IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 15

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some say that these are the best people to talk to school students about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A general trend can be seen amongst citizens who have been prisoners that they choose a path to be good citizens after serving their time in jail. This essay agrees with the statement that these people are one of the best to talk to school going children for giving an opinion on the consequences of committing a crime.

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The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions. Several Nations have observed an enormous increase in crime amid youngsters.

Youth becomes the backbone of every country but when they start to choose a path of commiting crimes, it highly disrupts the nation's working. It can be seen that the most common reasons due to which there is a surge of illegal activities amongst teenagers are neglecting parents and glorification of goons and gangsters on social media.

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Some people think that social skills are as important as academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, some have argued that social skills are qualities that are as vital as academic cirtificates. In my opinion, I firmly agree with the statment since these abilities not only help polish communication skills but also contribute to individuals’ mental health.

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Some people think that we learn best through in-person interaction with a teacher in a classroom. Others believe that online learning is more effective. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Teaching learning is one of the most vital processes of all human life. Throughout the history, we have witnessed the evolution in learning also. Learning habit of humans is as old as the human itself. Thus, as man evolved from the primitive man to modern man, learning techniques also underwent significant changes.

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People today are surrounded by advertising. Do you think the positive effects of advertising outweigh the negative effects?

A widely heated debate regarding whether the merits of widespread advertisements outweigh the demerits has received accumulating attention from the public. As for my perspective, I am convinced that it brings more negative impact rather than benefits, and the reasons will be elaborated on thoroughly as follows.

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Doctors in many countries are saying that people are not getting enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this problem? How can it be addressed?

In contemporary,one of the issues is an insufficient level of a physical activity which really concerns doctors worldwide. In this essay, I will touch on the main challenges of this trend and suggest solutions to address this matter.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative devlopment?

Younger older people nowadays can not be separated from their smartphones because of the improvements in technology. This situation can lead to many cases or even problems. In my personal views, the daily use of smartphones by children is a negative development.

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Some people think that the government should put a tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to eat food that is good for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?

People’s opinions differ on the necessity of levying on processed food to keep consumers away from convenience food. While there is logic behind the idea, I still disagree with the mindset.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Many people had to move from there country for work porpuses which keep them away from their friends and families, there re advantegas and disadvantegs , i will discuss booth of them , and i held believe that the advantages are more outweigh the disadvantages.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opin

Nowadays, It is undeniable fact that, some sports professionals have a very good package as compare to other fields. While a handful of citizens believe that it is totally understandable, because they work hard, others think that it is unfair. In this essay, I will discuss both the views, and as per my opinion, I am in favour of former statement.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think advantages of driverless vehicle outweigh the disadvantages

In the future, all types of vehicles including cars, buses and trucks may develop for driverless vehicles, as only passengers will be inside the vehicle during travelling time without the need for driving coach. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument before presenting my view.

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Some people argue that it is the government's responsibility to transport children to school while others believe that parents should do that. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In recent years, the problem of who should be responsible for transporting students have become a debate. While some suggest that it is governments’ obligation to deliver chidren to school, some argue that parents should bare the duty. I agree that this reponsibility should lie on authorities to ensure educational equity.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In this cutting-edge era, it has become extremely easy for teenagers to get their own personal devices, including androids and other types of smartphone. However, they tend to allocate hours per day on their gadget and this may lead to both possitive and negative impacts.

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What are the consequences of brain drain for both developing countries and developed countries? Could you please make a comparison on the positive and negative effect of this situation?

The rate of brain drain has been increasing globally in recent years. People should find this situation normal in today’s World. Brain drain has some impact on both developing and developed countries. In this essay, I would like to evaluate this situation.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, there is growing debate whether conventional work hours shoud be reduced or not. This essay strongly agrees that shortening the working week and extending weekends would benefit to improve life-work balance and enhance mental-health well-being, would lead to environmental gains and make productivity renew.

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Some people think that too much parental pressure over children's academic performance has negative impacts on their development. Others think otherwise, saying that parental pressure can bring children more success at school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There has been a heated debate over whether parental pressure over kids' academic performance does more harm than good or not. This essay will discuss both views before concluding that I am on the prior side.

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In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree?

Juvenile delinquency is experiencing an upward trend in some countries. Although some individuals believe that teenagers should serve adolescent penalties, the essay does not agree with that idea, thinking that the psychological state and resilience as well as life experience and motives of crimes committed by adults and juveniles vary, which make it inappropriate to implement the same type of punishment.

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Some believe that people will purchase a product based on their needs and advertising is not needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is thought that individuals buy those products that they need, thus advers is not necessary . I completely agree with this opinion and in this essay, I will state the reasons for this.

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Nowadays, some celebrities such as film stars, sportsmen and pop musicians are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Write your opinion. Celebrities should be highly paid.

It is commonly believed by some people that celebrities should have high remuneration. I agree with this statement up to high extent because there are some other skilled jobs which require high wages such as doctors, scientists.

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Students from poor background such as rural areas often find it difficult to access to university education, so people think universities should make it especially easy for them to study at. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For many years, students from poor background in the rural area often find it hard to access to university education. It is essential that university should be conveniently accessible to all students to ensure fairness, reduce students' transportation costs and time and increase social mobilities.

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