IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 17

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries, not only are young people richer but also safe and healthier than ever before, yet they are less happy. What are the reasons for this? And what can be done to help them?

In many developed countries, young people enjoy better financial stability, better healthcare, and improved safety. Despite this, they are experiencing low lever of happiness. This trend can be attributed to several factors, and solutions must be implemented to address it.

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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

These days, researchers are discussing that some people love to try new things while others prefer to keep doing things they are familiarwith. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the topic and I will explain my views.

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Apologizing for accidentally breaking your friend's belonging.

I am writing this letter to apologize for accidentally breaking your mobile contact. I went to Marina's birthday party three days ago. Since I was in a hurry, I accidentally left my phone at home. That's why I borrowed your phone for two hours. I took your phone to take a selfie. Suddenly, I dropped your iPhone while I was taking a photo at the birthday photo backdrop and your phone's screen and corners cracked. I am really sorry for breaking your phone.

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The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future.

In the contemporary world, the question of what can be the possible causes and solutions of a quick change in the world of work has sparked considerable heated debates and discussions in different communities. In the following paragraph, I will comprehensively shed light on the root causes of this trend, such as the development of technology, fast-paced environment and strong purpose of becoming wealth, and make suggestions to employees in order to survive in cut-throat competitive workplace, such as development of certain skills.

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Nowadays, more and more people choose to go to university. One of the main reasons for this is to secure better job opportunities.

Nowadays, more and more people choose to go to university. One of the main reasons for this is to secure better job opportunities. However, some argue that university education offers much broader benefits, not only for individuals but also for society.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign laguage at the primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage?

Some professionals argued that learning a second language at the elementary school has advantages for children rather than secondary school. Although this action has some drawbacks like limited practise and extra academic pressure, it also has cognitive benefits and several future opputunities.

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Some people think that it is good for a country's cultures to show imported foreign films and TV programs. Other people think that a country should develop their own films and TV programs instead. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Several people believe that foreign films and TV programs from outside countries should be shown to improve the culture of the country, while others believe that the country should develop their own. In this essay, I will explain both opinions and give my view on this issue.

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Some believe that traffic problems in cities can best be resolved by investing in urban infrastructure while others feel there are superior solutions. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

While it is a common belief that spending on public roads can work out on traffic issues, many people argue that there are better alternatives. Although strict law enforcement or raising awareness can tackle driver violations, I strongly agree that government's investment is the most effective method. Along with automatically motivating people to follow regulations like other solutions, it can upgrade facilities for increasing vehicles.

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Library or Playground There are plans to improve your city. Two different ideas are being discussed. One is to build a bigger library with more computers and more books. The other is to build a new playground. The playground in your neighbourhood now is very small and old. The city planners want to ask the public for their opinion. explain why you prefer the city should build a bigger library.

From my perspective, developing a bigger library would be the best option for the community since it will bring more benefits than a new playground.

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Living in large cities today poses many problems for people. What are these problems? Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller towns?

People living in large cities are faced with many problems these days. These problems require citizens to be able to effectively cope with higher stress compared with people who reside in smaller towns. However, encouraging more people to live in suburban areas or small cities will not be a significant solution.

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In spite of the advances in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Hunger persists as a significant global challenge despite advancements in agricultural technology. While improved food production is crucial, addressing hunger requires a multifaceted approach that encompasses efficient logistics and, most fundamentally, improved education.

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Some people believe that space travel is a waste of government money while others believe it is important for human development. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

It is a highly debatable issue with different opinions: proponents think that it is better to spend money on space travel, while opponents believe that it is a waste of money due to several factors, such as the huge burden problem, the risk of failure, and so on. This discussion explores both perspectives before presenting my own opinion.

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Some countries are struggling with increases in crime rates. Some believe that having more police on the streets is best way to reduce and combat crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some countries suffer from a lot of violence and their criminal indices are increasing every day. Many citizens are demanding more police guards, and there are even those who would accept such drastic measures as taking the military out to the streets. Increased police presence would undoubtedly help, but in the long run it would not have a major impact on the fight against crime.

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It is important for people to tale risk, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks overweigh the disadvantages?

Taking risks is a daunting task. It may or may not give the expected outcome for which it is taken. At the same time, it becomes imperative to undertake risks in certain situations in an individual's lifetime, personally, professionally or both.I believe that undertaking a risk depends upon the extent to which it is undertaken,so that the merits supercede the demerits.

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In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In recent years, the ability of individuals to afford and access healthcare services has become essential. However, many nations oblige their residents to purchase medical services for a fee, therefore, some advocate for a medical service provided by the legislative of the country. Although free services might attract unnecessary healthcare use, I strongly agree that it should be made free, because, some people live in abject poverty and cannot afford to pay for medical treatment, and also, free medical care would motivate people to participate in frequent check-ups, which can potentially decrease the burden of some diseases on the national economy. This essay will explore these reasons with some insight examples.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, an increasing number of residents with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. However, in my opinion, while I believe that alternative methods might help a lot, I agree that visiting the doctor is generally more advantageous.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many think that doctors and engineers as professionals need to work at the place where they do their internship. However, some people believe they have a right to work in a different country. Each of these statements has its own reasons.

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Some believe that the best way to reduce global warming is to increase the price of fuel, while others argue that other measures are more effective. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays many nations are facing the problem of declining number of students attending science subjects at university. What do you think are the underlying reasons for such trend? How can it affect these nations?

In our modern world, science has affected our everyday lives surely, and scientists are looking every day to make our life quality better.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s fast paced world, several countries frequently show a huge number of young adults rather than the elders. This situation might cause some upsides to society regarding the productivity of young adults that brings significant progress to a country's economic sectors, while some individuals argue that this condition makes some downsides including the absence of the elders’ role in society. In this condition, I believe that the upsides of having more young adults in the country outweigh the downsides relating to the several contributions they have been showing recently.

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