IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 14

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Across the world, local shops are closing due to losing customers to online competitors. What problems does this produce? And what solutions can you suggest to overcome them?

Nowadays technology has a huge impact in our life particularly in business. Online stores have surpassed local shops in sales due to the ease and convenience of shopping.

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Some people believe that children should be able to choose what to study in school from early on. Other people think most of education should be guided and be based on what is useful, regardless of a child’s preferences.

There are different points of view on how youngsters should choose their primary study path. While some believe that it is fundamental to decide on the objects of study from the outset, others claim that every choice should be made with future usefulness in mind, without considering child’s desires. In my opinion, although it is difficult to understand individuals’ inclinations at an early stage, it is fundamental guided them through the decision-making process while also takin children’s preferences into account.

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Some people think that when recruiting, companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others consider they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions.

Some people argue that including sports in school is a waste of time and resources, while others believe that it plays an essential role in student’s overall developments. Both sides have their own opinions, and this essay will discuss them before giving a conclusion.

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In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

There are countries where it is usual to have the first child at an older age. In this essay, the reasons in terms of attitude towards marriage at older ages and financial problems and advantages including enjoying early life and disadvantages including health complications will be explored.

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Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?

The trend of introducing laws to restrict working hours for workers has gradually spread over some countries. That is because the large amount of working time causes some negative effects for employees, such as mental health issues, a decrease in the quality of working and accelerating exploitation from employers. I believe that this trend are a positive development because it ensures to provide workers with a stable and healthy life.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Umar

There is a possibility of scientific researchers and travelers to have access to natural locations. Increased ecotourism to those new environments, for instance, traveling to the South Pole, is an advantage for the local people as it may benefit the overall economy and promote natural conservation. On the contrary, these so-called "sustainable tourism" may bring detrimental disadvantages by creating non-eco-friendly accommodations and cause a huge loss for the biodiversity of the tourist attraction.

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With the increased global demand for oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree? Angsa

Some argued that untouched areas should be investigated to fulfill the growing demand for fossil fuels. Although the oil and gas extraction could help to meet the need, it also causes a detrimental impact on the environment. I completely disagree with this statement for several reasons, which are explained further with suitable explanations and examples.

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Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a job, others believe that it would be better to gain experience first. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that possessing a higher degree education is the best way to get a good job. Meanwhile, others think skills and experience are more essential. My opinion is higher level of education, mastering skills, and having experiences are equally important to get a job owing to the job’s nature.

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Nowadays, more and more people are moving from the countryside to cities, which are becoming overcrowded. What are the reasons for this movement to cities and what are the effects?

Urbanisation has become a major global trend, with a growing number of people relocating from countryside areas to cities. This essay will show the main reasons behind this migration and examine its significant effects on both cities and villages regions.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that professionals, such as doctors and engineers should work which country they got their training, while the others believe they should be free to choose which country they want to work. Both views have own valid reasons and this essay discuss about each of them before expressing my own opinion.

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More and more people are buying a wide range of household goods. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?

A growing number of individuals tend to purchase plenty of household goods. Although this matter both has merits and demerits, I hold a strong belief that it is more beneficial.

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Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work? Do you agree Or disagree

A growing number of artists today tend to have low income, and plenty of individuals believe that the government should fund money for artists to continue their work. Although it both has benefits and drawbacks, I strongly disagree with this issue.

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With the increase of digital media available online the role of the library has become obsolete University should provide digital material rather than textbooks Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this position and give your own point of view

In the era of technology, online availability of books has increased around the world which somehow takes over the role of a traditional library. It is also argued that in institutions, internet books should replace hardcopies which has its own pros and cons but everything will unfold as we move along in the essay.

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Some people think that the success of life is based on hard work and determination. Others, however, believe that there are more important factors, such as having money or a good appearance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate about whether some individuals consider that hard work and determination are necessary to succeed in life , others believe that having money or an attractive appearance are more vital to gain an achievement. I will discuss both perspectives before presenting my opinion,justifying the first view.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In today's world, it is common to see children spending several hours daily on their gadgets. This issued has attracted both positive and negative sides. This essay will give reasons why this is happening and negative for young generations.

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It is a natural process that animal species such as dinosaurs become extinct. There is no reason for people to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

The opinion whether human should prevent a natural process that animal species become extinct has sparked heated discussion in recent years. While some people argue that there is no reason for people to prevent from happening, I believe that people should take actions to preserve endangered species because we cause a lot of environmental issues.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The opinion on whether young students should be demanded to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old has sparked heated discussion in recent years. While some people argue that full time education is unnecessary to some extent, I strongly believe that full time education leads to positive effects such as offering sufficient academic knowledge and opportunities to communicate among peers.

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Some people believe that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. Do you agree or disagree

A widely held opinion is that most crimes are caused by the lack of financial means. Being aware of consequences of poverty, which lead to deterioration of mental and physical well-being, the essay agrees with that point of view.

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Today credit cards are easy to get in many countries, but some people who use them struggle to pay their debt. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries today, credits cards are widely available to pay their debts, however, some groups of people have difficulties. The principal advantage is to get a wide range of rewards and cashback after paying through a card, which outweighs the main disadvantage of the stack of transaction fees.

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Some individuals argue that educating children at home is the most effective method, whereas others believe that traditional schools provide greater benefits. Discuss both perspectives and express your own opinion.

Many people agree that home schooling children is a better way to educate them whereas the other segment of people think going to an institution and getting education traditionally is still the ideal method. Both the opinions are equally objective and depending on the child's requirments , parents can continue to choose one of the choices. After elaborating on both the perspectives, personal thoughts would be given at the end of the essay.

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