IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 13

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In many countries are investing new technology to deal with the public. Why it is happening? Do you think it is an appropriate use of goverment money?

In recent years, governments around the world are increasingly investing in new technology in other to control the public. It happens because of higher demand for efficiency, it is also appropriate to spend money on machines because if it can serve the public better.

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In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government universities.

Nowadays, new technology are being invested by government to serve community. This writer argues that they are enhancing quality of speech and the suitable way is that finacial of government being used resonably.

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In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this hapenning? Do you think this is an approriate use of government money?

In the ever-progressive society , a huge fortune is invested in state-of-the-art technological devices to get the handle on the public throughout many nations . This development is occuring due to the demand of automatic process of manufacturing. The writer believes that it is not such a waste of investment from government .

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In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public.Why is this happening?Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money.

In digital era,public is being invested by the government in technology,thus wanting to attract the invest from other countries.The author believe that is the positive phenomenon due to protect the information and contact with the customers easily.

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In many countries government sure investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?

In light of the proliferation of automation, governments across numerous nations are investing in new technology to better interact with society due to the fact that people are using machinery more and more in daily life. The writer believes that this is the right expenditure when it has a positive impact on current and future generations.

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In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an approriate use of government money?

In recent years, all the world governments have invested in economies to boost innovation, generate new technologies and foster cutting-edge industries. These interventions can have positive or negative impacts. Moreover, they can expand knowledge, enhance productivity and spread the essential tools of global growth and development. I will discuss and give an opinion on this issue in my article.

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In many country governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public Why is this happening Do you think this í an oppropriate use of government money

Governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public due to the increasing demand for efficient and accessible public services. This includes online portals for government services, digital health records and e-learning platforms. The aim is to enhance service delivery, reduce waiting times and improve transparency and accountability.

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In many countries, the government prioritizes economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In the present world, countries are constantly competing to lead the world. Consequently, some might seek growth in economic or finanacial industries, and even consider them as first priority to gain more power. Meanwhile, the other dimensions which has the same importance are often overlooked. It is disagreed with this non-comprehensive policy, and it will be analyzed by discussing the core value of the goverment and some consequences of only caring economy could lead us to.

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Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unneccessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support

It is often argue that all of children should spend leisure time with their families whilst others disagree and think it is not positive for all children. In this essay I am going to examine this question from both point of view and give my own opinion on the matter.

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In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?

Some people have gained a lot of wealth and a great health but they lack happiness. This problem can be caused by several issues and of course, there are some ways to tackle it which I'm going to explain more about in the rest of this essay.

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In some countries , owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might be this case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In our modern society, in some parts of the world , it is crucial for individuals to dwell in their own home instead of renting an apartment. This kind of approach mainly related with having an estate for the future . In my opinion, this phenomenon have both cons and pros.

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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Having more money allows for greater financial security, facilitating access to better healthcare, education, and lifestyle. It enables individuals to support their families, save for the future, and invest in personal and professional development. On the other hand, it often results in longer working hours, increased stress, and less time for personal interests and family.

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some people think that children going to single sex schools have disadvantages later in life. to what extent do you agree?

There is a belief that graduating from same gender enducational entity causes drawbacks in the future. Certainly, humans' should be surrounded by both sex while growing because, sooner or later, they would have to cooperate with each other. Despite spreading society, we should treat all equally, and suppose to indicate it, as well.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

Young individuals are persuaded to perform better in academic works in todays context, part of the society commonly believed that academically non related areas such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school curriculum to accommodate and prioritised academic work.In my opinion, this leads to unhealthy young generation with lack of practical skills to strive in the society.Thus, this writer wholeheartedly disagrees with the captioned statement.

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Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them. What are the problems related to this? What are some possible solutions?

Many claim that caring for old people is not possible because of a lack of time to look after them. There are some troubles that care for the elderly and help them. I think we should make an easy condition to spend a lot of time with them.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Many people suppose that parents should teach their children at both of two views: right and wrong when they are just little kids. Besides, punishment plays a fundamental role in teaching kids to make them understand how to do right. From my perspective, I completely agree this opinion. I will discuss this opinion before giving my opinion in this essay below.

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Libraries should focus on improving their technological resources rather than in building a larger collection of paper books. To what extent do you agree?

Most the libraries are focused on expanding the collection of books to attract visitors instead of keeping up with the modern day and using technology, I agree that libraries ought to replace paper books with E-books for variety of reasons

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Although many people value public parks, this space could be better used for the other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and build economics. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Most pepole appreciate city parks and pulic gardens. Yet due to the inrease growth of the population some think this can be utilized as accommodational buildings or in the development of busnisess and economy. in my opinion, I belive that public parks are essential part of community.

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The world of work is changing rapidly and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change, and suggest ways of preparing people for the world of work in the future.

Over a short amount of time, the labor market went through significant change. Currently, workers rarely keep the same position or work-life benefits. Clearly, together with automatization, people's needs change which requires organizational change evaluation.

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Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be shut down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.

Nowadays we have so many different kinds of zoos. Some folks think that animals have not enough comfort and state must suspend work of zoos. However, another population guess such fauna are safe In the wild. This essay would argue that is a negative development because best way to save endangered species is by protecting natural habitats, furthermore zoos are educational, interesting and fun.

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