IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 14

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that to be a successful sportsperson, one needs to have a natural ability. Others think that hard work and practice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many civilians believe that ones need to have natural abilities to be a successful athlete however, some think hard work and practice would reach anyone to those abilities. I believe that athletes are made by determination , hard work and a lot of patience. In addition , to that working hard on anything will reach you to any goal you have in mind and think of. For example, boxers and football players are made by practice and not giving up because it needs many trials to apply . Hower,natural abilities can be a bad thing if its not elevated and used , it would be a waste of talent for instance, being gifted with flexibility and not actually using it can truly be devastating thing because its putting it in waste. Let us put it in that way if someone really gifted he would try to invest in his talent and make it a part of his living. However, many think just being born with it will simplify your life and I am biased despite this strong statement because its as if i brought a piece...

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by ‎almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this ‎disturbing trend.

Overweight is a sign of bad health condition. Therefore, an increased by almost 20 % of overweight children in western countries is an alarm. There must be a radical changing in lifestyle.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely succesfull at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Advertising is known as an important factor to help new starting businesses, for a long time. As a company advertises the products, they become widely known and as a result, it sells more stuff. However, some people believe that advertising has become less benefitable as people tend to not care about them, while others claim that they are still as perfect as they were.

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Improving living conditions within society is a far superior approach to crime prevention than the threat of punishment. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?

‏Living conditions have become an indispensable part of people's lives. A frequently discussed issue whether is it is crucial to develop conditions of living, or whether there should be implemented some punishments. I firmly agree that living Conditions have significant benefits for both individuals and economy. This essay will explore the reasons behind this phenomenon, supported by relevant examples.

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Nowadays, there are more workers working from home and more students studying from home, due to the fact that computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

The growth of the internet caused an increasing number of people to work or study online

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Scientific developments in farming always bring major benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Farming become more popular in current era than in the past. The innovation of technology in farming always gives high profits. This essay will argue why scientific developments are entirely necessary for farmers in bringing better outcomes.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extend do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

in many countries, society is now living longer than ever before, a fraction of people believe that an ageing population makes trouble for governments. in contrast, many people show the opposite that there are three benefits if the nation has more elderly people. in my opinion, this is very important for people to get experience of life. in this essay, we will discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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Nowadays, many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What can employees do to make their life easier?

In capitalism, people adhere to a job that is more paid, consequently it is more appropriate for them as they could make more money, compared to a less paid job. Prioritizing spending time on things that are more important might be useful and yield people calmness, by riding them of stress.

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Some people say that best way to show care to friends and family is giving gifts or presents ,others say that we can show care with other ways . Discuss both views and give your opinion .

Some masses believe that best way to show love and care towards family as well as friends circle is by giving presents to them ,while others think that there are others ways to show love and affection . Both views will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs along with my opinion .

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In the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records. These days, they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous. What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect the sports themselves? Give reasons for your answer.

Sporting champions used to be motivated by the desire of success and being in guiness book,the world records'book however,nowadays,they tend to be more and more encouraged by money and celebrity.This attitude influence young people and the sports. This essay will examine the effects of this behavior on youth and sports.

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Some people find following a strict routine allows them to feel more in control. Others however think that constant changes to the routine make life more interesting and less predictable. What extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that following a routine in your life will make it seem more organized. While it is commonly held belief that for reaching goals you must follow a certain plan , there is also an argument that joyful moments come with experiencing new adventure. This essay will analyse this topics from both points of views. In my opinion, I consider that experimenting brand new things is away of growth .

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Some people say that history offers no practical benefit to society while others claim that history teaches us to understand the present. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

History is the origin of the nation, which helps people to know about their real identity. Some groups of people think that it has no benefits for the society, while others think it provides valuable information. I would like to discuss both views and give my opinion at the end.

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In the modern world more and more emphasize is being placed on the acquisition of practical skills rather than knowledge from textbook or other sources discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

Nowadays, there are a lot of colleges that teach practical skills more important than knowledge from textbooks. In this essay, I will provide some opinions on the matter.

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Some people believe that the world should have only one government rather than national government. Do you think the benefits of this system outweigh its disadvantages?

I think world government is an absurd idea. I do not see any benefit of that concept. It will ruin the beauty of locality and the complexity of the world itself.

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Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the enviroment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

Deforestations are massive around the world. In order to stop them, earth citizens must work hand in hand to find comprehensive solutions. I argue, there are three aspects that head of states must give attention to.

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The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities is by reducing the need for people to travel from home to work , shopping and education.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge

Many civillians say that reducing traffic can only be done by limiting the usage of transports. I believe that making and redesigning new roads can limit it from happening . For example, Japan has one of the best roads system comparing to other nations, in addition to that traffics are hardly seen or heard eithder by news or social media.A lot of people believe that having a timetable on hours where others go for their jobs, shopping and education might be a solution to stop traffic.This is a controversial idea because we can't control societies by making their needs hard to reach because its absurd to actually believe that. However , traffic these days are out of hand and sadly there is no ideal way to stop it , everyone are suggesting but none is actually ready for this change. For instance, Kuwait have started being more strict on how many cars you can own , usage of phone while driving , crossing roads and moreover this change have got few crowds furious. Laws aren't designed t...

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both there views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, beeing professional is really struggle for people. Because becoming expert human require so much decipline and time. However, some people argue that professionals should work in a country where they graduated while others think that professionals can work wherever they want. Both opinions have some benefits but from my point of view, the professionals should work in another country if they have this pleasure.

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Some people say that high taxes are necessary so that the government will have enough money to provide good public services for the population. However, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, some society feel that high taxes are necessary so that the government will have enogh money to give exellent public services for the society. However, some people disagree with this statement. I will discuss my arguement on the matter.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that jobs are difficult to find. While it is a commonly held belief that if people were looking for a job they have to move away from their home town, there is also an argument that opposes it.

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Is it a good thing if senior management workers in a company get a much higher salary than other workers in same company.Do you agree or disagree?

In many companies, the senior management earns significantly higher wages compared to their subordinates. While some argue that the disparity in their salary can be justified due to their responsibilities and expertise, others believed that this creates an imbalance within the workforce community. I strongly agree with the later perspective. And this essay will further explore on the central reason behind this.

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