for the case, and this case may have a positive situation for several ways

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Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Grophs of individuals believe that old and tradational buildings should replace in modern buildings.However, other individuals believe that people should perserve old buildings.The significant of bothe views would be analysed and compared here to idetify the most convincing observation.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important Thảo

There are conflicting views about the best way to stay healthy. While some people believe physical activities are beneficial to health , from my point of view, a balanced diet plays a role important of humans.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the trend of people from rural area started to moving to cities has become increasingly prevalent. As a results, the number of population in the countryside is declining in several countries. I argue that this should be seen as a negative development because of the disparities occur might lead to economical problem.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

The phenomenon of a massive migrations of people from rural area to cities increase throughout the years. This might be happen because of the promising prospect in the city rather than the countryside. However, this may cause the decreasing of the population in the countryside. Therefore, I believe this is a sign of a negative development.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

The phenomenon of ageing-the increasing population of elderly people-is happen in most part of the world. Some people believe this phenomenon will causes problems for government, whereas others thinks there are advantages by having more elderly people in the society. This essay will explain why the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disavantages.

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Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the word artificial intelligence is in trend commonly known as AI. It prefers to a software designed by humans. once an AI software is developed , It can answer various questions and can do various tasks using its algorithm set by humans. Many people think that development in the AI sector could be very beneficial. I will elaborate on it in further paragraphs and give my opinion on this topic.

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Prison is the common way most countries try to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide the public a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (OPINION ESSAY)

In the internet era, crimes in different forms are on the rise. To solve this issue, some people argue that putting more emphasis on education can substantially help lessens harmful acts, others believe that having prisons will do. The analysis of the impact of learning on the incidence and prevelance of criminals, as well as taking into consideration the pros and cons of jails on society will aid clarifying both perspectives before bringing out an opinion.

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Some people today believe that it is acceptable to use physical force to discipline children, but others feel that it is completely unacceptable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There has been an ongoing debate as to whether utilizing corporal punishment to correction cases is acceptable or not. While physical discipline would be better in some cases, I am in favor of a latter opinion.

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss both the views and give your opinion .

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the urgent need for greater international cooperation in addressing global challenges such as climate change, poverty, and pandemics. There is a common perception that air freight is an essential solution so transport agriculture products, therefore solving poverty problem in some countries. While this idea offers certain merits, its drawbacks significantly outweigh any potential benefits.

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Some people prefer activities and lifestyle in hot climates while others prefer activities and lifestyle in cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an ongoing debate about which weather people prefer playing games and enjoying their lifestyle. Although some argue that sunny time is the best climate for activities and lifestyle due to a variety of activities that can be done, I firmly advocate for winter climate as it can increase bonding between families.

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Some believe that with the introduction of modern technology people become more social. While some people think with modern technology, they become less social. Discuss the both views and give your opinion?

These days, we live in technology era, and people have various idea abou it. A group of people think that it has a possitive effect on socialization; In contrast, other ones have a reverce percepect. I subscribe to the second idea owing to the fact that technology impact on the people's real inreaction and mental alert.

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Caring of children is an important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take training courses. Do you agree or disagree?

One of the most crucial issue in some countries is pay attention to the children. It is thought by some take a training course for parents can be effective on caring children. I tottaly agree with this statement but it can have some detrimental points.

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Some people believe that to become successful in sports one should have a natural talent. Others think that practice is a crucial part to success. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In modern society, it is often aruged that a natural talent for sports can become victorious while practice is a significant part to be perfect. From my perspective, the latter is more plausible but both of two issues will be examined in this essay.

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In many countries, formal exams are used to assess students’ abilities and judge the success of their education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using formal exams to assess students’ abilities? Do you think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?

Assessing students' capability for academic success by exams is the most method that many countries around the world. I believe that the reliance only on exams does not determine students' ability to be successful learners. Exams are assessing tool for teachers' performance, and judging students only by exams is unjustice.

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Some people think that competition at work , at school and daily life is a good thing . Others believe that we should try cooperate more , rather than competing against each other

It is often believe that people consider competition as one of the most significant role to improving in your performance . While some people argue that participating in work and study areas has more evident benefit rather than competition .This essay will discuss both these apposite view .

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a proposal that an equal number of male and female students should be admitted by universities for each course. While this suggestion seems valid on the face of it, it severely compromises the quality of higher education. Therefore, traditional approaches to select prospective students should remain intact.

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In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e.g literatures), boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree?

In many school and university, female students select arts topics. In contrast, male students select science topics. I completely agree this. I think ıt has many logical factors and causes. İnıtially, brain chemicals, intrests topics, and other factors.

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19 .As the world has become technological advance, computer are replacing more and more jobs that maybe lose because of computer. Discuss at least one problem that may result.

The advanced of technology has cause a substantially change at peoples lives. The companies are investing in machines that are displacing people, as consequency unemployment has become a issue. The advantages to both the employer and consumer, are massively indisputable. However a jobless society could bring forth many consequences to people. This essay, will discuus both sides of this problem.

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